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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ViShti128

First of all my heartiest apology for nt being able to comment on d previous part. Hmmm poor Madhu had to go through so much at a tender age of 19. Rishabh was true that she still doesnt knws much abt d world. She had to bear so much dat 2 in d absence of Rishabh. It wud hv been a total different picture had he been there besides her. Rashmi is such a bitch. She didnt even thought of ones what would Madhu n Rishabh go through on hearing abt the disastrous news abt each other? Well i want u Roch 2 plan a gud punishment 4 her. Pls update soon.

Hey it's okay dear. πŸ˜† Time doesn't matter as long as you enjoy reading 😊 Rashmi will get what she deserves for messing up with 3 lives πŸ˜‰ Thanks a lot for your feedback 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

Firstly sorry for taking my time to comment & making u wait... U dont deserve that...😳 Especially after giving such a fab update to read...😳 busy with some personal stuffs... So sorry...😳 Aww it's okay baby! Take care πŸ€—


Over to the update...😊

I have no words to say...πŸ‘ It was such an heart piercing update...πŸ‘ I was moved...😳 & got too emotional reading the suffering Madhu had gone thru all alone...πŸ₯Ί At places i stopped reading as my eyes were brimming with tears & i couldn't see anything clearly..😭. It took me time to compose myself...😭 Well, thats the magic of ur words..⭐️. Very simple yet strong which makes u feel so realistic... Wonderful writing Roch...πŸ‘ Aww thanks a lot for your wonderful words of appreciation 😳 Sorry if it made you cry But that's much needed to describe their past.

Poor Rishab was totally unaware of things going with madhu & to make things worse he met with an accident & lost the chance to contact Madhu & reassure her that everything will be fine... Poor girl was aching within her having no one to share her worries... No shoulder to cry or to find solace...😭 All she had was hope of living a happy life with rishab & their baby... But fate played a cruel ugly nasty game & snatched every ounce of happiness from her...😭 Yeah, destiny was too cruel for them but the same destiny brought them together.

I f**king hate Rash...🀒😑 I knew the shit has already hit the fan when that bitch came to see madhu as if she was a caring frnd & to help madhu to ease her from her worries...🀒😑 She f**king well played her innocent act & madhu got fooled... 🀒😑 Almost all of the comments for my update have hatred for Rashmi 🀣 But yeah Karma will serve her nicely πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

I just wished neha or granny whoever called Rash from the hospital to tell abt madhu being admitted in hospital wouldnt have done that... But cant blame them as they were unaware of her evil motives, can I??

I just wished Rk could have told abt Rash outrageously foolish proposal to him to madhu... So she could have maintain distance with Rash as she is not a good company... But he took the matter lightly & kept it out of madhu ears & she was blissfully ignorant abt the plotings Rash was making but achingly acting so nice to madhu... Yeah Rishabh didn't care about it much he didn't bother to tell that to Madhu πŸ€”

Both Rishbala were so ignorant & their neglegance is the sole reason for their yrs of misery... I could easily list out the places were all they both went wrong...

* first... being so carried away in the heat of the moment & forgetting to take any precaution... They could have avoided the unplanned pregnancy if they werw careful... Heights of neglegance that was...πŸ˜” But in a way i m happy bcos that moment of lapse brought Pari baby to this beautiful world with few evils...πŸ˜ƒ Their desires were on action above all! It was uncontrollable πŸ€” & yeah if not Pari will not exist in this world πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

* Rk not bothering to tell madhu abt Rash's heigtened feeling for him... If madhu had an idea that Rash was eye f**king on her man then the story would have turned differently i guess... πŸ˜” He took it too light! That's sort of a mistake. πŸ€”

* then madhu hiding the very big news from Rishab... Her pregnancy... That was utter foolishness...😑 If Rishab had a slightest idea of madhu being pregant i m sure he would come to her & married her & taken her along with him from all the mess... So this is the root of many majoy problems...πŸ˜” It is the biggest mistake Madhu made But had to do all in order to be successful in their separation 🀣

