THE JADED PRINCE [MG] 'Epilogue' Page 66 - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
The tension is mounting. Wonder if Maan will sell off everything. Geet has a sweetness about her which makes it difficult to be too angry with her. Hope peace is restored in their lives and if the dark battles continue they fight it together. But I guess it's the difference in character which makes this story stand apart.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm updt...sam almost take class of Geet...bt dnt think also maan will like thiis idea...that sam took class of Geet...maan ko manan mumkin nahii namunkin he...heheheh i knw Geet will do that...updt soomn thanx fr pm Dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet fnally came back. Poor Maan how is he gonna handle Geet. Does Geet really love him? that's his question and he is also convinced that she just sympathies but does not love him sigh... now what would happen?! Will wait!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 220 finally Geet runs back to Maan
she does not heed to anything else
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 221 Oh God Maan is planning to kil himself😡
hope now Geet assures him she loves him
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful updates dear, waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
220 - liked the way sam scolded her and made realise her mistake. she wanted to reach to him asap.
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Posted: 10 years ago
221 - geet reaches there and gets a big shock to see maan's bad condition. she tried to talk with him but he has hard time to believe that she is back. he again went leaving upset geet. why sam came again...?
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 222

G-Please Maan...please

Maan keeps walking as if he can't hear her pleading

G-Mujhe sab pata hai [her voice is breaking with her sniffles]...sab jaanti hoon main

Maan stops

M- I said we will talk later. I can't be late. If you can't wait then...I would appreciate it that you would wait

Maan keh kar nikal jata hai

Idhar Maan gaya aur Sam pohoncha

Maan is the closed up person Sam is the only one who can explain Maan to Geet.. .

Waise Geet kuch bhi keh le Maan ke violence and anger ke baare mei...Maan to ranjeet ka bhi fit kar ke gaya hai... agar Maan ke jaane ke baad Ranjeet ne kabhi wapas Geet ko pareshaan kiya...to seedha usko tapka dene ka order hai... no more games and revenge

Ssam ata hai bhaga bhaga

Sam-MAAN!! Maan!!!!

Geet bhi Maan-Maan sa kar rahi thi, both collide

RS-Kaun hai aap... bahar jaiye aap andar naih aa sakte

G-Sam??????

RS-Madam hum bhar nikal rahe hai isko

G-Ram singh ji aane dijie andar, Maan ke dost hain

RS- Aap jante ho isse?

G-Haan aane do andar

Ram Singh steps back but gives Sam a glare to say 'I am watching you...'

Sam -Maan kahan hai? Kahan hai wo?

G-Wo to chale gaye...office

Sam-office? God kya karu main iska..

G-Tum baat karo naa... meri baat hi nahi sunn raha

Sam-Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

G-Kya kar rahi hooon matlab? Ye mera ghar hai

Sam-Chain nai mila kya tumhe? Jaan to le rahi ho aur kya chahiye ? KYA?!! oh 2 din bhi nahi raha gaya tumse?

Geet bechari, roni surat banake looks down

G-Tum aisa mat kaho please

Sam-Chain se marne bhi to do bechare ko

Sam says bitterly

G-Aisa nahi hai...agar tum chahte ho mere jaane se Maan ko khushi milegi to main chali jaungi bass Maan ko rok lo

Sam-oh I guess you came to make sure huh...kahin glati se main uska mann na badal doon...smart... I don't want to deal with you and your deceits and lie...main tujhe kuch nai kahunga

G-Main aisa kyun chahungi...main to Maan ko khush dekhna chahti hoon

Geet rone lagi

Sam-I'll take care of my friend. My God tumhare ye nakli assoonyon se mujhe kuch farak nahi padt hai!! Such a f***** cold actress%^@^%@^

Geet sits on the floor

G-I beg you Sam, tum mujhe kuch bhi kaho bass Maan ko kuch mat hone do please

Sam keh kar chla jata hai Maan ke office usse milne...he doesn't want to waste time insulting Geet... agar Maan ko nai bacha paya to poori zindagi hai ye kaam karne ke liye

Geet breaks down sitting on the stairs crying her eyes out

Geet ke ghar wale aa jaate hain they see her like that

They come and hug her try to comfort her sooth her

Geet gets up with a start with determination and wipes her tears

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Wahan office mein Sam ko waiting area mein baitha rakha hai...

