BARSAT KI EK RAAT-(BAHE NE DE)NEW OS

Originally posted by: taahir004

Simply Fabulous OS

Geet an orphan and Maan a wealthy guy and he seems to be interested in a girls culture and her morals instead of her financial worth unlike his family that feels that simply because the girl is not of their status she will not fit into their family
Maan and Geet became friends and eventually their fell in love

Originally posted by: idunno

hi Tahir do u think it is different concept? As how many ff I had read , no where the concept of untouchable people has been explore and this concept was since long was in my mind, in India still this practice is going on, but people don't read new writers story na, so that is problem, if I write something and there is no reader what is use of writing due to that peoples have moved away from Geet forum.

Originally posted by: sophiexx

commented on behne de thread



and it all started in the rain 😆 What i dont get is, if Geet is wet through then Maan's jacket must be also wet right 😉 they also showed it in Geet where he passes her his waistcoat 😆 sorry just my stupid thinking

I love college stories 😃 and Maan seems like such a nice guy, Geet at her best

Dadi, i know someone needs to be the villian but dadi kyun 😭 i love her then maybe not here

I like the fact that both Maaneet are in their own world, away from all things bad
he respects his parents so much, i mean he asked for their permission and they out rejected her. Society and its norms still exist, more of the bad than the good, i suppose. Regardless of where you are 🤢 They should have respected his discision too, atleast should have thought about it for a while. 😕😕😕

Sorry too much (complicated) hindi, so very hard to understand but i think i got the jist of it. Feel bad for Maan, money and materials are essential for living but not necessities. Maan is a goog man and i'm sure he'll get his love well atleast you'll help him 😆

thank you for a lovely story

As geet is bought up by untouchables , there are still people in our society in India who believes in this myth that untouchable peoples do dirty job and are not respected creature of the society, here I bought that topic which so far no one has understand(my bad luck)

Originally posted by: idunno

Thanks for your comment, I will reply u step wise.

first about complicated Hindi , it is not Hindi complicated but it is my computer complicated.

my spell checker doesn't work, and is very complicated so I don't bother to edit as before I used to get English translated from Hindi word but not anymore.

will you believe I wrote this story on google chrome just was needed 1/2 editing and lost chrome by itself it seems some one is sabotaging my computer I have to call technician to know why it happens? I lost my story it was far more batter than what I wrote now as this one has written in haste before I forget the concept.

your first question why he gave his coat to her where he was also wet...may be u have not understand my Hindi so u didn't read it properly,

he said to her ye coat pahen lo thund lag jayegi- it means coat was not to protect from rain it is to protect from cold as coat has many layers and so it can hold water better than thin cloth, it can be rain coat also, so main purpose was to protect the person from cold, it was his goodwill gesture for women who was shivering and drenched in water. I hope I had satisfied you still question u sure to write.

2-about dadi- she is not villain here no one is villain so far, as this is short story and main focus no one has understand or read properly because of Hindi . This is not story of rich and poor, main theme is choot achoot (untouchable-Dalit people)

As geet is bought up by untouchables , there are still people in our society in India who believes in this myth that untouchable peoples do dirty job and are not respected creature of the society, here I bought that topic which so far no one has understand(my bad luck😭)

even other reader also think it is rich and poor, but it is not like that.

I will like you to read one sentence where dadi said if the girl is from our cast and community even if she is poor I can accept but not from unequal culture, or other culture.it was main culture, religion, and on cast system and how person can start boycotting such belef who doesn't have any foundation.

It was very healthy discussion between grand son, parents and dadima., where they were arguing on their feeling, I said clearly that they were very conservative family and were stick to their religion and belief very strongly and cannot compromise no matter who they are.

now I think I will need help of someone to edit my story as my computer editor is not working it really sad that main motive of this story has been not understand by reader, may be I am not good in expressing with words so that my reader misunderstood total concept of the story, thanks for your very frank opinion about this ff.