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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chaptr 3

Zoya doing all the work is feeling guidy...

And feels hungry so goes to the kitchen to eat snacks

But razia stops her and says beta aaj tum sab kaam katam karkar hi kaavogi

Samji..

Zoya : jee ammi...goes back to finish all her work

Razia goes to her darling daughter humira talking abt the nawabs

Razia : beta nawab bhopal ke.. yaha aaye hain

Unke saath unka chote nawab bhi aaye hain

Unka beta asad..

Humi : chote nawab ?? iss ghaav main badi kushi ki baath hain ammi par kis silsile main aaye hain

Razia :Unke bte keliye ladki doondne aaye hain.. Voh log iss ghar main bhi aa sakte hain

Kyonki zeenat ki dost hain nawab ki biwi dilshad...

Tum acche se rehna acchi acchi baatain karna..samji kuch beta winking

Humi : haan ammi samaj gayi hum acche se rehenge..

Asad dillu rashid enter the farm house

Dillu: patha nahi humare bete ko ek acchi ladki milegi bhi ya nahi..

Rashid ; think positive dilshad ..zaror milegi muje uss kudha par barosa hain

Asad : ammi muje bahar nadi dekna hain

Rashid : ab nahi beta...pehle gaav ki maulvi saab ko bhulate hain

Unse kuch baat karni hain

Asad ; par ammi muje abhi dekna hain

Dilshaad : ab tum jake tv deko jaao..badmain zaroor jayege

Asad : pakka promise

Dilshaad : haan haan pakka ab jake tv deko

Asad goes to see tv

Maulvi comes and gets the information of all the young unmarried gals in tht village

And the well off families

In the list

1st well off family in their small village is razia's..

Dilshaad I wanted to know abt my frnd zeenat's daughter ...Is she also married

Maulvi zeenat and anwar are no more..

But yes they do have a beautiful daughter zoya.and now razia takes care of her like her own.

Dilshaad says in shock yeh bhouth bura huva.maine tho sapne main bhi nahi socha ki aisa hoga meri bachpan ki dost ke saath..par ussi bacchi par muje aur bhi daya aa rahi hain...hume uss bacchi ko dekna hai...

Chalo beta..asad pehle tumareliye ek ladki tho doondle...chalo

Dillu dials razia's residence number

Razia picks : hello

Dillu : main dilshad hoon Bhopal ki begum nawaab ki biwi and says the whole matter why they have come to the village to search for a gal.

Razia : razia listens carefully and spks sweetly ok and hungs up...

Razia : voh log zoya ko dekna chate hain tho zoya tho unpad hai...illiterate..humne usse school tak jaane nahi diya hain

And she is a big mismatch to the chote nawab of Bhopal smiling evily..

Dilshaad comes to razia's house first to meet zoe along with asad...they ring the door bell

Asad sees around

Humi: opens the door and welcomes them..with a cute smile

Come in

Dilshad sees her and smiles...

Humi says them to take a seat in sofa...and feel like home

Razia gets sweets and cold drinks..

Asad grabs the sweets and starts eating

Humi : cold drink bhi peejiye blushingly

Asad : no thank u muje sirf sweets pasand

Humi : accha then u got a sweet tooth..tum ek dum barfi ho..

Asad : I have only white tooth not sweet tooth and I always brush twice ...smiling

Humi : haha accha joke tha

Razia sits and speaks sweetly to them conversations take place about zeenat and they spk abt how they died and how razia took care of zoya

Dillu : wanna see tht gal zoya

suddenly razia changes the topic

Razia says humari ek pyaari bacchi hai

Uska naam humaira siddiqui hain

humaira padi liki hai..

BA paas hain..aur yeh jelabi humi ne banai hain...

Khana banana main mahir yeh humari beti...

Dilshad hum yaha zoya se milne keliye aaye hain

Razia : par aap log humari bachi se tho milo

Zoya comes to take the left over plates she sees the family...

She sees asad and is startled

Asad sees zoya and gets up ..and says muje yeh ghar nahi pasand chalo yaha se..

Yeh iss gandi ladki ka ghar hai...jiske wajese muje thapad pada..all stand up in shock..

next part : dillu telling them abt their son's mental condition... he behaves lik a 6 yr old kid ..it happened due to car accident..otherwise earlier he was not lik tht he was smart ..

Edited by surbhiholic-1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Amazing chapte🤗.
Loved it.🤗
Razia is such a Kamini.
Dilshad came to know about zeenat n zoya.
She came to meet zoya.
Asad got angry seeing zoya.
Continue soon🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
lovely story
Enjoyed reading😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nice update ...
Felt really bad for both Zoya n Asad ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Lovely update
Razia & her wicked acts
Dilshad wanted to meet Zoya but she was not ready for that.
Asad saw Zoya & shocked
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Loved the update
Is Razia so blind with greed that she did not see Asad's childlike behavior

Zoya is the gandi ladki OMG Asad baby
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Wow nice concept plz continue soon😊
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chaptr 4

Razia ;arrey beta kya huva aur tum baccho jaisi batain kyon kar rahe ho

Humi : kya huva aapko ?? aap ajeeb se behave kyon kar rahe hain

Asad :muje yaha bilkul nahi rehna , ammi chalo..ammi

Zoya : stays mumb like a statue. And thinks...yeh log tho wahi aur yeh ajeeb ladka bhi..yeh log yaha kya karne aaye hain..