Poora office almost khali hai bas 2-3 guards hain.. .1 receptionist 2 aur employ and Maan is inside the boardroom in an important meeting

Geet idhar gharwalo ki baat bina sune ghar se nikal jaati hai Maan ke office ke liye

Wahan koi Sam ko andar ghusne nahi de raha aur pooch taach karne par pata chala ki Maan ne sabko ye keh rakha hai ki he is shifting his base to some other place also he is changing is profession...

Geet reaches the office reception mein puchti hai ki Maan kahan hai par wahan usse bhi Sam ki tarah rok diya jata hai

Receptionist- Sir is in an important meeting. You can wait for him there [She indicates a chair]

Geet goes inside the board room without paying any heed to anyone and pushing aside all the people who were stopping her

Wahan Maan was in serious discussion and she barges in

He stops when he sees Geet and stands up slowly

Geet bechari ki khudki halat luti pitti hai tension se aur ho gai hai

Sam bhi mauka dekhkar ghus leta hai Geet ke peeche

G-Excuse me gentlemen, just give us few minutes I wanna speak to my husband alone

Maan nods at all the men

M-Please keep your seats

Maan moves towards the door ushering Geet and Sam out into the waiting area frowning at Sam giving Geet a tired shake of head. He decides to tackle Sam first

M- Tum yahan kyon aaye ho?

G-Pehle mujhe tumse zaruri baat karni hai, akele mein

She holds his hand and drags him to his cabin

Sam-God you are impatient, aren't you? Why don't you just stick a knife in him?!

Sam says walking along

Geet looks at Sam

Maan stops

Geet ignores him but Maan doesn't

M- What?

Geet is dragging Maan

M- What did you just say?

He stops firmly planting his feet turning his glaring eyes at Sam...

Sam- I... I... I just said that...

He bends close to Sam

M- What did you say?

Sam- Wo I said that Geet is very impatient to talk to you...

M- And?

Geet chup chap khadi hai bechari... Maan ko dekh rahi hai... Maan jab bolta hai, kisi ki himmat nahi hoti kuch bole but she was guilty, as Sam's repetitive words have made her to think that she is guilty

Sam- and umm...nothing...just that...

Maan bade aram se Sam ka collar pakadta hai and hauls him close; they are nose to nose

G-Maan! [She gasps]

M- That's what I thought. One word against her...give me just one word... and I have lot of things in store...

Maan lets go of Sam's collar

Geet stunned ho gai Maan ko sunn ke that still...Maan couldn't hear a word against her...she couldn't hold back her tears

Maan turns glaring eyes at Geet

M-As impatient as you are tumhe 10 minute wait karna padega

Maan turns to look at Sam

M-Get her something to eat and make her sit down. Can't you see she is sick?

Geet falls on the ground on his feet...breaking down holding his feet

G-Maan...Maan..please

Maan frowns at the scene she is causing

G-No...ais amat karo...don't do it please

M-I am doing nothing

G-I...I...I...know I...I am bad...very bad...not worth you...but..

Maan glances around and glares at everyone into leaving

G-Don't do this to yourself...I beg please...I plead

She folds her hands

M-Geet get a hold of yourself. You are blabbering rubbish. I was in a meeting, you saw me...stop this nonsense

G-Please Maan

Geet ne pair pakad liya hai... bechari Geeti beemar to thi h..red si ho gai hai ro roke

Maan pulls her up a bit roughly but not too much to hurt her coz wo chod nahi rahi thi

He makes her sit on a chair

M- Paani lao

He shouts the order to the audience

Receptionist paani lati hai

Maan paani le leta hai

Geet is panting hard

Sam muhh kholkar khada hua hai...samajh nahi aa raha how could Maan be so calm...he is wondering if he got him wrong...if nothing is wrong with him...ki kahin usne faltu hi to Geet ko galiyaan to nahi dedi

Maan pani pilata hai Geet ko

She calms down a bit. She touches his face; she is looking at him jaise kabhi nahi dekh payegi

Maan tells the receptionist to go inform the people in the room that the deal is final and they can go discuss the remaining points with the attorney... paper already sign karke Maan ne rakhwa rakhe hain uske saath

Maan Geet ko aram se paani pila raha hai aur sath sath sabko ek ek karke bhaga raha hai

Geet gets up

G-Kya deal hai? Haan?

M- Sab batata hoon. Come we will go to my office

Maan makes Geet get up

Geet nods

Bass receptionist aur Sam bache hain khade hue

M-Sam tum mere attorney ke paas jao I have something with him for you..

