ManaFF~ AStory of Love N Seperation #chapter 7updated Pg21 15/2/16 - Page 14

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Originally posted by: fireflies10

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amazing update ..

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manik n Nandani show the past part wht happened that seperate manan ..

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Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

amazing update ..

ur all stories r superb
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manik n Nandani show the past part wht happened that seperate manan ..

cont soon ..


THANKS A LPOT DEAR , M GLAD U LIKED MY WORKS .
IT REALLY MEANS ALOT TO ME . U GUYSA APPRECIATING MY WORK . WHAT ELSE DO I NEED 😊😊😊
THANKS ALOT LOVE
MYRA
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awesome story
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So glad manik realized his mistake n wants her back keeping his ego aside.hope he meets her soon.continue soon
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Take care..concentrate on ur exams... And when ur free thn continue plz
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Chapter-7

Finally Found You.


HEY FRNZ,

I m back with another update, I was about to post it yesterday but due to internet issues just couldn't post.

Hope u all understand. Well thanks a lot guys for your lovely wishes n for supporting me. Love u all .

Now I won't take much of ur time. Go ahead continue reading😛😛😛

***

Nandini accepted Cabir's request for dropping her home.

They both got in the car. Cabir noticed the change in Nandini. Well ofcourse she has changed a lot. Her attire was completely different from what she used to be like.

So?? Changed a lot haan! Cabir stated.

Nandini nodded at his remark. For some tie there was a moment of silence, no one uttered a word.

Left! Nandini said.

Hmm? Cabir looked at her bamboozled.

I mean, left turn from here. Nandini articulated.

Oh! That. Cabir replied.

N again they fell into awkward silence. They didn't know" What to say? ", "Where to start from?" ...

After driving for around 15-20 mins, they reached her apartment.

Thanks Cabir! Nandini said looking at him but not making an Eye contact.

You are always welcome! It's okay! Cabir edified N no need for Thanks.

Hmm (ed) Nandini n left without even turning back.

While Cabir remained standing there till she escaped from his sight.

****

Matlab Manik was right!! She's really here? Cabir asked himself perplexed. God "he looked up joing his hands" Ab to mila do in dono gadhon ko !!! He prayed silently.

Cabir drove back to hotel thinking about her. As soon as he reached hotel, he saw Manik in the Bar having shots one after the other.

Kya Karoon? Shouild I tell him? He asked himself. No, it won't be right! I can't do this! I think I should wait for the right time.

He reached Manik, Manik chal let's go! Waise bhi we gotta go ... He said while dragging him out of the Bar. But Manik was too adamant to move.

NO! Manik yelled whilst pouting. I won't! She ..she left Me! He mumbled which wasn't audible to anyone but Cabir.

Manik! Manik! Kya kar raha hai? Look at yourself man! Kya haal bana liya hai tune apna. Cabir said holding his right arm.

Manik was was shuddering after having continuous shots.

Manik we gotta go! Just look at yourself Man! Cabir insisted dragging him to his room.

Cabir somehow managed to take him to his room. He felt helpless as he despite of knowing all couldn't tell anything to him.

Manik rested straight on the bed still mumbling "She left Me..."

Cabir heaving a sigh left for his room. That whole night all he could think as Manik's condition n Nandini's face.

Whst should I do? Main aisa kya karoon jis se ye dono wapas sath ho jayein. Should I tell Manik about Nandini? NO! Manik has been erroneous to her. This will be wrong! But what about their relationship? But still I can't.

ON THE OTHER SIDE

Nandini went to her room, when she saw Abhi sleeping on the couch. She went to him n made a smiley on his hand. Admired his innocent face n left for her room.

She straight away went for a hot shower, as at this time nothing can soothe her but a hot shower. But today even the shower wasn't able to mollify her. All she could see was "Manik", his voice full of Soreness, Seclusion. His face full of Hatred, hatred for oneself. She felt worn-out, Helpless she came out n changed into her night dress n lied on her bed though sleep was far-off from her vision.

***

NEXT MORNING

Abhi woke up n rushed to Nandini's room. She was nowhere in the room. He rushed to kitchen saw the breakfast ready. Only then he realized what he should've done? He looked at his palm n there was smiley.

Ahh! She might have gone for walk. I should get ready fast. She might come anytime. Abhi said to himself n left for getting ready.

Nandini reached home n saw Abhi was I washroom having shower. She went to her room to change.