* Rk being so dumb was also a reason for the mess... She hinted him by asking for toys but he just thought her crazy but never thought it could be a crazy result of their crazy sex drive on car...🀣 He didn't expect such a big thing like Madhu would get pregnant from their first physical encounter πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

*after his accident after getting conscious he could have talked with madhu & cleared the air but he felt the need to see her & calm her down in person... That was yet another bluntness on rk's part...πŸ˜” True! He wanted to hide it from Madhu but the way he chose to conceal it is wrong πŸ€”

* not only rishbal... Seems neha & granny were also so ignorant... Didnt they bother to ask for their granddaughter's body if she was really dead??πŸ˜• Or there too that bitch Rash had a hold??😑 Did she bride the doc or the doc is her frnd or something...Whatever.. Shame to call him or her a doctor...🀒 Wait... Dont tell me the doctor is dipali...😲🀣 They didn't inquire for the dead baby because they were with Madhu! It was more important to be with her to share her grief

* even Mohan didnt breathe a word to Rishab abt madhu's pregnancy... Well he came to know too late that too a bad news...but still he could have kept a better track on madhu when his son was away from her... He failed to be little more responsible... πŸ₯± That's a defect as an elder! He didn't care about it much πŸ€”

* Finally... One place Rash went wrong & that is the major twist in the tale...πŸ˜‰ Rash taking the baby to Rishab... She can trick madhu but not rishab...πŸ˜› My boy is little clever..πŸ˜›. She thought she will act yet again innocently & fool a cry as if feeling sad over madhu's demise & try to win a place in Rk's pure heart which is meany only for madhu & also take advantage of the tiny baby born out of rishbala's love saying that the baby needs a mother care & nuture & she is willing to do that whole heartedly with varied intentions running in her mind... But come hell or high water Rk will never let any other women in his life... πŸ˜‰ That's where Rashmi failed miserably πŸ˜† Rishabh didn't fall to her trap! He was loyal for his Madhu 😳

Precap - awe... I m sure i would love next update more..πŸ˜›. Bcos Rk is gonna handle a new born baby...πŸ˜ƒ Thought its hard for him to handle a baby without madhu but i m sure he will take care of the little light in his dark life with tenderness...😳 Papa's Pari is gonna grow up with the love & protection of her Papa...😳 & her mommy's wind chime will be her lullaby to calm her down & to put her to sleep...😳 I m so excited to read next part... Hope to grab my spot...πŸ˜† Hope you will love the next update! The next update will be concentrated more on the past but happy days are coming ahead πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† You will get to read more about the cute family in the upcoming update 😳

Uff... I love giving long speeches & free lectures & writing summaries... Lol... So i wrote an essay here... Dont mind hun!!πŸ˜†

Awww I have no words to say Sudha! I read your review thrice ⭐️ 2 times before replying & another, while replying πŸ˜† Your reviews are always a treat to read Seriously I kept refreshing the pages to see if you have commented πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† My update would be incomplete with out your lovely feedback 😳 Thanks a lot for your love & support. πŸ€— You are truly an inspiration to me ❀️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Unresed on Pg.86 Roch 😊

I have already replied you Nithu πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Awww...Really...!!!! πŸ˜† Im glad...that my Comments motivate U...πŸ˜ƒ

Keep writing dear...take care 😊

Thanks for always encouraging me πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey peeps,


Thanks a lot for your wonderful feedback on the previous update. Here goes the 11th chapter! πŸ˜ƒ


Inseparable hearts


Chapter 11


Rishabh was taken aback with Rashmi's reply.


'What?'


'Yes Rishu! this is your baby!'


'Rashmi! are you nuts?' 'How come I have a baby?' Rishabh was puzzled.


'This is your daughter Rishu. Madhu & yours.' Finally Rashmi blurted out the truth. Rishabh couldn't believe it.


