Part 2 updated ! Mantu : THE MEMORABLE NIGHT

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⭐️Hello to all the mantuholics. 😛😃
Firstly, this is my first ever try so forgive me if any mistakes
Secondly, A piece on one of my fav couple mantu/kasum '-

Do read nd leave your comments. 😊
Will love to know what you think about this one !!

Source of inspiration : all amazing writers here nd My lovely friend MyAnastasia18 : * 😃⭐️

Hope you guys will like it. Enjoy.


THE MEMORABLE NIGHT

" ab dekhna mera pota bohot bada hero banega !" Said an old lady hugging bittu nd blessing him.

Everyone in the sharma family was happy as their bittu is ready to start the shoot for his upcoming blocbuster "kis kis ko pyaar karoun " A song with few segments will be shot at rajasthan so he will be leaving tomorrow for the shooting. Concerning the actors health the producer nd the director of the film informed him that they will have to travel a lot as they are shooting at different places nd may be he will have to spend much time here. kapil was ready to do all this. He knew he cant miss this opportunity.

Too much of work. Nd plus what disturbed him more was the thought of staying away from his support system. His family nd his bundle of joy. His wife.

Everyone was busy hugging nd blessing nd smiling except one person who stood away with a smile which failed to hide her pain , worry nd stress which was clearly noticed by her hubby. She kept fiddling with her pallu which ensured that she is upset.

What made him smile was an excellent idea popped in his head to cheer her up.


" I will miss you sharmaji " mumbled manju while packing his suitcase.

A buzz diverted her mind.

Sharmaji :

Dont forget to check your gift hidden in the cupboard jaan : ) nd please jaldi aajao terrace pe I am dying to see you in that dress :*

Sorry bina puche hi humari date ki tayyari karli meine ; )

And a small smile crept on her lips as she walked to the cupboard to find a red box well decorated with ribbon.

" for my love" tagged along..

Her smile widened as she saw a red long dress with amazing work on it.



Looking for the last time around. He was waiting for her to come.

" Yaar aabhi jao ab" he wished which was fulfilled with out any delay as he saw his bengali beauty gawking at the stunning decoration.

White nd red curtains. Lights all around. A round table with a vase set with her favourite jasmine in it nd two black chairs placed.

Red roses everywhere. Few Petals on the floor. Beautiful fragrance. Candles floating in the bowls which were filled with water nd rose petals. few more candles placed at distance. And a swing too. Everything made her feel like a princess who is immensly impressed.

She gasped as the wind hit her face. Loving the whether which was cherry on cake.

" Jaaannn . . .. " a sweet voice reached her ears making her beam nd turn around quickly to find her hero in black shirt nd blue jeans which reminded her of that day when she gifted him saying " Black is his colour"

He extended his hand nd she taking small steps slipped her hand in his. He then kissed her hand, bringing her closer to him

Comfortable Silence with their eyes locked.

He leaned in a little " ek baat boloun ?" He whispered- asked.

The closeness made her breathes uneven she could hardly manage "Hmm"

His cheek brushed againts hers slightly giving her tickling sensation nd he whispered " bohot khoobsurat lagraho mrs sharma " nd she smiled widely. Blushed a little.

Slowly he moved back. One Hand on her waist nd the other slowly made its way on her cheek. Both her hands resting on his chest.

His thumb caressed her cheek gently.

" jitni khoobsurat tumho utna hi khoobsurat aaj ki raat ka har pal hoga. . . Taki jab bhi tumhe meri yaad aaye toh in pyaar bharey lamho ko yaad karlena "

' ek pura mahina ! Matlab 30 days ! Kaise rahogi apne sharmaji ke bina manju? Zara sa ghar aaney mein late hojatey h toh 25 baar call karne ke liye thakti nhi tum. Agar raat ko sotey waqt paas na ho toh theek se neend nhi aati tumhe. Bina bataye kahin chale jaatey h toh bechaine hoti h. . . . . . Aur yeh toh pure ek mahine ki baat hai . . . . . Kaise hoga guzara?Bohot yaad aayegi apne sharmaji ki tumhe ' her inner self said nd she felt her eyes getting watery. Before a tear can slip she turned around nd took a few steps away from him. Hiding her tears.

