manan ff i have totally falln for u ( lst prt posted page 3 22/07 )

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Posted: 10 years ago

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part-7

#I_Have_Totally_Fallen_For_U

nandini house -

nandu ran to kichn n bring kachup n throw on her hand...

n goes to her room thn throw some kachup on the floor n thn she here some voice... she put tht kachup botln undr table...

n thn the entry of our hero manik he jst ran towardz her n hold her hand he said r u mad or what...

aftr listnng she start her actng tumne mera call kyu pick nhi kiya i said sryyy bt thn also u jst ignore me...

i was feel so bad... n start cryng ( means dong actng )

manik saw the botle of kachup nd undrstand tht she is actng

n clange his tone of speekng

he ask her vry politely nandu bot drd ho raha hai... she said hai

hath kt gya hai to drd nhi ho gya kya pgl...

manik said lets go to doc thn she suddnly said nooo nooo nooo doc nhi

manik said y abhi to tum bol rhi thi k its painng thn lets go na

nandu kaha na nhi mtlb nhi i'll be fine my slf

manik thn slap on her face not so hard bt a cute slap

thn nandu too slap her... n ask y did u slap me... ek to phile se hi itna drd ho raha hai or upr se tum mujhe mar rhe ho

tumhe to fikr hi nhi hai meriii... thn manik said awww bot drd ho raha haii nandu with a cute face hmmm...

manik thn said so lets go thn lets go to doc

vo jst 2-3 injection lgaye ga fir thik ho jae ga jldi chlo

nandu shout injectionnn noo nooo nooo

bilkul nhi manik

manik said chlo jldi vrna jbr dsti le kr jau ga thn only u will get to knw na how much i care for u nandu said i knww u care no need to go to doc...

manik thn pick her on his arms bt nandu start beatng him n suddnly said...

manik mujhe kuch nhi hua hai its jst a kachup

manik throw her down...

nandu - ahhh hum pgl ho kya mujhe niche kyu gera

manik - tum pgl ho gya asa mzak koi krta hai kya u knw how was i feelng

nandu - awww so u get scare bttt yy...??

mai tumhari kya lgti hu

manik - woo..wooo... frnd ya ritee v r frndz na so thts y i got scare

nandu - jst frndzz ( with a sad face )

manik - hai jst frndz kyu tumhe kya lga...???

nandu - nothng...

acha yeh btao tumne mujhe maaf to kiya na

manik said nooo nhi kiya maaf... nandu said kyuuu ab to maaf krdo na maine kitni bar sry bola tumhe plzzz manik said ek shrt pr maaf kru ga

nandu said wht shrt...???

ammm i want a kiss nandu start blushng...

soch kya rhi ho jldi kro na nadu kiss on his cheeks

manik - yeh kya tha nandu said kiss manik said i want kiss on my lips yeh cheeks vali kiss to roz milti hai subha

nandu in angr kon krta hai

manik said my sweethrt pta hai she lv me sooo much mai to roz unki shkl dekh kr hi uthta hu

nandu get sad n say jao fir lip kiss bhi unse hi lelo manik said kash le pata bt mom se lip kiss kon leta hai n start laughng loudly

manik - jra apni shkl dekho shishe me hahhaah

nandu - manik tum na i gonna kill u manik said before killng give me a lip kiss

nandu was hitng him n thy both felt down on bed nandu felt on manik

manik slowly put her hair back n pull her closer n said

mai ajj tk kisi k itna krib nhi aya n mujhe bilkul psnd nhi koi bhi ldki mere pass aye bt tum u r special i cant stay away frm u

n slowly-2 come close to her lips...

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nxt part will be post 2morow till tht jst imagine what is going to happn byeee guyzzz

keep comntng n yes who so ever wanna tag can snd me rqst i will surly tag with u

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n3gn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Awesome update loved it specially manik and nandni sweet talk and plz update the next part soon and also pm me

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kdaman

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Posted: 10 years ago

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part-8

#I_Have_Totally_Fallen_For_U

manik was to close to her lips n nandu push him n was abt to stand he again pull him...

manik start wet kisses on her neck she was feelng too osmm she doesnt want him to let go...

