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Hi all, some have seen me, some read me and others well you'll know me in due time lol, ermmm maybe?


I don't know how to do this yet I'm trying for an ardent reader, Elenascarlet I hope this makes you a happy, happy bird. I don't think most GFians would be interested, but what the heck, I write for the sake of it and sharing is part of caring, isn't it?
Am I not already a better human being lol, and all the more serving Maaneetian, Gurtian and GFian?

So here it goes and welcome to my KINGDOM

(Edit: Rakhi, Thank you for letting me use it)

Your one pit-stop to all my stupid and lousy creations.

Please Scroll Down for Maaneet OS, SS, FFs 👎🏼
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The L❤️VE series


Transport Love


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Thank you Kiara for this lovely edit

Genre: Romantic Comedy

Plot: Wrong train, a crashing plane and a never ending cruise, this 3-shot OS has it all

Characters: Geet and Maan. Special guest: Mr Handa and the Khurrana family

Blurb: A love story intertwined with the horrible transport system and a grand world tour. Geet just found out her fiance cheated on her and what does she do? Travel Europe of course, have a laugh and find new love in Maan.

Status: Completed/ 3 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4307066/transport-love-0s-completed



(copied from google images)

Genre: Comedy and Romance (a typical Rom-Com)

Plot: A classic case of Pati, Patni or Woh

Characters: Geet, Maan, Pari, Anni and Dadi, Mr and Mrs Khurrana have a cameo role

Blurb: Her life was perfect, over a year of blissful marriage with Maan but then SHE entered. A day out the norm for our 'Tranport Love' couple, will she be able to digest Maan's Ex; Pari visiting for a day or will Maan bear the consequences. Pari's not a normal Ex but a super-hot Ex, the model women for any man. Jealously, rage and drama-queen Geet at her best.

Status:Completed

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4405084/exlove-os-complete


Ex vs Love But with a Twist (TS)

Genre: Comedy and Romance (a typical Rom-Com)

Plot: A classic case of Pati, Patni or Woh (part 2)

Characters: Geet, Maan, Sameera, Pari, Anni, Pinky, Deepika and Dadi, Mr and Mrs Khurrana have a cameo role

Blurb: Life was like a picture for Geet, perfect husband; perfect in-laws and 3 months pregnant. Everything seemed perfect until Sameera entered. Doctor by profession, ex-lover by nature and extremely dangerous by passion. What happens when Sameera tactfully enters back into Maan's life with an aim to take him back, will Geet keep quiet or will she and her gang do everything to stop this charade? The perfect case of a series of unfortunate events joined with a private detective whose ready to catch the any 'body' in action?

Status: Completed/ 3 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4405084/exlove-os-complete?pn=6




Edited by Twenty1st - 6 years ago
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The L❤️VE series (cont)


Opposite Love (SS)

Genre: Comedy, Adventure, Action and Romance

Characters: Maan, Geet, Pari, Pinky, Darji and Dadi. Special guest: Adi and Brij

Plot: In an opposite world, where Geet is assigned to be Maan's bodyguard and Maan is no super hero or even a plain hero for that matter. His just a target and she's is protector. She has an aim and his not it.

Blurb:

He is the guy in distress
She is his protector
His running on oestrogen
And she's fighting high with testosterone

His her aim, her mission
While she's his aid, his bullet proof shield

His the beauty
And she's the brains
Life takes an unlikely turn when they meet only in an opposite world
named Opposite Love

Status: Complete / 6 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4405076/opposite-love-ss-reposted-pg35-36


Her foolish Mistake of Assigned Love

Lak's Piclicious World 18

Thank you Lakshmi for letting me steal this lol

Genre: Romantic Comedy / Teen

Plot: A bet has been placed between Maan, the college sweetheart and Dev, his arch rival. Will poor Geet, the college nerd pay the price?

Characters: Geet, Maan, Dev, Adi, Pinky and Sam (Meera is the narrator)

Blurb: Meera is facing the most crucial point in her educational life but the biggest problem she faces is her addiction of the GF where she comes across 'Assigned love'. A story about the blossoming love between the college playboy and the innocent but nerdy Geet. Will all come to an end when Geet finds out about the bet? Will Meera get over her addiction and submit her work?

