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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Saumya

Damn, you can write Girl! I bow down to you superior skills

I read the first part again and then both.- It was like I was watching a really good mystery glued to the screen eating virtual popcorn - Your story has an interesting plot and is witty, realistic, researched, and kept me waiting for more.

And so well written - your writing is crisp, sassy and lucid - I could not only visualize everything, but even hear the voices (on top the others in my head 😆)

I mean really, how can someone write so eloquently about errm... Shit 👏

Warning before you read - I have an affliction called bullet-itis When I have a lot say I can't seem to write in paragraphs and resort to bullets - And I have a lot to say!

Lawyer, of course - duh, why didn't I catch it before - "defamatory statements" "evidentiary support" "100 crore in damages". Oh and Vishakha guideline (had to google it)

Characters:
  • Wow Ananya had 10 times the spunk and sass than in the actual show - seriously Kabir - Kisse panga liya?
  • Ananya unabashedly giving it back to Malvika - love it
  • Tarini partnering with Ananya from the other end - can we please have that too?
  • Glad Tarini-Kabir ahve good personal/professional boundaries - e.g. freelance /$500K
  • Loved that Kabir's sanity is being plundered away 😉😃


Gems - so many but these are a few :

  • Baby - Isse achcha Namuna Nahin Mila?
  • "Sir the plan this time is perfect with a backup and an escape plan drawn to the last detail"
  • "Shadi???? Inki baat shadi tak bhi pahunch gayi aur apna dekho." - I can just see Ananya saying it delhi style
  • "She had actually got the HM's bedroom too wired"... while they were tapping her!!🤣👏
  • "Zeher se zeher kata jaata hai" - Now that warmed my heart!


Ok better stop - I think my post is getting longer than your SS


Can't wait for: "...he had made up his mind about his next course of action".

Oh and can you please do something about Evilin - she's gotta go!


Edited by eternalasha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: eternalasha

Hey Saumya

Damn, you can write Girl! I bow down to you superior skills

Thank you so much For your kind words but I doubt I deserve them.
I read the first part again and then both.- It was like I was watching a really good mystery glued to the screen eating virtual popcorn - Your story has an interesting plot and is witty, realistic, researched, and kept me waiting for more.
I am glad you found it worth reading...you enjoyed it was just a bonus for me.

And so well written - your writing is crisp, sassy and lucid - I could not only visualize everything, but even hear the voices (on top the others in my head 😆)
I am humbled beyond words now...I am certain you are being generous.

I mean really, how can someone write so eloquently about errm... Shit 👏
Lol Shit just happens ...😉...Malvika grates on my nerves and so do the creative arrey yaar ...women have much better abilities than Malvika. Us aurat ko kuch to kam do wo karti kya hai yeh to aaj tak samajh hi nahi payi main.

Warning before you read - I have an affliction called bullet-itis When I have a lot say I can't seem to write in paragraphs and resort to bullets - And I have a lot to say!
I am all eyes and ears for all that you have to say...and bullet;itis ...You do have a super creative to express things..see that is why I always say CVS ko thoda tum logon se sikhna chahiye.

Lawyer, of course - duh, why didn't I catch it before - "defamatory statements" "evidentiary support" "100 crore in damages". Oh and Vishakha guideline (had to google it)
It is all over the place isint it? Vishakha Guidelines is evoked so often in Indian occupational environment specially media of all kinds. It is weird that a show of this kind did not cash on it. I guess the producers are scared to look out of the box. they do start differently but end up being caged again.
Characters:
  • Wow Ananya had 10 times the spunk and sass in the actual show - seriously Kabir - Kisse panga liya?

I have a seven year old daughter and believe me she is as sassy it can get for her age. I love girls who are witty and intelligent. Who can outsmart others without drawing on the wells in their eyes. It is this reason why I love Ananya in the show as well. I had really loved her in the Baghi situation.

Ananya unabashedly giving it back to Malvika - love it
she deserved it didn't she
    Tarini partnering with Ananya from the other end - can we please have that too?
  • Glad Tarini-Kabir ahve good personal/professional boundaries - e.g. freelance /$500K

There had to be something more to Tarini than just a past misunderstanding. She is such a beautiful actor so under utilized.

  • Loved that Kabir's sanity is being plundered away 😉😃

I am glad you enjoyed it.


Gems - so many but these are a few :

  • Baby - Isse achcha Namuna Nahin Mila?

