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EPISODE-271(BY MANSI)

Scene-1

GH
Viren sitting on a chair while vimla brings him some tea.
"Kya soch rhe hai aap" vimla
"Kuch nhi.." viren
"Dolly k baare m " -vimla
"Hmmm... soch rha hu dolly ka future kya hoga... uske aane wale bachhe ka kya hoga... kaise karegi vo ye sab" -viren
" jo hua achha hi hua... aap hi sochie kaise rehti vo sumit jaise aadmi k sath..." vimla
"Maine hi sumit ko pehchanne m galti kar di... agar hm pehle hi dolly ki baat sun lete... ya sumit ko uski galtiyo ki saza dete to shayad jo hua vo na hota.."-viren
"Mai samjhti hu aap kya keh rhe h... par ek tarah se to achha hi hua na... kya bharosa us sumit ka... kya pta vo kbhi badlta hi nhi..."- Vimala

"Ha papa... ma thik kh rhi h"- umesh entered into their room.
"Are umesh... tu kab aaya"- vimla asked
"Gehno ki delivery achhe se ho gyi na.."-viren
" Ha papa...sab achhe se ho gya h aap tension mat lo... na dukan ki ur na dolly ki"-umesh said sitting on his knees in front of viren.
"Kaise chinta nhi karu umesh... beti h vo meri"-viren said still worried
"Papa... vo thik hai...ur hm sab hai na uske sath... uski khushi se bad kar to kuch nhi h na hmare lie..."-umesh
"Par umesh..."- viren
"Par var kya papa... mai hu .. aap hai... hm sab hai uska ur uske bachhe ka khayal rakhne k lie... vo kuch karna chahti h papa... kuch banna chahti h life m... "-umesh
" Mai janta hu... samjhta hu sab isilie maine uske lie nya job bhi dhund lia h par vo kaise karegi ye sab... kaise sahegi akele sab kuch bus isi ki chinta h mjhe... " -viren
" Aap itni chinta kyu karte hai... vo koi bachhi nhi h usne koi decision lia h to soch k hi lia hoga... aapko bus uske decision p bharosa karna h... vo to aap kar hi rhe hai na... ur apne uske lie job bhi dhund lia h to isse achha ur kya ho sakta h .. ur agar kabhi bhi koi bhi prblm hui to mai hu na mai apni behen ko kabhi koi takleef nhi hone dunga..."-umesh said
" itna bharosa to aap karte h na mjhpe"-umesh asked him.
Viren and vimla was happy hearing their son.
" Chal ja apna kaam kar... bus badi badi baatein hi karega ya kuch kaam bhi"-viren said smiling and putting his hand on his head. Vimla too kissed his forehead, blessing him. Umesh hold their hands and assured them.

Scene -2

Mopan's room

Mohan-"rupan yaar ek baat kehni thi.."
Rupan-"bolo"
Mohan- "kal to tmne dil hi jeet lia... mai bhot khush hu ki tmne apni galti sudhari"
Rupan- " mjhe meri galti pta chal gyi h mohan islie maafi maangi thi maine par.."
Mohan-"par kya..."
Rupan - " par mai ab bhi apni betio k lie utni hi pareshan hu jitni pehle thi... jo kuch bhi is waqt ghar m ho rha h uska kya asar padega meri bachhio ki zindgi p"
Mohan-"kya yaar rupan tm bhi... tmhari gaadi kewal apni betio par hi atki rehti h.. kabhi to kisi ur k baare m bhi socho"
Rupan-" sochti hu islie kh rhi hu... dolly k divorce se kya kirti ki life p koi fark nhi padega ur jwalu vo bhi to badi ho rhi h.."
Mohan - " rupan vo meri b betia hai ur mjhe bhi unki utni hi fikar h jitni tmhe... par iske lie hm dolly k sath to koi nainsafi nhi kar sakte h na... uske lie jo achha h vo ho rha h ur kirti ur jwalu k lie jo best hoga mai vo karunga"
Rupan-"par mai bhi to..."
Mohan - " mai janta hu tm un dno ki bhot fikar karti ho ur isme kuch galat nhi h... par kewal apni betio ka future achha karne k lie hm kisi ur ka future to nhi barbad kar sakte na.. thoda socho is baare m.. ur waise b abhi to kirti wapas hi aae hai... tm abhi se itni chinta mat karo.
Rupan was not yet convinced but still didn't said anything while mohan smiled at her taking a file in his hand and leave the room.


