New ff rishte dilon ke part 1 updated page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys ,I know I have other stories to complete but suddenly this idea came into my mind...leave ur suggestion so that I can continue my story...


CHARACTER SKETCH:-

Ishita abhimanyu raghav:- doctor by profession and wife of abhimanyu raghav ...she loves his family alot and treat his brother as his own...she and abhimanyu does not share any relationship due to abhimanyu's problem...she used to love Raman in college but her step mom force her to marry abhi because they have to clear debt of bhallas for their industry...

Abhimanyu raghav :- an industrialist...husband of ishita...but he has a problem that he cannot be a father...he does not want anybody to know his problem so he used to stay away from ishita...and behaves rudely with her...he used to pretend in front of his family that he is a womaniser and does not love ishita...but in actual he loves shagun but stay away from her because he don't want to ruin her life...

Romi raghav:-brother of abhimanyu ...hates his brother because of his rude behaviour with ishita...treat ishita as his own sister...in love with ishita's friend mihika...best friend of Raman Kumar bhalla...
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Raman Kumar bhalla:-an orphan...but Mr and Mrs raghav treat him as their own son and raise him...now he is ceo of a multinational company ...he used to live with raghavs in his childhood but abhi does not like him ,so he decides to live in hostel...he was in love with ishita with whom he used to study in college and school...they both were away from their parents in their whole childhood and in college days so they were each others everything...but one day he get to know that ishita's stepmother had arranged his marriage to somebody else ...he was shattered from that day and move to London...nobody knows other than them that they love each other...

Mr and Mrs raghav:- loves ishita alot they made her marry to their son because they like her but they did not knew that she loved somebody else...they are very disappointed with their son's behaviour...loves Raman and always talk to him on the phone...but they don't inform him about abhi and ishita...



So guys how's it...tell me your suggestion s...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept dear...

Will be able to read their college days...

Excited to read it as I love teen stories...

Do continue...

Thanks foe the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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will read later in a proper way
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's an awesome start and i liked the concept ...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice plot
Continue soon


Waiting for a update in love is like afree bird ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intresting concept..
Is mani have problem,he really want ishu happiness.he should divorced her.

Raman till not get marry or he marry shaggy?dnt say that.o raman dont know mani and ishu husband and wife..y mani hate raman ?

if mani loves shaggy y he not marry her..tell me about bhalla family'
mani parents forced him to marry ishu..

waiting how u bring this plot, ..ishra close..
Thanks for pm:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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seems different and interesting
update it soon😊
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART :-1


Morning rays fall on him and he opens his eyes slowly...his best friend ,his bhabhi was standing in front of him with jug full of water...

Romi:- sone do na yar...plz girlfriend aaj mujhe nhi Jana college...

Ishita:- Mere pyare romio ji agar aap college nhi gye to aapki darzan bhar girlfriends ka kya hoga????

Romi:- no meri to bus ek girlfriend hai wo thodi der me clinic chali jayegi...so I have no problem...

Ishita:- OK no problem mene socha tha tum apni mba classes ke bad office jaoge,kam khatam kar k ...mihika ko pick kar loge aur phir ham teeno movie dekhne jayenge...but agar tum ko sona hai to aaj din bhar so jao...


Romi suddenly got up hearing mihika's name...and puts hand on ishita's shoulder and say:- arre nhi nhi tum to meri pyari ishubhabhi ho meri sabse favourite wali girlfriend ,tumko mana thode hi karunga...

Ishita:- han beta sab pata hai mujhe mihika ka nam sunkar to tum aasman se bhi neeche aa jao bed kya cheeze hai...ab jaldi taiyar ho aur mujhe bhi clinic chhodo...waise bhi tumhari bike ka koi bharosa nhi hai...

Romi:- ohho tumhari lal khatara car band padi hai aur meri bike ko kos rhi ho...

Ishita:- hehehe aaj thik ho jayega mera lal dibba phir usi me baith kar ham teeno movie dekhne jayenge...

Romi:- wo to thik hai par ek bat batao tum apne college days me bhi itni boring thi koi boyfriend nhi tha tumhara????

Ishita goes silent but she compose herself and say ;- nhi tha yar meri kismat me tumhare jaisa cartoon boyfriend hi likha tha...
Romi laughs and they both sit on bike

...ishita closes her eyes and lost in the world she always wanted to live...



FLASHBACK:-

Ishita was sitting behind Raman on bike they were running after picking up two apples from a roadside stall...after sometime Raman stop the bike near a garden...and they both enter the garden and sit under the tree...

