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Posted: 10 years ago

part -1

#I_Have_Totally_Fallen_For_U

so guyz in my story characters are like this

NANDINI :- she is vry cute, simple, intelignt girl... n new on space... she love music... as music is her lyf... In her family she is havng a her big bro name ABHI nd a pug name SMURFY... in my story Abhi n Nandu are not havng her parents as thy died in a car accidnt...

now abt our hero Manik...

MANIK :- he is vry handsome, hot, dashng, etc... he love his parents more thn any thing in this world n for his family he is also vry imp. as his parents cant except their lyf without manik...

n manik's frndz are vry close to him thy r like fam. only... thy all were known as fab5 fcorse...

thy all lv music

now time to introduce fab4

Cabir :- cute, funny, caring and also love Navya n she too as thy are in rltn yes u read write in my story cavya are in rltn...

Mukti :- -Mukti is a very nice gal...very fun loving n has a

big crush on abhi..

Alya n dhruv are in a relationship bt fab5 dont knw abt it... its a secret rltn...

So Story Starts with nandu... she was sleepng in her room with smurfy nd sddnly a voice came yes he is non othr thn abhi he was tryng to wake nandu n smurfy... yes smurfy is also vry lazy like our nandu... nandu said 5mint more bhai plzzz jst five mints he sayz ohkkk bt come fast breakfst is ready... whn abhi sayz abt food smurfy jst ran out of the room n goes toward his bucket in which he drink milk n abhi rum towardz him n in tht time nandu gets ready n comes out frm the room n goes to the dinng table n have breakfast n thn thy both leave to space...

nd smurfy was with thier srvant..

on othr side manik was also sleepng or i say he was actng bcoz ( he lv when her mom come to wake him up she alwayz give a kiss on her chicks n thn only he wake up ) so manik gets up n get ready to leave towardz colg...

he alwayz pick cabir from his house n thy both go to colg n afr reachng there thy meet mukti n thy were not surprise to see her at on time ( becoz thy knw tht mukti come on time to c abhi ) n thn the entry of secret couple means Alia n Dhruv n thy all go inside to colg... at that time cabir was searchng navya... n she was with abhi n nandu...

if u all like thn plzzz comnt thn only i'll continu n yes i will complete my story thts a promise... :-) :-D

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Posted: 10 years ago

part-2

fab5 enter the class n thn cabir saw navya sittng with nandu n abhi...

whn cabir enter navya go towardz him and sit on 1st bench with him n mukti ask nandu tht can she sit with abhi... nandu was sittng on 2nd bench ( n she knw tht mukti like bhai so she agree to it n abhi was also not surprise as he too lv her n nandu knw tht too bt prob was tht thy dont tell each othr ) on 3rd bench dhruv n aliya was sittng ...

so nandu dont have any choice so she goes toward manik n sit with him as thy were gud frndz

so nandu say hii n manik too rply sayng hii

nd thn the sir start with his chpters n nandu n manik were gettng bore so thy decide to play game 1st thy were playng zero cross n aftr playng 3-4 times thy get bore n thn our noughty nandu take out her note pad n start cuttng pages thn thy started makeng small balls n thy were throwng on othrs n by dong this thy were fellng vry happy

n thn thy notice tht ol couples r bsy so thy start disturbng thm

manik 1st throw the ppr on cavya

cavya :- auuu kon hai yeh pgl n turn back thy saw manan were laughng n hidng there face...

n thn cabir say navya chl chod v'll c thm aftr the period gets ovr n thy turn there face...

thn manan give hi-fi to each othr n thn thy do the same with abhi n mukti n abhi saw back nd thought tht dhruv n aliya r dong this so he hit dhruv on his heat by seeng this

manan cant control their laughter n start laughtng loudly n sir see tht n snd thm out of the class thn abhi n mukti get knw tht all tht was done by thm... on other side

manan were too hapy by gong out

n thn aftr few mints period gets ovr n oll couples come out n start hittng manan...

n thn nandu say ahhh abhi jst get scare n shop hittng her... he ask wht hapn nandu...

nandu jst say manik jst run n thy run toward canteen n thy all 6 were also go towardz thm

in canteen manan said bs yrr ajj k liye bohot ho gya plzzz guyzzz

all agreed n sit with thm

thn manik ask so what to odr cavya say tht thy r livng as navya has to do same shoppng so cabir is also going with her... every one say ohhkkk byeee

n cavya leaves

thn nandu say u say bhai

n abhi rply sayng sry nandu bt mukti wanna c a movie with me so v r also leavng sryy n yes it will be late at nite seeng towardz nandu so u jst sleep n take care of urs n smurfy... n thy also leave sayng byeee...

n thn our 3rd secret couple...

