ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

RES!

Will be here soon :D

Edited:

And i am here! I am so sorry JJ for not editing this for so long, was a little busy with stupid people 🥱 Now I am here back with my feedback. First of all, you need to write an epilogue, how could I let you stop there? This is not me! I am going to force you to write the next chapter😛😳 So, you are writing one, may be epilogue, whatever you want to name it, I want another chapter.

Now coming to the update, it had everything, love, a little bit of drama and feeling of betrayal. I loved the way you handled Khushi in this chapter, This Khushi is brave and strong, thanks for that JJ! It is very rare that I like Khushi more than ASR but you made it possible here. I love you for that! 🤗 So, as I have said earlier, I feel like this should be turned into some show or a movie, I would love to watch Arnav and Khushi like this.

I loved when he said, Miyan and Biwi, it was adorable! The main point of this story was, according to me, their childhood. More than present I loved reading about their past. I so want to read, what after this? How are ArHi going to be together? Waiting for it and most importantly Khushi's reaction! 😳

Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story! I am waiting for epilogue😉

Love you<3

Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago

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RUBAMARYAM

@RUBAMARYAM

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

luvd it..
a different one ..
very wel potrayed

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

nice update
is khushi's mother aware of her husband's link up with terrorists?
happy ending..😊

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Amazing update. Thanks for pm

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harman12

@harman12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

lovely ending finally khushi did proved she is as brave as her brother set fire on militrant
n omg kamaal was the actual culpri

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

wow...this was actuly i very different genre...bt i loved it
i feel realy sad for khushi n d family excpt for her abba for sure...his one wrng deed gave life long pain to his family
i love arhi's biwi n miyah thng..thats adorable :))

il b waitng for the epilouge :)
thnx for d pm

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

wow turned out to be quite nice

thanks for pm x

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Lovely ending
Can't wait for the epilogue

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Awesome ending to an amazing story!!!

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Finished reading all the parts, very different and amazing. But few questions, how did the militants found them so easily, while the Army lost them so easily ? How is it that for such important task, there was only one militant taking accompanying Khushi to their house ? Why is it that nothing happened while Arnav is with them ? Is there another twist waiting ? Would Arnav be considered a traitor when Khushi will be identified even as his wife ? How long can he hide Khushi from the Army without risking his job and Khushi's life ?