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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wow..loved it ...
You should definitely write dear
The lady in this is very courageous ..and seems to have too much bitterness in her now
Would love to know how this evil man will repent ..and ask for forgiveness ..
He should go penniless and pantless ...and suffer more until he gets washed from all his sins 😆😆
Continue soon please ...
Thanks ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vsapras

Wow..loved it ...

You should definitely write dear
The lady in this is very courageous ..and seems to have too much bitterness in her now
Would love to know how this evil man will repent ..and ask for forgiveness ..
He should go penniless and pantless ...and suffer more until he gets washed from all his sins😆😆
Continue soon please ...
Thanks ...


Heheheheh 😛
No man is hot indeed 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lolor

Beautifully written


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello sweetu !!!
This is sana!!
You are gud yaar, dnt hesitate ..
Nyc start ...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 what an idea smiritiji
unique different impatiently waiting for update it ss ff or os
start son
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana4Zz

Hello sweetu !!!

This is sana!!
You are gud yaar, dnt hesitate ..
Nyc start ...👏

HI 😊
CAN U PLEASE HELP ME
actually i don know how do we update our stories.. i mean what is the procedure
i have a story but cant understand the system
if you can assist a lil bit
please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start my dear👏👏...you should continue writing ...don't worry about English too much😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow ur update sounds like a paheli and is very interesting continue
I would love to read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Wow ur update sounds like a paheli and is very interesting continue

I would love to read it


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1:

"You look tired! Don't you think it's the correct time to call it a day? Hmmm??? hmmm??? Errr...KALPANAAA!!!! " " What? What happened? "I screamed almost falling off my sofa "still placing my laptop comfortably on my laps. Oh god!!! What has been the reason of making me so perfect? Huh...I thought. Anyways " MIHIKA why is it like i feel you are always on the verge of sending me to the hospital. COME HERE! COME... look my heart is almost out of my mouth" .I shouted in my half up and half down position anyhow... out of everything, my loyalty with my lappy is so strong that in any circumstance it is always cemented to its fav place .oh baby!!! Are we one? Huh...

"kalpana , I don't know , whether it would be me... but that man will definitely take you to the bed " BED ! I coughed almost slipping the glass of water from my hand, which my hands have just reached after placing my laptop on the table. "NO! NO! NO! My laptop... Errr!!!! God i will kill you "I cried settling the glass from my left hand and lifting my laptop in my right . In no sec I and my baby was hugging each other. "don't you worry your love is there for you baby " I consoled my baby. " NO ! NO ! NO ! I mean that hospital bed . " she yelled raising her left hand straight up and pinching her throat from two fingers of right hand. I simply rolled my eyes... god ! from where is she learning all such stupid drama . WAIT !!!DID SHE COPIED MY TONE . Grrr !!!!! make her a parrot god. NO MERCY !! I prayed silently. " I know u are cursing me " Mihika giggled . " what is so funny ? first you speak half of your sentence omitting the most important words, then you laugh at youself. Glee... get a life girl .I said looking to her still pampering my baby. " look kalpana ! its almost 2:00 am . you are at your 23 , still single , awake and working ? YOU get a life . Don't you think its too much " I looked at her half bending to keep my baby on the table assuring me its safe . Mihika is now looking at me , sitting politely on the sofa putting her right leg beside my laptop winking at me . " Girl ... get your leg away from my love. My laptop is familiar to only my touch ! huh... " I said pointing to her beautiful leg , remaining unaffected she continued " After all the company is not of yours husband . Ummm... until you and he gets married "

Enough " wait MIHIKA ! " now we both were running round the center table , me at her back. " You BITCH! come her , you don't know sometime you speak too much" " oh god kalpana !! Joke, joke kalpu" she was repeating the same line again and again all her way . " okay MISS JADAV" she all of the sudden turned , facing me , eyes intence looking only at my lips, brows streched putting both hands in the either pocket of her hot pants she again said " MISS JADAV " " HMMM ??? " was my reply . I was confused , got frozen at my place. My legs were now glued. move stupid creature ... move !!! was the only thing I was thinking. I suddenly felt the need of water . Feeling as if standing on the land of desert waiting for a lady to bring some water... woh what a thought. okay i too need a washroom !!! i lost the control over my emotions by only such action.

" MISS JADAV " her brows tightened " I LOVE YOU " with no emotion she said trying to sound as hushky as she could . " what ??" I don't know which feather started its job , but i was feeling some sensation down infact very down .

We both looked at each other , within a second she ran towards our sleeping room . i don't want to call it our bed room .since it sound lil bit stupid and weird . Now i know what was she doing. " You are such a BITCH , mihika" i yelled still standing on my place.

" haan haan !! I am sorry " i could hear her saying it aloud , but again who apologies this way ? . " Mihika go to sleep , night is almost over " I said ,searching for the near by chair .I was literally exhausted. My eyes were poping out , arms were aching and the only part which were resting from 3 hours were made busy running behind the most stupid yet beautiful and the cutest girl , I smiled . Failure in finding the comfort , the only option left was to go back to that lovely double SOFA of MINE ." Errr... GOD! why don't you make me a spider women , just one action and my webs would have let the sofa beside me , causing less tension to my lovely toes. Am i too dramatising the situation ?? MIHIKA !!!!!!!! I rubbed my forehead sitting on my sofa

" Come baby ! we'll sleep together. I am sure I have the tendency to relax you " Mihika shouted jumping to the matrix of my side rolling towards her. " Good night " she yelled. " shuss ... its night mihika except us all are dreaming , let them sleep . good night stupid girl " i said smiling.

ohh !!! how much i love my stupid girl . Reaching to my laptop 'my baby' i opened my excel sheet. " tomorrow is the day, when you will analyse everything . I want you to proceed. You to start .You to question . You to search . Everything by you . And for that if it cost my sleep , i am ready . i call it a start MR. KING SEDUCTIVE .

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