Dilshad : I'll explain to u guys just give me a minute taking asad outside near their car driver

Driver zara asad ka kayal rakna

Zoya : yeh log kon hain ammi

Razia : yeh log Bhopal ki bhouth rahis log hain ..aur yeh aurat dilshaad Bhopal ki badi begum hain..

Zoya : gets stunned bhopal ki badi begum..par yaha ?

Humaira : hume dekne aaye hain..mujse rista jodne aaye hain..

Zoya : tumse ??aur tumne bataya nahi

Humaira : ghar ki manhoos ko kya batana she taunted..

Razia : tum manhoos tho ho hi issliye nahi bataya...aur lagtha hai chote nawab ke saath bhi kuch khaand kiya hain tumne ?? kyon...voh kya bhol rahe thain tume..

Zoya remembers how she had yelled at him and taunted him..but keeps quiet and gets scared...voh maine..she stammers

Razia : tumne kya ?? raising her eyebrows

Scene shifting to asad

Asad : ammi aap wapas kyon jaa rahi hain...chalo

Dillu : beta main apni purse vohi bhool aagayi hoon..abhi lekar aati hoon..

Asad : jaldi aana..me waiting.. asad poutss..

Razia : main tume deklongi ek bhar jaan tho loon kya kiya uske baad tumari kair nahi..

Dillu : comes inside and explains them each and everythg abt asad's car accident..

due to tht car accident he is mentally unstable

His brain is damaged...

Asad was not like this 6 months before he did his engineering and Then MBA in mumbai..

He was always the topper in his college..

But that car accident of his changed everythg..humari duniya tho jaise ujad gayi..

Zoya remains shocked and regrts whatever she had said about him feels guilty..

And thinks dekne main tho kithna smart lagtha hain..aur uske saath ithna kuch..

Kudha ithna galat kaise kar saktha hain kisi ke saath..feels bad

Dillu Seeing zoya Tum yaha beta

Zoya : jee main zoya hoon...

Dilshaad "zoya" zeenat ki beti

Zoya : haan..par ab muje razia ammi sambalti hain

Dilshaad : bouth hi pyaari bachi ho...caresses her face..ek dum apni ammi ki parchayi..

Zoya smiles..par aap meri ammi ko kaise jaanti ho

Dillu : tumari ammi aur main ek saath school jate thain college bhi ek saath gaye

Tum kaha tak padi ho..

Zoya fumbles voh main

Razia interfeares Razia ; ya allah chote nawab ko tho jaise nazar hi lag gayi..sach main sunkar bhouth bura laga..

Humaira ; thinks ladka pagal hain..nahiii main nigah nahi kar sakti aise ladke ke saath..

Dilshaad : ab bhoth der hogayi hain ..main chalti hoon ijjazat dijiye

Razia : arrey aap jawab sunkar nahi jaayegi..

Dilshad : jawab ka kya intezar jab ki zoya ko humara beta pehle se hi pasand nahi hain

Aur kisi ko zabardasti karna muje pasand nahi...sees zoya tearfully..

Zoya gets shocked...thinks yeh log mere riste ke liye aaye thain..

Razia : arrey zoya ko pasand nahi tho kya huva humari bachi humaira ko pasand hain aapka beta asad

All remain surprised and stunned

Dilshaad : yeh baath humaira se kudh poochna chaungi...goes near humi and asks

kya tume humara beta sach main pasand hain beta..darne ki koi baath nahi bas sach bolna sab kuch jaankar bhi kya tum usse apnaogi

humaira thinks pagal ladke ko kon pasand karega..she sees razia..razia signals by nodding her face to say yes

humi : pauses for a second takes deep breath and says haan yes...razia smirks..dilshad gets surprised..and kiss her foehead...zoya gets shocked

and happily says tho tyariya karni hain nawab ko bhi yeh kush kabari deni hain

ki bahu mil gayi...ab ijjazt dijiye dubara milege ..happily moves outside the house

humi comes angrily near razia...zoya sees her angry face..

razia says zoya beta..chalo abbu ko call karke battao baath paki hogayi..

zoya goes to call abu...and thinks yeh humaira maan kaise gayi..as zoya goes to another room to call gaffur

humaira starts shouting ammi kya samjthi hain aap..voh ladka pagal hain

muje pagal ke saath nigaah nahi karna

sab dost hasenge muj par meri mazak udayege..

razia ; bewakoof ladki tume doston ki padi hain...arrey ladka pagal huva tho kya huva..paisewala haiin sab kuch hain...tume koi pareshani nahi hogi..

Bhopal ki choti begum kehlaogi..sab maan dege..izzat dege..raj karogi raj..samji aur doston ka kya hain aate jaate rahege.. naye dost banjayege..samji beta.. aur zindigi main har ladki ko ithna rahis ladka nahi miltha ..tum tho kush nazib ho..evily smirking..

Humaira : haan samajgayi...ab main banugi Bhopal ki choti begum..smiling evily..

next part coming soon

ps : ignore my mistakes not proof read
Edited by surbhiholic-1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice update👍🏼 n interesting also plzz continue soon😊
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Very good chapter.
Plz don't let humi marry asad.
Continue soon.

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