IshRa FF : ||Tum Dena Sath Mera||(chap 17/pg 132) 17th OCT Th #1 - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13

choo chweet. Puppy Ki waje se aur bhi sweet hogayi update. Dheere dheere ek ek ko patha chal raha hai ishra ke baare mein Rinki, simmi ab neelu. Waise Raman ko kya hua achaanak chala gaya ishu KO chodh kar. Hope sab teek Ho. Waiting for next part, update ASAP.

Next update mein pata chal jayega uska naraz hone ki wajah so keep reading..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Why is raman angry on ishu? Hope their misunderstanding clear fast
Amazing update n Happy friendship day to u 😊

yeah it wil clear soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Awesome update..
raman knows which button to use ..wow she kissed him..

neelu pakad liya and ask raman..ishu is his wife?
i think raman feeling guilty,thats y he left ishu flat..
Continue soon.

Thanks for pm..

nice prediction.. But keep reading..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

When is the next update dear

I'll try today...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Happy friendship day dear. Beautiful update we got first kiss from Ishu for Raman 😳he know where to push the button to make it work. And now Neelu also know about them I don't worry cause she will help them out easily to meet each other. He almost get caught with his mom😃what going on at the end Raman upset where did he go hope he go and set all arrangements for his marriage with the lowyer.will wait for next update till you free. Have awonderful start for new week dear.🤗🤗

Thanks jhum for your lovely comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sparkingsoul

nice update

kiss scene was too good
hope raman return soon...
please update jaldi
happy friendship day

thanks and try to update today...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yhmfflover

gandi baat hai galat time le rok diya😭

agle update me compensation dena padega😈

update jaldi karke aur bada karke😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...
Realy very Nice concept...
Superb...

I am realy very sorry...you PM me...but I could not reply...I am realy very sorry...

Raman ne Ishita se shaadi kar li...ek hi mulakat me ...Mr Iyer ne to sirf dhyan rakhne ke liye kaha tha...par yeh Guilt nahi hona chahiye...

& ab kya wo family ko batane wala hai...

Par family ko batane se pehle dono ko pyar hona chahiye...mai nahi chahti ki Raman family ko bataye ii uss ne Ishita se majburi me shaadi ki hai...

& Ishita family me sab ka Dil jitne wali thi...par aisa to hua nahi...yeh kab hoga...

Again I am Realy very sorry for late reply...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Back with update... Dedicating this part to all my lovely readers who were waiting for my updates.. Enjoy...


Chapter 9


"Bhabhi, pata hai Simmi di ko dekhne ladke wale ane wale hai.. I'm so excited.." Rinki is continuously talking whereas Ishita is lost in other world..


(Rinki : Bhabhi, you know.. Groom's family are coming to see Simmi di..)


Rinki notices Ishita lost somewhere "Bhabi kaha khoyi hui ho??"


(Rinki : Bhabhi where are you lost?)


Ishita looks at her and then quickly makes her sit and shares everything what hapened in morning.. "Par bhai gussa kyu the??"


(Rinki : But why bhai was angry on you?)


"Mujhe bhi nhi pata woh mujhse kyu gussa hai.." Ishita says to Rinki as she wipes her tears..


(Ishita : I don't even know why he is angry with me..)


"Shayad woh apse gussa nhi hai Bhabhi.." Rinki tries to tells her and pulls her for a hug..


(Rinki : Maybe he is not angry with you, bhabhi..)


"Woh hai Rinki.. Woh bohot gusse mein the.. Mein unke upar bojh ban gayi hoon!!" Ishita whispers and burst out in crying...


(Ishita : He is Rinki... He was so furious... I am such a burden on him..)


"Nhi bhabhi.. Bhai apse bohot pyar karte hain.." Rinki tells Ishita..


(Rinki : No bhabhi.. Bhai loves you a lot..)


"Unhone aisa tumse kaha??" Ishita asks hopefully, Rinki looks down avoiding eye contact.. "Dekho.. Mein unpe bojh ban gayi hoon ab.."


(Ishita : Did he tell you that?? See!! I am burden on him now..)


"Nhi bhabi.." Rinki tells her forcefully then taking her mobile for the hundredth time she tries to call her brother but he doesn't answer... He had left in the morning and it was almost evening now..


(Rinki : No bhabhi..)


"Bhai mera phone nhi utha rahe hai.. Apne unhe phone kiye the??


(Rinki : Bhai isn't picking my calls.. Did you try to cal him?)


"Nhi.."


(Ishita : No..)


"Kya?? Apne ab tak call nhi kiya?" Rinki asks shocked and taking Ishita's mobile from the table she calls Raman.. And he answers on the fourth ring, "Ishita..."