After stepping away from him ,Closing her eyes she allowed a tear escape nd rest on her cheek.

His lips pressed in a thin line
he thought ' i will miss you too bengali beauty'

Walking to her, he stopped behind her nd wrapped his arms around her with his chin resting on her shoulder.

" I promise. . .mein waha kisi bhi ladki ke saath flirt nahi karunga aur charoun heroines ke saath sirf reel mein romance hoga. Real mein sirf ' Hi ' 'Hello' hogi. . . . . Accha theek h tum kehti hoto. . . . . . Woh bhi nahi karta. . . . . Door rahunga parayi ladkiyoun se. . . . . . Pakka wala promise. . . . .pls jaan ab toh yeh aansu mat bahao na . . . pls" he said making her smile. she couldnt help but turn around nd hug him. Hug him tight. For one last time before he leaves.

He hugged her back. Gently stroking her hair. After a moment. She slowly stepped back.

" Hi Hello theek h jaan ki jaan. . . lekin zyada nahi aur haan pinky promise karo ke apna wada nahi todo ge !" She said cutely forwarding her lady finger nd he chuckled.

" Haan. . .. pinky promise babydoll " he said pulling her cheeks.

" ouch ! Wah ! Date pe aayi hoon mein ! Remember ! ,First impression is the last impression mr sharma !" She said with a smirk.

" oh I see. Give me the honour to impress you princess !" He said being a true gentleman nd she giggled.

Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

The song played nd their hands intertwined as their bodies moved with the rhythem. Completely losing themselves in eachothers eyes they lived the moment. . . . . fully.

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Slowly he made her sit on the swing near nd the rose petals showered on them. Their smiles never leaving them. Placing a soft kiss on her forehead then her cheeks nd then her nose made her giggle.

His hands travelled to her neck nd tummy nd Chuckles escaped her mouth as she tried stopping him from tickling her. All those lovey - dovey nd cute moments.

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

Sa ni pa di na sa...

Her head rested on his chest as they lay there stargazing with him playing with her hair.Wishing this beautiful night never ends.

The time passed with them resting in each others arms, sharing a million memories, laughing, , getting upset but then finding ways to cheer each other up, expressing their love for each other nd staring at each other. Carefree. Taking an exit from this world nd entering thier own little mantu land.

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*biting my nails*

1st attempt !

Super excited nd nervous to know how you found it ?

Good ? Or Bad ?

Leave your comments lovelies 😊
Zyada der mat karna pleesh ! 😳

Lots of love '

- kappumyfav : )



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do I need to say everything again???
hayye would love to but still in ManTu land

One req plzz don't stop writing...I fell in love with ur writing...
(maybe u could write a part 2 when he is back; I hav some ideas but this is ur story so its up to u..) Do give it a thought <3


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Uff ! Koi toh rok lo ! 😳😳😆You have already showered me with much praise !! Thank you so much !!!
Ok... ryt now I have no plans for part two.
but lets see if I get some ideas then I will write part 2
You are here to help me with it ryt ? 😉😛

And if you have ideas pls feel free to share it me !!!!

Would love to know ⭐️

Or maybe you will write the next part ! What say ???

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Ok as requested by the very lovely MyAnastasia18

PART 2 IS COMING SOOON...


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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

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Ok as requested by the very lovely MyAnastasia18

PART 2 IS COMING SOOON...



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PART 2 !!!
Here you go. . . ..

Dedicated to MyAnastasia18 : * Thank you for the encouragement !!!

ENJOY.

Your reviews pls 😳

PART 2 : It's just . . . . . . UNIQUE !

After a month.

Kapil sharma returns to the sharma family. Here is manju ! Feeling really happy seeing her hubby after long time.😃

At the Airport :


The Lady in light green frock nd chudi daar with dupatta set on her ryt shoulder. Hair left free for her curls to bounce as she kept Tapping her feet. Walking here nd there. Listen to others with all her attention nd eyes glued on the glass door. One glimpse. Just a glimpse after 1 month was her wish.

" oho manju baith ja ! Aaraha hoga bittu. Usne wapas tere paas hi aana h tu pareshaan na ho !" Said bua ignoring her pink cheek.

" oye hoye hoye hoye ! Nahi malkin nahi mila aapka phone. Nahi h gadi mein aur dadi aapka purse bhi nhi h" said raju panting a little.

