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Posted: 10 years ago
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This OS start after Holy dance sequence, in this OS RK meet Sultan outside the chawl.

Sultan: What do u want RK? Why can't u just leave me alone, Madhu sirf meri dost hai !

RK smirks at sultan and said: Do u think I am blind ? Tumhe kya laga ke maine tumhe dekha nahi jab maine madhu jo kiss kiya tab tum hame dekhkar jall rahethe.

Sultan fumes and said: Haan RK mein madhu ko dekhtahun, ek friend ki tarha nahi balke ek aashiq ki tarha. Waise bhi tum kya karoge madhu tum se zyada vishwaas mujh pe karrtihai. Aur bohot jald madhu mere paass hogi mere bahon mei aur kya pata mere bed me bhi
😡.

Rk held his collor and punched
him and said: Sultan yeh to tumhari purani aadat hai dusron ki cheezon pe nazar dalna.
Lekin Madhu sirf meri hai, she is only mine !
Vo sirf Madhubala Rishab Kundra hai
😉.
Agar tum koshish bhi karo na toh bhi madhu tum se kabhi pyar nahi karegi kyun uske dil me sirf RK ke liye jaga hai. Mein usse kitna bhi dard dun lekin usske dil mei sirf aur sirf mein hun.
Uss ka nasha mein hun
😊.

Sultan: Mein tumhe challenge kartahun ki Madhubala bohot jald mere saath hogi. Voh tumse nafrat karegi ...

RK smirks: Do din sultan, sirf do din aur tumhe tumhari aukat pata chal jaegi
👏.

To be continued...



Should I continue guys ? Please tell me how do u find it !
All kind of comments are welcome!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Plz continue!!!
Can't wait to read more!! Awesome!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Interesting start
Pls continue soon
.Can u pls write next it in English ? I understood the update but still want to read in English (from next update onwards)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
What a great idea.

I loved the confrontation between RK & Sultan. I wonder what Madhu will think about this!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Please continue soon, waiting to know what happens next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on the new story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Thanks to all the people who commented !
I have read all the comments but couldn't reply individually!


Someone has ask me to write in english well ill do it in the next update!

i will try to pm !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suprb
Cont soon n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz continue soon.
My hindi is not so good. I'll be great ful if u can write the dialogues in English.
Thank u.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesum os. Thanks for sharing dear.. Plz continue.

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