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This is my first ever contribution to the forum. Pta nahi how has it come out to beš
All healthy criticism, suggestions are welcome but please do tell me kaisa laga n if any improvements are required!! š
P.S. Inspired from friday's epi.
Leke apni fariyad, gaya tha wo uss apsara k abbu k paas
Mann mein umadd rha tha sailab, phir bhi thi usse ek aas
Chahat thi apni Mohtarma ko, hmesha k liye apna bnane ki
Dono ki zindagiyon ko, uss haseen khwab sa sajane ki
Thi uski mohabbat, Mohatarma k liye be-intehaan
Jeena tha ussi mein, ussi mein hona tha fannah
Thi nakchadi wo mohtarma, thi thodi si nadaan
Par aati jab koi musibat, wo khadi ho jati seena taan
Na thi koi parwah usse, uss be-tuki duniya k kaydon ki
Bas banna chahti thi wo Jogan, apne yarr dildar ki
Chad chuka tha, unn dono ka pyaar parwan
Bas chuki thi ik duje mein, unn dono ki jaan
Par they wo be-khabar, ki ab hona tha unka asal imtehaan
Kyunki muquamal hone se pehle, ek bure daur se guzri thi ye daastan
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