Scene-3

Dolly has just hanged up the phone when viren entered her room with a box of chocolates in his hand. "Mai andar aa jau" viran asked.
" Are papa aap ko puchne ki koi jarurat h kya. .. "- dolly said.
"Dolly... vo... m so sorry beta... maine jo kuch b kha ya kia us sabk ke lie sorry"- viren apologise
"Papa ye aap kya kh rhe h... u don't need to say sorry to me for anything.."-dolly said tears in her eyes.
" par beta galti ki maafi to maangni hi chahie... maine tjhe samajhne m thodi der kardi... par now I want to support u in ur decision thqts why I have founded a job fir u"- viren said nervously.
"Job... sach papa..." - dollybwas excited about it.
"Ha beta... interior designing ki job h... tu karegi? "- he asked.
" Of course papa... aap best ho... I luv u so much..."- dolly said hugging her father.
"I luv u too beta... chal isi khushi m le apni fav chocolates kha... mai laya hu tere lie"- viren huggedvher and stuffed a chocolate in her mouth.

Scene-4

Kirti and all the cousins were in her room giggling and talking stuff.
Kirti-" so guys what's the hot news of gangwals house"
Jwalu-" hot news.. hot news to ye hai ki badi hi koshish k baad aakhir kaar kabir jiju ne nishu bro ko ur nishu bro ne kabir jiju ko ilu bol hi dia.."
All the cousins giggled at it while nisha and kabir blushed.
Nisha hit jwalu on her head playfully. While dolly was busy laughing kabir said "tu kya itta has rhi h dolly... ye bhi to btao kirti ko ki tm ur saurav mil k dosa bna rhe ho".
Now it was dolly's turn to blush.
" dosa???..." kirti asked confused.
" Are ha bhai... sali ji... apne hone wale jiju ko bhi dekh lo... are saurav apna intro to do hone wali sali ko..." kabir said playfully.
Saurav blushed too at this while everyone started teasing dosa.
Kirti had a wierd expression on her face. She felt a little odd hearing dosa union. Later in the day... jwalu told her the whole saurabh- dolly story. She didn't seem to be much happy about it. While here umesh who also have came to know about dosa through aman was not feeling great about it but he decided to not to say anything at this point of time.

Scene - 5

Dolly and saurabh were on terrace.
Dolly-" ek good news du saurav"
Saurav -" tune ha bol dia h isse bdi good news ur kya ho sakti h mere lie"
Dolly blushed a little-" ohho... mai to tjhe ye bta rhi thi ki papa ne mere lie ek bhot badia job dhunda h.. interior designing ka..."
Saurav-"par dolly... iski kya jarurat h hmara business to achha chal rha h na...fir"
Dolly-" ohho saurav... business to chalta hi rhega na but ye job mjhe achha financial support dega.. islie mai ye job karna chahiti hu.."
Saurav - " par yaar tu apni health ko b to dekh... vaise hi teri tabiyat thik nhi rehti.. mjhe lagta h tjhe ye job nhi karna chahie"
Dolly- " are par is job m kya prblm h yaar.. official job hai office m baithna h... kaunsa bahar ghumna h... ur mai apna khayal rkh sakti hu samjha." She was getting angry.
Saurav- " Dekh dolly mai jo b kh rha hu tere lie hi kh rha hu na yaar... mai nhi chahta ki tu ye job kare..."
Dolly-" oe... mai ye job karungi suna tne.. tjhe maine pehle hi sab bol dia tha na fir kyu natak kar rha h..."
Saurav-" yaar dolly tu meri baat to sun"
But dolly stromed of from there being angry at him.

