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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
and thanks for pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
WOW Neha !
An Awesome and very well written piece you have given as a Eid gift to your readers 👏👏

OK coming to the story well I just loved the way you have brought hilarity b/w conscious & sub-conscious mind talks of RK . This was something refreshing and good to read 😳😳

I loved the way RK was talking in hospital and even with his mom-dad 🤣🤣🤣 It was something LOL 🤣

I must say Rk's daughter has inherited all the characters from both her parents .😆

Loved her childish and prank nature 🤣

Keep writing more Dear . TC and Gd bless you 😳😳


P.S. - Rather than addressing me by my UN , call me Ishu 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww such a cute lovely story i always wanted to see rishabh as a loving caring adorable father he becomes horse for his lil daughter thats remember me my childhood days love rishabh in this new character and what to say abt his self thought too good
will expect this type of lovely story more in future
thanx for pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh that little thing tricked rk... Madhu & baby rk's life.. His inner thoughts are hilarious... !! Nice os... !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A lovely sequel.
Rishabh n his inner mind. Lol! That mind is more mature than Rishabh.🤣
Pari has her papa wrapped around her little finger. He is a goner.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
amazing os & thanks for the sequel 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Cute one
Loved crazy rishab ;)
Pari is so cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: madhurish

Yahoo... First to comment...😆

Twinnie... Thanks dear for dedicating this cute story for me too...😳 yeah you r first bcoz i wanted u to be first 😉

Oh my god! It was really a cute story...👏 Glad u find it cute bcoz i found it crap 😆

I love this 'touch me not' Rk a lot...😆 Lmao just like the plant

I still cant forget how he behaved to the girl who asked him to dance with her in the prequel os...😆 i laughed my ass off when he behaved like a bloody gay when a girl touched him...😆

even me i loved writing that particular scene . ohh girl dnt call him gay he might go thermonuclear on u 🤣

He is really a crazy dude... A crazy son... A crazy husband... A crazy father too...😆 he called his family crazy but he is the crazy one in his family...😆 Dnt worry his subconcious knows that he is epic crazy but just finds it hard to admit 😆😆

Loved his fight with his own self thoughts... 😆 Thank you glad u loved it

Haha... Papa's pari made her papa a horse... Rk has become a jelly in her daughter's hand huh?😆 Yeah the multibillionnaire is a putty in his wifes n daughters hand

Thank u so much dear for writing this cute crazy sequel & fulfilling ur readers wish...😳 Most welcome twinnie n i m glad i fullfilled ur wish too n thank you so much for liking n commenting on it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Amazing OS, loved it to the core,

Rishab and his self thoughts were hilarious, he becoming horse for his daughter was cute, loved his whole family, they are adorable


Thank you glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Cute and perfect sequel to the story.

Rishabh is adorable and amazing father too.
Loved the way you wrote his self thoughts.


Thanxx
yeah he is awesome n crazy dude lol but it was tough to write his crazy subconcious afterall ppl like him r very less in this world .

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