New ff love is like a free bird part 7 updated pg 15 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey i loved it,mostly im experiencing the feeling of ishu and raman..:-)

thanks for continuing this story as ff with new thoughts..

Ishita still not move on ..in her life.first thing she hurted by raman ignorance act, it still stuck in her mind.she felt she is not beautiful as a man can desire from a women.

Her insecurities,she herself build a shell no man can enter in her heart and ignore her same like raman ,its hurt her..before the rejection of man.she rejecting them .
Its my view about ishita..

Raman,he is ambititous person,he loves attention from world,he loves status and competition..there may be a past ..y he is disrespecting women,y he is reject to marry..even he is not spending his time with family..

He thinking love is lust...if lust fulfill their is no need of love.

i love ishu and vandy akka conversation.yes we wrote exams with in 3 hours but marriage is a life long relation.

Career is successful with the help of mind ,talent..but marriage is successful with the love.

I eager to read more and more.And i want this time,ishita ignore raman..yeh arrogant raman ke achi punishment hoga..its will creat more drama,nok jokh...

Ishita should give good competition to him not like abala naari...i dont want school ishu..and she should be beautiful.

thanks for pm:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Wow nice story dear.
Would love to read further.
Please pm me next time :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
interesting .. both apne apne reason ke wajah se not willing to marry..
but who knows kal kya hoga😉
waiting for ishra nok jhok..

thank you for the pm dear😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for pm

that so good ishita still feel for him naa but he is a moron want girls only for pleasure I wish he fell in love with her head over heels continue soon
Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Hey i loved it,mostly im experiencing the feeling of ishu and raman..:-)

thanks for continuing this story as ff with new thoughts..

Ishita still not move on ..in her life.first thing she hurted by raman ignorance act, it still stuck in her mind.she felt she is not beautiful as a man can desire from a women.

Her insecurities,she herself build a shell no man can enter in her heart and ignore her same like raman ,its hurt her..before the rejection of man.she rejecting them .
Its my view about ishita..

Raman,he is ambititous person,he loves attention from world,he loves status and competition..there may be a past ..y he is disrespecting women,y he is reject to marry..even he is not spending his time with family..

He thinking love is lust...if lust fulfill their is no need of love.

i love ishu and vandy akka conversation.yes we wrote exams with in 3 hours but marriage is a life long relation.

Career is successful with the help of mind ,talent..but marriage is successful with the love.

I eager to read more and more.And i want this time,ishita ignore raman..yeh arrogant raman ke achi punishment hoga..its will creat more drama,nok jokh...

Ishita should give good competition to him not like abala naari...i dont want school ishu..and she should be beautiful.

thanks for pm:-)


Thanks dear for liking it ,I will clear all your doubt in my next update... And your wish my command.. I will try to make them all true...thanks again for ur lovely comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
awesome update
dono ko shadi se problem
nice continue soon waiting early
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
hey! u r back with new FF😃
interesting start
both don't want to get married...
waiting for their first encounter😉
thanks for pm
update it soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept can't wait for Ushra to meet thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
That was intresting start👍🏼...So they gone a meet in next update😊...Since Raman is so unaware with feeling called love...it will be amazing to see how his journey will go...😆😆...Excited for ishra😳😳😳...Continue soon...Thanks for pm😃😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys,I am updating the next part...Raman is not villain in my story ,he is just overconfident and ambitious...he does not have any bad past but the fact is only that he has very high dreams...he used to get everything he want by his hardwork and capability...so he is so proud of himself...so please don't bash him...if u find anything disturbing about him...

Part 2:-

Delhi ,bhalla house

Raman reached his home at delhi...everybody in the house get so happy and welcomes him...

Toshiji:-bhallaji Raman aa gya hai ab aap usse bat karo na...
Bhallaji:-han toshiji karta hu..iyer sahab aur bhabhiji humare purane dost hai ...unki beti hamari bahu bane isse bad k khushi ki aur koi bat ho hi nhi sakti...

Bhallaji talks to Raman but he refuses to go to meet the girl...toshiji too try to explain him but he stubbornly refused.

Toshiji:- beta bus mere liye is ladki ko dekhne chal bht hi soni kudi hai...tujhe ek najar me pasand aa jani hai iske bad tu Jo khega wo karenge hum...

Raman(St):- ek bar ladki dekhne chala jata hu use dekhkar wahi shadi k liye mana kar dunga...ma bhi kuch nhi kar payengi. Aur bar bar mujhe ladki dekhne k liye force nhi karengi...

Raman:- thik hai ma me taiyar hu par ye pehli aur aakhiri ladki hogi jise me dekhne jaunga...

Toshiji:- han beta rab kare aisa hi ho...aur tum dono ka rishta pakka ho jaye...
Raman gets irritated and leaves from there...

Delhi,iyer house:-

Madhvi:-vandu aaj bhalla pariwar aa rha hai apne bete ke liye ishu ko pasand karne...tum ishu ko kuch mat batana warna wo emergency ka bahana bana kar bhag jayegi...jab wo clinic se aaye tum use peeche wale gate se upar room me le jana aur kisi tarah taiyar karke neeche le aana...mujhe pata hai murgan ne ham dono pariwaro ka milna kismat me likha hai...

Vandu:- han amma...

Mr iyer:- madhvi tum theek kah rhi ho ,ishu aur Raman jab 5 sal k the tab business loss k Karan tumhe aur mujhe chennai Jana pada...ishu aur vandu ko soumya k pas delhi me chhodkar...ittefaq dekho ishu aur Raman same class me same school me pade hai...par ham log bhallasth se contact me nhi rab paye to ye log bhi ekdusre ko nhi jan ske...