so she jst hold him tightly manik start smileng so he to hold her tight n kiss on her lips nandu dont want him to stop kissng

n thn manik move back as thy both were not able to take oxygen... nandu start blushng n went to washroom manik to follow her

nandu said u go manik

bt he doesnt go

bt start gong near to her she was takng back wrd steps n he was gong foreward...

n by mistake shawr get start n thy both get wet...

manik jst hold her frm waist n n abt to kiss whn some one ring the door bell...

manik was wet so he goes to abhivroom n thy both change thier clothes n soon thy reach downstair...

nandu opn the door...

she got surprise aftr seeng the prsn on the door n hug him tightly without sayng anything manik was watchng this n was in full angr...

nandu thn said shona tum yaha kya kr rhe ho i mean tumne btaya bhi nhi tht u r comng so soon...

(intro of new boy- Name Karan, nandu's childhood frnd, n also bestie thy share oll the thingz hapng in thier lyf trst each other...)

nandu said shona jst came inside karan rply ya sure pari ( karan use to say pari to nandu )

thn she introduce manik n karan

manik directly ask him y r u sayng shona is he ur boyfrnd... nandu start laughng n said no no not boyfrnd bt bst frnd...

manik - thn y r u sayng shona

nandu - actualy bchpn say hi yeh mujhe pari or ma ise shona bolti hu...

n thn fab4, abhi n navya enter abhi also hug karan

every one was talkng to whn nandu goes to her room to pick tht kachup botle n thn manik come n close the door n ask y r u sayng shona u can call him with his name...

nandu smile n said v r jst frndz manik nothng more i use to say shona frm childhood only so how can i call him with his name suddnly...

manik pulls him n say u cant say these wordz to any one excpt... n stop

nandu ask him excpt wht..??

he doesnt say anything n thn abhi call nandu...

nandu said manik to leave bt he was not leavng...

nandu jst push him n ran out of the room...

it was nite so every one have dinner in abhi's house only karan said tht he too have to leave to his house as he cant stay thier bcoz he knw tht every bro is cnsrn abt her sister so abhi said ohkkk n we will meet 2morow

n every one leave frm there...

abhi thn goes to his room n go to sleep as he was tird bt nandu was feelng bad as she hrt manik bcoz of tht word shona

manik was alone at home as his prnts were out of town...

so sanjana goes to her house thy were spndng tym by drinkng watchng movies bt manik was jst thinkng abt nandu...

( on othr side nandu thought to meet manik rite now as she start lvng him so she thought tht will tell manik what she feel for him )

n in manik house by mistakn the drink felt on both so sanju jst goes to washroom n manik jst remove his shirt n sit like tht only...

so she wnt to his house

she goes inside through the window n wnt to his room...

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precap - ????

hope my story was not borng

keep comntng guyzzz

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Absa hasna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

superb update...i jus love it each and every part...u penned it very beautifully...the way u write is outstanding...i am totally in love with ur all ff...thanks for the lovely n wonderful story...
plsss update soon dea...desperately waiting for next part...

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n3gn

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome update and plzz no misunderstanding plzz and also pm me

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Absa hasna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

when will u update next part?cant wait more dea...plss update soon as possible

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kdaman

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Posted: 10 years ago

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part-9

#I_Have_Totally_Fallen_For_U

nandu opn litle bit door n saw manik sitng on bed without shirt n watchng movie n sudnly a voice come frm room it was sanju

nandu get shock seeng sanju in bathrobe she was totally brokn aftr seeng all tht...

snju jst go towardz manik n sit on his legs n put fer handz on her neck...

nandu jst left frm there without sayng anything she was totally broke...

on othr side manik jst push snju n said jst away... wht the hell r u dong...

lisn i jst dont have any intrst in u jst get lost... or else i'll throw u out jst leave...

n she left frm there...

nandu house -

she thought tht manik is a lier he alwayz use her...

n thn she stand n clean her tears n

nandu p.o.v

manik now u will regrt for wht u have done...