Raman and ishita were laughing
Raman :- ab wo aadhe ghante Tak chillta rhega aur phir dekhega ki actually ham paise dal chuke hai uske stall me apples churane k bad..

Ishita:- tumko ye pagalpanti soojhti kaise hai...??

Raman:- kya karu jabse tumse pyar hua hai me pagal hi ho gya hu...

Ishita:- me na kahti thi ki tum bachpan se hi pagal ho...

Raman laughs and tickels her

ishita could not control and lay on grass laughing uncontrollably... Raman lay beside her and rest her head on his arm...

Ishita snuggles close to him and say:- Raman ham aise hi rahenge na hamesha ek sath poori duniya se alag sirf ham dono...

Raman caress her hairs and say:- aaj Tak kabhi alag hue hai kya Jo ab honge...Raman sirf ishita ka hai aur ishita sirf Raman ki...

Raman looks deep in her eyes and soon their lips met and ishita again lost in her world of love...







Suddenly she gets out of trance by a familiar voice it was romi's...

Romi:- ishubhabhi uthooo...log car me sote hai tum bike par so gyi clinic aa gya uthoo...

Ishita opens her eyes embarrassingly and look at romi...

Romi ask her concernly:- phir se ro rhi thi na rat bhar soyi nhi na tum thik se???

Ishita :- nhi yar aisa kuch nhi hai bas yun hi ankhe band kar li...ab tum jao college k liye late ho rha hai...

Romi:- thik hai apna dhyan rakhna...bye...

Romi was about Raman and ishita's age but he want to do something on his own and does not want to take money from abhi so he drop college...but ishita force him to complete his mba ...so he studies in college and works in an office as accountant where mihika works too as a secretory...they both attracted to each other but never talk openly.. their bridge is ishita ,best friend of both...






At home:-

Mr and Mrs raghav were talking

Mr raghav:- toshi hme Raman ko bula Lena chahiye wo bhi hmara hi bbachchha hai jitna aadar hme abhi aur romi dete hai usse khi jyada wo deta hai...wo waha akela hai London me...ham kya jawab denge upar jakar uske MA bap ko ki hamne unke bete ko akela chhod diya. ...

Toshiji:- han aap sahi kah rhe ho par abhi bht chhidta hai Raman se wo bht naraz hoga...

Mr raghav :- abhi to sabse chhidta hai hmari phool jaisi bahu ko undekha kar deta hai... Uske kahne se hmara ghar nhi chalega...

Toshiji:- han jab ishita ko is ghar me bahu bana kar laye the sochha tha us gareeb ghar ki bachchhi ko uski jallad ma se bacha kar khushiyon ka mahoul denge...usko medical ki padayi karayi hmne par uski zindagi sudhar nhi ske...par ...koi bat nhi waqt ke sath sab thik ho jayega mera abhi bhi...par Raman ke liye mene apni best friend poornima ki beti shagun ko Chuna hai...

.Mr raghav:- pehle mujhe lagta tha ki abhi shagun ko pasand karta hai par usne shagun ko reject kar diya aur ishita se shadi karne ki jid ki ...par ab wahi abhi ishita ke sath aisa behave karta hai... Shagun aur Raman ki shadi ho jayegi...to kam se kam poornima ji se shagun ko apne ghar ki bahu bnane ka kiya hua vada to poora hoga...


(Ishita's amma died when she born her appa get married again but her stepmom never care for her ..she sent her to boarding ...where Raman used to study too...abhi does not like Raman because he was more capable than him always...and he does not like the attention his parents give to him...when ishita completed her school her appa die... Her step mother refuses to let her study further but Mr raghav who was boss of ishita's appa give her fees for medical college...they get to know that ishita's stepmother will get her married to some old rich man for money so mr . raghav give her money and asked her that they will get ishita married to one of his sons...in order to save her life...Raman and romi didn't knew that fact till now...but abhi knows it from starting...ishita didn't knew that raman's guardian is Mr and Mrs raghav because they never talk to her about him...and Raman too never mentioned them to ishita...but raman knew that ishita is getting married to abhi so he never interfare thinking about Mr and Mrs raghv's happiness because he thinks they have done so much for him so he can't question them ..he thought ishita agree to marry abhi because abhi has more money...and he was an orphan... He never knew ishita's side of story...






At abhimanyu's office:-


Shagun comes in his office:-
Abhi:- shagun tum kyu aayi ho achanak sab theek to hai na...

Shagun:- kuch theek nhi hai abhi ek sal ho gye tumhari aur ishita ki shadi ko par tumhari aankho me uske liye nhi mere liye pyar hai ye dekh sakti hu me... Kyu tumne mujhe chhod kar ishita ko chhuna ...hamari shadi kyu nhi hone di tumne...