(Rinki : What?? You didn't call him yet?)


" Bhabhi, lo baat karo.." Rinki gives her the phone..


(Rinki : Bhabhi, take it and talk with him..)


"Hel.. Hello!!" Ishita answers with a sob..


"Tum ro rahi ho??"


(Raman : Are you crying?)


"Nhi.." She lies..


(Ishita : No..)


Raman sighs, "Mein ghar aaraha hoon.."


(Raman : I am coming home..)


Few minutes later they hear the doorbell and Ishita hurries to open it... Raman walks in and spots Rinki "Rinki, ghar ja.."


(Raman : Rinki, go home..)


Rinki furiously walks towards the door, "You better have a very good excuse, she has been crying the whole day!" Raman turns to look at Ishita and she looks down not able to face him... After Rinki leaves, Raman ocks the door...


"Ro kyu rahi thi??" Raman asks angrily..


(Raman : Why did you cry??)


"Aap mujhe chhod kar kyu chale gaye?"


(Ishita : Why did you leave me?)


"Mein tumhe chhod kar nhi gaya!!"


(Raman : I didn't leave you!!)


"Aap bas aise hi bahar chale gaye.." Ishita says looking down..


(Ishita : You just walked out.. )


"Mein bas tumse nazre nhi mila pa raha tha.." Raman says furioudpy, Ishita looks at him shocked.. Fredh tesrs come out from her eyes..


(Raman : I judt couldn't face you.. )


"Sab kuch theek chal raha tha.. Toh meine khud se jhoot kaha ki sab kuch perfect hai, jaise hona chahiye.. Par aisa nhi hai.. Tum meri biwi ho aur mein tumhe aise sabse chupa raha hoon.." Raman says as he punched his fist on wall.. "Mein khud se jhoot bol raha hoon ki tum khush ho inn sab se.."


(Raman : Everything was going fine so I lied to myself that were perfect as it is... But then it is not! You are my wife and I am hiding you like this.. I lied to myself that you were happy with the way things were.. )


"Mein khush hoon!!" Ishita says shocked not understanding what he is telling her, "Yeh aap hi ho jo khush nhi hai.."


(Ishita : I am happy.. It's you who is not happy..)


"Mein khush nhi hoon!! Kyun ki mere wajah se tumhe aise chupna padh raha hai.. Tumhari koi zindagi nhi hai.. Tum sirf ghar pe hi baithi rehti ho.. Tumhare paas koi kaam nhi hai, na tum padhai karti ho.. Iss ghar ke bahar tumhari koi life hi nhi hai yaar... Tum sirf mere liye yaha baith kar mere ane ka intezer karti ho.. Aur kuch nhi.."


(Raman : I am not happy! Because of me you are hiding here! You have no life... All you do is sit at home.. You have no work, you are not studying, and you have no life outside this house... All you do is sit here waiting for me to come..)


"Mujhe apke liye intezer karna pasand hai, Raman.." Ishita tells him realizing he is not angry on her but on himself..


(Ishita : I like waiting for you, Raman..)


"Stop doing this, aisa maat karo Ishita.." Raman says furiously..


"Kya?"


(Ishita : What?)


"Maat jatao ki mein sabse achha hoon!!"


(Raman : Don't act as I am the best thing happen to you..)


"Aap ho!! Raman.." Ishita tells him with teary eyes..


(Ishita : You are, Raman..)


"Mein tumhara badnaseeb hoon!! Mein tumhe aise chupa raha hoon.. Mein tumhe sindoor lagane nhi deta, mangalsulta chupane ko kehta hoon.. Konsa pati aisa apne patni ke sath aisa karta hai??"


(Raman : I am your curse, Ishita.. I am hiding you. I don't let you wear your sindoor... I make you hide your mangalsutra... Which husband does that to his wife?)


"Aap mujhe khush rakhte ho Raman.. Jo ki har pati nhi karta.."


(Ishita : But you make me happy, Raman... Not every husband does that to his wife..)


"Meri wajah se tum roi thi.." Raman says in a failed tone..


(Raman : Because of me you were in tears..)


"Kyu ki meine socha mein aap pe bojh ban gayi hu.." Ishita tells him feeling guilty for losing faith in him...


(Ishita : Because I thought I was a burden on you..)


"Bojh??" Raman asks shocked "Mein bhale hi uss ghar pe rehti hoon par roz raat ko mein sirf tumhare liye yaha aata hoon!!" Ishita looks at him in shock understanding what he had just told her, and then she says in a whisper, "Aapne apko dosh maat dijiye Raman!!" Raman helplessly looks at her and then pulls her for a hug..


(Raman : Burden ?? I might be staying in that place but I come back to here every night only for you..)