Just den nisha came..." kya hua saurav.. dolly di itte gusse m kyu thi" she asked.
" Kya btau nisha yaar..." and he told her everything about their argument.
"He bhagwan... to yha khada khada kya kar rha h... jaake mna unhe... waise b unhone tjhe pehle hi bola tha ki vo kuch karna chahti h ... ur tu unhe hmesha support karta h na to fir."she said.
Tu sahi kh rhi h nishu.." saying this saurav goes to dolly's room.

Dolly's room
Dolly is marching in the room angry at saurav and talking to herself "samjhta kya h khud ko... pyaar karta h to ese hukum chalaega..."
Saurav was at her doorstep. He came in and turned her around to face him.
"Koi hukum nhi chala rha hu mai tjpe dolly... esa kabhi sochna bhi mat"
Dolly looked at him.
" aur m sorry yaar... mai bus tjhe apna view bta rha tha... tjhe jo karna h tu kar mai tjhe kabhi nhi rokunga...mai tere har decision m tere sath hu... maine kal bhi kha tha ur aaj bhi kh rha hu ye baat..."
Dolly's anger flew away listening to him. She hugged him and he reciprocated back whispering I luv u in her ears.


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AuthorS note- hi guys I know maine 30 min k epi ko 45 min ka bna dia... I have written first time something on other characters. Generally I write on nibir only so don't know what have I written but do tell me how was it.


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EPISODE 272
By
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Scene 1

(At KNH)

Kabir-finally ghar toh aya...waise nisha...nisha...nisha...kya hai yaar main poore raaste baat karta aya hoon aur tu chup hai

Nisha(in an angry tone)-agar main chup hoon so its very obvious that i don't want to talk(she opened the lock n they entered inside)

Kabir-baat nhi karni hai...oye ab tujhe kya hua...ab to maine ILU bhi bol diya

Nisha-toh ehsaan kiya kya

Kabir-what the hell...nisha r u mad...tu pagal toh nhi ho gyi hai...kyun jhagad rhi hai...stop fighting yaar

Nisha(in an irritated voice)-mujhe accha lagta hai ladna...this is my favourite hobby...do u have any problem with that

Kabir-mujhe aisa kyun lag rha hai ki tu mujhse gussa hai

Nisha-lag rha hai...tujhe abhi bhi lag rha hai...teri to na tu rukk

Kabir-omg nisha tu kahaan jar hi hai...what r u doing yaar

(nisha came back to the hall...holding a bedsheet n pillow)

Nisha-hum dono andar ek saath nhi so sakte

Kabir-par kyun...dekh i don't want u to sleep in the hall

Nisha-oye main kyun soungi tu hall main soyega

Kabir-phir thik hai...wait kyaa...r u mad or what...m not going to sleep here

(nisha went back to their room kabir followed her but she closed the door on his face)

Kabir-abey bta toh maine kiya kya hai

Nisha-tu bhaad mein ja...bewkoof gadha kahin ka

Kabir(talking to himself)-room se bahar toh ILU bolne ke pehle bhi nhi nikala tha...ILU ki spelling galat thi kya...nhi yaar spelling toh boli hi nhi sirf ILU bola...nisha open the door yaar

Nisha-hall mein so varna ghar ke bahar sulaungi

Kabir-good night nisha hall is best

(at morning nisha came to the hall ne saw kabir he was sleeping like a small baby)

Nisha-pagal hai ye...but i love him...nisha tu bhul gyi kya kiya hai isne

(she went to the kitchen n preapared the break fast)

(after half n hour,kabir woke up)

Kabir-aaj bohot jada nhi so gya main...yeh nisha kahaan hai...nisha...nisha(suddenly he saw a paper)yeh kya hai

Kabir,

Main dukaan ja rhi hoon tu nasta kar lio...shaam ko milte hain

Nisha

Kabir-yeh isey hua kya hai...mujhe bhi ghar jana hai BB ne bulaya hai phir wo London ja rhe hain

Scene 2

(at malhotra constructions)

Dolly-thank u gods finally aaj mera pehla din hai sab aache se ho jaye bas

Receptionist-hllo mam kya naam bataya aapne

Dolly-my name is dolly gangwal...here is my appointment letter

Receptionist-ohh so u r the new interior designer...mam mr samar Sharma is ur boss but today he is not here so just go n meet our MD

