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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Start, I am liking this serious Khushi. Thanks for the PM.
Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Really nice start👏

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A different concept with Khushi as a professor. and workaholic.
Anjali and Akash together , very different.. and Arnav is a fun , chilled dude... Wow! this is unique and new.. 😉 👏


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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Very interesting! Khu baby is cool! Looking frwrd for next one! Do pm me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
awwh its so good so far! such cute families they have!
so theyll meet coz of payash i think..

lovely! hope u continue soon:) congrats on the new story and keep writing! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Hayeee meri doremi
U r a wonderful writer I baba
Loved it lyk hell it was damn damn amazing 🥳
Totally lyk Ya 🤗
I don't read arshi story but will read this one...
It must b mindblowing yarr..
After all meri judwa be no likha hai... Mereko toh fight ka intezar hai 🤣
Continue sooon
N yeah cousins will remain lyk that only...always teasing 🤣
Love ❤️
Maddest person on the earth arunima
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A BIG Thank you to all.🤗 I am overwhelmed by the amazing response to the prologue and at the same time nervous about the first chapter. Hope you enjoy it too.😊
A special Thank you to Sadhana(Sadh123). Behen, what would I do without you? You know what I mean.😃




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Chapter 1

"Saket stop it now. Let me get ready completely. You can shoot me then." Payal Gupta warned her brother who was recording her since she had started doing her make-up.

"No Jiji. I am going to shoot each and every moment of your wedding starting with your preparation for engagement", replied Saket as he positioned his camera to shoot Khushi helping Payal wear her jhumkas.

"Saket, don't disturb them now. Let them finish their get-up. The guests have already started pouring in." Garima Gupta said as she entered to check if her daughter was ready. It was a beautiful moment for her. She checked Payal one last time before dabbing her finger on the corner of her eye to put a small black tika on her daughter. "You look pretty, bitiya," she said and wiped a tear that escaped from her eyes.

In spite of being warned, Saket couldn't help but capture the emotional moment between her sister and mother.

"Ah, don't you think the atmosphere has turned a bit serious? How about a selfie before you drown the house with tears?" Saket said trying to lighten the moment. The giggles confirmed that all were ready and the siblings with their mother clicked a perfect Kodak moment.

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"Di, don't you think Bhai is taking too long to get ready?"

"It is his engagement Chhotay."

"If he takes three hours to get ready for engagement, how much time will he take on his marriage day?"

"Look Sale Sahab has come", Shyam Jha again decided to interrupt another impending banter between his Rani Saheba and her Chhotay. Akash Singh Raizada came down the stairs in a cream sherwani.

"Akki! You look regal!" Anjali exclaimed with a broad smile.

"Finally, teen ghante ki mehnat rang layi. Anklet khush ho jayegi", Arnav said grinning. (Finally, three hours of hard work has brought colours. Anklet will be so happy.)

"Chale?" Akash asked with a smile.

"After you, Bhai."

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Garima Gupta welcomed the Raizada family. She put the tika on Akash's forehead before ushering him in. Akash tried to look through the crowd in order to seek a glimpse of Payal.

"Anklet is not here, Bhai. Stop searching for her", Arnav whispered in his ears. Akash punched him with his elbow.

"Ouch! It hurts, Bhai."

"Serves you right", commented Anjali. "Why don't you bring a glass of juice for me till then?" Anjali ordered.

"Fine."

Akash was awestruck seeing his would-be fiance being brought by her sister. In the pink and white lehenga, she looked ethereal, thought Akash. She was made to sit beside Akash. She looked up to meet his eyes and smiled shyly. Their conversation with eyes was broken by Saket's voice as he captured the moment and shouted, "Woohoo! A perrrfect eye-lock!"

"Khushi, will you get the tray of sweets? I left it on the kitchen counter." A frantic Garima Gupta asked her daughter. She wanted everything to be perfect for her daughter's engagement. "Relax, Ma. I will get it," Khushi said trying to calm her.

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Khushi walked briskly carrying the tray of sweets which were to be fed to Akash and Payal. Suddenly she bumped into someone who spilled the entire glass of juice on her maroon lehenga. "Can't you see and walk?" She said angrily as she tried to remove the stains of juice from her dress along with balancing the tray. "Excuse me. It was you who was walking without looking and bumped into me", she heard him say. Khushi looked into the person she had bumped into and was lost into a pair of molten caramel eyes for a few seconds.