manan both say toghter now whats ur plan guyzz..?? dhruv ask with a questiong face plan...???

n thn aliya say ya guyzzz vo mom ka phone aya tha so i had to go n ask dhruv tht can he leave her dhruv say ya sure lets go n thy also gooo...

manan were watchng each othr face n thn nandu say do u like to cook something manik ans like i jst lv cookng u knw when ever i get bore i use to cook new things

nandu say i too do the same thing so fine lets go to my home nd do cookng v'll also have fun manik agree

nd manan also left frm colg...

whn nandu enter the house smurfy ran towardz her n nandu jst hug her nd thn smurfy goes towardz manik n manik jst ran away n sit in his car n said nandu to take him away yes u r thinkng rite manik is getng scare frm smurfy as he dont like pets or i say dogz n nandu seeng this start laughng loudly... manik was sayng yrrr plzzz nandu... rply manik... nandu say dont get scare he will not say anything to u... u jst give ur hand n do shake-hand manik was 1st sayng no i will not bt whn nandu say givng a cute smile plzzz jst one manik agree n came out of the car nandu take smurfy in her hand n give smurfy's hand in manik's hand manik was feelng gud n thn smurfy suddnly jump on manik...

manik 1st get scare bt nandu hold his hand n put on smurfy he feel vry nice n thn nandu realise her hand on manik's hand n she remove frm their...

manan go inside the house n smurfy also goes inside hold by manik's hand...

nandu goes nd bring water for manik he take it n say thanks...

thts for today...

byeee guyzzz... n yes plZz keep on comntng lv u oll... :-) ;-)

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princessangel23

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Posted: 10 years ago

It's awesome ! Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing stry plzz pm me wenu update next part of ua stry :)

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kdaman

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part-3

manik i'll come in 10-15 mints manik ask y...??? she said i..i..i manik get undrstand tht she has to go to washroom so manik say ohhkk go m waitng nandu jst ran to her room manik start laughng seeng tht... thn manik was playng with smurfy n thn manik go n see the house n thn manik goes to the garden...

smurfy jst ran towardz water pipe n he was wet manik saw tht he goes thier bt smurfy was vry naughty so he ran n till tht nandu came n she saw manik n smurfy wet n thn manik saw smurfy n give a naughty smile manik put pipe face towardz nandu n she too join n also get wet nandu was tryng to take pipe n thn manik jst pull her towardz him holdng her waist

manik's left hand was on nandu's waist n in rite hand he hold the pipe water was fallng on thm n thy were jst havng n eye lock manik was camng near to her lips whn smurfy bark n thy sddnly break their eye contct...

thy were silnt for few mints n thn nandu broke the silnce n say u r full wet come to bhai's room i'll give u some clothes manik agree n follow her n thn she give him clothes aftr takng clothes manik say u too go n get change nandu say ohhkk n take smurfy with her she 1st change smurfy's clothes n thn goes to washroom n get change...

manik nandu n smurfy come out frm the rooms n goes toward kichn n manik say lets make a chocolate cake wht says...??? Nandu shout chocolate cakee...???

Manik ask wht hapn dont u like nandu rply yummy i jst lved it jldi bnao jldi...

aftr listng manik say bnao...????

agr ma bnau ga to tum kya kro gi nandu say wooo..wooo.. kya hai na whn evr i see chocolate i cant control my self i jst take it n eat it so i cant make bt i can hlp u bt u have to give me some chocolate so tht u can make ur cake safly or else whn u will make chocolate i will eat it n i'll not give u the bowl to put tht chocolate on cake aftr listng n seeng nandu in small baby's behavior he start laughng loudly nandu say manik m not jokng m srs manik say ohhkk baba ohkkk ill give u same chocolates bt plzzz dont eat tht bowl chocolate nandu smile n thn manik start makng cake while makng cake manik saw nandu eatng chocolate like a baby she put same chocolate on her face so manik goes towardz her forgetng abt cake n he put her hand on nandu's face n start cleaning the chocolate n he start going closer to her n their lips were vry close to each othr... manik pull her more closer n he kiss on nandu's lips n she too give response to his kiss n thn suddnly thy thought tht wht thy were doing n thy back off manik goes to c this cake n nandu goes to her room to wash her face...

thy both were thinkng abt thier kiss n thn nandu cell ring it was abhi...

abhi - nandu i m not comng at home today as i had to go to my frnd house to tum door lock kr k so jana n meri wait mt krna

nandu - ohhkkk bhai i will n u take care of urs...

thn nandu goes down n behave normally with manik n say bhai to ghr nhi a rhe a so m free today manik say tht cake is also ready maine refrigerator me rkha hai cool hone k liye nandu say ohkkk...

n thn complete silence

thn suddnly manik fon ring it was again abhi

abhi - hyyy manik can u do a favr

manik - yes say na

abhi - nandu is alone at home so can u take her out she will feel gud...

manik say ohhkkk n cut the fon n thn nandu ask what bhai say manik tell her all the thingz nandu say chlo fir vase bhi i was gettng bore with you n jst ran frm their...

nxt prt 2morrow...

n guyz plzzz tell wether u like it or not bcoz thn only i can continu plzzz do comnts...