'What?' 'How come Madhu...?' Rishabh was dumbstruck. He was puzzled & shocked.


Then Rashmi revealed the whole story how Madhu had been hiding everything from him. She further stated out that Madhu passed away 2 days after the delivery due to so many complications. That news shocked Rishabh. He couldn't believe that his Madhu is no more.


Rishabh blasted out Rashmi for talking rubbish. He was not ready to accept Madhu's death. He broke down completely. He wanted to go back to her. He dialed Madhu's number over & over again but it was out of service. He wanted to go to Pune. He was behaving like a lunatic, not ready to accept Madhu's death. Rashmi & Mohan tried to calm him down.


Rishabh felt suffocated. He was dumbstruck. This was like a nightmare. He never thought that he would loose Madhu. He recalled the memories with her. It moisturized his eyes with tears. He flash backed the romantic night he had with her. He was feeling guilty. He was feeling guilty that he is indirectly responsible for Madhu's death. He was puzzled why Madhu hid everything from him. Though Rashmi explained that Madhu never wanted him to affect his studies, Rishabh was surprised why she hid everything from him though she used to be in touch with him. They couldn't keep in touch with each other only in the last 3 months.


He looked at his baby. She was in Rashmi's arms. The little one was looking at him with wide eyes. He saw Madhu in her. His baby girl has beautiful hazel brown eyes & a milky white face like Madhu. The poor little soul has lost her mother after birth. She didn't have anyone in this world, except her father. He took his baby girl on his arms gently.


A smile crept in Rishabh's face after seeing his baby girl. It was mixed with the pain of loosing Madhu & the pride of being a father. He couldn't express his feelings. His Madhu was carrying his baby for 9 months, without even letting him know. She had to bear up all the pains alone while giving birth to his baby. He chided the destiny for snatching his Madhu away. He felt miserable. Madhu was his life. Madhu has left , leaving another life. Leaving their symbol of love.


Tears started rolling down his eyes. Madhu has left a priceless possession. Their baby girl is the only sign that is left out as Madhu's. Rishabh's tear drop was fallen on to the baby's face. The baby started smiling. It seemed like she has identified her father. Rishabh planted a soft kiss on his new born's tiny forehead. She was soft like a cotton ball & fragile like a little doll. He showered her with some more kisses. It was quite emotional.


Rishabh thanked Rashmi for taking care of his baby girl for the past week. Rashmi stated that Malik is extremely pissed off with Rishabh. She further lied that Malik was about to kill the baby after the birth & she somehow could save the baby. She warned him not to even go to meet Malik as he is so furious about Madhu's death & he will kill of both Rishabh & the baby for messing up his daughter's life. Rishabh wanted to talk to Madhu's grandmother but that attempt was trickfully avoided by Rashmi.


Rashmi started her mission. The first step was done. The baby was given to Rishabh. The only medium she could get close to Rishabh was the baby. She didn't try to get close to him at once, as that would make him doubt. She sought help from Rishabh's father Mohan. She could impress Mohan by her actions. Mohan really liked her. He was blindfolded by her fake personality. He thought that Rashmi will be the ideal life partner for his son & also she could be a mother for his granddaughter.


Mohan discussed about this matter with Rashmi. Initially she acted as she cannot take Madhu's place in Rishabh's life. She revealed him how she confessed her love to Rishabh 2 years back & he refused it as he was already in love with Madhu. She told how sad she was but she wished them all the best. Rashmi faked tears while recalling the past. She wanted to show Mohan how truthful she was. She told Mohan that Rishabh will never love her. She told that she promised Madhu that she would take care of her baby girl while she was in the death bed. She lied further that Madhu wanted Rashmi to be a mother to her new born. It was her last wish.