(Ishita : Don't feel guilty Raman..)


They separates from the hug when Ishita says "Ab aap ghar jao.. Simmi ko dekhne ladke wale ane wale hai.. Apka waha rehna zaroori hai.."


(ishita : Now you go home.. Groom's family's are coming to see Simmi.. You should be there at that time..)


"Arey haan yaar!! Par tum theek ho??" He asks worried..


(Raman : Oh yeah!! But are you okay?)


"Haan Raman.. Ab jao.." Raman smiles and going to leave when Ishita holds his hand, he looks back "Jaldi ana.."


(Ishita : Yes Raman.. Now go.. And come soon..)


"Agar tu kahegi toh mein yehi reh jata hoon.." Raman says in a nostalgic way while coming closer to her..


(Raman : If you want I will stay here..)


Ishita pushes him saying "Kuch bhi.." And pushes him out of the flat, Raman smiles..


(Ishita : Anything..)


Raman hears the door bell "Shayad Neelu hai.. Mein dekhta hoon!!"


(Raman : That might be Neelu, I'll get it..)


Raman opena the door and finds Neelu standing with his bag, he takes the bag and walks in living room and put the bag on floor, Ishita glares at him "Ramann!!"


"Madrasan, mera office ka kam hai.." He quickly walks in his room..


(Raman : Madrasan, I have office work..)


Seeing the bag on the floor, Ishita takes it and walks towards their room where she find h im working in his laptop... Ishita takes his clothes and starts keeping it in the cupboard neatly when Raman hugs her from behind... Ishita turns to look at him and he kisses her on her cheek... Ishita blushes and slowly freeing herself she continues unpacking... She wanted them to make love but she was just feeling too shy... Raman sighs lately it has become really hard to control himself...


After they had dinner, Raman walks in room and find Ishita is engrossing in her serial, he is pacing near the TV when Ishita irately says "Raman!! Kya kar rahe ho aap?? Hatiye naa!!"


(Ishita : Raman.. What are you doing?? Move..)


Raman sighs and sits next to her "Kya yeh serials mein dekhti ho?? Sab ek jaise.."


(Raman : What are you watching in this serial.. All are same..)


Ishita ropls her eyes and continue watching, she is watching Yeh Hai Mohabbatein where Shagun slapped Ashok.. Seeing this, Ishita murmurs "Yeh issi ke layak hai.."

(Ishita : He deserve this..)


"Kyu?? Iss mein iski kya galti hai?? Agar woh ladki uss tarah kapde pehenegi toh koi bhi admi heel jayega.." Raman says..


(Raman : Why?? What wrong he did? If any girl wore that kind of dress then anyone can go crazy..)


"Usne apne pati ke liye pehena tha woh kapde.. Asaal mein aap sare mard ek ho.. Dekho woh ladka apne biwi ko chhod ke dusri ladki ke sath nach rahi hai chi.." Ishita irately says..


(Ishita : She wore it for her husband.. Actually you all men are same.. See!! Here the guy is dancing with other girl, leaving her wife alone.. )


Raman looks at her blankly and says "Ek minute!! Sare mard matlab?? Meine kya kiya yaar??"


(Raman : One minute!! All men means?? What I did yaar?)


Ishita changes the channel to zee tv and watching KumKum Bhagya where Tanu revealed the baby is Abhi.. "Yeh jhoot bol rahi hai.." Raman says suddenly..


(Raman : She's telling lie..)


"Apko kaise pata?? Koi ladki apne bachhe ko lekar jhoot nhi bolti.."


(Ishita : How do you know?? No one can say lie about her baby..)


Ishita quickly changes the channel before Raman starts arguing on this matter, now she is watching Life Ok's serial 'Ek Nayi Ummed, Roshni' She is silently looking when Raman asks "Yeh kaisa serial dekh rahi ho?"


(Raman : What kind of serial you're watching?)


"Chup!! Yehi toh khasiyat hai isski.. Ki kaise woh doctor sabki madaad karti hai.. Kash ki mein.." But she stops andstarts watching, Raman is seeing her, the enjoyment is easily visible in her face, he smiles..


(Ishita : Shut up.. That is the speciality of this serial, how the doctor helps the ordinary people.. I wish I can..)


After 20minutes, Ishita turn off the TV when Raman asks "Ho gaya??" She shake her head, Raman turn off the lights and pulls her closer, she shifts in his arm and soon they falls in sleep in each others arm..


(Raman : Done?)


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I hope you all like it.. Now waiting for your precious comments and likes...

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Posted: 10 years ago
omg this was awesome
tumne to ishra ko hi yhm dimha diya
god that was cute
she wanted to b dctr hope raman gets its soon

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