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Posted: 10 years ago

part-4

#I_Have_totally_Fallen_For_U

manik n nandu goes to mall n thy were shopng whn

nandu was watchng dresses manik was jst staring her...

n nandu see tht n ask wht r u thinkng manik said woo...wooo. nothng u jst do shopng i'll jst come in 5

nandu said ohhkkk bt come fast n manik lft frm their

manik does to a jew. shop

n take a braslt thn nandu come thier n ask wht r u dong here manik say nothng vase hi a gya...

nandu say lets leave now m tied manik agree n thy go home

nandu goes to kichn n bring cake n manan both cut the cake together...

nandu take a piece of cake n manik say ahhh openng his mouth he thought nandu will fed him so nandu move her hand towardz manik mouth n sddnly put cake in her mouth n start laughng...

manik was seeng her n he too feel vry gud seeng nandu hapy n thn manik jst take a slice of cake n put on her face

nandu see him in full angr n manik start laughtng loudly n thn nandu pick the hole cake n put on his mouth

manik said now u r dead nandini jst run as much as u can

nandu jst go to her room n manik too goes to her room nandu say sry manik plzzz sryyy manik say no sry this tym n he grab her...

he jst pull her towardz him n manik goes near to her n put his cheeks to nandu's cheeks ( like in holi party i hope u rmmbr )

nandu jst rum towardz washroom n wash her face n jst thinkng abt manik manik goes to abhi's room n he too wash his face n thn manik leave frm her house

aftr reachng home manik was jst thinkng abt nandu n nandu too thinkng abt him

aftr thinkng so much nandu get sleep bt manik was not able to sleep it was 3a.m.

mid night... full dark outside

n manik went to nandu house he goes to nandini's n was staring her n said she look so cute while sleepng n by listng her some nandu opn her eyes n shout manikkk...

tum yaha is tym jst go frm here or else bhai will she was continusly speckng n manik gets fadup n jst kiss on her lips without sayng a word n put her hand on her waist so nandu too hold him thy were kissng vry cutey n aftr some time thy get back...

nandu again say plzzz

manik go na plzzz manik thn jst go n he put tht braslt on her bed nandu thn goes to sleep n...

saw tht a gift was been kept there she was thinkng tht frm his gift has came n whn she opn she get too much hapy n thn she wear it...

n was blushng n she sleep

nxt day in colg cabir n manik were waitng for evryone n

a new entry...

a beautiful girl name sanjana come in colg wearng shots, white pretty top so sexy she was lookng manik n cabir were jst starng her n thn navya came n ask cabir bot hot hai na

actuly cabir hasnt seen navya n say nhi yar hot nhi she is damn sexy yr kitni furst se god ne mnaya ho ga ise n navya was totaly in angr start beatng her cabir said sryyy baby really sry nandu was also thier n starng manik

bt manik was bsy in starng sanjana

bt nandu cant say anything to manik as thy were not bf, gf...

she feel vry bad n thn manik suddnly turn back n saw every one... manik thn say hiii guyzzz

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guyzzz plzzz plzzz comnt bcoz thn only i can continu the story comnt means alot...

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Absa hasna

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey...thanks for the lovely and wonderful
story...i read all part in one go.. jus loved it...u penned it sooo

well dea...ur such an awsm writer...

the way u write is outstanding...its jus fab story..

i am totally in love with ur ff..

must say ur blessed with very beautiful writing skills...keep it up

n try to update regularly...eagerly waiting for next part..

continue soin dea...n once again thanks for the amazing update

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kdaman

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part-5

#I_Have_Totally_Fallen_For_U

manik was watchng nandu bt she was ignorng him... manik goes near to her n say hii kya ho gya...???

nandu said kuch nhi mujhe kya hoga... n leave frm thier...

everyone reach to the class

every one was sitng with thier partnr bt manik goes to sanjana n sit with her...

nandu feel vry bad as she was expectng him to sit with her...

as sir enter nandu said him tht she is not well n goes out of the class n remove tht braslt...

she goes back to home n was cryng like hell n thn a call come on her he was abhi bt thought manik will call her...

she pick the fon abhi ask wht happn y u left frm the class n were r u rite now...???

nandu said... bhai i was not feelng well so i came back to home bt u dont worry m takng rest... n feelng bettr now...

abhi said do u need me...??? should i come to home she said no bhai i said na m fine...

n cut the fon...

