SS: A Place In My Heart, Always.. Last Chapter upd @ Pg 6 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tiana, this was a wonderful resolution to the issues on the show - you've shown us that there is a light at the end of the tunnel!
Unfortunately we may never actually see this but I prefer to pretend that your version is the real one, it is so much more elegant and heartfelt.

And yes The Sound of Music is one of the greatest movies...I'm now imagining Nachiket as Captain Von Trapp 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tiana just read the whole story in 1 go and it made me breathless! It was just adorable :) I also love love love Julie Andrews firstly coz she's a brilliant actress and secondly that's my mom's name!
This was very well-written and the meaning was so in depth that it just went straight to my heart
!👏👏 Simply luvd how every single chapter opens with such beautiful quotes!

GORGEOUS is the word! 😳😳 Beautifully scripted! Thank u for writing this!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Chapter 1-

Awww this was so heartbreaking... It touched my hearttt... Really wanting an open-hearted convo in the serial but its pointless to wish for things that you know wont happen thankk u for this...

I'll read the other chappies n then comment!



Thank you so much 😊 ... Even I wanted to see a proper conversation... It would have solved all their problems... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Tiana, this was a wonderful resolution to the issues on the show - you've shown us that there is a light at the end of the tunnel!

Unfortunately we may never actually see this but I prefer to pretend that your version is the real one, it is so much more elegant and heartfelt.

And yes The Sound of Music is one of the greatest movies...I'm now imagining Nachiket as Captain Von Trapp😉



If only they could show NeiRa having a proper conversation... Well I think we can't expect anything from the show ... Least of all sanity

Sound of Music is a classic... 😳 Glad you like it too... It's my all time favourite movie 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Tiana just read the whole story in 1 go and it made me breathless! It was just adorable :) I also love love love Julie Andrews firstly coz she's a brilliant actress and secondly that's my mom's name!

This was very well-written and the meaning was so in depth that it just went straight to my heart
!👏👏Simply luvd how every single chapter opens with such beautiful quotes!

GORGEOUS is the word!😳😳Beautifully scripted! Thank u for writing this!



And I love love love your comment... Thank you so much for reading this and leaving a comment 😊 ... It means a lot to me...

Julie Andrews is one of my favourite Hollywood actress 😳 ... She may be old but her acting is mind-blowing 😳 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I read the whole SS just now. Sorry for the late..but I wanted to read it without any distraction.


So, here are my comments.


Nachiket as a father..missing Arav all these nine months. The guilt, the cowardliness. You did it wonderfully.

The jail scene melted my heart when Ragini finally meets Arav. And falling for him all over again. 😳

Ah, finally. Nachiket poured some sense into Nishi's head. That candy floss scene..them talking and Nachiket Ragini watching them from a distance. Just perfect. 😳

Ragini broke the engagement?! WOW 😃 Now, that was a surprise..and again you did it wonderfully.


Ragini stepped close to him took his arms into hers and looked into his eyes. He looked back at her confused.

Yes. Well, you can't marry someone when... you're in love with someone else ... can you?

Well what do I say about this one..


And you used Dr. Aman as true villain 😆 😆 I likes it 😆


Now this was a surprise..True love indeed!

I didn't want you to be alone Nachiket. I knew you will not marry again and will be lonely. I didn't want you to feel lonely and spoil your health.


They decorate farmhouse for Arav. How he must have felt..seeing his whole family together. I loved the way how you used Arav being in jail for the family reunion. And them waiting for him. 😳


Pam!! ❤️


I just loved it..Nachiket Ragini acted like parents..and how they became each other's strength and solved all the issues.


Thank you Tiana for writing this. It's beautiful. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

I read the whole SS just now. Sorry for the late..but I wanted to read it without any distraction.


So, here are my comments.


Nachiket as a father..missing Arav all these nine months. The guilt, the cowardliness. You did it wonderfully.

The jail scene melted my heart when Ragini finally meets Arav. And falling for him all over again.😳

Ah, finally. Nachiket poured some sense into Nishi's head. That candy floss scene..them talking and Nachiket Ragini watching them from a distance. Just perfect.😳

Ragini broke the engagement?! WOW😃Now, that was a surprise..and again you did it wonderfully.


<font color="#000099">Ragini stepped close to him took his arms into hers and looked into his eyes. He looked back at her confused.</font>

<font color="#000099">Yes. Well, you can't marry someone when... you're in love with someone else ... can you?</font>

Well what do I say about this one..


And you used Dr. Aman as true villain😆😆I likes it😆


Now this was a surprise..True love indeed!

<font color="#000099">I didn't want you to be alone Nachiket. I knew you will not marry again and will be lonely. I didn't want you to feel lonely and spoil your health.</font>


They decorate farmhouse for Arav. How he must have felt..seeing his whole family together. I loved the way how you used Arav being in jail for the family reunion. And them waiting for him.😳


Pam!!❤️


I just loved it..Nachiket Ragini acted like parents..and how they became each other's strength and solved all the issues.


Thank you Tiana for writing this. It's beautiful. 😳



Thank you for such a long and lovely comment 😊 ... So glad you liked it 😊

If there is one thing that I want to see in the show... Then that is NeiRa behaving like parents... But that is the only thing not shown... So sad

And Aarav's return had a lot of potential according to me... But even that was ruined by the cvs

Well... We can't expect anything from the show now... Thank you so much for reading and commenting 😊

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