Dolly-Sidha MD

Receptionist-yeah mam...Mr adhiraj malhotra aka AR...aditi inhein AR ka office dikha do

Aditi-lets go

Dolly-hmm(while walking)kafi bada office hain nhi...ohh hii m dolly gangwal new interior designer

Aditi-ji...hi m aditi...my work is to chk the raw material...n nice to meet u...yeah that one...the second cabin wo AR sir ka hai

Dolly-okk...thanks bye aditi...nice to meet u too

(outside the cabin)

Peon-mam aap kahaan jar hi hain

Dolly-sir se milne

Peon-wo office main nhi hain...aap 5 minute wait kijiye

Dolly-ji(she heard her phone's ringtone)hey baghwan phone hi silent nhi kiya(she came out from the corridor n saw the caller id it was umesh)ji umesh bhaiya

Umesh-tu pohoch gyi na...sab thik toh hain na

Dolly-no worries bhaiya...everything is fine main aapse baad mein baat karoon

Umesh-hmm chal bye

(dolly felt something,she saw the almirah which was placed there is falling)

Dolly-yeh kya hai(she was freezed n not even able to move...she was scared...shevclosed her eyes n then she heard a voice)

Person-what the hell...ohh god(he stop the almirah to fall by his hand)open ur eyes

Dolly(she opened her eyes n then she saw a guy who was trying to stop that falling almirah)-aap thik toh hain

Person-hato iske niche se...tum pagal ho kya khud bhi marogi mujhe bhi marwogi...ohh god stop staring me move i said

(dolly moved out from there...n some people came there)

Peon-AR sir aap thik hain

Dolly-aap AR hain

AR-tum kon ho n just tell me one thing r u blind...what were u doing(in an angry tone)

Dolly-sir main wo darr gyi thi

AR-tumhare darne se aaj kya ho jata do u have any idea...n lal sing i told u iss almirah ka ek leg kharab hai isey change karwao yeh yahaan kyun hain abhi tak

Peon-sorry sir karwata hu

AR-abhi karwao...n mis glass doll who the hell r u

DOLLY-dolly gangwal...the new

AR-new interior designer...u r mr viren gangwal's daughter

Dolly-ji

AR(almost controlling his anger)-come to my cabin right now

Scene-3

(at GH)

Saurav-yeh kya hai yaar...yeh sab main akele kaise karunga...yeh dolly bhi na isey kya zaroorat thi kahin aur job karne ki...kuch bhi samajh nhi a rha

(kirti entered)

Kirti-hii saurav

Saurav-ohhh hi miss blah...terrice par kaise

kirti-shut up ok...m not miss blah m kirti

Saurav-i know u r miss kirti blah gangwal

Kirti-tum na...accha pareshaan kyun ho

Saurav-yaar samajh nhi a rha in duptton par konsa colour accha lagega

Kirti-itni si baat...ok give me these dupttas i'll help u

Saurav-u sure

Kirti-arey 100%

(at Malhotra construction)

AR-so miss dolly gangwal...as u know that u r the new interior designer...so u r going to design the interior of the flats...tumhe dekhna hoga ki sab kuch coustmer ke taste ke hisaab se ho

Dolly-i know sir insaan apna sara paisa ek ghar banana mein lga deta hai...aur wo ghar uska sapna hota hai

AR-exactly aur hum unko uss sapne ko saakaar karte hain...so for today mr Sharma is on leave toh mrs sen will tell u ur work...go n meet her

Scene 4

(on lunch at KNH)

Nisha-yeh kahaan hai

Kabir-yahin hu pehle tu bta tujhe kya hua hai

Nisha-kuch nhi

(kabir hold her hand n ask)

Kabir-bol na nishu

Nisha-kya bolu main...u don't love me kabir...tu nhi karta mujhse pyar

Kabir-karta hoon

Nisha-isiliye chod kar chala gya

Kabir-wo mujhe laga

Nisha(almost in tears)-tujhe laga...kya laga kabir...ki main viraj ke saath khush rhungi...kabir tu aise hi chala gya mujhe chodkar...hamara rishta todkar...why kabir...u dint think about me na...tune socha bhi nhi mujhe kaisa lagega...tu bas chala gya...mujhse apne dil ki baat kahe bina

