FF: Mera Jeena Hai Kya... NOTE on page 23

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INDEX

PROLOGUE: SCROLL DOWN

CHAPTER 1 : Page 5

CHAPTER 2: PAGE 9

CHAPTER 3: Page 15

CHAPTER 4 : Page 21

NOTE : Page 23


PROLOGUE

Dr. Ashutosh walked into his cabin, talking off his jacket and tossing it at the back of his chair he took a deep breath as he rolled the sleeves of his shirt. He sat on his chair resting his head onto the headrest. After a bone tiring three hour complicated heart surgery that was perfectly successful, he was well received and appreciated by every person in the hospital. Even he was feeling good as the patient, Rahul was a child and that too from the orphanage he regularly visited to soothe his soul amongst those little bundles of joy. Although everyone in Kotnis General Hospital knew that Dr. Ashutosh Mathur rarely failed any surgeries, but still his colleagues and junior doctors used to marvel at his operating skills. He had such a magical touch in his hands.
But the last ten minutes has ruined his mood badly. It seemed that his heart leapt out of his chest and into his throat. He never knew he was capable of this kind of rage... Or rather jealousy would be the better word to say.

Why? Why is this happening god?'
This was the question, he was tired of. It actually has started haunting him, and then he tried to avoid it too, succeeded to some extent too but then failed miserably at last. But to imagine something he has just witnessed was beyond his worst nightmares. His chain of thoughts was broken by a knock on the door of his cabin.
"Come in." He said.
"Dr. Ashutosh your coffee." The peon said as he kept the coffee on his table and left.
He removed the lid from his coffee mug to which he is used after every heavy tiring surgery but today the coffee didn't seem to soothe his tired nerves. He took out an Disprin tablet from his side drawer and gulped it down with the hot coffee to lessen the ache in his head. The coffee seemed much bitter today. His mind wandered back to her and every time he thought about her or talked to her. Even like some senior surgeon talking to a junior doctor on some medical issue, he felt as if he is giving her a piece of him...his soul to her, such was the connection he felt with her. Her refreshing sweet smile and complete balance of wit and intelligence with a hint of mischief made his heart pounce. It was such a rare combination to get. Her every smile made my day and her way with the children in the children's ward, which was his favorite place in the hospital, made him feel more bonded to her. Although I knew that it was again a part of my imagination...or say imaginations which were very common these days.

"So Dr. Nidhi. This is Viren haan, nice choice I must say." Dr. Neha, Nidhi's colleague said.
"Vo toh hain, aakhir meri choice jo hain, Kyu Virenji" Jodha asked him teasingly.
"Toh shaadi ki date kabki fix hui hain" Dr. Ahana asked next.
"Abhi shadi ki date toh fix nhi hui par sagai next week hai aur tum sabko aana hain. Mujhe tum sabko Anamika di se bhi milana hai. Vo do doin pehle hi London se aayi hain khas sagai ke liye." Nidhi said.
"Are tu nhi bulati toh bhi hum aate." They all said in union.
"Chale Nidhi, shopping bhi complete krni hai." Viren asked her and they left.
Ashutosh got up from his chair and went towards the window to breathe some fresh air and what he saw again pierced his heart. There Nidhi was in the parking with the man with whom he saw her talking to her colleagues about her engagement, laughing and smiling with him. Only on hearing those words he left the place and rushed to his cabin. That was too much for him to bear. After a few minutes they drove away and he slammed the window furiously.

So guys tell me how is it????
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Tasha1994 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow new ff off to read it amreen
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wow new ff off to read it amreen


Yup! This one is a very different FF... A totally new theme... the theme will slowly unfold... I guess this is an unexplored theme...
Read and tell me how u like it...???
Amreen
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Nice start Amreen.. ! ⭐️👏
Nidhi is getting engaged or is it her elder sis getting engaged to Viren,, ??/ 😳
Hmm.. ,,, good one., ⭐️
Whoever is getting engaged.. but i just loved Ashu getting jealous.,, n his way of shutting the window... ! Hope i am right to judge out. .,, but loved how you have explained what Ashu feels for Nidhi n her wit n intelligence in one go.. ! She is like that.. just like that.. 👏👏
Thanks.. will wait for more to unfold the scenario... !
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Thank you...I will be back...
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Very nice...interesting...👏
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Now the question how will AshNi's story move...
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will give my review till evening amreen
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wonwonderful update amreen. Liked this new concept a lot. Does ashutosh like nidhi.but nidhi is getting engaged to viren. Really love ashutosh getting jealous and slamming the window. I had a question is nidhi getting engaged or her sister. Amreen I saw your post of wantwan a banner. For which ff u want a banner. Loving this story. Thanks for the FF WILL wait for the next update
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Thanks for the new ff amreen. Loved the FF a lot .
Love the concept of the FF .pls wait for some time for a detailed review. Will surely give it till tomorrow

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