Abhi :- shagun me tumhare koi sawalo ka jawab nhi doonga...

Shagun :- thik hai mat do ab me bhi tumhara intejar nhi karungiii MA meri shadi ki bat kar rhi hai kisi se...wo Jis bhi ladke ko pasand karengi me usse shadi kar lungi...tumhari tarah bejan shadi nhi. Poore dil se shadi...aur tum mujhe kisi aur ke sath dekhkar tadapate rehna...mere pyar ko thukrane ki yhi saja hai tumhari...
Shagun leaves from there...

Abhi(St):- saja hi to de rha hu khud ko,apne ma baap ko,ishita ko, taki tumhari zindagi kharab na ho Shagun...mene ishita se shadi karne ki zid isiliye ki taki tumhari shadi mujhse na ho sake... Mere jaise insan se shadi karke tum kabhi khush nhi rahogi...tumhari khushi chahta hu bas...par me tumhe kisi aur k sath nhi dekh sakta ...



In the evening:-

Romi ,ishu and mihika reaches the theatre...mihika sits in b/w romi and ishu ...film started a romantic scene come up...romi and mihika look at each other ...romi slightly put his hand on mihika's shoulder and mihika snuggles into him it was the first time they get so close ...ishu looks at them and smiles...and her mind took her again to her favourite world...

FLASHBACK:-

Raman was taking ishu out to watch movie ,ishu never wear western clothes but she saw many girls in school wear western clothes ,she don't want Raman to look at them so she wear a sleeveless yellow floral frock till her knees...to show raman...she came out from her girls hostel...
Raman's jaw dropped to see her like this...he saw many guys were watching ishu ,he glares at them and he take ishu to theatre on his bike...
He encircled his hand on ishita's waist and give deadly glares to guys who were oogling on her...

They both sit on their seats...Raman see that her dress has deep back and guys on back seat were looking at her ...he shouts on them and snuggles ishita closer to him covering her completely...and whispers in her ear...
Raman:- tumne aaj ye kyu pehna...

Ishita :- kyu achchhi nhi lag rhi kya me mujhe laga school ki sari ladkiyan aise kapde pahanti hai tum mujhse bor ho kar unke pas chale gye to...

Raman:- tum to ho hi dhakkan ,tum kapdo ki than lapetkar ghoomogi na phir bhi me tumse bor nhi hounga...par aise kapde pehnogi aur log tumhe ghoorenge...to jail jarur chala jaunga...ek do ko markar.

Ishita giggles and say:- OK tum jaldi se mujhse shadi kar lo shadi ke bad kapde ki than lapetkar hi aaungi film dekhne tumhare sath..

They both laugh...




Ishita came out of memories and took her pallu in her hands and a lone tear escaped from her eyes...mihika noticed that...


Mihika stay with ishita at night because its get very late and she will not get entry in her hostel...mihika and ishita were friends since school so she knew about Raman and her...

Ever since abhi get married to ishita he left his room and used to sleep in a separate room ...they only share room when some other guests came to house and they have to hide their relationship status...



Mihika sleep with ishita in her room
Mihika:- ab bhi miss karti ho na use????

Ishita:- kise???

Mihika:- ishu tumhe pata hai me kiski bat kar rhi hu...

Ishu:- yadon ka kya hai miku man behlane ke liye aa jati hai...par sachchhayi to nhi badal sakti na...


Miku:- tum dono darpok the apne pyar k liye nhi lad paye...aur ab tu us ke liye ro rhi hai ...

Ishu:- kisse ladti me apni ma se Jo meri shadi kisi bhi aadmi se karane ko taiyar thi paiso ke liye ...ya phir in logo se jinhone pada likha kar meri jindagi sawari...abhi se shadi ke liye han karne se pehle gyi thi me Raman ke pas apni majboori batane par usne pahale se hi ye man liya ki mujhe paiso ka lalach hai...aise insan se pyar kiya Jo mujhe par bharosa Tak nhi karta...

Mihika:- mujhe aaj Tak samajh nhi aata ki Jo Raman tujhse itna pyar karta tha itni aasani as usne tujhe kaise Jane diya...

Ishu:- miku wo mujhse pyar karta tha par bharosa nhi kar paya...
Ishu cries and mihika consoles her. . . ..

Precape:- Raman coming back to India...




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Very nice abhi is a scoundrel to save shagun he ruined ishra love because of her continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beatifully written update..👍🏼
let see aage kya hota hai raman ishita come close ya fir raman sagun ka milaan hota hai

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