Status: Completed/ 4 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4539330/her-foolish-mistake-prt-3-4-24-02-complete



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Genre: Romantic, Drama

Characters: Maan, Geet, Sameer and a few more

Plot: Life is always on the go for Maan, so when faced with ordering flowers and planning an anniversary, life hits him hard. For two reasons, 1 it's not the expected anniversary rather that's one month off and 2 the florist doesn't cook up the casual flowers. This lead to Maan's break-up and an unusual friendship between Maan, the busiest man in Manhattan and Geet, a fruitious maiden.

Blurb: Maan is a very busy man, in fact the busiest man in Manhattan. Owner of one of the biggest construction firm in the world, hence he deems it important to work. Only problem is; it's his anniversary and he needs to order flowers. Facing that problem is Geet, a florist by default. But it's not usual arranging of flowers, rather its different much more different. So what happens, you ask: breakup and make up. But for who, now that's for you to know and me to find out

Status: TS /incomplete

Link:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4910329/carved-loved-os-29-03-complete


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The L😈VE series

(The dark side)


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Genre: Dark love story, Drama (Pain/Emotional)

Characters: Geet, Maan, Anni, Dev, Naina, Brij, Pari and Adi

Plot: Somethings are fated and others are snatched. Maan falls deeply for Geet but she's in love with Dev. Anni's mad over Dev but he gushes over Geet. This squared love story takes an ugly turn when love rolls in to obsession. Plotting, scheming and snatching is he's foul game. Pain and a hell load of tears is her gain.

Blurb:

Love is care
Love is respect
Love is free from insult and torture

Love is happiness
Love is protection
Love is free from sins
Love is affection
Love is pure

But what if love was a shackle?
What if love was hatred?
What if love was forced?

Status: Completed/ 24 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4362402/forced-love-complete


Genre: Dark love story, Drama (Pain/Emotional)

Characters: Geet, Maan, Dadi, Vicky, Meera and the Handa's

Plot: Generation ago a curse erupted from a pained soul for the Handa daughter; the fate was sealed. A painful death awaits and rejection is a must. Will Geet, whose innocent and inexperienced to nature take the hard blow? Will Maan, a soon to be become alcoholic accept this forced marriage or will to drown his wife in well of pain and suffering?

Blurb:

A Curse
Ancient scrolls bring forth curses;a contagious power that independently destroys life.
A spell so strong that dissolves dawn to dusk,
a spell so cruel killing Robin and blooming Crows
and a spell so evil bringing plague to a nation.
But a mother's curse is the most dangerous spell of all.

A Love

Legendary lovers have won the war against time,
instilling love and hope in many hearts.
Love conquers both the mightiest and the weakest,
evading life and overruling its purpose.

And a Cursed Up Love

Is what happens when a curse counters love?
Supernatural strength vs Natural affection
Victims vs Survivors
Black vs Red
Mother vs Lovers
and Cursed before Loved

Status: Ongoing/ 4 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134236341

Edited by DaftGirk - 7 years ago
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Others Fictions


(Copied from Google)

Genre: Emotional drama, comedy and romance

Characters: Geet, Maan, Pinky, Pari, Dadi, Dev, Niantara, Sasha, Yash, Mohinder and few extras

Plot: Life is a roster coaster, when one door closes another one opens. But what if that door wasn't the one you wanted. Into the dark is about two individuals fighting their own adversities, living in the darkness and pushing away love. Will they finally be about to push into the light or will they stay within the threshold set by their bitter life experience. One was rejected by her husband and the other is rejected by his parents, griddled in misery and mystery. Can they fight and emerge has worthy lovers? Will they enter the light and leave behind their past?

Blurb:

There two types of people in this world, ones that spread love and care; and ones who pollute the environment with hatred and filth. With the escalating time line, humans have forgotten their heritage and turned into vultures. However, she was different. She, my friends, was the brightest SOUL among the unearthly creatures. Even in the darkest of nights, she would radiate and direct the blind to safety. This story revolves around a woman, so powerful yet so giving. A woman who herself has stopped believing in angels but is the guardian to the falling demons. Who observes every evil trait but adopts only the good.

