ManYa Drabble #1 : Ishq Chada Hai

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Pretext of the Drabble : Mantu saves Amaaya from the goons , he hugs her . Amaaya asks why he's always so concerned about her , she angers him to the point , where the following occurs . Hope you have a good read !

Also , this is the first time I've written so much in Hindi for a Drabble that is . So do neglect the mistakes . - Nidhi :)



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"Sunna Tha Na Tumhein , Toh Suno , Hum Paaglon Ki Tarah Din - Raat Tumhaare Baare Mein Sochte Hain Amaaya . Humein Har Cheez Main Tum Dikhti Ho , tumhari harkatein yaad aati hai . Tumhaare alaava kuch soch nahi sakte" He said looking right into her moist eyes.

"Lekin tumhein kyun bata rahein Hain . Tumhein Toh aisa nahi hua . Hoga bhi nahi . Tum kahaan aur hum kahaan . Accha hoga ki hum yeh sab bhool jaaye" He looked at her , one last time , he promised himself . He loved her , only if she could fathom how and how much he loved her .

"Abhimanyu Shrivastav. " She held his hand .

"Sirf Tum Bol Sakte Ho Ki Mujhe Bhi Mauka Milega ?" The way she looked at him , made his heart skip a beat .

"Actually Ab Bataane Ke Liye Aur Kuch Nahi Bacha , Ab Jataana Hai " She kissed his right cheek and hugged him tight .

Blushing in his arms , in a tone softer than a whisper , "I love you , Mantu" she said.

He didn't know how to respond , was he supposed to cry , smile , or just feel the divine bliss he was feeling with her against his body . Nothing had seemed more perfect than this moment to him .

"Hmm , ab aur nahi hoga . Tumse door rehna . Bas . " Mantu said .

"I love you , Amaaya . I love you very much ."

It started drizzling , the Stars were twinkling with a brighter gleam than they usually did . Maybe love did light up the sky .

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MsCupcake thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg!!! awesomely written ...it made me blush😳I want same confession from manya❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb dr...
nice update. ..
well written. ..
love to read more. .
do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pilothegirl

Omg!!! awesomely written ...it made me blush😳I want same confession from manya❤️



Thank You :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arthishefali

Superb dr...

nice update. ..
well written. ..
love to read more. .
do continue



Thank You So Much ! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazingly written
you've supperbb writing skills
same i want in the show
thanks for this...this is mindblowing

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