Socho kya namuna dhoondha hai Malvika ne and kya bakwaas hain a weather reporter is also a Bollywood reporter. Koi samjhao CVs ko weather reporting is a very technical job. Today the weather reporters are super educated in this field ...it is not some asman dekha aur pani barsaya kind of thing...A bad very bad move by the CVs...instead of having Baby as weather reporter had they introduced her as lampoon artist it would have been such a wonderfull and much better comic touch par again thinking out of the box does not reaches our Creators at all.

  • "Sir the plan this time is perfect with a backup and an escape plan drawn to the last detail"
  • "Shadi???? Inki baat shadi tak bhi pahunch gayi aur apna dekho." - I can just see Ananya saying it delhi style

I doubt though that Ananya was thinking about marriage...she is I guess expecting a more romantic Kabir...will she be able to handle a more romantic Kabir is entirely another question. She does not knows with Romance comes passion and a person like Kabir could be a little too much for our still bacchii Ananya.

  • "She had actually got the HM's bedroom too wired"... while they were tapping her!!🤣👏

It happens all the time. There are so many examples of this thing. Google Bangaru Laxman it was one of the earliest cases in the series of sting operations. and then Neera Radia is another one that you can look into where reverse sting occurred.

  • "Zeher se zeher kata jaata hai" - Now that warmed my heart!


Ok better stop - I think my post is getting longer than your SS


Can't wait for: "...he had made up his mind about his next course of action".
This will be something to look out for atleast, I hope so.

Oh and can you please do something about Evilin - she's gotta go!
She will go pretty soon.


Thankyou for wrinting back to me. It made my day. I love talking and I am certain you know it by now. 😊
Edited by mytinypaintings - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"I love talking"

And I love talking to you ----- you are such fun and a wealth of information - seriously this morning you had me googling Niira Radia and Bangaru Laxman !
Edited by eternalasha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: eternalasha

"I love talking"

And I love talking to you ----- you are such fun and a wealth of information - seriously this morning you had me googling Niira Radia and Bangaru Laxman !

I love talking to you too. So how did you find the entire Neera Radia thing. It actually gave a big blow to Barkha Dutt. Technically she never recovered back from that point. Now so far as being fun and wealth of information is concerned well that is a result of the current Indian political scenario. Which is quite interesting these days, it amuses, entertains and gives you hell lot of knowledge about human behaviour. Lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys
I am back with another part...Do let me know what you think. Your words are precious to me and they tell me about your inclination.
Thanks for reading.

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Ananya parked her two wheeler in her parking and looked at it with a yearning. Someday this place will be a parking for my BMW and that too earned from my own sweat and blood. How romantic does this line seem she thought?

"Abhi Kabeer sir hotey to boltey passena aur khoon romantic tumko hi lag sakta hai." She was giggling at that thought while waiting for the elevator. Which suddenly opened and the watchman looked at her with the same gleam of affection in his eyes that he had held tightly on to for past 8 years.

This family had moved in this awesome 3600 squarefoot apartment in one of the best complexes 20 years ago. Ananya was just five and Armaan was not even born, since then this place has been their safe haven. The only respite she had in past 8 years. Her father Mr Sudhir Kashyap was Director Vigilance at that time. He had disposed of his lands in Kashmir successfully to purchase this flat. Being born with a silver spoon she had never wanted for anything. Her world was perfect, she was an ace student and a daddy's perfect girl. Until her father apparently commited suicide while pursuing the land mafias. She still recalled Kabir was first to write a news piece asking for a CBI probe in this case. He strongly believed that Mr. Kashyap had no reason to end his life. It all started with that article and spiraled upwards till people came out on the streets in support of her father. 8 years back her father's death had led to an India wide march against corruption and political influence on investigations. She still had so many cuttings safely tucked in her fangirl file that Kabir had written about her father. It was that movement that brought justice to her father. Within four years of his murder in this very house, his murderers were handed over a guilty verdict and a lifetime in jail. Then onwards started her affair with journalism and Kabir. She felt her head spin, she had been without food for nearly 12 hours. Sweat had beaded up on her forehead and she patted it with the back of her sleeves and along with it she also successfully removed any trace of wetness from her eyes.

A worried look on her mother's face told her she was in no better state.

"Kya hua phir pareshan arrey main kaam ke liye gayi thi ma" Ananya told her in a tired and exasperated tone. "Kuch khane ko hai kya."

"You freshen up and I will re heat the dinner." Instead of any replying Ananya sat down on the dining table.

