i love u!!!! ManYa oneshot

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okays like all are eagerly waiting for confessioin And have so many ideas
Even i have one so decided to share wid u

It was rara wedding
Amaya was drapped in saree
Mantu too was getting ready at his house
Sneha told amaya to go to venue and check if all prepartions are done
So did rama dad asked mantu
So both went to d venue
Mantu was checking the arrangements he saw a beautiful girl approachjin it was his amaya
First timein saree he cudnt take off his eyes
It was like she was dressed just for him she closely started walking towards mantu
(Dheere dheere male version played)
Tumse pyaar hi kitna jane janaa
Tumse milkar hai tumko batans

As amaya walked towards mantu his heart rates increased just when he thought amaya came to him
Amaya went ahead ignoring him and walked out of sight
Amaya had completely ignored him and this pricked mantu like a thorn

He was sad n thought to himself amaya tum bilkul nahi badli wahi amaya ho paris rrtuned tum humse nahi pyaar kar sakhti

Later at evening all guest began to come
Rara marrige rituals had started
Panditji asked mantu to get hawan kund
Mantu went to get and amaya too followed him mantu lightend d hawan kund n as he was lighting d hawan kund suddenly fire fumed n mantu had was abt to burn but in time amaya pulled him
As she pulled both fall and landed on eachother
They had an intense eyelock
Suddnely mantu angryly stood up n blasted amaya
Amaya too after him amaya asking mantu tum teekh hooo tumhara dhyaan kidhar tha
Tumr lagi toh nahiii...
Mantu ...Amaya yeh natak bass karooo ab
Amaya confused mantuu tum aise kyun bol rahe hoon
Amaya hum taang aa chuke hai ye sab see
Tum ho kaun humari humsriii
Hum kya lagtr hai tumhare???
Kyun aisa dikhati hoon jaisi tumhr humari fikar hai
Kyun yeh sab dikhawa karti hoon
Amaya now cut mantu conversation n revolt back saying

Bass mantu mein aur nahi sun sakhti
Tumnari kadwi baatein mujhe dard deti haaan
Kyun nahi samjhte kabhi tum mujhe
Acually u know mein taang aa chuki hoo iss sab seee
Thaak chuki ho baar baar apne pyaar ko prove kartteee
And after realising what she had blurted amaya stopped
Mantu holiding her arms tight kya kaha amaya tune ???
Amaya kuch nahiii mujhe jana hai rachi ki shaadi horahi hsi andaar
Mantu grabs her arms more tight
Bolo amaya aj hum tumhr nahi jane dengee
Amaya firlmy tells mantu too leave
Mantu amays boll ki tum mujhse pyaar karti hoon
Amaya haath chodo
Mantu raising his voice pulls hr more close
Amaya nahi karti nafrat karti hoon tumse
Mantu angryly pulls her more close toh kyun hume kuch hojata hai toh tumhr dard hota hai
Amaya in tears by now
Mantu : kyun baar baar tum mere paas aati hooon aur dur chali jati hoon
Areeey amayaa tumne humein pagal bana diyaa haii
Uthe jaagte sirf hum tumnsre baare mein sochte hai
Kehdo amaya tum humse pyaaar karti hoon!!!!
Amaya u hurting me mantu jaane doo mujhr
Mantu aur humhare takleef ka kya jo tum humein itni dino see de rahi hooon
Amaya itni hi mujhr takleef hai toh mujhr jaane doo chodo mantu
And she pushes mantu hard n he falls injuring his head amaya quickly runs behinf mantu and shouts
Mantu utth jaooo she takes his head in her laps
Mantuu meri taraf dekhooo
I love you mantuuu
Nahii re sakhti tumhare binaa
Bahut pyaar karti hooon tumsee mantuuu
Mantu wakes up hearing d words immeditarly replies saying i loveu amayaaa
Hum tumse beintaah mohbaat kartr hain
Hum tumhe apne aap se nahi jane denge dooorr kabhi nahiii
Humein laga tum hum jaise banaras wala ladke se kabhi nahi pyaar karogi
Amays mantu mujshe tumse ussi din pyaar ho gaya tha jab tumhe gundon se mereliye maar khai thi
Meine amar jodi tak tumhare liye jeeta ... Amaya stopped
Mantu hearing amaya is totally in tears
He gets up n passionately hugs amaya!!!
After a long 10 mintues hug amaya realises what has happnd she immediately steps back
Mantuu baas amaya ab hum nshi jane denge tumhe humse dooor
Tumhare pyaar ne humein deewana bana diya hai
Mar jayenge humm
And amaya to stop mantu puts her hand on his lips both have an eyelock
As amaya gets shy begins to leave mantu pulls her palu n next moment she knoes her lips are pressed againt mantu and they have a liplock😳
And later amaya shyly ran inside
Hear rara pheres started
Mantu ran behind
Amaya was watchinb rara pheras in tears
Mantu came and whishper in her eyes saying madam agla number humara hi hai😉

Hope u guys like it just confession my version


Edited by kriyansh_tanya - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Itss nice
Hope to get something like this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
First confrontation
Mantu getting to know abt amar jodi
Hug
Kiss
Ur os is just amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing yaa Tanya! ❤️
Bahut romantic likha hai 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome dear 👏 loved it especially the 'kiss' part 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful OS ...😳

Hope to get something like this on screen 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os yaar 👍🏼
Edited by AISHU183 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome loved it😳❤️
I read this just right before sleeping and guess what I had a dream about manya confession it was different couldn't remember clearly but it was hot and mantu carried amaya..😳 Manya have made us crazy 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was really very good ... I loved it... write something where uma's evil face is revealed before mantu...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful...!!!! 😳It is Brilliant ...!!! Wooow... i could actually Imagine these scenes ...!!!!😳 Indeed Beautifully written yaar...🤗Thanks a ton for the PM...🤗
Sorry for late reply...

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