Kabir-toh tune bhi toh nhi kaha

Nisha-main kehti ya tu kehta...tu meri mom ko bol sakta hai...mere papa ko bol sakta hai par mujhe nhi

Kabir-darr gya tha main kahin tune na keh diya toh(wiping her tears)but ab tujhe chodkar kahin nhi jaunga main hamesha tere pass rahunga

(kabir kissed har forehead and hugged her)

Nisha-main tujhe jaane hi nhi dungi(and she hugged him back)




Precap:

This time the memory rushed back and she felt suffocated. Her heart beat increased and she could feel herself sweat. Remember the last time she was pinned down that too forcefully she screamed.

"Kabir!", she let out in a screech and pushed him off.



I hope this precap is what you are expecting. It's exact lines from tmrw's epi.😊

I'm writing tmrw



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EPISODE-273(BY LEKHA)


It was a long day for Nisha and Kabir. Kabir had gone to get some water while Nisha was digging out a new blanket from the cupboard. She was in her pajamas and was rummaging through the cupboard when she came across her blue box. The same blue box where she stored all her memories. She smiled remembering how she had maintained it as a kid.

The raven head opened the box and started looking through the things when something blue caught her eye. It was the blue badge. The second she laid eyes on it a series of unpleasant moments. She picked it up causing the memory to rush back, this time more vivid.

"Nisha?", Kabir called out as he entered the room.

The young girl closed the box and put it away but the badge ended up in her hand.

"What's that?", he asked.

"Nothing", she said immediately and hid the badge behind her.

"Come on", Kabir said playfully and walked towards her. He tried to pry it out of her hands which was behind her and his beautiful wife ended up in his arms. Nisha tried to move away from Kabir and they both ended up falling on the bed, Kabir above Nisha.

"Kabi-", Nisha said but she was cut off by a kiss on her cheeks.

She felt blood raise to her face. Kabir leaned in and kissed her neck ending an electric spark through nisha. She let her guard down and Kabir took her hands from behind her and pined her down, gently. Nisha who had her eyes closed opened it to find the badge in one of her hands.

This time the memory rushed back and she felt suffocated. Her heart beat increased and she could feel herself sweat. Remember the last time she was pinned down that too forcefully, she screamed.

"Kabir!", she let out in a screech and pushed him off.

Kabir was shocked and hurt. Nisha was sweating profusely and her breath was audible.

"Nisha. Are you okay?", he asked , his chocolate brown eyes filled with concern.

He moved closer to her.

"Kabir stay away", she said

The guy was confused and hurt.

"Nisha, what happened?", he asked, "Talk to me."

"Kabir. Just stay away from me.", she demanded.

Kabir lost his cool.

"What happened?", he asked, annoyed.

"Nothing", she said.

"Stop it Nisha. It's me. What is it that you don't want to tell me about? I'm you husband."

"That doesn't mean I have to tell you."

Nisha regretted the words the minute it came out of her mouth. Kabir on the other hand lost his patience.

"Fine", he said, "Have the room to yourself as I'm not supposed to near you."

He stormed out with a bedsheet and pillow ad settled on the couch. Nisha couldn't keep it in anymore and tears flowed down her cheeks. She didn't know what to do. She was scared that if she told Kabir the truth he might leave her. That night she cried herself to sleep.

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"Thank you so much Kirti", Saurav said, "I'm very bad at things like colours of dupatta."

"Hey", Kirti said, "You don't have to say thank you. This is what I'm born for. Fashion, cloths...this is all part of me."

Saurav smiled as Kirti expressed her passion towards fashion. Seeing her excitement an idea clicked in Saurav's head.

"Kirti?", he said, "Will you be interested in helping me and Dolly with the business? You are really good at this."

"Will Dolly di be okay with that?", she asked.

A part of her wanted to join in because she loves to work with cloths but another part of her wasn't comfortable. She still felt a little off about Saurav and Dolly's relationship and thought being around them together will not help.