Mohan was fooled by Rashmi's cooked up stories. She sought sympathy from him. Mohan promised that he will unite Rashmi & Rishabh for the sake of Rishabh & Madhu's baby & also to make Rishabh's life better. Mohan assured that Rishabh would eventually fall for her & he will help her in changing Rishabh. As a father, genuinely Mohan wanted his son to move on after Madhu's death & lead a happy life. He was unaware that he has fallen into Rashmi's trap.


It was 4 days after Rishabh got his baby from Rashmi. He spent the whole time with his baby. The baby was attached to him. He too special care of his new born who was just 2 weeks old. It was an evening, he carefully placed his baby girl in the crib after patting her to sleep. He settled himself in the bed. It was a hectic day. He looked at Madhu's photograph on his wallet. Madhu's voice, her giggle echoed in her mind taking him to lanes of memories. He still couldn't be able to accept the fact that she was no more. He always felt that Madhu was alive.


Suddenly the baby started crying. He took her gently in her arms and tried to pacify her. But the baby was crying hard. Rishabh didn't know what to do. The baby was crying top of her lungs. He went around the room showing many objects but she didn't calm down. He searched for the milk bottle assuming that the baby must be hungry but unfortunately it was empty. He called the house maid to prepare milk as soon as possible.


The baby didn't stop crying. Rishabh couldn't see his baby girl in tears. An idea popped up in his mind. Finally he took her near the wind chime which Madhu gifted him on their anniversary. For his surprise, the baby stopped crying after hearing to the melodious sound of it. He was staring at the wind chime. He felt Madhu's presence. He looked at his baby. The baby seemed to be attracted to the colorful wind chime.


'I wish you were here Madhu. How dare you hid about our baby from me? If I had knew about this before, the things would have been different. I would have taken proper care of you. I would have married you. We could have started a new life with our little angel.' Rishabh sighed.


The baby was smiling at him. He held her more closer to him. The baby was seeking warmth.The house maid brought the milk bottle soon. Rishabh checked the temperature & slowly put the teat of the bottle inside her tiny mouth. The baby was sucking it vigorously as if she has been in hunger for her life time. Rishabh smiled at him. His baby girl is the only hope for him to live, if not he would have died by now without Madhu. He couldn't even think of a life without Madhu. But a part of his Madhu is alive, their baby girl.


'Hmm baby! you need a name to be called. Which name would suit you? hmm? Rishabh flash backed their romantic night where he suggested Madhu that they should name their baby girl as 'Pari'


'Pari?'


'Pari? do you like that?' Rishabh whispered to his baby girl. The baby blinked twice. She widened her eyes & smiled.


'You like it baby? hmm? Pari?' The baby seemed to be happy with her name.


Rishabh planted a soft kiss on her tiny forehead. 'Pari. You will always be daddy's princess baby' He whispered to his baby girl. The wind chime was dancing for the tune of the wind. He looked at it.


'Madhu, our baby girl will be 'Pari' 'Yes our princess!' 'You like that name right?' Rishabh smiled.


Meanwhile Rashmi was carrying out her plans successfully. She visited Pune & was there for a couple of days to share Madhu's grief in a fake way. Rishabh wanted to meet Naani & extend his condolences on Madhu's demise. He knew how she used to look after Madhu. Further more he wanted to apologize her for breaking her trust & he wanted to help her out financially. Rashmi was trying her best to avoid Rishabh & she became successful because Madhu's grandma took her to Delhi to start a new life. She enrolled Madhu in a university there to complete her studies & to over come the mental trauma. Madhu was suffering. She couldn't forget her baby & Rishabh. She tried numerous times to contact Rishabh but she eventually failed because Rishabh got a new number after coming to India & she was unaware of it. Everything happened on Rashmi's favor


After 2 weeks.


Rishabh was patting his baby girl to sleep. Pari was almost a month old. She was snuggled up to her father, seeking warmth. Rishabh wrapped his protective arms around her.


Mohan came to his room with an intention of discussing about Rashmi. He thought that this is the right time to talk with his son about his future.