" Moya raju kuch kaam ka nahi h. . . .bahu ja . . .tuhi ja kar. . . Le aa. . . .pata nahi iski aankhen h ya batane kuch theek se dikhaye hi nhi deta !" Scolded dadi.

" Dadi mein jaoun ?" And everyone turned to her.

" Aa. . . . . Matlab woh . . . Abhi ? Iss waqt. . . . Sharmaji. . . ." She stammered.

' Pls iss waqt mat bhejna. Sharmaji aate hi honge. Mujhe unse pehle milna h na. Mein chali gayi toh...nahi pls abhi nahi !' Was what she wanted to say.

Dadi, raju nd bua shared a look which said time-for-some-fun.

" oye manju chali ja na. Ab kya mummy ji jayegi iss umar mein itni dooor " said bua. Trying her best to send manju away from here nd dadi agreed.

Somehow convincing her they sent her nd as soon as she left they all laughed at her
irritated yet cute expressions.

Pushing the glass door. His family came in view with wide smiles on their faces but that one smile was missing which made him frown slightly.

Plastering a grin he walked to them. The greeting nd meeting session went on until finally bittu gathered courage to ask.

" bas itne hi log aaye ?" He asked his eyes scanning the airport.

Bua nd dadi chuckled mentally whilst raju smirked " saab ji aaj aap aane wale the. Barack obama nahi jo saarey log aayenge recieve karne " he said chuckling.

" oh acchaji mein sabse door tha iska yeh matlab nhi ke mein sabko bhool gaya. Mujhe yaad h ke humari family mein total paanch log h !" He said glaring at raju who simply refused to reply.

" oho ! Tu seedhe seedhe bolde na raju ke manju nahi aayi !" Bua chose to reply.

' nahi aayi ? Seriousely ? Sach mein nahi aayi ?. . . . .. kyun nahi aayi ?. . . . Kya yaar . . . . . Dil tod diya yaar' he thought.

" Oho ! Ek toh iss raju se na kuch kaam nahi hota ! Mera phone nhi dikhayi diya isse ?" She murmured whilst searching for her phone nd dadi's purse which were missing.

" lo milgaya purse lekin mera phone toh sach mein nahi h. . . . . Kahin mein ghar mein hi toh nahi bhoolgayi ? Oho ! Manju! Sharmaji ke chakkar mein chodh aayi apna phone !" She rolled her eyes after searching for one last time but still no ata no pata !

Groaning she walked back to them.

" dadi yeh raha purse " she said handing the purse to no idea whom ? as her eyes were glued on the glass door.

" dadi sharmaji abhi tak nahi aaye kya ? Kitni der hogayi ! I think hume unhe phone karke puchlena chahiye. Bua apna phone dengi pls " nd she kept on blabbering without looking back.

She forwarded her hand to take the phone but instead felt a pair of lips on her palm.

Her breathe got hitched in her throat as this feeling was familiar.

" jaaannn. .. . ." That same sweet voice once again filled her ears. Making her immensly happy nd relieved.

She turned with a huge grin which soon faded as she found dadi, bua nd raju laughing.

" sharmaji ?. . . . . Sharmaji kaha h ?" She asked 101 % sure he is here. She could sense. She could feel his presence near.

" offo bas karo na hasna ! Kaha h sharmaji?" She asked again impatient.

" aapke peeche !"

She quickly turned nd her breath stuck. That same million dollar wali smile with slight beard. Dark red t-shirt nd back jeans .Messy hair nd sun glasses made him look too cute yet handsome.

" if done checking me out then. . . . I desperately need a hug ! " he squealed like a kid.. Without any further thoughts she threw her arms around his neck nd hugged him tight. That same tight hug which they shared a month ago before he left.

" I missed you jaan " he whispered nuzzling in her soft hair.

She smiled " I missed you too jaan ki jaan "

She knew how much he loved to hear that 'jaan ki jaan' from her. she his jaan nd he her jaan ki jaan. They, our cute Mantu : *

Her arms were his fav place to rest in after a hard day.

"Ahem ahem agar aap dono ka hogaya ho toh ghar chalein ? Waha jaaker cont.inue kar lena. . . .public mein not allowed h bacche !" Informed dadi.