"Phir kuch nahi khaya poora din." Anita looked at her with concern and Ananya took out the two wrappers of muesli bars that Anita had forcefully placed in her bag. It was her way of saying thank you for always doing what was right for her. Ananya started gulping down her dinner at an unprecedented speed. She had refused Kabir's dinner proposition because she knew her mom would be waiting for her.

...

KKN was in a state of pandemonium, and worse effected was Khalid. One moment he was excited the other he was scared. Kabir had decided to air the news by 10 AM and had informed the opposition about it. The opposition was ready to take over the assembly session once the news was broken. Khalid had called for Ananya.

"Oh welcome my dear" He enveloped Ananya in a rabbit hug. After all you could not call Khalid a bear.

"Wow that was some welcome."

"And that was some reporting." This came from Kabir

"Thank you."

"You are welcoming me Khalid and I thought that you were looking for my replacement." Ananya said.

"What? Where did you get that notion from?"

"Suna tha kahin kissi roz."

"Galat suna tha. You are our star."

"Stars do fall." Malvika said entering his office.

"I wish you had learnt to knock Malvika."

"Can we start with our meeting Khalid?" She again looked at him totally unaffected by his sarcasm. Kabir ushered all three of them to the main conference hall and began.

"OK so the breaking news at ten AM, we will be covering the PS and HM sending money to CMO for keeping quiet. Ronnie prepare the blinkers. This is just one part of the footage but this is definitely not the nuke I was talking about. The best part is yet to come." Kabir could hardly contain his excitement. He used to say that "Khabarein nasha hai" Ananya could clearly feel him high today. No doubt a good story to him was his own brand of ecstasy (MDMA) and she knew it firsthand that this could be far more lethal than the white powder. She was glad she was the reason behind his bliss today. Little did she know while news gave him unparalleled high Ananya formed his foundation. His very base to stand tall on. Kabir looked at her with such profound pride that Ananya had to lower down her eyes. She crossed her fingers and sent a silent prayer to the lords above that she may always be able to hold his trust and keep it safe.

"We have heard this so many times today Kabir, I only hope your claims do not fall flat on their face." He totally ignored her and her comment, not even deeming it fit for a response.

"The Health Minister has kept locked up in his house a 13 year old girl. She is his play thing. Within the next 20 minutes the police will raid his house and rescue the child, who happens to be his household maid's daughter. Not only that his wife and his own son will be moving out on him. They will become the prime witness and depose against the Minister." Now it was Ananya's turn to be surprised. She had been working on the medical college admission scam for quite sometime. In the course of her research and investigation she found incriminating evidence against the minister and his sinful indulgence with a child. She discussed it with Kabir and he asked her to work on that aspect and unless she is hundred certain she is not supposed to disclose it to any one. Not only certain she would need fool proof evidence to back up her accusations. They were not only grave but also could topple the government entirely. The opposition could bring a no confidence motion. The Supreme court of India could take Suo-motto action. Given the current situation of Judicial activism in its full glory this would be an added feather to their cap. The impact of this story would ruin the family of the health minister perpetually. She needed solid evidence to back up her speculations.

While Ananya was intelligent she was impulsive and emotional and mostly did not follow through with the story to its logical end. She was prone to leaving it with loose ends putting her credibility to question. Ananya had discussed this case solely with Kabir and had worked under his guidance. Ananya along with her stinger and Laxman had carefully casted a trap in the sea with the most luscious baits possible. They had let their phones be tapped by authorities and had used it successfully as a diversion. Never had they discussed the victim in their telephonic conversations. The victim's mother was taken in confidence slowly but surely and was later used to wire the house of the HM. Ananya had also paid the Computer assistants in the health ministry to get the computers of the Health minister wired and shared with the temporary watch out built in the Opposition party head office across the street. The opposition was taken into confidence and given assurance that they would be given whatever evidence would be accrued. In all it was one articulately crafted journalistic expedition that she would always be proud of. Kabir had told her that she would not be openly or covertly given credit for this venture in fact it will be handled by as few people as possible and her name would never be out in the open for her own security. She would only be given the credit for the medical college admission scam nothing more. She knew she could trust him with his life. Ananya was starkly surprised at Kabir's information about HM's wife and son deposing against their patriarch head. What could have brought this change in their attitudes? They were not comfortable with what was going on in their home but they did not protest then what brought them to fore. She will talk about this to Kabir when alone though inherently she had some idea as to what would have happened. She was brought back to the present by Ronnie Kicking her toe.

