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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys,I am updating next part of my ff...many of my friends wanted me to give Raman's POV in OS unspoken love...so here in this part u will get to know raman's POV at that time...




PART 4:-


DELHI, IYER HOUSE:-

Ishita was getting ready to leave for Mumbai...

Madhvi:- aiyoo ishu tum panch dino k liye ja rhi ho...pehle kabhi Mumbai nhi gyi kaise rahogi waha...

Ishu:- amma waha bht sare doctors honge...sab ko janti hu me ...achchha arrangement hai koi problem nhi hogi...

Madhvi:-kitna achchha hota ydi Raman se tumhara rishta ho jata ...ham sab bht khush ho jate...tumhe pata hai wo Mumbai me hi rhta hai...

Ishita:- amma mujhe nhi shadi karni kisi se bhi...aur me confrence ke liye ja rhi hu Raman se Milne ke liye nhi...ab Jane do mujhe jaldi late ho jayega...with this ishita turns and cross her fingures ,she never lied to amma but if she will get to know this, they all will rise their hopes...and probably she would find a BARAT without DULHA on her gate after coming back to delhi...

Ishu reaches Mumbai at 9:00am...and got busy in seminar...she got free at 3:00 pm then she decides to call Raman and inform him...



On the other side Raman was busy in her office,door was locked and Raman was busy in making out with her secretory... Suddenly his phone buzzed...he got free his one hand from the girl and pick up the phone to see the caller id...he instantly got up from chair cause the girl to fall on the floor...she shout on him and say:- sir kya hua aapki biwi ka phone aaya hai kya ????
Raman angrily glares on her and sign her to go...Raman took a deep breath and pick up the phone...

Raman :- hello

Ishita:- bht der laga di aapne phone uthane me...

Raman:- han to me ceo hu bht sare office work hote hai mujhe...tum btao kyu phone kiya. ..

Ishu:- aapke aur aapke kamo ko janne ka koi shouk nhi hai mujhe...me Mumbai aa gyi hu abhi 3:00 bje hai ...aapke pas ek ghante ka time hai agar aap mujhse Milne aa sakte hai to aa jaoge...

Raman:- oo tum khud ko queen Victoria samajhti ho Jo khud se Milne ka appointment de rhi ho ,me kisi se Milne nhi jata log appointment le kar mujhe se milte hai...let me see han 5:00 bje k bad aa Jana tum...

Ishu:- Mr. Raman Kumar bhalla me Mumbai aapki shakal dekhne nhi apni medical confrence me aayi hu...ek ghante me aap aa sakte hai to aa jaiye warna me apne friends k sath Mumbai ghoomne ke liye nikal jaungi...milna aapko tha...call apne kiya tha ...to aayenge bhi aap...

Raman got irritated but he can't miss ishita so he hurriedly got up adjust his clothes and call mihir to postponed his meetings...and drove to the address that ishita sent. ...

Raman reaches the confrence venue in 45 minutes...
He search for ishita and found her talking to a guy...they both were looking very comfortable with each other and laughing...
Raman does not like it that she is talking to anybody else with so much ease when she always talks to him rudely...
Raman burns in jealousy and goes near ishita... Ishita excuse herself from Dr abhimanyu and turn to Raman...

Ishita:- oh aa gye aap 45 minutes me ,not bad...

Raman:- kya me tumse poochh sakta hu ki tum kisse itna khilkhilakar bat kar rhi thi...

Ishita:- kya me aapse poochh sakti hu ki aapki collar par Jo lipstick k nishan hai wo kiske hai...

Raman checks his collar and get embarrassed and say:- wo wo tumhe kya Matlab...

Ishita:- exactly mujhe koi Matlab nhi hai na aapko hona chahiye me kisi se bhi bat karu...abhi hamara rishta dosti ka bhi nhi hai...

Raman:- me yha tumhare rude answers sunne nhi aaya ...

Ishita:- to me bhi yaha aapke arrogance or attitude par novel likhne nhi aayi hu...jaldi bolo Jo bolna hai phir mujhe apne friends k sath Mumbai ghoomne Jana hai...

Raman:-nhi I mmean mujhe bht imp bat karni hai aise nhi kar sakta ...tumhe Mumbai ghoomna hai na mai ghooma deta hu...

Ishita:- aap k sath ghoomne me koi interest nhi hai mujhe ...aap se sirf bat karungiii aur apne hotel wapis chali jaungi...bolo kha Jana hai...

Raman:- mene taj hotel me table book karayi hai wahi chalte hai...