Status: Completed/ 69 parts + Epi

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4292407/into-the-dark-removed



Genre: Comedy and romance

Characters: Geet, Maan, Khuranna's and Handa's

Plot: A long long wait but is it worth it?

Blurb:

Geats been waiting for the last 36 months, 157 weeks, 1096 days or in plain non-lovers language 3 years for Maan. But he returns with a non-refundable gift. The day she'd assumed would be the best day of her life turns into something we describe as a natural disaster. Expect a meteor shower from this Deewani and a hard time for her Deewana

Status: Completed/ 2 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4570386/ek-thi-deewani-aur-ek-uska-deewana-ts-complete-12-02





Genre: Romantic, Fantasy, Drama

Characters: Maan, Geet (the whole bandwagon + Rani)

Plot: Geet Handa, the modern day Cinderella. She's a washed out helper to her step-mother and her twin daughters. Working as a teacher is her only respite, but then the Ball happens. Dadima is no less than a fairy and Maan, in his truest form; Prince Charming. BE careful you might just get swept of your feet!

Blurb: Not all tales need to be fairy, however when one comes knocking you simply can't ignore. Geet Handa lives a life no less then Cinderella, working; cleaning and meeting the demands of her step family seems like her only occupation in life. But tables turn, and Maan enters changing the belle in distress to the belle in demand. A true Cinderella fan wouldn't want to give this one a miss, oh no you shan't miss the Ball

Status: Complete / OS

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4790029/belle-of-the-ball-new-os-20-01-17

Edited by DaftGirk - 7 years ago
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Other Fictions Cont.


Genre: Romance, comedy and drama

Characters: Maan, Geet, Sameera, Pari, Adi, Pinky Khuranna's and Handa's

Plot: Marriage is said to be made in heaven but what if finding that perfect bride ends in a family battle. Fun and confusion at its best with just the one Maan and three suitable Brides.

Blurb:

'Maan will marry my bride, haina Maan' shouted Anita

'No ways, Maan will marry the girl I chose for him' countered Raj

'For goodness sake can you two just stop, Maan come and sit next to me. Now tell me do you like someone' Dadi encouraged Maan to voice his own thoughts. If it was up to his parents, he would end up marrying a stubborn cow or a haughty monkey, dadi thought sadly. She wanted a boisterous, happy and jovial girl who spread the light to all corners of their mansion. Someone full of life and colour, someone who could teach her stuck-up family what life was all about.

'No' he answered in a dejected tone, he was only 25. An age for fun and glamour not marriage, life was so unfair. He neither wanted to marry the arrogant Pari Singhania his fathers business associate's daughter nor the flamboyant Sameera Khanna his mothers fashion line model. He wanted to be a free bird, yes the girls were nice even pretty but he was no man to be tied down to one female. He was a man of leisure who needed several females. Late night outs, partying and girls were Maan's habits or nature, think of it what you may. So the best way out of this was.

'I like dadi's choice' he shot thinking of it as the perfect excuse. Dadi possibly can't have a girl in her mind as well, now can she? Will she take advantage of this situation and force Maan into marriage or will she let him live his life, or partying shall we say? Which bride would win the race to Maan's heart, his dad's; mother's or dadi's? Who should win? Who would lose?

Status: Completed/ 36 parts

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134236238


Just a LITTLE luck! (OS)

Genre: Inspirational drama

Characters: Maan, Geet

Plot: Geet Handa has just been fired, to top things up; it's raining cats and buses seem to be on strike. What does she need? Luck, which comes in the form of an irritating stranger named Maan

Blurb: Luck may not be infectious but it's magical, with sprinkling pink pixy dust and shining bright happy eyes. Luck affects almost everything. When you least expect it, there would be just that little bit of luck pushing you ahead. Luck: might be a fantasy but make it a reality.

Status: Complete / OS

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4886177/just-a-little-luck-os-new-16-08


Dear Heart! (OS)


Image result for heart and stethoscope images

Genre: Emotional drama

Characters: Maan, Geet, Muskaan

Plot: Follows a day two individual; Maan left behind by a fugitive wife with the responsibility of taking care of his two year old diseased baby, and Geet, a doctor by profession but a grieving mother by spirit. Dear Heart explores what happens when a miracle happens, when Muskaan helps these two separate identities meet? When the heart finally has an answer to all its queries.

