sidni os-death of soul

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I try on a one shot


roshni walked through the front doors with the biggest smile on her face

roshni walked towards sid

she whishpered in to his ear
sid i need to talk to u

sid looked up at the parents awkwardly
sid:cant this wait roshni

she nodded a no

roshni walked towards their bedroom and sid followed

sid parents giggled behind them

sid close the door behind him

roshni suddenly hugged him

sid:what happened roshni feeling romantic nowadays

roshni blushed

she moved close to his eas and said sid i am pregnant

sid:really
she nodded happily
sid picked her up and spun her around

sid parents were all thrilled sid mom hugged roshni

soon there was just a month left untill roshni delivery

sid looked at her and laughed as he got the bed ready
roshni covered her belly and hit sid on the forehead

sid hugged her

roshni pushed him away
roshni:sid u cant make fun of my weight

sid:no u look so cut actually
she smiled as they settled into bed
roshni:sid u will take care of him wont u

sid:no
she looked at him

sid:i will take care of her she will be y an angel
roshni:no it will be a boy i know it will
sid:how can u be so confident?

roshni smiled as she rubbed her hand over her belly
roshni:i am its mother

she lay down
forgive me sid she said in her mind she hugged on to him as they slept

roshni woke up and clutched her stomach

ahh! sid she screamed
sid woke up
sid:what happened?roshni

roshni:i... i think my water broke

sid picked her up as he called for his mom they drove her to the hospital he impatiently placed outside the ICU

sid mom put a hand on his shoulder

s mom:sid beta dont worry
sid nodded the doctor came out

doctor:congrats its a boy
sid smiled
sid:and roshni can we meet her

the doctor face fell
doctor:we could not save her
could not save her sid questioned confused

doctor:she did not tell u...we told her that she could have some problems during her delivery but she said she wanted to go through with it

A tears slipped sid cheek as he pushed the past the doctor

roshni he held her hand
s dad:she no more sid beta
sid:no dad she's sleeping...she's sleeping

sid held her hand again
sid stroked her forehead

sid:roshni wake up...wake up roshni
the doctor took them out of the room she handed sid the baby

sid looked at him

roshni was right.it's a boy
he looked at it's eyes deep just like roshni

u will take care of him won't u sid...the words ran around in his head

he closed his eyes as more tears went down them
He walked towards his parents
He handed the child his mom
sid:mom i...i want to take him...no one will take better care of the child

A week had passed since roshni's death they were doing the child naming ceremony sid was in his room all alone he looked at roshni's photo as a tear slipped down his cheek


sid looked at the child

sid:avinash...roshni wanted to name him avinash



THE END


guys the only reason why i wrote that roshni died because I have read many stories in which ea character dies and comes back to life...but this is not reality u do not just die and suddenly wake up it's all a part of life


anyway i know many of u may not like it but it was just a concept that came into mind




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Posted: 10 years ago
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very emotional and lovely OS... sad part is Roshni's death😭😭😭
well written👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was so emotional...roshni died😭
u have written it beautifully!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭
Roshni died 😭
But beautifully written OS dear..
Plz write more stories but don't make it have a sad ending

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😲😲😲roshni died😭
emotional
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such an emotional os 😭
Rosh died 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..started with a happy note but ended with roshni's death.. a sad one.. but nice!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such an emotional os and roshni's death..😭
But it was nice and well written..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi friends I'm back with sidni stories
Sidni os romance😳

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