FF:-DIL KITHNA MAJBOOR updt ch13/pg35

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Drisya

@DIYA-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hi All...Herez is first post of my FF. Criticisms are welcomed whole heartedly.Hopefuly you'll get the dept and hard of the people who had fallen in love.

As always heart won't listen to mind So I thought "DIL Kithna Majboor" would apt for the story.

CHAPTER 01

On the Departure terminal of the Airport in Lucknow comes a girl carrying her Browninsh colour Handbag on one of her shoulders and pulling a red bag.

"Rohan..." She called out looking towards the crowd.

"Nidhi ji" a charming young man moving few people apart came towards her and gave her cold hug.

"Come on Nidhi ji ... warna hum traffic mein faz jayenge" They started to walk.

In car...

Rohan sped his car.

"You will not changed Rohan." Nidhi said while having fear in her mind because of his speedy driving.

"Aap bhi ... Shayad aapki ankhen unhi ko dond rahe the." He said in upset tone.

"Aur shaadi ki tayari...? Where is Anjie...?" She will be very excited right?" She interrogated.

"Haan bauhath...Bas aap hi ko miss kar rahi hain"He said with smiling face. She also gave smile in return.

...

They reached home. Everyone was excited to welcome Nidhi especially Anjie.

"Aja " both went to Nidhi's room.

...

As both got in Anjie locked the room.

"Ab bol tere yahan aana ka wajah kya hain... for what reason you had come here" Anjie angrily asked.

"What sort of question is this.Of course teri shaadi ko attent karne aayi hoon aur kya Anjie" Nidhi said holding Anjie's elbow.

"Meri shaadi toh sirf ek bahana hain Nidhi... I know that very well because aaj tumhe hain yahan nahi Air India from India to Europe mein hona chahiye thi . I was your decision to go on a day before my marriage " Anjie said with wet eyes.

"Haan ... Lekin I thought ki jaathe jaathe teri shaadi bhi attend karke javoon.What wrong in that?" Nidhi asked.

"Nahi... agar aisa hotha you must done it much earlier and that's Ms.Nidhi Verma" Anjie said

"Toh kya hua ab mein aagayi hoon na"Nidhi said to make more clear the reason for her return is Anjie's

Marriage.

"I don't believe this do you get that?"Anjie shouted

By the time someone knocked the door. Nidhi opened the door and it was Rohan

"What the matter Nidhi ji. Why did you return" Rohan interrogated.

"Ghar mein ithna sara kaam pada hain. Jaake voh dekh jab dekho mere hi peeche hain" Nidhi sid in anger which made Rohan so upset and he went

...

At night...

Nidhi stood in her room looking at full moon.

" Mera soch hi sahi tha chaand kisi pyaar gawa nahi ban sakthi.Voh khud berang hain toh kisi zindagi kaise rangein banadega." Nidhi said in a way to make the moon her messenger.

Precap:

Dr,Ahuthosh's entry.

Edited by DIYA- - 10 years ago

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aparna

@appuammu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Very nice start . Is nidhi also a dr.waiting for the next update

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Good start Diya 👏👏

Liked to know that Anji and Rohan are getting married ! Nidhi was all set to leave for Europe but she did not go. Reason is not what she told Anji, right ? 😳

Looking forward for Asutosh's entry. She is in a sad mood and her life is colorless. Nice message to moon.⭐️ Liked the first part which makes love a hard feeling with many paths to cross with pain and sometimes all alone !

Thanks 😊

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ssss97

@ssss97

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Good start. Do continue soon. Thanks for the pm

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anjani

@snehatanu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

nice start. waiting for the next.

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Diya.. you have given a nice start to this FF... ⭐️👏

For once.. i lost in the Airport scene ,, when Ashu stopped Nidhi from going to Europe.,, 😳

But here... loved to see Rohan n Anji's marriage gonna take place.. But all that with Nidhi in a crisis right now.. it seems she has lost so much in life.. n now waiting for someone's entry for a fresh start.. !

Nice to know that Anji n Rohan are so concerned for her..but things are not very normal.. n Nidhi is irritated.. so is Anji.,., n Rohan got the shout.. Uff.. !

So next is Ashu's entry.. well will wait for that moment.. !

Nidhi's thoughts over moon's ability are so pessimistic.. ! I know she will change her mind soon n wud one day praise moon for the colours in her life.. !😃

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Hi Diya ❤️ 🤗

Loved the starting 👏 More cos i lovd Anji and Rohan pairing! Nidhi is lost in her thoughts and not telling some hidden truth to Anji. She is hiding her pains so that Anji and Rohan won't get affected during their marriage. But they both really are. Nidhi's sadness in palpable and is the only concern for her friends. Loved this part of the FF ⭐️

Her views for moon are not accepted though. She is depressed and filled with negativity right now. Hope to see her life in a good and a sound track once Ashu makes his entry. Anji and Rohan's marriage will be the changed life for Ashu and Nidhi, that's what i feel.

Will wait, thanks dear! 😊

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jahanaara

@jahanaara

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Dilchasp shuruaat hi update ka besabri se intezar hi.Shukriya Diya

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Drisya

@DIYA-

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Hi... Thank u sooo muchhh each and evryone ... Thnx to all cmnts and to silent readers as well... Thnx fr reading FF by taking ur precious 😊

I can sense ur expectations frm ur cmnts... I would like to knw ur opinion on reading the story... Would u lyk to hv story as flashback or on goin... Which is preferred... This is asking as part of incl. Ur views to my story. So tell me hw wud u all lyk to hv?

😳

Will be waiting fr ur reply... 😉

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: DIYA-
Hi... Thank u sooo muchhh each and evryone ... Thnx to all cmnts and to silent readers as well... Thnx fr reading FF by taking ur precious 😊

I can sense ur expectations frm ur cmnts... I would like to knw ur opinion on reading the story... Would u lyk to hv story as flashback or on goin... Which is preferred... This is asking as part of incl. Ur views to my story. So tell me hw wud u all lyk to hv?

😳

Will be waiting fr ur reply... 😉

anything will do diya

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