Ishita:- Mr. bhalla mujhe pata hai ki aapke pas kafi paise hai aur aapko unhe show off karne ka bhi kafi shouk hai par me itne achchhe mousam me taj hotel me ac me band hokar nhi baithungi ...me juhu beach aur choupati jaungii chalna hai to chalo...

Raman (St) :- pata nhi kyu me is jhansi ki rani ki baton me phas rha hu aur gussa bhi nhi aa rha, koi aur hota to abhi Tak to me yha se ja chuka hota ...par koi bat nhi aaj iska din hai kabhi to aayega mera din...

Raman:- madam aap jaha chalna chahe chahiye...
Ishita giggles ,first time Raman saw ishita giggling in front of him ...he feels happiness in his heart...but he was unaware of the reason...ishita caught him staring at her and stop giggling...and make straight face again...
Raman and ishita both sit in car and drove to beach...

They both get out of the car and start walking on the beach side...
Raman was living in Mumbai for such a long time but he never come to beach and walk like this...he always gets busy in parties,club,business meetings and work ,for him only enjoyment is to spend money and showing off it...but today he was excited not for any business deal or big contract...not for buying a expensive house or going to a club with girls who will throw themselves on him...he was excited just for spending time with this madrasan who is not even talking to him properly...he mentally smack himself and keep staring at ishita...

Ishita:- tumhare aaage patthar hai ,aage dekh kar chalo warna gir jaoge aur tumhara expensive suit kharab ho jayega...


But ishita was late on the next moment Raman was on the ground ...


ishita came forward concernly but then in next moment she start laughing whole heartly... Raman was in awe to see her laughing like this he forgot that he was on ground ...ishita forward her hand and help him to get up...

Raman:- haso mat ek to tum mujhe is stupid jagah par le aayi...aur ab dant dikha rhi ho kaisi doctor ho yar tum...

Ishita:- me tumhe nhi layi tum khud mere peeche peeche aaye ...
Raman give her angry glare and removes his coat...

Ishita signs him to sit and they both sit down and admires the beauty of sea...

Weather was actually really nice ,soft wind,sea water,and sand in ground perfect scenario...
But Raman was unable to concentrate on any thing his whole attention was on ishita that how her hairs were flowing with the wind...how she close her eyes and feel the wind...he has spent time with many girls till date and he used to glare them top to bottom with lust but with this girl his eyes was not leaving the sight of her innocent eyes ...he never feel this feeling before...ishita noticed that and raise her eyebrows... He came back to his sense and nodded...

Ishita:- ab bolo kya bat karni thi tumhe...

Raman :- wo mein...wo ishita ...wo...chalo chhodo abhi... mujhe tum ek bat batao ki tum itna change kaise ho gyi ...mujhe yad hai school me tum hamesha chup rhti thi ladna to door ki bat hai...aur ab dekho tumhare muh se har waqt kante nikalte hai...

Ishita:- change to tum bhi ho gye school time me to tumne mujhse kabhi bat nhi ki ,meri taraf dekha bhi nhi aur ab mujhse bat karne k liye five star chhodkar yaha chale aaye...aur jab se ghoore ja rhe ho...tumhare intentions delhi me poore nhi hue to ye mat samajhna yha ho jayenge...

Raman:- oh hello tumhare sath kuch nhi karna mujhe aur rhi school ki baat ,tab tum alag thi...aur ab tum alag ho...

Ishita:- hmmm pehle me moti si thi ,chashma lagati thi ,bat karne me sharmati thi to tum mujhe apne se bat karne layak kyu samajhte...ab me beautiful hu ,confident hu to tum mujhse bat kar rhe ho...

Raman :- aisa nhi hai us waqt tum khud mujhse kabhi baat nhi karti thi ,shagun meri best friend thi ,tum hamesha uske sath rhti thi tum chahti to ham bhi friends ban sakte the...par tum hamesha strangely behave karti thi...jab bhi tum mujhse koi bat karti thi wo shagun k bare me hoti thi...to me tumse kya bat karta...

Ishita:- u know what Raman duniya me do tarah k log hote hai pehle wo Jo dusro k bare me itna sochhte hai ki khud ko bhool jate hai...aur dusre wo Jo apne bare me itna sochhte hai ki doosro ko yad hi nhi rakhte hai...
Par ab mujhe samajh me aagya hai ki in dono ka balance hona jaruri hai...
Kyuki ham kisi ko bhi apne feeling ke according chalne par majboor nhi kar sakte...aur na hi kisi aur ki marji se chalne par hme khushi milti hai...

Raman look deep in her eyes and try to read the emotions in it...