Madhvi:- par ab to jaan lenge...aiyoo kadawale ye rishta pakka karwado...

At eevening bhalla family arrives at iyer house ,all the seniors hug each other...and youngers greets them...
Raman was missing...so was ishita...

Madhvi:- toshi Raman kha hai??

Toshiji:- use kuch kam aa gya 15-20 minute me aa jayega...tune apni ishu ko kha chhupa kar rkha hai???

Madhvi:- wo bus clinic se aa hi rhi hogi...

Vandu was waiting at back gate ,ishu arrives and park her car...vandu drags her to her room...

Ishu:-akka kya kar rhe ho kha le ja rhe ho...

Vandu:-tu fatafat taiyar ho ja amma appa k friends aaye hai...

Ishu:- to amma appa k friends k liye me kyu taiyar hu ...aise hi chalti hu theek to hai...

Vandu:- terrace par dinner ki preparation karna hai appa ne bola hai ...terrace par party hogi tu bas ye chhudidar pahan le...
Ishita thinks something is fishy but she starts getting ready refusing her thoughts...

Meanwhile Raman arrives at iyer house ...vandu tells amma that ishu is going on the terrace if she has come downstairs ,she will surely refuse in front of everyone...but if she will see Raman only I m sure she will fall for him...

Madhvi:- Raman ishu terrace par hai...tum log pehle ek dusre se bat karlo...baki logo se ishu dinner k waqt mil legi...Raman nodds in irritation and vandu takes him to the terrace...

Raman waits on terrace...there was beautiful garden on terrace and see through glass separates the stairs to terrace...vandu takes ishu from her room to stairs and say:- ishu tujhe dekhne ladka aaya hai upar terrace par baitha hai agle aadhe ghante Tak tujhe usse bat karni hai...ishu try to speak something but in the next moment vandu locks the door that locks ishu in the stairs now she has no option other than going upwards to the terrace...she slowly climb the stairs and see through the glass...

Her eyes spread wide in anticipation... Her best dream and worst nightmare was standing at the terrace corner and taking drags of cigarette...
She can't belive that Raman Kumar bhalla was standing at her terrace waiting for her...
She close her eyes and think something and goes toward Raman slowly...

Raman sense footsteps and drop cigarette immediately... and turn ,he gets mesmerised with sight... A beautiful girl coming towards him wearing a green blue chhudidar looking completely divine...

Raman(St):- oh my God ,she is beautiful yar...but Raman control tujhe use mana karna hai...wait I know her ...ooo she is that pagal madrasan from school who used to stare at me all the time...ye to pagal ho rhi hogi yar mujhse shadi karne k liye...par us waqt to ye kafi moti thi ,glasses bhi lagati thi but now looking so hot...ek kam karta hu abhi na nhi khta ek do din ise ghoomaunga phir mana kar dunga...han ye sahi hai
Suddenly he realised she was standing in front of him...he was about to say something but than he heard her say:-

I don't want to marry you...

Raman's eyes got wide in surprise and he exclaimed :-what????????

Ishita:- I am not interested in marriage...

Raman stammered and say:- u didn't recognise me I am Raman bhalla...youngest ceo of India ,business head of Mumbai entrepreneur association ...we were in same school...

Ishita:-ohh that's good for u..but I can't marry u...I m not interested

Raman :- u must be drunk otherwise no girl in her sane mind say no to me...

Ishita:- I don't drink ,I am a successful doctor by profession and I live my life on my own rules...I don't want guys like u in my life now if u have asked enough questions to me ,please let me go and inform everybody that I am not interested in you...

Raman got stunned there he was planning to refuse this girl and here she is going to reject him in front of everyone...he does not think something like it in his wildest of dreams...or I should say nightmares...

Ishita was going to stand up but Raman stops her and say:-hamare parents friends hai tum aise mana karogi rude lagega...me neeche jata hu aur apne ghar ja kar me apne parents ko bta dunga...

Ishu:-do u think I am that stupid???tum phle neeche chale jaoge
aur sabse kah doge that u have rejected me isse tumhara ego bach jayega...but i m not letting u do that..

Raman flinched his fist in anger but he controls it and make other plan-ok ham sath me chalte hai aur sabse kahenge ki ham ek do meeting k bad decide karenge...

Ishita thinks something and say:- OK only one meeting kal mere clinic k pas cofee house me...then I will say no...

Raman got irritated and say:- to me bhi tumse shadi karne k liye nhi mar rha...
Raman stares her from top to bottom and thinks ye khud ko kya samajhti hai ,han beautiful hai but mujhse shadi karne k liye models aur actresses bhi pagal ho jati hai...ye kya hai.kal coffee shop me Milne do phir pata karta hun...

Ishita(St):- I can't belive mene ye kiya...aaj Raman Kumar bhalla ko mene reject kar diya...aaj mene apne dil ko chhup kara kar dimag douda liya..I am so proud of myself...but pagalpanti bhi kar di kal kyu Jane ko han kara...koi bat nhi iske jaise logo ko achchhe se janti hu me...ye itna seedha kyu ban rha hai kal pata karti hu...
They both go downstairs and tell their decision to their parents...bhalls and iyer got happy but ishita stops them and say she has not decided anything now so don't be so happy...Raman look at her irritatingly...

Let's see which turn comes in their lives at the coffeehouse...

To be continued...

Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago

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