'Rishu?' 'Can I talk to you for a while?'


'Shh.. papa!' 'Pari is sleeping' Rishabh warned him not to speak loud.


'Rishu. I have got some important thing to discuss with you.' Mohan spoke slowly, in a low tone.


'Just a min!' Rishabh slowly placed his baby girl on the crib. She was in a deep sleep. He kissed her tiny forehead gently. Rishabh & Mohan got out of the room. Then Mohan slowly entered in the topic on Rishabh's future with Rashmi. Rishabh was shocked. He never expected that his father would suggest to marry Rashmi for the sake of Pari. Mohan stated out that fact that Pari needs a mother. Rishabh refused it.


'Papa please! let us conclude this topic. Rashmi can never replace Madhu in my life.'


'Rishu listen! I know you loved Madhu so much & Rashmi cannot take her place ever. But think about Pari, she needs a mother. How can you raise a child alone huh?'


'I can papa! I can be both mom & dad to my Pari. Please don't try to change the relationships. Pari will only have one mother & she is Madhu. I know she is not with us now, but I don't want my child to call another woman 'mommy' . Pari will live with the fact that her mom is no more. I can take care of her alone.' It was Rishabh's final decision.


'But Rishu try to understand..'


'Papa please! Don't forget that I'm your son. You could have re married someone easily after my mother's demise. But you didn't. You raised me up alone with so many obstacles & brought up to where I am today. I can do the same to my daughter. No one else is needed in my life.' Mohan was stunned by his answer. He knew that he cannot win arguments with his son.


'Rishu. It was different back then. You have a daughter & it is a big responsibility.'


'So? does it make a difference papa?' ' Please! let's not talk about this anymore. The only female who is close to me is my daughter. Only her! No other girl except Pari would not be in my life!'


Rashmi was disappointed as her plans weren't working out much successful as she planned. She tried to get close to Rishabh from every chance she got. She visited his place almost everyday to show that she is concerned about Pari. Pari was the only medium that she could get close to him. But her plans were failed miserably as Rishabh always maintained a distance with her. Rashmi wanted to get Rishabh by hook or crook. Rishabh stated out the same what he told his father, to Rashmi. He clearly stated out that he doesn't want to get married to anyone else when Mohan tried to ask out that question again when Rashmi met them.


Meanwhile Rishabh was planning to go back to Australia. He had to complete his studies & also he thought that Australia would be a better atmosphere for his baby girl. He decided not to tell about his plans even to his father. He knew that he would get upset, but he didn't have any choice. He hated living in India. He wanted to start a new life in a new place with his baby girl.


Rishabh revealed that he is going to migrate to Australia before 5 days of his departure. Mohan was shocked to hear about his son's decision. He was upset but he wanted his son to be happy.


Finally the day before departure Rashmi visited Rishabh. Rashmi was pissed off with Mohan for not being able to convince Rishabh, but she didn't show it to him. She planned to get close to him even in the last chance. But she failed miserably.


'Rashmi! thank you for everything you have done so far to my daughter. But..' Rishabh stopped midway.


'Yes? what Rishabh?'


'I'm sorry to say, I may be wrong but I felt something different like...'


'Like what Rishu?' A little hope popped inside Rashmi. She thought that he could change his mind at the last minute.


'You did all these things cause you really love Pari right? and not because...?


'What are you talking about Rishabh?


'Not because to get close to me right?' Rishabh's words echoed in Rashmi's mind. She was stunned.


'Rishu? you?' 'How dare you?'


'Just calm down! Hope you understand what Madhu means to me! I can lead my life alone with my little daughter by my side. That's all what I want.' Rishabh replied.