Their faces flushed as they slowly set apart. Trying their best to ignore those teasing looks shot at them.

When they are together. He can't stop his hand from locking with hers nor she could stop her fingers from filling those gaps in btween his fingers.

Glancing at eachother with a smile still on they followed their family.
The car ride was nice with bittu sharing his 1st ever amazing experience nd raju spoiling manju's surprise. Telling his saab ji how many dishes are cooked for him. How the house was cleaned nd how he helped manju in decorating mantu's room.

Manju felt heat rising in her cheeks as she noticed his intense gaze on her through the rear view mirrior nd also she was highly angry at raju who finally shut his mouth after recieving a murder glare from her.

They reached the house nd the surprise was No more a surprise all because of their dear servant raju.


Entering his room he found. . . . .
" Welcome " hung on the creamy wall. Balloons all here nd there with colourful balls of lights attached to the ceiling, hanging down. Everything neat, tidy , simple yet cute. "The feeling of returning my own house is unexplainable" he thought with a beautiful smile.

The real pleasure engulfed him when his gaze fell on the pictures covering the red wall. All their crazy, cute, romantic, candid pictures. He laughed looking at the crazy expressions manju gave when he irritated her nd that pic where she blushed as he kissed her. All her efforts were clearly seen making his heart swell with happiness. The best gift ever. Memories all captured.

During a wedding, in her beautiful white blouse nd red lehenga with her gaze fixed on her hand. Probably gawking at the perfect ring he gifted her before marriage. That blush increased her beauty.

That one pic attracted him as he leaned nd kissed it. Usually her pouts, blush nd after shower look can melt him easily but this pic was now his favourite.

After a nice shower he changed into his comfortable clothes.

" Sharmaji aajayiye khana lag gaya h ! " yelled manju from downstairs.

" Really ? Mujhe itni bhi bhook nhi lagi thi . . . . atleast upar toh aajati. Ek aur hug hi de deti !" He thought pouting.

" Aha kya khusboo h manju !! Hayo rabba ! Aaj toh sab punjabi h maza aajaye ga " said bua while filling her plate.

" pinky ! Tu akeli nahi h ghar mein ! Chup karke baith ja !"

" mummyji woh -"

" chup kar !" Nd manju shook her head smiling at the mother-daughter moment.

" ahan ! But Babes. . . .you know what. I am dieting " said bittu jokingly.

Manju narrowed her eyes " Khabar dar jo ek bhi dish bina taste kiye aap yaha se gaye toh ! " she said pointing her index finger to him nd he just raised his hand up in air saying " ok. . . .ok. . .patni ji jaisa aap kahey !"

Another fun filled day for the sharma family.

Tired everyone back in their rooms nd manju was keeping the water bottle in the refregirator. As soon as she turned, bumped into him.

" ah ! Sharmaji ! Aap bhi na !" He stuck his tongue out.

" Sorry" he mumbled nd after that she expected him to move so that she can go.

But he held her hand nd dragged her out of the kitchen.

" Sharmaji ?"

He stopped. Blinking twice. His hand placed under her knees nd the other holding her back. He lifted her in bridal style.

" Sharmaji.. . . . . Aap yeh. . . .pls. . . .neeche utariye. . . . Koi dekhlega. . . . Pls. . . Sharmaji pls. . . " she pleaded. As usual like every other girl's reaction.

" shhhu !!! We are married mrs sharma. Tum toh aise dar rahi ho jaise. . . . . Hum lovers chup chup kar mil rahe h !" He said nd she was about to say something but shut her mouth when he said " No pls ! I just need two things right now !" Climbing the stairs.

"What are they ?"

" A Good sleep nd.. . . . . you !" He whispered looking at her nd her cheeks turned pink again as they entered their room.

" Aaye haye pink cheeks" he teased followed by a wink.

She smacked his arm " shut up" making him chuckle.

" You know what ?" Walking to the bed.

" what ?"

" aajna bohot zyada wala pyaar aaraha h aap par" he said laying her down gently. Her tummy fluttered as her back hit the bed.

" puchogi nahi kyun ?" He asked after kissing her forehead.

Gupling " kyun ?"