"Khushi, what are you waiting for? The engagement is about to begin. Ma is waiting for you." Saket said as he dragged Khushi towards the podium. Khushi shot an angry glare at the person, turned and walked away.

Arnav Singh Raizada stood there with the emply glass in his hand and muttered under his breath, "Khushi Gupta. Finally I get to see you."

Akash smilingly slid the ring into Payal's finger and she reciprocated the same with a shy smile. Devyani Singh Raizada blessed the couple followed by Animesh and Arundhati Singh Raizada and Shashi and Garima Gupta. Khushi brought the tray forward and thrust a sweet into Akash's mouth. He took it from her and after a bite put it into Payal's mouth. The blush on Payal's face increased as the family cheered.

Khushi needed to change her dress immediately. The juice stain was sticky. She stopped on her tracks hearing Payal call her. "Khushi, wait. I want you to meet someone." Khushi turned only to find Payal standing with the owner of the same molten caramel eyes who had a lopsided smile adorning his face. "Khushi, this is Arnav, Akash's brother. He returned from London a week ago. He had come with the shagun but you were at college so you haven't met him." "Hi". She heard his husky voice. Khushi mouthed a "Hi" without a smile.

"Jiji, I need to change. Some stupid jerk spilled juice on my lehenga and didn't even bother to apologise. Excuse me," Khushi said eyeing Arnav and walked away.

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Shashi Gupta watched his children watching the photographs clicked by Saket. They were commenting on how they looked, which picture was better clicked and the ones which weren't. He watched Payal laugh at a comment by Saket.

"A few more days and she will be gone." He heard his wife's voice from behind. "I can't believe till now that our Payal just got engaged." Her voice choked with tears. "She will be in Delhi only, near us." He said trying to cheer her up. She smiled.

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Hello Diary,

The engagement is over. Jiji was so happy today. Ma is also satisfied that everything went fine.

Well, not everything. I met that JERK!!! He didn't even bother to say a sorry after spoiling my lehenga. Huh! Moreover, he was staring at me all through the ceremony with that stupid smirk on his face. The nerve of this man! IRRITATING JERK!

P.S. How much I dislike to admit he was looking handsome in the navy-blue bandhgala suit.

Khushi sighed as she closed her diary and kept it away. She looked at her sister sleeping peacefully beside her. She too lay down and closed her eyes. Sleep engulfed her soon.

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There done!

Please hit the 'Like' button and 'Comment'. I would love to know your feedback.😊

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Chapter 2


Edited by barsha_dash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Unres 😉
Mein tabhi comment kar deti agar thu chat nahi karti... *giggles* I know I pinged u first 😛

So coming back to the update.. oooh finally arshi meeting.. Oh nokh jokh...

Oh am fast forwarding... rewind karen.. I loved that perfect Kodak moment... saket I love u yaar.. I hope u have none for saket...yaar usse to mujhe do.. Arnav ko tho u giving to Khushi and ASR ko to ______!!!!

Ha and the other side banter.. yep actually even am wondering.. how much time u r gonna take... Oh I can't help but think akki and Regal (rings somewhere)!!

Ha finally akki is teased... this fun I missed in the show.. bechara aapas mein sab lok bhool gaye ki uska shaadi hain.. and I love anklet for payal.. aru ki humor yahin :D

Finally the most awaited meets... :) after all the discussions [u know what I mean] they met..and how!! Thadaka tho hogi :D no what the here?! And haye devi maiyya... uniqueness :) ofc lost hona hi tha...

And then the mighty clash again.. but fire doused lightly thanks to anklet :D

Ah I loved the diary part...JERK!!! P.S.was the best...my favorite...

Would love to see their future progress.. looks like they r going to sizzle... waiting for Arnav's feelings ...and I love this funride..and all joys... muahs to u... awesome it is 👏

P.S: lol I know what... but yep still bada anytime for u behen always.. love youuu ❤️
Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Res Baby! ^^ Tu mujhse aage kyun kar baithi?
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Unres!

Amazing update, Aru! Like you really captured the essence of indian weddings and chilled out masti of cousins and siblings! Amazing!
Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Res :)
Unres~

Very nice update [:)]

I loved the bonding the that Payal, Khushi and Saket share and for that matter, even Anjali, Aakash and Arnav are cute! 😃

'Anklet' was hilarious 😆

Their first encounter, and spilling of juice! I wonder how they are going to fall in love :p

Continue soon :)
Edited by -SanjanaSobti- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
very beautiful dear
arshi meeting was so cute

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