N start cry vry badly n was thinkng y manik did this if he doesnt like me... thn y he come so near to me... y he do those thing...!!!

on othr side manik doesnt notice tht is nandu thier or not he was bsy with sanjana...

thy both were enjoyng alot...

whole day he spend with her... n the day gets ovr...

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nxt day in colg nandu was watchng manik n he was bsy with sanju (sanjana)

thn a voice come he was our cute cabir... he said yeh nhi sudrega... nandu said mtlb... cabir said yeh to roz ka hai es ka koi bhi ldki dekh ta hai to shuru ho jata hai flrt krna... nandu said no i dont think so... cabir said u dont knw him he is my buddy i knw him vry well

dekhna kl prso tk he will say tht v r bf, gf...

nandu's heart was totally brokd into small peices...

thn manik comes to thm as sanju was bsy with her fon call

manik said hi cabir n nandu

nandu without sayng a word goes frm thier... manik ask cabir what happn to her

n cabir tell every thing wht thy talk...

manik said wht r u mad...

tu na schi me pgl hai... sanju n me r gud frndz as she is my family mmbr thts y i was giving her compny...

manik p.o.v.

yr pta nhi kya soch rhi ho gi mere bare me us din jo kuch hua hmare bich pta nhi kis trha se le rhi ho gi sb i have to talk to her...

he was searchng her bt she was no where...

he call her mny tym bt she does pick

thn manik goes to abhi n ask him were she is...

abhi said ho gi yhi khi apni frndz k sath... wait i call her... manik said great call fst...

she pick the call

abhi - kaha ho tum...???

nandu - bhai ma bahr ayi hu kuch kam tha kyu any prob...??

abhi - no baby its jst tht manik was searchng bt he was not able to find u so i too got tense...

nandu - bhai dont worry mai jldi hi a jau gi ghr ohhkkk bye i have some work...

abhi - ohhkk bye... n cut the fon

n tell manik wht she said...

manik was worry bcoz

he knw ki vo nraz hai...

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end for tody hope u like it

keep comntng

waitng for ur comnts

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Noor

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Wow uli read 5 parts in one go its amazing.

Plz pm me next time.

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kdaman

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Part-6

#I_Have_Totally_Fallen_For_U

manik was thinkng abt her n was feelng bad he want to go to her home bt thn he get to knw tht navya was stayng with her for today...

nxt day when manik goes go colg he was waitng for nandu n thn nandu n sanju both enter the class manik want nandu to sit with her bt snju sddnly comes n sit with him...

nandu jst ignor n sit alone n thn sir starts with his class... manik was jst starng her bt nandu ignore him n thn the class gets ovr...

every one goes out nandu was also leavng whn manik hold her arm n pull her towardz him...

nandu said jst leave me alone n stay away...

mai un ldkiyo me se nhi hu jine tum use kr skte ho did u get tht...

manik was shock listng tht

he said do u really think k mai tumhe use kr raha tha

i mean like srsly

i thought u undrstand me vry well bt i was wrong

n let me tell u one thing sanju is my family mmbr to ma use jst colg k liye bta raha tha

v r jst gud frndz not more thn that

cabir was jst dong frank bt i thought u...

leave i dont wanna talk byeee...

nandu p.o.v.

ayyyeeappaa kitni pgl hu mai kya kuch soch liya maine uske bare me i have to say sryyy bcoz i cant loose him...

she was tryng to talk to him bt he was jst ignorng her...

everyone was sittng togethr nandu ask manik to pass the glass of water bt he ignore n goes frm thier...

every one ask k ise kya ho gya cabir said k shayad mujh se gussa hai...

every one ask kyu kya kaha tune n he tell everyone...

dhruv said cabir u knw na manik to girlz ko dekhta bhi nhi hai thn also...

cabir said sryyy yrrr mai use bhi bol du ga dont worry mukti said u should be sry koi asa mzak krta hai kya...

n thn nandu bhai mujhe kuch kam hai so byee evryone n she left to home as manik also left frm the colg

nandu was callng him bt he didnt pick the call...

thn got a plan she knw tht manik will see her msg so she said a msg...

aftr readng manik jst ran to nandu homee...

actually nandu msg was...

MANIK I M SRYYY I KNW K TUM GUSSA HO BT PLZZZ FORGIVE ME AGR TUMNE ASA NHI KIYA TO I'LL CUT MY HAND PLZZZ FORGIVE

Prcap - :-p :-p

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plzzz comnt n think wht will hapn nxt any one wanna tag can snd me rqst i will lv to tag with u...

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