" kyunki tumne mujhe purane khoobsurat din yaad diladiye bengali beauty.. . Thank you so much. . Abhi toh aadi deewar bhari h. . . . . Jab 100 saal purey hojayenge na tab toh pura kamra bharjayega. . . . Humari yaadoun se " he whispered. Balancing his weight on his elbows as he kissed her hands. His head rested just below her chin. Snuggling closer, making her heart flip.

How badly she missed all this over those 30 days.

Her fingers roamed in his hair nd he slowly dozed off.

A smile settled on her lips as she heard his soft snores.

Finally he slept peacefully. Turning her face she kissed his forehead making sure she doesnt disturb his sleep. What else she could have asked for when she has the best husband nd he has the best partner who is marked as his. Forever eachother's.

Romance is not just going on a date or spending hours praising eachother or all those cheesy lines or chanting ' I love you'

It's just. . . . pampering , caring, pecks on cheeks, falling asleep on his shoulder or her lap, waking up in his arms or her sweet way of awaking him every morning, making his breakfast. Helping her in chores, setting his messed up things everyday, giving her surprises, calling him to know if he had his lunch, having a cup of tea with her, listening to him how his day was , holding her hand, smiling when he smiles, kissing her forehead., respecting him, being a kid around her, playing cute with him, loving her nd loving him. . . . .

For them, doing anything nd everything for eachother as daily routine was romance.

Unique romance for unique couple : )

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Eee... How quick was that ! I enjoyed writing it nd I hope you all enjoyed reading it : )
Leave your lovely comments 😊

Lots of love ❤️

-kappumyfav.

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Finally got time to give u ur well deserved feedback...
GOSH!!!! were do I start now??
Ur writing style seriously kills me everytime I re-read ur stories...
it so soothing nd relaxes me...I smile automatically while reading each nd every dialoge... they r soo simple yet have a magical effect... nd I can easily imagine each scene... hats off for this!!!

Again this part had soo many lovely parts...and I fell in love with them..couldn't read on as I had to re-read them to let every word dink in nd thn relax my fluttering heart..
here r only some of my most fav parts:



She quickly turned nd her breath stuck. That same million dollar wali smile with slight beard. Dark red t-shirt nd back jeans .Messy hair nd sun glasses made him look too cute yet handsome.

" if done checking me out then. . . . I desperately need a hug ! " he squealed like a kid.. Without any further thoughts she threw her arms around his neck nd hugged him tight. That same tight hug which they shared a month ago before he left.


" shhhu !!! We are married mrs sharma. Tum toh aise dar rahi ho jaise. . . . . Hum lovers chup chup kar mil rahe h !" He said nd she was about to say something but shut her mouth when he said " No pls ! I just need two things right now !" Climbing the stairs.

"What are they ?"

" A Good sleep nd.. . . . . you !" He whispered looking at her

These will be my all time fav lines..bt had more parts which I loved immensly..

And oh my GOSH u just made ur place in my heart bigger with ur end...as much as I didn't want this light-sweet story to end u made the end the absolutely best end ever!!!

I have never ever read any ending like this and I really really mean this... Never did someone define love sooo beautiful as u did...really u didn't only make me fall for ManTu again bt also for u! love u frm my bottom of my heart for this touching, true nd cute story/ending:

Romance is not just going on a date or spending hours praising eachother or all those cheesy lines or chanting ' I love you'

It's just. . . . pampering , caring, pecks on cheeks, falling asleep on his shoulder or her lap, waking up in his arms or her sweet way of awaking him every morning, making his breakfast. Helping her in chores, setting his messed up things everyday, giving her surprises, calling him to know if he had his lunch, having a cup of tea with her, listening to him how his day was , holding her hand, smiling when he smiles, kissing her forehead., respecting him, being a kid around her, playing cute with him, loving her nd loving him. . . . .

For them, doing anything nd everything for eachother as daily routine was romance.

Unique romance for unique couple : )

Right now I am like
this is by far one of the most prettiest work I hav ever read...

LOVE U <3
and plz keep this good work up...u r true talent!!
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Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

Finally got time to give u ur well deserved feedback...

GOSH!!!! were do I start now??
Ur writing style seriously kills me everytime I re-read ur stories...
it so soothing nd relaxes me...I smile automatically while reading each nd every dialoge... they r soo simple yet have a magical effect... nd I can easily imagine each scene... hats off for this!!!

