SidNi OS: Hamari Adhoori Kahani

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola amigos!! I am here with a short new OS again!! While my banner is still not complete, I decided to post my OS, cuz I'm very excited to have jutas and chappals after this OS.

So here I present my another OS on SidNi.

*****

"Roshni, you can't do this to me." cried Sid.

"I have to do this Siddarth. Promise me you will take care of Aarushi." she said.

"But Roshni..."

"I don't want to be a burden on you and Aarushi, when I'm going to die soon, why not now? You'll do this for me if you love me."

"I love you dear. I'll take care of Aarushi but please don't leave us alone like that."

"I'll have to Siddarth. Take care of her. Good bye!"

"ROSHNI!!!" screamed Sid as the sound of the gunshot filled the air, leaving a heart stricken Siddarth behind.

"You can't do this to me, ROSHNI!!" he screamed as he fell on his knees.

*****

*FLASHBACKS*

"Siddarth, Siddarth, ah." cried Roshni.

"What happened Roshni?"Sid asked.

"I'm not feeling well, feeling like puking." she cried.

Sid took Roshni to the hospital as the doctor checked her.

The doctor told him, "Congratulations Mr. Khurana, Roshni is pregnant."

"What?!" Sid's happiness knew no bound.

"Thanks a lot doctor."

Sid took Roshni home.

"We are going to become parents. Woo hoo!!"said Roshni, jumping on the bed.

"Sit down jaan. Jumping is neither good for your health, nor for the bed."

"What! You mean I'm fat?"

"You'll soon be." he winked.

Roshni pouted, but then both of them began to laugh.

*****

9 months later...

"Ouch, aah, Siddarth, mom, dad, beeji, someone help please." cried Roshni as everyone came running towards her.

"What happened Roshni puttar." beeji asked.

"Uh..my stomach is hurting. "She cried.

Sid lifted her in his arms and took her to the hospital. They all waited outside as the doctor operated on her.

After two hours, the doctor came out and told everybody about the baby.

The doctor said,"Congrats. It's a baby girl."

Everyone went to meet Roshni after she was shifted to the normal ward.

The doctor asked, "Can you Can you come in my cabin once Sid? There is something important I have to tell you."

"Yeah sure." he replied as he followed her to her cabin.

"I'm really sorry to say Siddarth, but Roshni is suffering from brain cancer."

"What?" Sid was traumatized.

"Isn't there any treatment of it, maybe."

She nodded mournfully.

"Does she know about this?" he asked.

"No, but you should tell her."

"I'll do when the correct time comes."

*****

Five years later...

"Awww my dear Aarushi, come to daddy honey."Sid called.

Sid goes to drop Aarushi to school.

After he leaves, the door bell rings. Roshni goes to open the door. It was a delivery boy from the hospital.

Roshni took the report and signed the recipient paper.

After she read the report, her heart sank. It was her brain cancer's report.

She fell on her knees, tears rolling down her cheeks.

Sid arrived after dropping Aarushi, and found Roshni crying.

"Roshni, what hap..."

Before he could complete his sentence, he took hold of the report in her hand and read it and understood the blunder.

Roshni asked in a teary voice, "Why didn't you tell this to me Siddarth?"

"I was about to tell you at the correct time."

Roshni went and brought a small pistol from her drawer.

"Where did you get this gun?"

"That's not the point Siddarth, I'm going to die."

*****

*FLASHBACK OVER*

"Mom, dad, beeji, you all will have to take care of Aarushi now." said Sid.

"But Sid beta..."

"No mom. I'm going to sleep now."

Simran believed him and took Aarushi with her to sleep.

***

The next morning...

"Sid, Sid, open the door please." screamed Simran.

Raj broke the door open.

There Sid was lying on the bed, with a ghostly look on his face.

He had a bottle of poison in one hand and a small slip in the other which read - "I can't live without you Roshni, but can die with you."

***

So how was it?

*runs away from jutas, chapals and tomatoes from the readers*

Ciao!

~Sanny<3

PS: Scroll to Post 3.

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skinnypal thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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firstly sorry for res making it a kabab mein haddi 😆

Coming to this update, what is this... you surely are gonna get a lot of jutas and chappals, and maybe some stilettos too (hurts more 😉) for killing off SidNi like this!! 😭 It was a really sad but great update.. the flow of the story as well as writing was good!! 😊
Edited by skinnypal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys, there have been recent cases of plagiarizing in our forum and other forums too.So I want if anyone sees any of my story or any other writers story being plagiarized on any other site without my/their permission, pls do PM or post in the thread itself. It would be of great help. I don't want any of my story to be plagiarized like it happened with Aayushi's 5S A Fantasy Wedding. So pls do inform me.
Edited by -Sunkissed - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nooo...y sanny yy????? Nooo...they can't die ..💔
It was soo sad...y did rosh do like DAT???...😭😭
But it was nice one...d flashback seen was tooo gud..😭😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

res

unres

firstly sorry for res making it a kabab mein haddi 😆

Coming to this update, what is this... you surely are gonna get a lot of jutas and chappals, and maybe some stilettos too (hurts more 😉) for killing off SidNi like this!! 😭 It was a really sad but great update.. the flow of the story as well as writing was good!! 😊

It's okay Pal!
Thanks! Glad ya liked this.
My friend (not on I-F), who is als a gr8 SidNi fan, almost killed me when I asked her to proofread it.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abinaya12

Nooo...y sanny yy????? Nooo...they can't die ..💔

It was soo sad...y did rosh do like DAT???...😭😭
But it was nice one...d flashback seen was tooo gud..😭😭

Thanks dear!
Yeah, it was too sad 😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sanny you really want jutas, chapals that's why u wrote this emotional OS. But why kill SidNi now I feel like killing you 😡 1 more day till we complete one year of JR and u gave us this, killing our SidNi, not fair. So in compensation give us a romantic SidNi update for tmrw! Btw it was an amazing heartbreaking update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: paru10

Sanny you really want jutas, chapals that's why u wrote this emotional OS. But why kill SidNi now I feel like killing you 😡 1 more day till we complete one year of JR and u gave us this, killing our SidNi, not fair. So in compensation give us a romantic SidNi update for tmrw! Btw it was an amazing heartbreaking update 😊

Sorry Paru!! 😭😭
Will surely give you a romantic sidni update of my TS 😳😳
Pls don't kill me, I wanna live till JR's one year anniversary 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No noo nooo😭🥺 sanny SidNi ne kia bigara tha u ka...u killee them😭 poor ayushi...she is an orphan now.. my poor SidNi🥺 you really should get jutta chappal..mara Q 😭

Coming out of my grief
It was really an awesome one sanny...really loved it...it was heart wrenching 🥺 but u wrote it awesomely👏
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG You killed SidNi...😭...still it was well written sad though but still well written

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