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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23

The update was too cute with wedding preps going on in full swing at both ends... This Arnav is very cute and I am sure he is going to be a pain for Khushi initially. He has already drowned her in juice. I wonder what more is to come. Despite her anger towards Arnav, she is definitely attracted towards him. Its going to be fun to watch them first deny their feeling and then finally fall completely and irrevocably in love with each other... The countdown begins... 10...9... 8... 7...


Thank you so much Mints Di for your lovely comment. 🤗You are right. Arnav is going to be a pain for Khushi.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Awesome update👏

My attraction was her being angry yet falling for his dreamy eyes and at the top keeping it as a memory.
Arnav is so funny.Anklet😆 Poor Payal


Thank you so much for the wonderful comment🤗
I am happy you liked this version of Khushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu567



Arunima,

Lovely story. Has all the makings of a perfect IPKKND tribute. You write really well. Keep up the great work, and yes, update soon!


Best,


Thank you so much for the encouraging comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rishaal

Oh wowww another love hate story 😆 So Akash and Payal are already a couple and Arnav and Khushi have just met now. They have started on a rough basis but hope that their ride will be somewhat a romantic one hmm?!

😳 Start was awesome!
Now waiting for the story to proceed.
Thanks for the PM


Thank you for the lovely comment Rishaaal 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

Awe I lyk dis Khushi and Arnav.

Jiji thera dewar diwaana 😆 ..

Irritating jerk really Khushi???

Hmm Arnie staring at her...uff yeh ladka... 😉


Thnank you so much for the lovely comment. I am glad you like this Khushi and Arnav.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Wow...

Full entertainment ..

Arnav n Khushi r already at daggers drawn..
I m already too excited..

Both Gupta n Raizada families r very sweet...
Saket is an interesting character...

Waiting for the next update !!!😊

Originally posted by: avika444

Lovely update arunima
Loved the brother sisters bonding and their perfect family pic:-) :-)
Arshi's first meeting and their cute fight
Update next chap asap
Thanks for pm:-) :-)



Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Glad that you like the characters.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Devima

Hey awesome story!👏

Arnav-Khushi in different avatar😊 especially Arnav being very jovial and tease😆
Can't wait for the cat-mouse fights between arshi😃
Looking forward for the update!!
Do PM the updates


Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.

Firstly, thanks for pm-ing me about this fic! I was tired with all rona-dhona and intense FFs thrown on my way! 😆
After many days, i got to read some nok-jhok!
Loving this fun-filled, light hearted fic!
I guess ASR is missing here! Never mind! I'm sure to love your Arnav! 😉
Khushi is a professor??? 😲 She went to attend classes one day prior Payal's engagement! This is shocking...lol
Saket is super fun!
Loved Arnav-Di-Akash's banter! Super cool!
Great work dear!


Thank you for your wonderful comments. Glad that you enjoyed their fight and like their new avatar. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2

Payal Gupta, now Payal Singh Raizada, kicked the pot with rice as she was welcomed in the Raizada Mansion by Arundhati Singh Raizada. She was about to step inside when Arnav's voice interrupted her. "Stop. Bhai, did you forget the Raizada tradition?" Arnav asked his brother with a teasing smile. Payal looked confusedly as the Raizada family giggled at Arnav's question. "Uh, Payal, according to Raizada tradition, the groom enters carrying the bride in his arms." Anjali explained Payal. A tinge of red appeared on Payal's face. "What are you waiting for, Bhai? Just sweep Anklet off her feet and carry her inside", Arnav whispered into Akash's ears along with a wink. Akash looked at his newly-wed wife asking for permission. Receiving a shy smile as agreement to his silent question, he picked her in his arms and stepped inside.

While the Raizada Mansion echoed with laughter and cheers as the newly-weds participated in the games arranged for them, the Gupta Villa was enveloped by a strange sadness. Shashi Gupta looked at the empty hallway which had been buzzing with guests a few hours ago. He had managed to make his wife sleep but he himself couldn't. He let out a deep sigh. He was both happy and sad, happy that his daughter was married off to her love, sad because she had left a void. He was missing her already.

Saket sneakily entered his sisters' room. Khushi and Payal shared a room since childhood. He knew Khushi would be silently shedding tears. As expected, he found her sitting at the corner of her bed with a photo-frame in her hand. The frame held the picture of the siblings with the initials P', K', S' formed using their fingers. He sat beside her and watched her caressing the frame as a drop of tear fell from her eyes. He placed a hand on her shoulder. "I am missing her so much", Khushi said sensing the presence of her brother. "I know. I am missing her too," replied Saket. "I can't imagine I would be sleeping alone in this room now." "Aren't you happy that you will get to use the whole bed now?" Saket asked trying to make her smile and it worked. Khushi smiled. "Okay stop shedding tears and have this ice-cream. I know you haven't eaten much. Enjoy your favourite ice-cream while Jiji enjoys her suhag-raat", he said with a wink as he handed her the tub of chocolate ice-cream. "You are impossible, Saket." Khushi giggled. "Tell me something I do not know, Khu baby", he said and ducked the pillow thrown at him by Khushi.

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RED! Khushi Gupta was red. No. She wasn't blushing. She was red because of anger. No extra cookies for guessing the reason behind her soaring anger. It was none other than Arnav Singh Raizada. His one comment had the ability to change a jovial Khushi into an irritated Khushi. And that is what happened on most of the wedding days starting from the day of engagement when they had met for the first time.