And to receptionist he tells her to leave and come back in evening and lock the place up

Ab akele he takes Geet to his office

She is getting restless

His desk is bare...just his chair and 2 on the opposite side

G-Sab..sab khali kyun hai? Maan?

She looks at him

Maan Geetko baitha deta hai

M- I am closing down this business

G-What???????????????????????????????????????????? Why?????????????????????????????? Kyun??????????????

She is shocked

M-I don't like it anymore...my interests have shifted

Maan says walking to his side of table and sitting down

G-Shifted to?

PART 223

His desk is bare...just his chair and 2 on the opposite side

G-Sab..sab khali kyun hai? Maan?

She looks at him

Maan Geetko baitha deta hai

M- I am closing down this business

G-What???????????????????????????????????????????? Why?????????????????????????????? Kyun??????????????

She is shocked

M-I don't like it anymore...my interests have shifted

Maan says walking to his side of table and sitting down

G-Shifted to?

M-To new things

G-Like? Bolo naa

M-I haven't decided on anything. I have time...I don't have to decide anything right now

Geet is stupefied si kuch der baithi rehti hai...she is in shock...samajh hi nahi aa raha... kiss cheez ka kya matlab nikale... kya kahe

M- Why did you come now? You are in poor health, tumhe ghar par aaram karna chahiye tha

G-I'll not die. I'll survive

M- It is still not wise to roam around in your condition

G-Kya yehi baat hai...bas tum business band...? If it's like this only then...mujhe batana zaruri bhi nahi samjha hoga yaa meri salaah lena

She has sadness in her eyes

Maan leans back...

M-You know more about business than me?

She is silent looking at the space

G-I guess I don't even know about the person I married

She has a defeated look

Maan is neither agreeing nor disagreeing, he is just having his fill of her... looking at her and hearing her for the last day

Geet is silent

M- I am going to leave you the house as I don't think you had any interest in my business

G-Leave me the house? Means????? Where are you going?

M-Vacation

G-Alone?

He nods

G-Without me?

He nods again

G-Where?

He shrugs

M-I'll buy tickets today

G-When will you come back

He shrugs again

M- I am taking break...

G-From?

M-Everything.

G-Mainly from the bitch you married?

She smirks then gives a bitter laugh some tears running down

Maan tilts his head...

M- I don't want you to be unhappy. You see Geet I have realized...that I am not good person for you to be around... no matter how much I change. .. I still have my past and basic nature which I can't change and you... all that I am doesn't fit around you...so think of it as I am giving you a break from me

Geet is silent sitting like a dead substance

M- I have not blamed you for anything nor do I want you to blame yourself...as for the whole world I don't care... I am sorry that I don't care when you do... but I can't make myself care about bunch of trussed up self-indulgent turkeys. Now I am also leaving an annual income for you...it is quiet substantial.. ...but if you want to draw it all out ... that can also be done, it won't be a problem

She looks at him as if he had just said something really vulgar

G-You..you..think..I...want the annual income...the money?

M-You probably hate when I am saying but it's for your own benefit. I would like to provide for you. You are independent woman you don't need me to provide for you but I would like to do it still

G-Do you know what do I really want?

M- What you really want...[Maan gives a mocking laugh] that is indeed a good question...no I won't say I know.. .women...when have I ever been able to understand them? No, I doubt you know it yourself... and I guess that's always changing...It's never the same thing you want

G-One thing I have wanted for 10 months and want it whole of my life

M-What?

G-YOU! I just want you. Tumhara saath chahie mujhe, bass

Maan gives rueful smile shaking his head

M-You'll get over me...slowly... but you will

G-I don't want to get over!!!!!!! I DONT WANT.I know..I am not good enough to convince you..probably Sam is right about me... I just want you to be with me always

M-Sam... I will have his mouth sewn shut I think...

Maan says picking up his phone dialling a no

She snatches the phone hugs him tightly

G-Stop doing it...stop being stupid...I know I have made blunders

M-You see that is the problem love... I can't stop it and you can't take it

G-You can scold me, punish me but please don't do this to me, don't snatch my love from me

M- Your love? Geet you have a great capacity to love and you are so nice that everyone loves you too... you have your whole family...

G-But I love this stupid man in front of me; whom I love and who loves me a lot

M- It's not good for you to love me...

G-I know what's good for me and Mr. stupid...you know what...love doesn't have an on off switch



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Posted: 10 years ago
Uff so much tension.
will geet be able to make maan understand?
or will sam help?
maan has done all as per plan.
one last day left.
how n who will convince him.

continue soon.

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