New ff love is like a free bird part 7 updated pg 15

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Hey guys ,many of my friends wanted me to continue my OS unspoken love... But I write that as one sided love story so I don't want to extend that...but as I promised I am here with my new ff having same plot and back ground...so new readers please have a look to my OS unspoken love ,so u will connect it better...enjoy and please leave ur precious comments...(a long one);p


LOVE IS LIKE A FREE BIRD

Character sketch:-

Ishita vishwanathan iyer:-a successful doctor by profession...she is a confident and secured person when it comes to work...but she is really insecure and afraid in terms of relationships..She does not want any second person in her life to control her and then leave her alone so she does not believe in love and marriage...ishita and Raman study in same school.ishu loved Raman back then but his ignorance increase her insecurities.now she is a confident woman who wants to enjoy her life on her own.


Raman Kumar bhalla:-a confident ,successful and overambitious business man.he wants to be the most powerful business.he enjoys life in bar and clubs ,a womaniser but does not have time for family.he thinks his responsibility get over by spending money on family members.he does not belive in marriage because it will be a hindrance to his professional life and freedom.he is arrogant sometimes but he is kindhearted .he does not belive in love ,according to him it changes life's motive and made a person weak...


Rest of the family member same as the show...with a few changes u will know it through the story...

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Part 5:-


Part 6:-
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yippee I am the first to comment I love these kind of stories
Please continue soon
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Yippee I am the first to comment I love these kind of stories
Please continue soon



Thanks I will continue it asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds intereeesting...
congrats for new ff...👍🏼
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Part 1:-

Delhi ,iyer house:-


Ishita was standing in balcony sipping her tea and enjoying the first rain.vandu comes from behind and close her eyes by her palms...

Ishu:-vandu akka mujhe pata hai aap ho jaldi hath hatao aur mujhe hug karo...
Vandu removes her hand and hug ishu...they both sit and start their usual gossip and chitchatting session..after some light talk and funny gossiping vandu make a serious face and ask ishu...
Vandu:-ishu amma bata rhi thi ki tune phir se shadi k liye mana kar diya .aisa kab Tak chalega kanna ,at least tu ladke se bat to kar le.yadi tujhe koi pasand hai to bta ,amma ko koi objection nhi hoga...
Ishu:-akka me aapse aur amma se bol chuki hu ki me apni life me akele hi khush hu.mujhe koi second person nhi chahiye apni life ko control karne k liye...
Vandu:-ishu shadi karne ka Matlab ek dusre ki life control karna nhi hai..shadi ka Matlab hai ekdusre ko support karna ,ek dusre ka sath dena,sari zindagi akele katna aasan nhi hota...mujhe aur bala ko dekh ham dono apne apne profession me hai ...ekdusre ko unconditional love aur support karte hai...tujhe bhi aisa koi nhi chahiye kya???
Ishu:-no akka mujhe koi nhi chahiye...har insan bala jiju jaisa nhi ho sakta...aur me to khud nhi janti ki me kisi insan ko khush rakh sakti hu ya nhi...
Vandu:-ishu tu sirf nervous hai ,jaise bachpan me school k exam k liye hoti thi..ye bhi ek exam hai...tu bas is naye experience ko try kar sab apne aap ho jayega...
Ishu:-this is exactly my point akka ye ek exam hai ..but akka school k exam do ya teen ghante me khatam ho jate hai par shadi jindagibhar chalne wala exam hai...yha aapko dimag se nhi dil se kam Lena padta hai jis par hamara koi control nhi...yha result aapke answers ,reactions aur aapki kabiliyat se nhi balki kisi aur ki expectations aur desires par depand karta hai.aur eventually aapko apni hi life se bhatka deta hai...me apni life me kisi ka impact nhi chahti...mein shadi nhi karungiii...
Ishu denies and leaves from there ,vandita look on and get worried...



Mumbai,psr company (ceo office)

Raman Kumar bhalla ceo of psr company was standing at office balcony in lunch time and was smoking cigarette...mihir arora his best friend comes and talks to him..

Mihir:-Raman delhi me tumne apni family k liye Jo bungalow taiyar karwaya tha wo ready ho gya ...tumne ghar par bat kar li???
Raman:-tu janta hai sab kuch ,ma aur papa ka jabaw bhi janta hai to phir kyu poochh rha hai...
Mihir:-Raman us ghar se unki feelings Judi hai wo nhi chahte isiliye use chhodna...aur aunty ne kha na ki tu delhi shift hona phir tu jaha khega waha rah lenge wo log
Raman:-thik hai delhi shift kar leta hu apna office,MA ki pasand ki ladki se shadi kar k sari zindagi bachchho ko palne posne me laga deta hun...mera sapna meri life sab bhad me jaye ,yhi chahta hai na tu,hai na?
Mihir:-Raman shadi delhi aur sapno ka kya connection hai ...sab kuch time k sath poora ho jata hai...
Raman:-mihir me yha apni life apne tareeke se jeeta hu..mere liye mera kam hi priority hai...delhi jakar family circus ka hissa nhi banna mujhe.aur rhi bat shadi ki to log Jo shadi k bad karte hai me wo me abhi karta hu...I can get any girl I want...par mujhe uske liye shadi aur bachcho ka bojh nhi chahiye...kisi ke rokne tokne se me apni life barbad nhi karunga...
Mihir:-aur aapko agar kisi se pyar ho gya to???
Raman:-pyar???pyar sirf ek physical attraction hai...mujhe jisse pyar hoga wo mere bed me hogi bus pyar khatam...uske liye mujhe kisi ko sar par chhadane ki jarurat nhi hai...
Mihir:-Raman tu apna ganda mind set apne pas rakh bas kal delhi chale Jana toshi aunty bht yad kar rhi thi...
Raman:-han theek hai ,me kal ka ticket karata hu aur parso ka return ticket...
Mihir nodds and Raman leaves from there...

Let's see that the new day will bring what changes that will change their lives forever...


Next part:-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/124660536
To be continued...
Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Res
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Awesome dear... 👏
I liked it...
So Raman is going back to Delhi... 😳
I hope puttar will get stuck there 😆 (you know why)
Waiting for IsRa nok-jhoks 😉
I'll try to comment if I'll get time dear...
But trust me...I'm loving it and will read for sure 👍🏼
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Res
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Me first 🥳

Awesome dear... 👏
I liked it...
So Raman is going back to Delhi... 😳
I hope puttar will get stuck there 😆 (you know why)
Waiting for IsRa nok-jhoks 😉
I'll try to comment if I'll get time dear...
But trust me...I'm loving it and will read for sure 👍🏼


Thanks...next update will be sure on ishra meeting

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Nice update continue soon... Dono shadi nahi karma chahte same reason keliye interesting
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Nice start continue soon😊
Ty for pm
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Update soon.loved it!plz Pm me when u update
Edited by ISHRARULZ - 10 years ago

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