New Asya ff Teri Meri Love Story chaptr 7 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello frnds I am aahana
new to this forum😆
and I am writing this story based on various different serial plots I hav seen
i'll keep on continuing this story when I get time
I don't care for likes
nor comments🥱
I am simply writing this for my own growth as a writer
Part 1

This story is about a beautiful, simple & loyal girl named zoya from a village sirsi...her parents die in a bus accident at the age of 6..she was the only daughter of zeenat and anwar

And their 1 acre of land their house and cloth shop is in zoya's name but she is small

Gaffur anwar's cousin is very poor he suddenly hears about zoya's parents through relatives

And rushes with his family to her house

Zoya is seen crying with other far distant relatives

Gaffur holds her hand and says dear

Don't worry now this house is my house and I'll take care of you like my doll

Gaffur is anwar's cousin brother and razia his wife take care of zoya in zoya's house like a servent.

Since then zoya is seen like a servent in her own house

she does all the work in her household & her uncle gaffur, aunt razia & cousin humaira torture her. They don't allow zoya to get an education, leaving her illiterate.

16 yrs After

It starts with kids playing in the background. Then we see fat old woman in a bright blue salwar kameez shouting "zoya! its none other than razia

her aunt screams for zoya. Scene change. And We now see zoya running down some steps and her good friend, mariyam, asking her where she is running off and to meet who? zoya says there is some1. Her firend gets excited and asks who? She describes him as being someone who is supernatural and her friend asks her is this a human or God? zoya giggles n walks away.

Her firend says deifnitely has to be allah miyan..Her friend tells her that only he resides in her mind. Her friend then goes on to talk abt businees tycoon and nawab of bhopal rasid ahmed khan coming to their city together with chote nawab . Zoya queries chote nawab ??. Her friend says he is the only son of the business tycoon rasid ahmed khan and that rumours has been going on that asad's parents are coming here to look for a bride for thier son. They want a decent well behaved pretty bride.

But why this village ?? zoya questions

Mariyum : coz this village is mr rashisd ahmed khan's wifes native place..he found his true love dilshad in this village..

So now he is searching for his daughter in law in the same village

Zoya : then tht gal is so lucky she sighs dreamily.. kash main bhi lucky hoti..par she pauses with sad look..

zoya's home scene. Her aunt is still wandering wher this gal has gone. who knows where she keeps wandering. Her husband is also sitting there n talking abt nawabs visit there...

I have heard nawab of bhopal is searching for a bride

Razia smirking nawab's wife is dilshaad and dilshaad was zeenat's best frnd.."zeenat" zoya s late mom...coz zeenat used to mention about dilshad's love story with me in phone

Then suddenly they show this girl in black night dress n with curlers in her hair coming out of a room. Its humaira , razia' daughter. razia says you have woken up so fast! humaira says how can she sleep with all the noise? Just then zoya walks in. humaira asks her for tea.

Zoya goes to make tea..and brings and gives it to humi. and humi screams as she holds the glass as it is hot.and she brks the cup.. razia scolds zoya n asks her to go and do tea for her again. And taunts her as ..manhoos ladki..

Zoya does as they say...

She thinks allah miya ab mujse koi galthi na ho..

She goes to kitchen only to see the tea powder empty..

So she thinks I have to get the tea powder and goes out to get some tea powder

on the way to the petty shop

she sees children screaming " they are here!" and running after their car. zoe's friend also runs n climbs up a tree to see whats going on. nawab and his begum comes out. Thier servant comes out running n greets them. He says its been ages seeing them. nawab n his wife smile . Servant asks where is bhopal's chote nawab. Then we see him coming out form front seat of the car in blue jeans n white t shirt with white cap covering his Face.
Zoya sees her frnds screaming loudly chote nawabbb bhopal ke chote nawab

zoya's friends keep non stop chattering on the streets. Thy talk about seeing the nawab n his son. Zoya's frnd mariyum says she saw him from his pants all the way to his cap.zoya laughs loudly interupting them and asks wht abt the face. Friend says this is wht I didnt see..

And they both start laughing haha

next part : next weekend
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful start.
Liked it.
Gazia n humi r bad here.
Zoya n mariam convo is funny.
Asad is chote nawab.
Hope asya meet soon.
Continue soon
Edited by Kabhibloom - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Interesting
Update soon plz
Do pm me if u can
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting...:)
and superb
please pm me when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next part chaptr 2

Dilshad and rashid keep on moving ahead busy with thier conversation and asad runs from ther

Dilshad and nawab rashid gets tensed regarding their son..

Humare bete ko ek acchi ladki mil jaye jo usse sambal paye aur usse teek kare..

Uske pyaar se...

Chalo...apne farm house main...

Diluu turns to see asad missing..

Dilshad : asad beta asad...

Rashid : asad kaha gaya abhi tho yahi tha...

Dilshad : muje tho darr lag raha hai..asad..

Scene shifting to zoya & frnds

Zoya's frnds keep on talking about chote nawab..and about his looks

Frnd 1 :Voh pakka hero jaise dikta honge

Frnd 2 Ek sehzade jaise dikte honge

And at that moment itself

Just then three gunda looking type guys come n one of them in the green shirt is akram. he always harasses village gals..

And sees zoya

Kya baat hai zoya meri mallika kaha jaa rahi hai

Teri madat karo...

