Virika OS: My Smiles, My Tears, My Earth, My Sky

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This one was requested by @gaushal_19843 and it's her present as today's her birthday!!! 🥳
Three sharp raps on the door.
Jeevika blinked her eyes open sleepily, but as far as she could tell it was still night and she turned onto her side, snuggling closer to Viren for warmth. He easily accommodated, unconsciously pulling her closer.
Another three raps, more insistent this time.
"Who's knocking at this time of night?" Viren mumbled into her hair.
Jeevika shifted, "I should see who it is. It could be something important."
Viren's response was to tighten his hold on her, still with his eyes closed, "No, stay and maybe whoever it is will go away..."
The knocks came again and Jeevika reluctantly pushed him away, tying the undone belt of her robe. Viren rubbed his knuckles into his eyes, yawning and got up with her.
Jeevika opened the door to see a very unabashed and cheerfully awake-looking Manvi and Virat with their daughter, Jhanvi. "It's about time," Virat said reprovingly, "We were starting to think we'd have to resort to more desperate measures."
"Virat...Manvi...at this time?" Jeevika looked at them confused.
"Shhh...don't ask any questions, just come!" Manvi ushered.
Viren sighed, "It's the middle of the night-"
"Shh!" Virat and Manvi looked at him sternly and he gave up on his protests. A tiny wail came from the crib and Jeevika went to retrieve their little daughter, Mansi.
"She's hungry," she said and Viren got the bottle of formula milk.
"Bring her and come!" Virat said and they followed the three into the hallway quietly.
Once they reached the living room, Viren turned on them, "What mischief are you two...or should I say, you three, up to now?"
"Well, Jhanvi woke up crying and we fed her and although, she stopped crying, she wouldn't go back to sleep. And then I was feeling hungry so we went to the kitchen...and then..." Manvi pulled out a cake from the table, "We decided we should have a small party for your 'double happiness' today!" her excitement was contagious and they all couldn't help but smile.
Jeevika was blushing, but the happiness on her face glowed, as she fed Mansi and all Viren could think, as he caught that beautiful Madonna-like expression on her face, was if it was possible to fall even more in love with her, he was then.
"We made it," Virat announced proudly, looking at the cake.
"You mean, I made it," Manvi corrected, "You had no idea what you were doing." she shrugged at Jeevika, rolling her eyes, "Men."
"Hey!" Virat started but Viren cut him off before they could begin another of their daily good-natured squabbles, "How about we cut the cake now?"
"Good idea, Jiju!" Manvi agreed, handing him the knife.
Viren sat next to Jeevika, who put down Mansi's bottle for a moment to cut the cake with him. He fed her a small sliver, all the while gazing at her and she looked down smiling, before giving Mansi the rest of the milk.
They all took turns feeding each other cake, while keeping it quiet, so as to not wake the other members of the Vadhera family. "She looks so sweet," Viren whispered, leaning over Jeevika's shoulder to touch his fingers lightly to Mansi's rosy cheek, "So beautiful, our little chutki. You know when I saw her for the first time, I could hardly believe it. This perfect little baby is ours. And finally, finally, I'm a father."
Jeevika nodded happily, "I can hardly believe it myself. I think I'm so full of happiness, I could burst!"
"Not yet," Viren laughed, entwining his arms about her stomach, "You still have some months to go for that."
She laughed with him and he leaned his head against hers, both simply gazing at their little baby, whose dove grey eyes slowly closed and held them entranced. She was truly such a lovely, sweet little thing, the fulfillment of all their dreams and hopes. Jeevika had once thought she couldn't love anyone more than Manvi or Viren. But now that she held her Mansi in her arms, she realized there was nothing and no one she loved more. Except, she thought, as a dreamy smile floated to her lips, the other little one residing in her stomach.
"She looks so much like you," Viren said softly, "As beautiful...as sweet...my little Jeevika." There was such reverent wonder in his words and Jeevika loved him all the more for it. "I think she looks more like you," she said.
Viren made a face, "No, look at her eyes and her lips."
"Look at her nose," she countered and Viren had to accept she was correct, "Still, she looks more like you...but I think I may love her just a little bit more."
Jeevika smiled and it lit up her entire face. Viren couldn't help himself, glancing at Virat and Manvi to make sure they weren't looking before letting his lips brush under her ear for a fleeting instant, "You know, I thank God everyday I found you. Because loving you has brought me the most precious reasons for my existence. I found my happiness in you and my strength. And I love, I love, I love you," his words were so soft, they were barely a whisper, but the intensity in them made her cheeks flush with warmth.
It seemed as though Virat and Manvi noticed, for the latter couldn't resist teasing them, "How sweet. My Di and Jiju are the number one love crew."
"All they need is some romantic music in the background and Bhai will ask Bhabhi to dance," Virat agreed.
Manvi's face brightened, "Virat, you're a genius!"
Jeevika sensing Manvi's plan, hastily protested, "But Mannu, everyone will hear!"
"Relax, Di, I'll keep it soft."
"Soft and romantic," Virat grinned, taking Mansi carefully from Jeevika, so as not to wake her.
Manvi scrolled through her music playlist on her phone before smiling, "Here's the one!"
Haan... Aa... Der Re Na...
Viren held it out his hand and Jeevika took it, smilingly.

