What you did - A small writing piece

What you did...

Blue, Green, Black

My life was colorful

Yet when you entered it was beautiful

You didn't just bring in colors

You brought in life

I was just a wandering hoodwink

Spinning through the world

Nowhere to stop, nowhere to rest

Money was supposed to be the best

The joy that will rock my rockstar life

You slowed me down

Bringing me to world

That comprised of something other than wealth

Something far deeper and precious

That was love

What was love?

I never knew

I never grew in such a world

There were people, there was family

Yet I was alone

There were people, there was fame

Yet I was alone

But you just being one

Stole away my loneliness

With you, I feel blessed

My soul intertwined with yours

True separation can only be death

My pains connected with yours

Pain and sorrows we will always share

Life may come at different junctures

But our heart's structure

Is built with one another for life..

By Me - Soni

(Written in Robbie's point of view for the love in his heart, do feel free to tell what you think of it, and if you agree/disagree with it?)

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

😳 😳 😳 love it!!!! its sooo beautiful!!!
do, do one for Raunak.... 😃 fabulous yaar! 😉

👏 wow, thats brilliant... 👏

Zainab

@soni: plz do post 1 from kasturi's point of u if u get tym, i'd really lyk 2see hw u portray her character 😊

soni595,

Too good, yaar!!! Kya excellent poetry likhi hai!!! This is making my poetry buds water and I feel like jotting one too. I will come back and post here later.

tsamhita: Thanks for liking my choti si koshish, sure I'll do one for Raunak soon.😛

Zainab: Thanks for enjoying it, of course will write one for Kasturi as well soon.😛

Pragalbha: Thanks for liking it, and you're getting me excited, I can't wait to read your poem. As much as I enjoy writing them, I love reading them much more. And you can feel free to call me Soni/Sonia. 😛

Keep smiling..

Love

Soni

thatz awesome... wonderful 👏

Soni it is beautiful
yeah do write some of kasturi
you are a great writer 😉

waoo awesome keep continue ur good work 👏

@Soni really nice poem 👏 👏

and robbie par fit bathti hai 😉

manpreet