Yet again - I dedicate my poem to MICHI!

Hey all..

As per my promise - I have written another poem and again I am dedicating it to my favourite couple MICHI...I hope all of you will like it .. Please reply if you like it or am always open to criticism..So - go ahead and let me know what you think..It's just a click away ! 😉

"HAND IN HAND"

A spark that left me confused,

Was nothing else but the touch of your skin to mine.

You always leave me confused,

Making me sleepless althrough the night.

When you are along side me ,

I am on the seventh sky.

When we are apart,

I long for the day to pass by.

I have waited for you,

Seems like for a lifetime.

But even A lifetime seems very little,

Knowing that you are mine.

Often, I get scared thinking that,

This might be the end.

But your LOVE reassures me ,

We have the world to win - together hand in hand..

Well - so...let me know how it is...Will be waiting for your reply..Now - a request to everyone ..BE HONEST ! I am really really open to absorbing any criticism you have ..

Love to all...

And my warmest regards to everyone..

MICHI ROCKS!

Rumki.

Beautiful poem, put a smile on my face, after watching today's episode of Kayamath, I had given up on Michi, but the last part of your poem is very reaasuring for depressed Michi deewani's like myself.😳 Michi forever👍🏼

Great poem Rumki... you said it all.. showed the magic we all fell for..👏 👏 👏

After yesterdays episode I am not sure about the line"But your LOVE reassures me "

But you do give a hope for this couple...

Excellent work Rumki...👏

Originally posted by: shananubis

Great poem Rumki... you said it all.. showed the magic we all fell for..👏 👏 👏

After yesterdays episode I am not sure about the line"But your LOVE reassures me "

But you do give a hope for this couple...

Excellent work Rumki...👏

I am glad it could comfort you! I am flattered!

Hope that LOVE will gradually reassure MICHI's feelings after all !

Thanks for replying ..

Rumki.

Originally posted by: rumkiwalsh

Hey all..

As per my promise - I have written another poem and again I am dedicating it to my favourite couple MICHI...I hope all of you will like it .. Please reply if you like it or am always open to criticism..So - go ahead and let me know what you think..It's just a click away ! 😉

"HAND IN HAND"

A spark that left me confused,

Was nothing else but the touch of your skin to mine.

You always leave me confused,

Making me sleepless althrough the night.

When you are along side me ,

I am on the seventh sky.

When we are apart,

I long for the day to pass by.

I have waited for you,

Seems like for a lifetime.

But even A lifetime seems very little,

Knowing that you are mine.

Often, I get scared thinking that,

This might be the end.

But your LOVE reassures me ,

We have the world to win - together hand in hand..

Well - so...let me know how it is...Will be waiting for your reply..Now - a request to everyone ..BE HONEST ! I am really really open to absorbing any criticism you have ..

Love to all...

And my warmest regards to everyone..

MICHI ROCKS!

Rumki.