She changed into a black denim shorts n white Off shoulder tee. She came out n saw Abhi already sitting at the breakfast table.

Come on Baby doll fast! We are running late! He asked her to hurry up.

She sat near him n they had their breakfast.

Good morning! Abhi wished her with a warm hug. She reciprocated warmly.

Soon they were done with their breakfast.

Are Nandu, How was yesterday's concert? I forgot ask Abhi asked while wiping his face with tissue.

It was good ,Nandini replied with slight smile.

Oh that's great. Chalo I'll drop you today. Abhi said in ordering tone.

Nandini gave in n grabbed her sling bag, n they both left their apartment.

Abhi dropped Nandini for her Workshop n left for his office.

I know today Nandini must be upset. Aur ho bhi kyu nai... today is the same day " THEY BROKE UP"

ON THE OTHER SIDE

Chal na Manik! We'll have fun na! Mukti entreated

But Manik was too obstinate to listen. Just nodded his head as a clear NO

Alya n Dhruv knew it was of no use to ask him, so they remained silent.

Offo! Manik sab itna request kar rahe hai to chal bhi do! Kab tak aise hi akele baithoge ? tum bore ho jaoge! Please chalo na. Navya insisted.

No! yar u guys guys carry on! N don't worry about me. I'll be fine! Manik said defiantly.

Chal na Manik! We'll search for her! You forgot? Nan.. Cabir was about to say when Manik at once agreed n they all left for rambling around in the city.

Manik searched for her. But to his dismay he didn't found her anywhere. After searching for almost whole day he was pissed off.

Right then few of their fans came to them and requested them to perform only once...

Manik strummed his guitar strings reluctantly closing his eyes

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein
Kyun rooh meri ye sahe
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai (x2)

He remembered those days of his life when he was a bad monster. Emotionless! Deep in the oceans of darkness n she entered his life, Fireflies n stars lightened their life, they were meant to be together forever "Manan" Together forever...Hamesha...

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya

But now.. he's alone searching for his light!!!! Tears started welling up in his eyes...

Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya
Main adhoora jee raha hoon

He was strumming the guitar strings so hard , his finger got several cuts n started bleeding...
Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon
Mujhe teri zar...oorat hai

At last his strings broke ...

Manik! Tu pagal ho gaya hai Kya? Cabir yelled at him!

Chalo Guys ! yahan p paas mein hi ek restaurant hai. Let's go there we'll get some first aid done there itself Dhruv suggested.

Yeah lets go! Cabir gave in at once n without any discussion they headed to the restaurant.

***

Day went by n all of them decided to head back to hotel.

Arre Wait, me n Manik will join u guys later! Cabir said.

Kyu? Mukti as usual needed an answer for everything

Manik! Manik is the reason, Manik gave a look to him Are I mean Manik ke guitar strings change karne hain na? isliye

Okay! Mukti agreed n they all left, leaving Manik n Cabir alone.

Kaha dikhi thi wo tujhe? Cabir asked Manik.

Wo . wo I saw her at the concert Manik replied willfully.

Okay so let's go to that manager n ask him about her Cabir suggested n they headed to the library.

Good Evening ! Actuallywe wanted to know the details of people who attended yesterday's concert Cabir asked politely.

Sorry Sr, we can't. It's not allowed the secretary replied.

Tell me its really very important Manik yelled impatiently.

The secretary glared at him .

Manik Manik Cabir said rubing his ack Calm down mere dost. Calm down. I'll talk to them.

Cabir you are not understanding! Manik protested.

Manik... Tu ja you need new guitar strings right?

Hmm(ed) Manik

Ja! Go n help yourself please. Cabir asserted.

Manik gave a"seriously?" look n left.

Manik reached the library for getting strings when he saw a girl standing on the ladder, but he ignored her n got busy in searching for strings. After every now n then his eyes were falling on that girl, soon he realized that she was about to faint. He rushed to her n as soon as he reached she fell off the ladder. At the so called "Perfect Timing" he reached n held her in his arms.

After looking at her face he felt his Life in his lifeless body.

"Nandini" a prayer escaped his heart.

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I hope I updated a really long Chapter. So plz do leave your comments n let me know ho u all liked it???? For PMs Buddy me😛

loads n tons of Love😊😊😊

Myra

Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago
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Awesome update...loved it...finally manan meet Ho he Gaya...waiting very eagerly for next update plz update soon..take care 😊

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