ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Amazing genre Di! I feel as if i am chased by the militants while reading!lol! It was sad to knw that abba was the real traitor here! Years of separation has invoked the fire of passion between arshi!
Yes u must give an ending! waiting for it!thanks for pm!

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

wow superb update and ending loved it can't wait for the epilogue please update soon.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Beautiful story.. loved it.. 😊

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Awesome ending

Loved it <33

Thanks for the pm

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arshi_sarun

@arshi_sarun

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Very emotional update thanks for the pm

Edited by arshi_sarun - 10 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Oh that's a beautiful story ji
Totally different from our everyday read
Great one
Loved it

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: jyothirockz
Finished reading all the parts, very different and amazing. But few questions, how did the militants found them so easily, while the Army lost them so easily ? How is it that for such important task, there was only one militant taking accompanying Khushi to their house ? Why is it that nothing happened while Arnav is with them ? Is there another twist waiting ? Would Arnav be considered a traitor when Khushi will be identified even as his wife ? How long can he hide Khushi from the Army without risking his job and Khushi's life ?

thanks Jyoti for always reading and commenting on my writings. My answers, 1. Army lost them because an insider I.e. Arnav was helping her out. 2. Maybe they didn't consider managing 3 ladies as a huge hurdle. Besides, they figures Arnav's true identity in the last part. Only one militant was left while the other ones missing. 3. Its just an instinct of yours I guess. They were on the run, no? And I would disagree with your words nothing happened, running for ones life's in your own country is the biggest "happening" in ones life as i believe. 4. You will get that question answered in the epilogue. 5. Same as 4

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._Jyoti_.

@._Jyoti_.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

It's emotional but lovely story!

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

It must be so painful to know that your own loved one is responsible for the death of another loved one. Her father was not only a traitor but also a murderer of his own son. Terrorism really leaves us with no moral and conscience.
I feel sorry for Khushi's family who had to pay a price for her father's deeds. The good thing is that she now has Arnav who won't leave her side ever.