Zoya : no thanks me kudh jaa sakti hoon

And she ignores them and moves...but akram comes in the way and aise kaise jaane do..and tries to touch her..but mariyum interupts

And slaps akram hardly on his cheecks

Tume samaj nahi aatha...gunde mawali ..jab deko tab ladkiyon ko chedtha rehtha hain

Sharam kar

Chalo zoya aise logo ki muh nahi lagthe

Akram gets pissed off with the slap..

Zoya kabhi tho milogi akele main smirks..and leaves

Zoya thank you mariyum ab muje der ho rahi hain..

I am going to get tea powder nahi tho meri shamath aajayegi..humaira muje bhouth sunayegi

Mariyum ; zoya sambalkar jaana..kudh ka kayal rakna..thinking kabhi tho apne bhare main socho zoya..

Zoya goes to gets the tea powder

On the way back home

Akram sees her alone and smirks...

Ladki akeli hain

Mauka accha hain beta..

And comes in her way..arrey zoya meri laila kya huva der ho rahi hain

Zoya : plz akram meri rasta math roko muje ghar jaana hain

Akram :Arrey baby ghar jana hain tho I'll drop haan..

Chalo he holds her hand tightly

Zoya akram plz leave..chodo plz leave

Akram : haath chodne keliye nahi pakda hain smirks

Zoya :she gets irritated and bites his hand..

Akram: ahhh..zoya ki bachiii

she runs as fast as she can.. he runs behind her her duppata flies in the air and falls on a guy

The guy removes the duppata and sees a gal hurrying towards him she hides behind him

She asks for help plzz help voh gunda mere peeche pada hain plzz meri madat karo..she cries

Akram aaproaches and sees the guy with a cap..

He takes his cap and says kisi ko doond rahe ho..

Akram : haan par tum beeech main aaye tho main tume bhi nahi chodunga

Guy : beech main panda muje nahi pasand ..shayed voh ladki meri peeche kadi hain..

Zoya gets angry at the guy..

Main tumse madat keliye pooch rahi hoon aur tum madat karne ke siva muje fasa rahe ho..

Guy : kya tum hide n seek khel rahi ho..he claps..

Zoya : voh tumare haath main mera duppata hain usse do

Guy : yeh tumara hain tho lekar dikao he moves his hand left right

Zoya ; I said giv it to me

Guy : playfully raises himself raises his hand

Zoya gets baffled by his behavior..

Asad beta asad dilshaad approaces sukur hain tum yaha ho beta...

Akram sees nawab entering the alley he slowly escapes from the behind

Nawab enters asad tum kaha chale gaye thain

Asad : main tho iss ghav ki nadi dekna chahtha tha ..

Zoya : gets pissed aap ke bete main na tameez hai na tehzeeb...ladkiyon ko ke saath kaise behave karna chayie yeh bhi nahi maloom hain aur upar se mere dupatta ke saath khel raha hain 6 saal ka baccha ke kya...

Dilshad scolds asad dedo uss ladki ka dupaata jaldi..

Rashid slaps asad ...asad cries and gives it to zoya...

Zoya : thinking wht a weird fly...and moves from there to her house

Dilshad lagtha hain hume yeh raaz sako bathana chayiye ki

Asad is mentally unstable, having the mindset of an 8-year-old due to the car accident that almost claimed his life

And it happened just 6 months before he returned from Mumbai..

Some suspense..

Zoya reaches her house with the tea powder

Humaira : how much should I wait for u ..ithna intezar tho hotel ka waitr tak nahi karwata

Manhoos ladki

Ammi manhoos aagayi

Razia : aaj tum store room main band rahogi manhoos patha nahi iss ghar se kab jayegi..

Chal andar chal

Zoya ;par ammi..

Razia : chal andar chal.. humaira ko chai tak de nahi sakti time par..

Zoya : plz ammi muje band math karo store room main I'll do all the work today

Sarre barthan sab kuch I'll do but don't close me in tht store room..plzz

Razia : chal iss bhar maaf kiya agli bhar glathi ki tho..mujse bura koi nahi hoga..

Zoya gets relieved..

Razia says aaj barthan sabke kapde ghar ka jaadu pocha fir khaana tum banogi samji..

Zoya : jee ammi..

next part coming soon...

Edited by surbhiholic-1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update ...
Continue soon ... will love to read more of it ... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good update
Who is behind Asad's accident I am sure koi gadbad hai

Continue soon and thank you for the pm

Zoya seems like Ek Aur Cinderella
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice...
Zoya really wondered me...
isn't she angry n pissed off of akram.. But still don't say anything to him...
But asad who don't act like mature is easily understood by others... But zoya ko nahi dikha...n
Upper se USS akram ki Bashan lene ki jagah asad ko taunt Kar rahi thi...
Upper se slap bhi karvaya n didn't feel bad or find something fishy...
Zoya too acted like others who will shut their mouths in front of someone strong ..but bullies who r weak...
I am not saying asad done right... Har koi ko gussa ata jab who zoya ki jagah hota...
But wat angered me is she didnt stand for herself in front of akram...
But I think she too understood asad is weak.. So raised her voice on him
Sry if I hurted anyone
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤗Awesome chapter.🤗
Loved it🤗
Akram the badie, I hate him.
So asad is mentally ill due to accident.
Poor zoya has to suffer so much.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Akram a bad man, disturbed every girl with his behaviour. Zoya hide behind asad to save her from akram. Asad lost his mental stability in an accident. Dilshad wanted to tell this to everyone. Waiting for story to unfold. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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