Blurb: Though the heart is a muscle but it still breaks, crashing without a sound but leaving plenty of pain.

Status: Complete / OS

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4829319/dear-heart-new-os-07-04-17


Feminist Dating


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Genre: Comedy, slice of life

Characters: Maan, Geet, Dadi (with a few extras)

Plot: Geet Handa is an enrolled feminist and Maan Singh Khuranna hold women in his highest regards, NOT.

Blurb: This tale is about how Geet (who has like the world's biggest crush on you-know-who) and Maan (who is a bigot, in the most kindest way LIKE HELL NO). Due to his this facet, Maan has been forced to follow the scripture of Feminism and the world published in the Daily mail but the only problems is that Geet is following the same paper for dating advice, more specifically advice on Feminist Dating. So will Geet finally ask Maan out (who is rather old school) or will it die the moment he opens is his ablaze mouth?

Status: Complete / SS (9 parts)

Link:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/145596746


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The Random Thoughts Thread (TRTT)

For everything unconventional stories that run in my mind

Say Something OS

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Genre: Emotional drama

Characters: A woman and a man

Plot: Love may be selfless but isn't self-harm! Inspired by the song Say Something' by A Great Big World and Christina Aguilera

Blurb:

She's left everything she ever had, in the hopes to be his something. While his just not bothered. Will she leave this abusive and one sided life to give herself a chance to happiness or will she opt to end her life instead? Life is precious and shouldn't be wasted on the possible HIMs/HERs in life but rather the worthy HIMs or HERs that you truly deserve.

Status: Completed/ 1 part

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/132909173


There are others too, never ending questions beating in my head:

What is love? - Pg 5

Love can be defined as a lot of things, but what is its fundamental description. A stupid poem

Dear heart? - Pg 5

The fight between a heart and a mind, can the picture in mind be the actual reality. Stupidly hoping

Where is the love - Pg 5

Love separated into two, reality and virtual. Stone heart vs real real. Inspired by a heart warming video, exposing the truth of a little baby in the cold world.

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4605334/trtt-where-is-the-love-pg-5



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Tales to be told



Wispering Fate

Darji thinks my face tells a story
Mama told me my body sings its own language
Papa says my eyes are like an open book shouting out my feelings
and Brij veerji can hear my smile
But then why can't he hear my unsaid words, can he not read the hurt in my eyes or see my withering shape. Is he ignorant to my vanished smile or my story telling face.
Can he not feel my pain?
I'm I dumb or is he deaf.
Who is he and why can't he hear her.
Choose me to find out whether if he is deaf or he's just playing deaf.

Crowded Marriage

This story resolves around 3 individuals, 3 very different people.
A man, his love and his obligation.
There is a husband whose married to one but loves another.
A married women who's continuing her affair with her first love
And a wife who knows her husband loves a women other than her
What happens is this marriage? What happens when 3 people are involved instead of 2? What happens in a crowded marriage?
Maybe both you and I will get our answers through this Maaneet Fiction.
Choose me to find out whether a marriage of 3 would ever work.
Princess Diana's exact words:
"Well, there were three of us in this marriage, so it was a bit crowded."
This FF would be different, I don't know how many of you are aware of Princess Diana but this FF is influenced by her story. She was just another female living in the same agony as every other women, with an infidel husband. She however was no normal girl, she was an Princess, Princess of Wales. Sadly she died in 1997, aged 36 in an awful car crash, there are speculation that this was a murder but nothing solid has been found yet. I was really young when she died however I always was fascinated by her beauty both inner and outer and then by her story. I will use quotes by her, her husband Prince Charles and the other women Camilla.
So there it is, all three stories which I want to share. Now its up to you which one you want to hear, so please like and comment on the story you find most intriguing.


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Tfs 😊 looking 4ward 2 more stories frm u😃
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Thanks for thread
I do enjoy reading your stories and looking forward to reading more

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