She looked across her to see Malvika looking at her in utter disbelief.

"Was this all done by her?" There was a lot of disdain in her which Malvika did not care to hide.

"No not by me. I am as surprised by this news as much as you are. I am only responsible for the sting operation at the CMO's house." Ananya very easily ducked to avoid the hit as suggested by Kabir. As of now Kabir and Khalid were the only people in KKN who knew that she was behind procurement and production of both the footages. She casted a furtive glance towards Kabir from under her eyelashes. Her Huge eyelashes that fanned her cheeks were always a good cover to steal a glance every now and then without being noticed. If only she knew what effect this act of her's had on Kabir. If only she knew that he had been aware of these glances even before his soul soaking confession. If only she knew every time she did it Kabir's heart skipped a beat like a teenager. If only she knew it was the incongruity of innocence and sensuality compressed into her female form that at that moment Kabir could think of sin and sin alone. He averted his gaze from her, though he knew she was seeking his approval with those lowered eyelids but for now he needed to grip his sanity tighter.

"This footage was procured by me through a new stinger that I have associated with." Kabir said with a disnctive finality in his tone that marked Ananya's statement as approved. Moreover the world knew that she was at CMO's residence and since Tarini too only had this piece of info, It was clear that Ananya had accomplished this task in total obscurity.

"Ronnie work on the blinkers, Manav you would be presenting this news. Richa go with the OB van to the HM's home to cover the arrest now." Richa exited without much ado. "Saas Bahu and Ranjish will be covered by you along with the weather report." Kabir looked at baby. "Malvika we need a dedicated weather consultant and I need this done asap. We need to make weather reporting more interesting and attention grabbing." He casted a disproving look at baby once again. "I don't appreciate a single minute of prime time being wasted in unnecessary chitter chatter and assuming that our viewers are fools. You and Rohan will be doing a short 20 minute segment today at 4 PM covering child sexual abuse also"

"It is too short a notice to invite the panel or prepare a brief." Malvika protested vehemently

"We don't need a panel. This won't be a debate but it would be a showcase to the level of awareness in people towards child abuse. Would it be difficult Ms. Kashyap for you to come up with the verified statistics relevant to this topic in next couple of hours."

"Absolutely not sir. We are looking at stats for FIRS filed and pursued in such cases. Then charge sheets filed and trials completed and quantum of punishments and acquittals in such cases, then of course the available health stats of such victims. Procuring these data is as easy as it can get from the government departments and various NGOs."

Kabir could not utter a word for nearly half a minute. She was perfect, he finally said

"Precisely perfect. Am I grammatically correct Malvika?" She fixed him with a look that coruscated vengeance and animosity. Kabir took a deep breath and fixed her with a lopsided grin as to say you get this for ruffling my feathers with my dear snack time not so long ago. A statement said and understood very well by both the parties. Such is the impact of both love and repugnance, the parties affected by any of these profound feelings understands the other like a back of the hand. One resulted in complete destruction and pain, while other led to liberation and bliss. Kabir took a deep breath to stabilize him self. Of late he had become a pendulum always achieving peaks of either side of emotions, being forever in state of movement. He needed to achieve peace and it was not possible without having Ananya at his side forever. "Rohan please be ready with a questionnaire for young women and men in the age group of 18-45 addressing child abuse and bonded labor. Ms Kashyap you will be on the road targeting this age group in places like malls and colleges. Rohan make the questions as hard hitting as possible. We need to show the society a mirror. I think you can work out the rest Malvika with Ronnie, Aisha and Gautam (the editor and the program producer). I am all set for a hell of a day." he ended with a victorious look and an affectionate smile fixed at Ananya. It did not go unnoticed by anyone except ofcourse the subject who was once again lost in her dairy.

Do buddy me at Saumyaag right below this post for PM. Pming from this id would not be possible as I have a lot of friends who may or may not be willing to read this story. I would not want to spam them with update😊
Edited by mytinypaintings - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Buddy me here If you want PMs...Thanks
saumya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Superb update. Loved it. Very well written. I could visualize it as if watching it on screen.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update..😊😊
Thanks for pm

Update it soon.. it's interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written update. ..I loved this thorough insight of news channel workings...and with that kabir's adoration and love for ananya ...he is so proud of her and I love reading that...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice
I love it
Thanks for the PM

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