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Hii all , hope you guys are doing well. Wishing you all a very HAPPY EID . Thanxx a ton for your amazing response on my previous os MY AMAZING HUSBAND . I m glad everyone loved it and like most of you wanted Rishabhs pov. SO HERE I M BACK WITH A SEQUEL . First I named itAs PAPAS PARI( suggested by sudha ) as it has their daughter including in it but when I started writing it , the title n story didn't go well so I changed it to Crazy dude . Hope you guys like it .

Dedicated to all my readers n ofcourse my braintwin this one is especially for you as you were the most excited one . So hope you enjoy it .

Lines in red are his subconcious talks .

"God what the hell are these doctors doing ?Chopping my madhu and baby or doing a stupid C section ".i thought while pacing the corridor of the city hospital.Its been six hours since my madhu has gone into labour n since then i havent seen her face nor touched her ,gosh i miss my love "why are these stupids taking so much time ,"?"Dad how can u sit so calmly when here i am going insane ",i asked my father who was sttting beside my mother .

Seriously i like them when they are quite for once and not talking at all or particularly their non stop fights but right now i really cant understand how can they be so calm n composed whem i m going insane . Jesus rishabh you r already insane of highest degree what more wld. you get .

Dad luked at me as if i had grown horns on my head and laughed n mom followed him ."Seriously guys what are you both two ,why the hell are you both laughing whats so funny ?""

Firstly my darling son we dnt need your permission to laugh n secondly you are already insane of highest level what more can you get n thirdly if we also start pacing around like you n scare the doctors then poor people will run away are you a less pain to them so that we should add more to their miseries."Mom chuckled n i glared at both of them .

"You two are not at all helping" i whinned for the billionth time in these nine months.n sat down beside dad leaning my head against the wall ."Well we heard that a lot rishu ."dad replied making me more mad . God whats with these people they never take me seriously.Do u take yourself seriously ?ofcourse i do .huh u dnt i do that no i do that u r stupid no i m intelligent that is y i m ceo u dumbhead .stop calling me dumbhead u idiot .i m not idiot ok but you are .

While i was busy cribbing with my subconcious the doctor came out with my babywrapped in a white blanket and immediately all thoughts left my mind as i saw my tiny bundle of happiness . I m a father i cant believe it .ofcourse you cant bcoz i did everything.will you stop taking credit for everything no you stop it .

"Will u take her or not or will u keep on staring at her "dad said to me bringing me out of my thoughts . Rish get a grip hold your daughter then crib . I took my lil angel my princess in my hands for the first time n i just felt i was the richest n the most luckiest man of this world . She was so tiny so flawless exactly like madhu but she had my eyes n lips . I just fell in love with my daughter . I love her more . Shut up i m her dad i love her more . Now be quiet n let me love my daughter .

I kissed her forehead n tears rolled down my eyes but these tears were of happiness ,of fulfillment, of pride that was in my hands . Stop With your water tanks Sahay .Mom took angel from my hand n she n dad started playing with her . I smiled seeing them so happy with my baby girl . I turned my attention to the doctor n enquired abt. my madhu . Thanx heavens she is fyn . Otherwise i wld have chopped this doctors head like onion pieces . First learn to chop onion u idiot then learn to chop heads . Will u for once shut up . With pleasure as i m going to meet my madhu .No first i ll see her u stupid . she is mine first then yours get it scumbag .

I went inside the private room in which the doctors shifted my madhu . There she was lying on the bed luking pale but still beautiful as ever . i went n sat beside her n took her hand in mine n planted a kiss on her palms . I sat with her while mom n dad were with angel as the doctors were checking her n making sure she was absolutely fit .

Madhu opened her eyes after sometime n i smiled luking at her ."Welcome back sweetheart ."Thank you for the most beautiful gift ever "i said to her n kissed her forehead n she smiled . Gosh she has the most prettiest smile . I told you but you never trust me .Huh what rubbish i told you that ok . Whatever .

"Rish where is angel "? madhu asked after luking at the empty crib.

"Dnt worry baby she is fine doctors r just checking her mom n dad r with her so no need to worry ."

I love you

I love you too .

Jesus still my heart beats like a racing train whenever she tells me those three words .

Because you r nuts Rishabh Sahay that is y . ohh shut up you r no less .

i m pretty much sensible ok i dnt blush like teenage girls when my madhu says i love you to me .For the zillionth time she is not yours but mine .

The two days for which madhu n angel stayed in hospital were hell hectic .I had already taken leave from office for the past five months as i wanted to spend every second with my family .I fulfilled every craving of madhu no matter how silliest it was she got what she wanted n y wont she afterall she was the only woman who was able to make me go nuts with just her simple touch .