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nxt day karan come to nandu house n ask abhi tht can thy go for shoppng abhi said ya sure...

nandu come in a beautiful red backless top n a black shots... abhi said baby doll u look so cutee...

nandu said thqqq bhai, lv u n byeee

abhi too said bye n thy leave

karan n nandu were dong shopng n on othr side manik was waitng for nandu in colg

manik goes n ask abhi tht were is nandu abhi tell tht she has gone with karan...

manik p.o.v.

wht the hell... nandini aise kaise ja skti hai n she doesnt evn tell me...mujhe es karan ka kuch to krna hi pde ga...

p.o.v. endzzz

nandu was tryng to enjoy bt again n again manik face was comng infront of her...

she feel lyk cryng she went to washroom n was washng her n saw manik behind her she turn n said manikkk with shockng face manik jst take her inside the washroom ( I hope u get it wht i mean )

nandu said to leave her arm bt he was not leavng her n hold her tightly n ask her tht y she is dong this... she doesnt spek manik gets more angry n hold her more tightly n ask her to give ans bt she was jst ignorng him...

manik start dong wet kisses on her neck, on her arm, on her cheeks by which she was not able to control her self so she push him heavly bt manik again hold her frm back by which nandu's top get opn a litle bit she was tryng to close bt it was not gettng close so manik jst remove her hand he try to close...

n again ask her tht y she is doing like this... nandu start cryng n tell every thing wht she have seen in manik's room...

manik start laughtng n said tum girlzzz ki prob kya hai puri baat sune ya dekhe bina hi kuch na kuch soch leti ho

tumne snju ko mere upr bath te dekha bt maine jo use dhka de kr niche gera vo nhi dekha hahhahahahah...

nandu get shock n said what...???

tumne use niche gira diya kyuu...??

manik put her hand on nandu's face n said-

"BCOZ I M IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE OR MAI NHI CHAHTA K USKI JGA KOI BHI LDKI LEH"

nandu ask n who is tht girl

"MANIK KISS ON NANDU'S LIPS N SHE TOO GIVE RESPONSE N AFTR SOMETIME THY GET BACK N THN MANIK SAY I HOPE U GET THE ANS OF UR QUES.. SHE START BLUSHNG N HUG HIM TIGHTLY"

n goes out, thn she leave to her house with karan n karan again goes back to U.S.A.

at nite manik went to nandu house as he want to prop her n wht to make her life so whn he goes their...

on nandu house abhi entr in nandu room n said k mere room ka tab khrab ho gya hai so can i take bath in ir room...

she said ya sure bhai yeh bhi puchne ki baat hai...

n manik reach nandu house n goes to her room through window n saw nandu sittng alone so he goes inside

n nandu shout manik tum yaha oh my god...

nandu speck in low voice (manik jst go bhai... )

manik said dont worry vo mukti k sath bsy hoga

he jst come near her n hold her frm waist n was abt to kiss whn abhi comes out n shockkk... manikkk...

abhi jst go n slap manik n said kya kr rhe thy tum yeh sb how can u do this... meri sister hai vo...

manik said abhi jst lisn to me i jst want to tell tht I LV UR SISTER N I WANNA MARRY HER abhi saw nandu n ask her wht he is sayng

she rply bhai i...i... I TOO LV HIM SRY BHAI MAINE APKO PHILE HI BTA DENA THA BT MOKA NHI MILA SRYYY BHAI...

abhi start laughng n said m happy k meri sis ne itna acha ldka choose kiya hai m really hapy n no need to say sry...

Abhi : sry manik vo thpd k liye kya kru meri sis k pass koi bhi ata hai to i jst cant tolrate sryy

manik: its ohhkk so can i talk to nandu alone...

abhi: ya sure i trst u buddy...

manik: thxxx

n abhi leave frm there

manik goes to nandu n ask so tum bhi mujhse... n stop

nandu: yes i do lv u mr. Manik...

thy both spnd some tym together... n thn abhi come n tell thm tht u guyz carry on n ill be back soon...

n before gong abhi said lisn manik meri sis ko kbhi hrt krne hi sochna bhi mt did u get tht...

manik smile n said ya dude ab tuhmari sis meri responsibility hai...

nandu jst hug abhi n abhi wnt frm thier...

nandu wnt towrdz manik n thy both jst hug each othr vry thightly...

while huggng nandu start cryng...

manik get worried n ask wht hapn... nandu rply manik m vry happy k ab hm sath hai i want k hm hmesha ase hi rhe...

manik jst kiss her forhead n said i promise hm kbhi alg nhi ho ge...

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story khtm sry i knw maine story jldi khtm kr di no happy endng n all bt sry mai ek sath 3 stories nhi likh pa rhi thi really sry guyz

do comnt guyzzz plzz

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