Ishita got uncomfortable with this she does not wanted to reveal the same ishita in front of him who used to love him...so she divert her eyes and
say:-mr. Bhalla do ghante me meri conference shuru hone wali hai aap ko Jo bolna hai bol dijiye...phir mujhe drop kar dijiyega...

Raman:- wo mein...wo...
Raman was first time in his life hesitating to speak something ,the most successful ceo who address the meetings full of established businessmans was getting nervous in front of a girl...
Raman :- ishita wo abhi mujhe ek meeting me Jana hai...me tumhe drop kar deta hu tumhare hotel me...ham is bare me bad me bat karenge...

Ishita:- no Mr bhalla ye hamari aakhiri mulakat hogi apne parents ko me samajha loongi mujhe ab is bare me aapse koi bat nhi karna...

Raman gets silent and drops ishita to the hotel and waves a good bye...

.ishita's heart was beating fastly ,she scolded herself to again get lost due to her insecurities and love...she was feeling that again this is the same day like her farewell when she decides to live in a shell due to her insecurities but now it's late he is gone ,she wanted to talk sweetly to him,she wanted to spend time with him... But she was afraid ,afraid to show her feelings...she wanted to be with him but she can't let him control her feelings...she once again close her eyes and give herself strength to get back to her normal life and she goes back to attend seminar...


Raman comes back to his home after dropping ishita to hotel...he lies on his bed and close his eyes ,he saw ishita's face...he try to remember ishita and his encounters in school but he failed...he never noticed ishita in school...but now from first meeting to last he remembered everything ,every single conversation with her...


He planned the deal perfectly in his mind the whole week that how he will ask directly to ishita to get married to him to pretend in front of their parents and then they both can live their life independently...a marriage sirf "parents ke liye"... But now it seems too difficult to even talk to her about that...he thought it will be easy like any business deal but it is difficult...God knows why but he can't resist himself to keep thinking about her...her eyes which reflect something he is unable to understand... The same emotion which he has seen at the school times also when she used to steal glances at him...he wanted to know that he wanted to spend more time with her only her...


No ,he mentally scold himself ..He can't let his idea and his motives incomplete for something stupid like this ,he will talk to her straight...he will explain her...he wanted a free life and his parents happiness...

He has to meet her again but how...he think something and an idea popped up in his mind ...he dialed a number from his mobile and instruct his head department something...




Let's see that what Raman has planned to meet ishita and wheather he will be able to talk about his plan to ishita or not...in the next update...

Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Wow excellent update...
They both attracted to each other but won't accept it.
Let's see what going to happen in Mumbai..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
nice continue soon
waiting for raman proposal...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Beautiful update story is getting interesting continue soon
Thanks for pn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting update both are attracted to each other but won't admit. Lets see how raman talks to ishita about the deal marriage ''parents ke liye''. Poor ishita she still loves him and he is also attracted to her but his ego is too big. I don't like this Raman who sleeps around with girls hope he changes soon.
Ty for pm😛
continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...such a lovely update...
Raman😡...even after liking her he was engaged with secretary...and jealosy over ishu,...but then after that he was cute and sweet😳...awww...he is not able to speak to her lost in her...he is falling love and have not realised...

Ishu clear ur mind😳😳...i dont want her heartbreak...let her be like this strong, rude...atleast until he realise he loves her...

lovely update...Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update:-)

ishu not tell her parents about raman's call and their meeting,pata chalte toh..
BHEENA DHULA KE BHARAT KAREGE..HA HA ITS HILARIOUS..

Raman still stick with another lady,humm he not realise his love for ishu..so its ok..

O jealousy raman fumed with anger by seeing ishu closeness with mani.he raise the question.y she is not comfortable with him socho socho..

She asked about lip stick mark in his collar.beta tumari shaadi ke pahile yeh hal ho..pata nahi shaadi ke baadh tum ko Jkr roope free mai milega..

hey they went to beach...raman silped on ground.she enjoyed in laughing.he mesmerised by her beauty and smile.

he asked her y she changed alot.she gave perfect answer to him,again she rejected him..ha ha ha..she reject to met HIM also..

raman thoughts occupied by ishu.he travelled in past of his school days..he want to marry her.

Now he make a plan to met her..he want to tell her,he never question about her rules.he want to tell about parents ke liye tag ...

I want raman to realise his love before marriage and make sure he make her to love him after marriage...

Thanks for pm:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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excellent update👍🏼
Edited by rk654 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
beautiful update
ishita confidant it was
awesome she loves raman
but not show him
n ishra covno was nice
but kya yaar present ke liye
shadhi
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superb update . loved ishitas effect on raman. do continue soon

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