Next was the Sangeet ceremony. Her dance performance had just ended and she was being praised by all. Anjali came forward and said, "Khushi, your performance was superb." "Thank you so much Anjaliji", Khushi replied smilingly. "And you are looking so pretty in this yellow and green sari." Arnav, who was passing by them, had listened to their conversation and dropped in his comment, "Yeah, bilkul Delhi ki auto-rickshaw ki tarah", (Yeah, just like Delhi's auto-rickshaws) and walked away before Khushi could retort. However, the damage was done. In spite of all the praises showered on her, her mind had been stuck one that one comment made by a particular young man.

However, she had been spared on the Mehendi ceremony since men were strictly not allowed in the ritual. The Haldi ceremony went smoothly too except for a small argument when she had overheard him talking to Akash where he had used the name Anklet.

"How dare you name my sister Anklet?" She had confronted him.

"Because that is what Payal means."

"She is going to be your Bhabhi."

"Yes. So technically it should bother her and not you and she loves her new name. Yeh bhabhi aur dewar ka pyaar hai, tum nahi samjhogi."(You won't understand the love between a sister-in-law and brother-in-law.) And that rendered her speechless.

He had even managed to save his brother's money by stealing the groom's shoes from Khushi at the right time. Thanks to his cunningness and her friend, Preeto, who had betrayed her. Well, who could deny the charms of Arnav Singh Raizada? So when he had asked Preeto to tell him where Khushi had hidden the shoes with an extra sweet voice along with an array of compliments on her beauty, she had readily agreed. Moreover, he had also bribed the kids present with chocolates and had asked them to divert Khushi's attention while he stole the shoes. Further, he had left a note there. "Everything is fair in love and war. ;)"

Khushi let out deep sighs to calm herself. She opened a fresh page of her diary and started writing.

Hello Diary,

I was so happy today. Jiji had come for the Pagphera rasam. It has just been a day since her marriage and I am already missing her like hell. I took an off today. I know, I know. Saket was shocked too. But I wanted to spend all my time with my Jiji. I had even prepared two of her favourite dishes. I was excited to meet Jijaji too and tease them of course. But my happiness was ruined by the Uninvited Guest' who had tagged along with Jijaji. Mr. Jerk!

He gave his expert comments on my cooking, which spices should have been more and what not. Mr. Know-It-All! Huh! As if I care.

I wish I could wipe that idiotic smirk off his face.

P.S. I feel guilty of noticing how dashing he looked in casuals.

I SHOULD AVOID HIM.

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Khushi had followed her mantra strictly. She had avoided him for more than a month. She rarely visited Raizada Mansion and if she did, she ignored his annoying comments.

However, her tolerance level had reached its peak and she couldn't help confronting him in their next meet. Khushi was trying to pull out a book from the stack of books piled in front of her which was definitely higher than her. She raised herself on her toes to reach the book when she heard his voice. "Need help?"

She turned around and found him standing just behind her with a packet in his hand. She couldn't help but admire how devilishly handsome he looked on those beige chinos and blue shirt. Stop admiring him, Khushi. She mentally advised herself.

"What are you doing here?" She asked him after pulling out the required book. She did not require his help to accomplish her job.

"Channe bech raha hoon. Khani hai?"(I am selling cheek-peas. Do you want some?)

Khushi fumed at his reply. Why couldn't he reply straight?

"You think you sound funny, right? Well, you do not. I am tolerating you just because you are my sister's brother-in-law. Now please excuse me. I do not have time for your stupid jokes."

She walked away towards the billing counter leaving a dazed Arnav behind.

"Well done, Raizada! It is time for damage control." He muttered under his breath. He followed her to the counter and stood behind her in queue. "Khushi, listen. I am extremely sorry for irritating you with my comments. I don't know why but I liked teasing you." Oh, really Raizada! Why don't you tell her the real reason? You love the way she furrows her eye-brows when she is annoyed and you feel like kissing her cute button-nose which turns red due to anger. He mentally punched himself for thinking on those lines.

He realized Khushi hadn't said a word. "Since your sister is related to me now, we are going to meet in future. Why not make a fresh start? I apologise for all my deeds and promise I won't irritate you again. Would you like to join me for coffee to start afresh?"

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This is where I leave you today. I have replied to your amazing comments on Pages 18 and 19. Do check them.

I am not accustomed to the wedding rituals. Forgive me if there is any mistake.


Please hit the 'Like' button and 'Comment'. I would love to know your feedback.😊

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Chapter 3

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Meee!
Wohoo... payal Gupta bangayi raizada?! Wow I love thmeasing banter behen.. Oh and you know that too!! Hain na? Sweep payal off her feet.. would have loved to know the winner of the games.. 😉 bad girl jaldi mein ti kya?!

Oh that was little emotional.. The aftermath of marriage in a ladka and ladki, was beautifully portrayed Aru! Experience hain kya? 😉 oh saket mera pyaar, u again made me fall deeper for u! Here have my heart ❤️ it is all yours.. Oh btw you gave khu Chico ice cream? Mera fav diya.. I take this as a mention for myself! Lol shameless mee.. I know! Thume to strawberry pasand hain na? That's why..see how week I justify!

Lol seriously? Delhi autorickshaw? Yaar Arnav pataka hain isme..punch pe punch maarke.. I seriously love your funny bone.. so you are funny also..With your other characters( u know what, should I even tell!?!)

Haha preeto..The betrayer! Lol... that comment was meant to be in love or war na! Am taking the first.. indirect proposal 😉

And again I loved this diary part..PS to my rofl moment! Kudos behen!

Again they meet! And how! Lol again Arnav ka punch.. I seriously love this.. channa bejne! Lol! Oh you can't help notice his dress hain na Khushi? Or behen was it you who was drooling over hotwa? *giggles*

Things are gonna starts afresh or? Khushi ki sawaal ka intezzar! Anyhow thoda fast forward mein hain..but I forgive you and you know your punishment too.. that is why!

P.S: promise bhool na kabhi nahi...😡
Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago

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