poem written by me... hope u all like it

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sweetyanu

@sweetyanu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Hmm now feelings smbody plyd my emotion.. We r so stupid that attached to both of dem.. hmmm

But k its personal issues but if sees frm viewers side feeling cheated n offend..

So now its difficult to watch dem in ssel.. Sry guys

" A dil samj mat laga dil itna ki bdme khud hi dhadkna bnd kr de. A aason mt bhe jo apni keemat nhi ab tk samaj ske

Ab bhi waqt he samaj pr kya kre dil he ki mnta nhi

Unko itna apna maan bhte ki ye bt unke samaj me ati nhi

Hum to unke chne wale ... Pr kya kre asoon thmte nhi aur wo he ki mnte nhi.. Kl se ye sochti hoon br br dil se yuhi poochti to hr br esa kyu hota he???? Jise dil lagoe.. wo akh se ason bn ke bahta he... Kya kre dil bhi bda batameez he ki sunta hi nhi.. Hr br wo hi glti krta he... Kya kre dil he manta nhi.. Kash dil ke pass dimag hota.. Kash uski dhakan me record kr pti.. aur unko bta pati.. Aaj is dil ki jo halat he wo unke karan he.. pr kya kre wo samajte he hi nhi..lagta he unke pss dil nhi.. Dil to pr meri jasa batameez nhi.. Ab to hd ho gyi sunta hi nhi dctor bhi puch rhe kya tuje aaaj... Chl so itna bhi mt dhadk ki sasen thm jaye .. Jise apni keemat ki kdr nhi...Pr kya kre samjta hi nhi aur wo ki mante hi nhi ... Aaj se li kasam chye kuch bhi ho jye kisko na chynge itna ab hum.. Bs batameez dil ab tu meri sun.. khudki nhi tere aka ki sun.. Thoda rook aur soch dard tere aaka ko hota he.. Dil bhi ab thk chuka aur bola jo hukum mere aaka.. ab me itna kathor ho jayoonga ki dil lagane phle das br sochonga.. pr aaka tere aakh se aason bs aur ab aason nhi behne doonga.. Jise teri kdr nhi ab uski mujhe fikr nhi..ja bol de unhe jisse mere aaka ki keemat nhi uske liye ab me dhadkta nhi"

Shukriya mere batameez dil shukriya

Written by me. ( anusha) anu

Bs ase hi kisi ke upr nhi bhaiti to socha kuch likho jisse ssel ke fans khush ho jye

Edited by sweetyanu - 10 years ago

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yanks28

@yanks28

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Posted: 10 years ago

i can feel your pain hon ...nice poem...i truly feel your pain...fans are not happy at all.

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anita_m

@anita_m

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

It's sweet like your username, anu, par itna na karo inse pyaar. Don't break your heart over people who are really strangers. Jab ek doosre se nibha nahi sakte, toh hum kya cheez hain.
And maybe they'll surprise us one of these days, but better we learn a lesson.

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sweetyanu

@sweetyanu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anita_m
It's sweet like your username, anu, par itna na karo inse pyaar. Don't break your heart over people who are really strangers. Jab ek doosre se nibha nahi sakte, toh hum kya cheez hain.
And maybe they'll surprise us one of these days, but better we learn a lesson.

Hey thnks but its not fir saraj... its dere personal issues.. Its doesn't bother me...

Actually I m just sitting watching old film abhiman... that touches me... To socha kyu na apne poem share kroon..

Really it didn't bother me too much... I treated dem only as

actors..