Rashmi couldn't stop Rishabh. Rishabh went to Australia with his daughter. But Rashmi was not ready to accept her defeat easily. She made a fake wedding card of Rishabh with someone else & sent to Madhu. Madhu was shocked to see it. She never thought that Rishabh would betray her. She didn't want to believe at once. She decided to meet him. She traveled all alone to Mumbai to Kundra mansion but it was abandoned after Rishabh's departure. Mohan has moved to some other place. Madhu wanted to find Rishabh. She was not financially stable enough to travel to Australia. Her life turned out to be more miserable. But she couldn't hate him even after he left her. She loved him everyday with a ray of hope that she would meet him one day.


Back to present.


Rishabh & Madhu both of were shocked to hear about their past experiences. Finally both of them understood who was behind their separation. It was none other than Rashmi who carried out an evil plan separating a mother from a child & separating two lovers. Rashmi fooled both of them with her fake kindness. Rishabh was extremely pissed off. He was guilty that he trusted her & didn't search further about Madhu. He lived with a lie that Madhu was no more.


'How dare she?' Rishabh was fuming with anger. Madhu had tears in her eyes. Both of them were guilty & they regretted of lacking communication with each other which guided to a major misunderstanding & separation.


'Rishu.' Madhu held his hand. 'We cannot mend the mistakes in the past. It's just a history now. But we can correct our future. We are not that unlucky Rishu. The destiny separated us but the same destiny brought us closer once again. This time, we cannot let it go. Right?'


'Yes Madhu! My life is incomplete with out you. Pari's life is incomplete without her mother. ' 'I won't let anyone to separate us again Madhu! 'It's a promise!' Rishabh planted a kiss on Madhu's hand. It was after a long time. Madhu felt different, yet special. She felt much protected with Rishabh by her side.


'Rishu.. but I'm surprised about one thing. Why didn't Rashmi approach you after that? Why didn't she try to keep contact with you? I mean, I don't think that she would accept her defeat so easily.' Madhu was confused.


'That's why even I'm puzzled, Madhu. Rashmi told that day she is going back to London & she has not talked to me till date.' 'I even tried to contact Rahul because I haven't been in touch with him for years, but I couldn't contact them either.'


'Same here. I remember she saying that she is scheduled to go back to London. She promised that she will come to see me before she departs but she never came.'


'When did you come here?' Rishabh inquired.


'Almost an year back. I never thought that I could come here. I've been saving money.'Madhu revealed about her past how she'd been suffering without her baby & Rishabh. She told how her father cut off ties with her after knowing about her pregnancy. Her grandmother was there for her. She completed her studies in Delhi & started teaching. Meanwhile her grandmother was diagnosed with a stage IV pancreatic cancer & she passed away 3 years back. Madhu was shattered once again. She was all alone in the world. Finally one of her friends whom she met in Delhi helped her out to find a job in Australia.


Rishabh too told that he never visited India except once after he migrated. Mohan passed away with an unfortunate heart attack. It was just 6 months after Rishabh's departure. His world was shattered once again after his father's demise. He returned back to Australia soon after his funeral because of Pari. Rishabh never wanted to be back in India. He gave away all his property in India to the loyal workers who had been serving them for years & sold out some.


Both of them were gone through a lot of pain. The only difference was Rishabh had Pari for solace, but Madhu was all alone. Rishabh cupped her face. Madhu was in tears.


'Madhu.' 'Nobody can apart us now!' 'You will be with me & Pari here after.' 'Nothing can separate us Madhu. Even our death.' Rishabh wiped her tears. Madhu placed a soft kiss on his hands. She hugged him tightly. He too hugged her back.


'I love you Rishu.' Madhu cried out with happiness. Rishabh too was delighted to hear those words after 6 long years.


'I love you too Madhu!' He placed a kiss on her forehead. After a few minutes the broke the hug.


'Madhu, we need to find out about Rashmi! She deserves a life time punishment for messing up with our lives' Rishabh was fuming.


'Calm down Rishu! let us think about it later.' They shared a smile. Both of them smiled genuinely after years.