Haan Hasi Ban Gaye, Haan Nami Ban Gaye
Tum Mere Aasmaan, Meri Zameen Ban Gaye
Haan Hasi Ban Gaye, Haan Nami Ban Gaye
Tum Mere Aasmaan, Meri Zameen Ban Gaye


One hand at his shoulder the other entwined with his hand, she let him lead them slowly about the room. Every word of the song matched by the look in his eyes. He wasn't singing, but the way he looked at her told her that she was his smiles, his tears, his earth, his sky. She was his world.
Ae... O... Haan... Aaa... Der Re Na

Haan Hum Badalne Lage, Girne Sambhalne Lage
Jab Se Hai Jaana Tumhein, Teri Ore Chalne Lage
Haan Hum Badalne Lage, Girne Sambhalne Lage
Jab Se Hai Jaana Tumhein, Teri Ore Chalne Lage

It was true. She was lost in memories of their first meeting and their engagement. How it had felt to fall in love. He spun her about, but then as though the distance was too much, pulled her back to him.
Har Safar Har Jagah, Har Kahin Ban Gaye
Maante Thhe Khuda, Aur Haan Wahi Ban Gaye
When he had told her loving her had brought him the most precious reasons for his existence, she did not say it back, but eyes could speak an eloquent language of their own. And her eyes told him so now.
Haan Hasi Ban Gaye, Haan Nami Ban Gaye
Tum Mere Aasmaan, Meri Zameen Ban Gaye
He leaned forward, arching her back with one hand steadying her from behind, the other holding her hand. He had spun her world upside down the moment he'd met her. And looking at him now, with all the memories, the happiness and the tears of their relationship, she felt as though she was falling in love all over again.
She had only enough time to catch the mischievous smile upon his face before he let go slightly and then caught her, pulling her up into his arms where she buried her face in his chest, blushing as he held her closely.
Virat and Manvi clapped and cheered as loudly as they dared in the quiet and when Jeevika finally lifted her head up, Viren kissed her cheek. A click came from behind and they realized Virat and Manvi had taken a picture of them.
At the moment, Jeevika had been embarrassed. But, years later when she found the picture again, tucked in an old photo album, she looked at it and smiled. There was so much genuine happiness and love captured in that single instant. Viren found her like that and put his arms about her, like he always did and he told her, "You're smiling so beautifully there."
There was no hesitance when she said back to him, "You brought that smile to my face. You always have. And I love, I love, I love you."
Smiles. Tears. Earth. Sky.
If you didn't get the Madonna reference, I was talking about the painting not the singer lol 😆
Song credits are Hasi from Hamari Adhuri Kahani.
Edited by KryanVirikaLuv - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Omg! So romantic!
Such an adorable OS!
I always wondered what their life would be like after Mansi was born.
I love the way you put their thoughts across. It's like watching them in front of me.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was so adorable and sweet 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Amazing OS
If EHMMBH had continued I wud imagine ih to b sumthin lyk this
It was so sweet n cute
Luved the connection between virika the way they can tell each other's thoughts thru ther eyes, that's tru luv
The dance bit was incredible
Ih really portrayed virikas luv so sweetly
Continue writing more really soon
Thnx 4 the pm
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
thank you for the OS...
Loved reading it!!!
Your stories make my day..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
After coming from vacation!
This is the only thing i needed:)
Such a cute os!
Everything was beautifully written and most importantly it had my favourite song!
Virika was exceptionally beautiful.
Thank you for writing this os
Loved it alot!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Lovely os Serah.. Every moment btw virika is so lovable.. Thanks for always making us fall in love with virika.. The way u write u make Virman also lovable.. Thanks for always brining a smile on my face with ur stories.. Keep writing.. Thanks for the PM.. :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update
absolutely loved it
thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Loved the OS
Their small celebration was superb
Too beautifully written
Do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
wonderful update
so romantic
just loved it dea
awesome os
thank for the pm
keep writing more😊😊

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