Again this part had soo many lovely parts...and I fell in love with them..couldn't read on as I had to re-read them to let every word dink in nd thn relax my fluttering heart..
here r only some of my most fav parts:



She quickly turned nd her breath stuck. That same million dollar wali smile with slight beard. Dark red t-shirt nd back jeans .Messy hair nd sun glasses made him look too cute yet handsome.

" if done checking me out then. . . . I desperately need a hug ! " he squealed like a kid.. Without any further thoughts she threw her arms around his neck nd hugged him tight. That same tight hug which they shared a month ago before he left.


" shhhu !!! We are married mrs sharma. Tum toh aise dar rahi ho jaise. . . . . Hum lovers chup chup kar mil rahe h !" He said nd she was about to say something but shut her mouth when he said " No pls ! I just need two things right now !" Climbing the stairs.

"What are they ?"

" A Good sleep nd.. . . . . you !" He whispered looking at her

These will be my all time fav lines..bt had more parts which I loved immensly..

And oh my GOSH u just made ur place in my heart bigger with ur end...as much as I didn't want this light-sweet story to end u made the end the absolutely best end ever!!!

I have never ever read any ending like this and I really really mean this... Never did someone define love sooo beautiful as u did...really u didn't only make me fall for ManTu again bt also for u! love u frm my bottom of my heart for this touching, true nd cute story/ending:

Romance is not just going on a date or spending hours praising eachother or all those cheesy lines or chanting ' I love you'

It's just. . . . pampering , caring, pecks on cheeks, falling asleep on his shoulder or her lap, waking up in his arms or her sweet way of awaking him every morning, making his breakfast. Helping her in chores, setting his messed up things everyday, giving her surprises, calling him to know if he had his lunch, having a cup of tea with her, listening to him how his day was , holding her hand, smiling when he smiles, kissing her forehead., respecting him, being a kid around her, playing cute with him, loving her nd loving him. . . . .

For them, doing anything nd everything for eachother as daily routine was romance.

Unique romance for unique couple : )

Right now I am like
this is by far one of the most prettiest work I hav ever read...

LOVE U <3
and plz keep this good work up...u r true talent!!




OH MY. ...GAWWWDDD...You once again left me SPEECHLESS ! 😲

Honestly, this gives me immense happinesss !!! Thank u thank u thank u so much ! I never thought you would like it sooo much !

Every line you wrote above made me smile. I don't deserve this much yaaar. ...it just...god what do i say ?...look no words to describe😃🤗

Thank you so much for this amazing nd very long feedback😃

I am glad you like it ! Nd yes that first meeting at the airport is my fav too !!!! High 5 !

Really this means a lot to me. This encourages me nd makes me feel good about my stories.

Love you tooo 😳

Chalo mehnat bekaar toh nahi gayi : )

Once again Thanks a bunch ! ⭐️

NOW YOU BETTER POST JBJHP !!!

I'll be waiting : *



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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav




OH MY. ...GAWWWDDD...You once again left me SPEECHLESS ! 😲

Honestly, this gives me immense happinesss !!! Thank u thank u thank u so much ! I never thought you would like it sooo much !

Every line you wrote above made me smile. I don't deserve this much yaaar. ...it just...god what do i say ?...look no words to describe😃🤗

Thank you so much for this amazing nd very long feedback😃

I am glad you like it ! Nd yes that first meeting at the airport is my fav too !!!! High 5 !

Really this means a lot to me. This encourages me nd makes me feel good about my stories.

Love you tooo 😳

Chalo mehnat bekaar toh nahi gayi : )

Once again Thanks a bunch ! ⭐️

NOW YOU BETTER POST JBJHP !!!

I'll be waiting : *



Arre seriously u deserve this much of praising. Nd u don't hav to say anything ..I could make u smile thts more thn enough for me.

High 5 for our milti julti sooch

U should feel good about ur stories. Coz they r good jst like u

Aisa kabhi ho sakte hai ke main kissi Kasum fan ki mehnat zaya hone du?

Nothing to thx nd love u too

Yeah only bcoz of u I started to re-read the next chapter in the night...Will update some time soon

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