Angel used to stay awake half the night n being totally papas pari i had to stay awake for her so that madhu cld.rest well . I m telling u u ll spoil my girl .cut the crap i m not going to spoil her .You already bought the whole mall for her what else u ll do now .You know what you r just jealous of me bcoz angel loves me more .Stop ur delusions she loves me more .U too stop it n get lost .fyn i also dnt need u go away .

After two days angels naming ceremony was held n me n madhu together named

her Pari Rishabh Sahay .

4yrs. Later

I entered my house happily but the sight infront of me scared the shit out of me .

My baby my angel my pari was crying her eyes out ."What happened to her i swear i ll kill the one who made my girl cry "i sweared under my breath .Will you go n ask her first instead of swearing u idiot .Shut up .

Pari baby whats wrong y is my sweetheart crying i asked her taking her in my arms .

Daddy !she sobbed . god i hate her tears .

What happened baby tell me u r scaring me ?

Mumma scolded me she replied weeping n my heart ached seeing my girl cry .

And why did she scolded you ? Ohh no she started wailing .

Didnt i said she has gone on you . huh when the hell did i wail like this .

Stop fighting with me n first calm her done . I m doing that cant u see silly .

I can see how much you r doing .Stop glaring it doesnt work on me .

Madhuuu! i shouted at the top of my voice .

N everyone including the gardeners, chef ,clearners along with mom dad n my beauridul madhu came out luking scared .Good they deserve it for letting my girl cry .

"Rish you r home "madhu asked in her sweet melody like voice while approaching me .

Get a grip dude stop drooling over her n solve this matter otherwise ur pari will bring flood over here .Arghh where the hell am I stuck .

"Why did you scolded her ? look how much is she crying ? I said to her in one breath .

"Rish she is becoming so naughty she wants everyone to become a horse for her n she makes everyone run in the whole house so someone has to teach her na,",she said explaining me .

Pari wailed more n more seeing me saying nothing . Although I know madhu was right but I had to stop my girl from crying . Let her be naughty dnt scold her I said faking anger at madhu n I can see

Madhu , mom n dad stiffing their laughs . God what a crazy family I have.

"Baby girl now stop crying ok I ll become horse for you"I said trying to comfort her n immediately

She stopped crying n squealed in excitement . Kids! From the corner of my eyes I saw mom dad n madhu giggling knowing that once again I got tricked by my daughter . But ignoring them I removed my jacket n became horse for my pari n gave her a ride in whole mansion .ARGHH my back .Will you stop complaining we did it for our pari . still from next time do your self I dnt want to break my back by running in whole mansion . SHUT UP .

At night when madhu lay beside me I pulled her in my arms n she rested her head on my chest .

you r not mad at me right

ofcourse not rish y wld. I be

bcoz I scolded u I said sighing .

that fake scolding she said giggling . I love this sound

come on rish I know how much u love n pari so u dnt have think all abt it she said making me smile .

Yes I love these two girls more than anything , as they r like my heart my soul my breathing system

N why they shdnt be afterall they r like two angels of my lives .

My wife Madhubala n my daughter Pari are my real fairies of live n I ll do anything n everything to bring a smile on their faces .

For once you talked sense.



So time for your likes and comments .

Those who havent read the first part please do read it to get more idea on the characters .

My amazing husband link :- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4400911

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yahoo... First to comment...😆
Twinnie... Thanks dear for dedicating this cute story for me too...😳

Oh my god! It was really a cute story...👏

I love this 'touch me not' Rk a lot...😆

I still cant forget how he behaved to the girl who asked him to dance with her in the prequel os...😆 i laughed my ass off when he behaved like a bloody gay when a girl touched him...😆

He is really a crazy dude... A crazy son... A crazy husband... A crazy father too...😆 he called his family crazy but he is the crazy one in his family...😆

Loved his fight with his own self thoughts... 😆

Haha... Papa's pari made her papa a horse... Rk has become a jelly in her daughter's hand huh?😆

Thank u so much dear for writing this cute crazy sequel & fulfilling ur readers wish...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing OS, loved it to the core,
Rishab and his self thoughts were hilarious, he becoming horse for his daughter was cute, loved his whole family, they are adorable
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute and perfect sequel to the story.
Rishabh is adorable and amazing father too.
Loved the way you wrote his self thoughts.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update. It was really sweet and cute. Loved adorable crazy Rishabh.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was superb
Loved how rk is taking care of his pari
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww such a cute story 😳 Loved it to bits! I always love reading these kinda stories were Rishabala play the roles of parents😉 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os.Rishabh n his inner self talk is hilarious. Like this crazy husband n adorable father.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very beautiful and cute OS... poor Rishabh his pari is giving him a hard time but he loves to do anything for his angel... loved the OS very much😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute and Superrbbb Sequel Neha darl...!! 😃

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