'Let's go inside Madhu, before our little angel storms out. After all it's our baby girl's birthday. The birthday girl is waiting to cut her birthday cake & this time it's so special, because she has her mommy & daddy both with her.' Rishabh smiled. He put a hand around Madhu's shoulder & accompanied her to the living room.


To be continued...


Pre cap - Rishabh, Madhu & Pari in India.
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Fab update...πŸ‘
Loved it...πŸ‘
It was sad when they revisited their traumatic past...😭Misery could be Rishbala's middle name... So much of pain & sufferings...😭
But feeling better now as they are together & heading in the right direction to lead a happy life as they knew who the culprit was...πŸ˜‰

But still i have doubts on Rash's sudden disappearance?? Is she really in London??😲 Even Rahul is not in picture...?? I guess they r now slaves of dipali..πŸ˜†

What was that yaar??😲 All were in a flying spree??...
Rishab migrating to Australia with Pari...🀣 Madhu & granny shifting to Delhi to pursue her studies..🀣 Mohan moved to a new house to die in a new atmosphere...🀣 then Rash escaping to London...🀣 granny & mohon mingling in thin air to reach heaven...🀣 then finally madhu flying to Australia... One good move...🀣

Hmm... I thought Rishab will accuse madhu for hiding her pregnancy to him which is the root of all cause.. & madhu will rebuke him for not contacting her for three months when he met with the accident & wished they will have a wrestling in bed...☺️ i didn't even get a proper lip lock... Only hand kisses... but yeah i know u will compensate for all in upcoming updates as i know happy days r coming...πŸ˜›

Loved 3 scenes so so much in this update...

# Rishab taking care of his baby girl... Madhu's last nishaani... Rishab feeding her... Putting her to sleep... Making her stop her cry by showing her mommy's wind chime... Vowing to be her mom & dad & treat her like a princess... Naming her pari... Lovely... πŸ‘

# Rishab's stubbornness to not to give madhu's place to anyone... & love only his baby girl after madhu... That was amazing...πŸ‘

# finally Rishab suspecting Rash for doing all the drama of caring pari is only to win him & his love & also he asked it right on her face... That was sheer brilliance...πŸ‘

here bitchy Rash, he said it loud & clear that u dont have a tiny bit of place in his heart that too for the next seven births as its only meant for madhu... So u better put the fact in ur pipe & smoke & get ur f**king paws off him...😑

Awe... Finally Rishbala came out of their own sorrowful world & decided to celebrate their baby girls birthday... I wish they get married on Pari's birthday itself... That would be so memorable nah??😳

Thank u so so much for give the lovely update...πŸ˜›

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Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Ohh sweety
This update was of mixed emotion as it was really sad when they were recounting their past n it was happy to see them together 😊
All in all a superb update 😊
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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Ch-10:Superb update dear Roch,πŸ‘and very touchy and emotional,😳felt so bad for Madhu and Rishabhand hate Rashmi,😑how can she do this,Madhu,such a jealous soul,😑poor Madhu and Rishabh,suffered a lot and so many things got hidden,they got seperated too and didn't even know about truth,Madhu lost the baby and Rishabh lost Madhuboth were unaware about each other,i loved the way you show the frame broken thing,everything else is also beautifully written and described.⭐️
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Superb πŸ‘and super fast update dear Roch,πŸ˜†so much happened in this update and its very emotional too,😳aww Rishabh taking care of baby and baby stops crying when she came near the wind chime,πŸ˜ƒso cute, and i loved the whole update..⭐️so now Rishabh and Madhu came to know about Rashmi's wicked plan 😑and she made Mohan fool too,hat her...finally Rk Madhu united and waiting eagerly to see what happens next...πŸ˜›its superbly written and Rashmi is such a bad girl,all the time want to be close to Rishabh and making masterplans,😑but now Pari ,Rk -Madhu are together,that's great.πŸ˜ƒWaiting for next part.πŸ˜‰
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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11th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
Oops sorry,double posts happened due to my net.
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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