"I'll call her and talk to her and I'll get back to you", Saurav said, his excitement clearly shone on his face, "This will be great."

Kirti forced a smile to match saurav's excitement and was almost successful.

"Okay", she said, "I need to go now. I've some important work."

Saurav nodded and she left.

For the next few minutes Saurav was trying to call dolly but no response. She decided to go meet her personally and headed to her room. He was in the corridor to her room when he noticed that she was busy noting down something from a file. He thought that he might interrupt something if he goes in and called once more. The phone lay net to Dolly but she didn't look at it even once. Saurav frowned

"Why isn't she answering", he thought.

Just then Dolly picked up her phone and after a brief glance she laid it down. Saurav was sure she'd call him back now but she didn't. The young woman switched of her light, closed her door and snoozed off.

"What happened?", Saurav thought, "Why is se avoiding me."

He had a bad feeling about this new job Dolly is doing. He felt like things are going out of place.

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The next day morning Kabir was still upset and worried.

"Kabir, relax", Ramesh told him.

The frustrated man was walking to and fro in Ramesh's room. Laxmi sat on the bed with a worried look. With the pace Kabir was walking around his shoes would wear out.

"Kabir", Laxmi said, trying to sound calm "Tell us what exactly happened?"

Kabir stopped on his tracks and looked at Laxmi. He noticed the crease of worry on her forehead.

"Nothing ma",he said immediately. He didn't want Laxmi to get worried. He remembers the time when Laxmi got a panic attack when he and Nisha joked about divorce in front of her.

"Kabir", Ramesh said, "Tell us. We are here for you."

Kabir did want to talk to Ramesh but he didn't know how to tell him without worrying Laxmi. He decided to leave the room. Laxmi was about to follow when Ramesh stopped her.

"I'll talk to him", he said.

Kabir was in the courtyard. It was isolated as the others were busy at the shop, home or elsewhere.

"Kabir", Ramesh said as he sat next to him, "What's bothering you?"

"I have a feeling Nisha is having second thoughts about us", the tensed dancer admitted.

"Why would you think that?", Ramesh asked.

"Well",Kabir said and paused, "Yesterday night she treated me like a stranger and told me to stay away from her."

"She must have been in a bad mood", Ramesh said and smiled.

"And she was holding this", Kabir said and showed Ramesh the blue badge.

"I took it when she wasn't looking", Kabir explained, " Who's is this?"

Ramesh stared at the badge and then at Kabir. He remembered talking about a blue badge to Laxmi but he wasn't completely sure if this was the same one.

Kabir noticed Ramesh's expression and repeated his question. Now he was getting worried.

"You should talk to Nisha", Ramesh said.

"What is it papa?",Kabir asked.

"Only she can tell you Kabir", said the wise man, "But you should make sure you do it smoothly. Don't force her."

Kabir nodded and Ramesh left for his music class

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"Umesh bhaiyya", Kirti called out to Umesh who was the terrace. She joined him with two cups of coffee. He smiled and took one.

"It feels good to be back home, right?", he said and Kirti hummed in response.

"So much has changed", Kirti said.

"Yeah", Umesh said, "Dolly is going to be a single mother."

"She's getting married to Saurav later right?", Kirti asked, hiding the uneasiness in her voice.

"You think it's weird too, don't you?", Umesh said. He could read his sister like an open book.

"No I don-", Kirti stopped half way.

"What do you mean me too?", she asked.

"I feel they moved so fast?", Umesh said, "And with all that Dolly has been through she's emotionally vulnerable and shouldn't take such decisions."

The duo was silent for a minute.

"Should we talk to tauji?", Kirti asked.

"No", Umesh replied," If we talk to papa then things can get ugly. Maybe we should talk to Ramesh chachu first."

Kirti nodded in agreement.

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Kabir entered the house . Nisha was asleep when he left but he noticed that the bedroom door was open. He wanted to go in and talked to her but he stopped mid-way. He could remember Nisha's face clearly from the previous night. She looked so scared as if stranger was going to hurt her. As if an unfamiliar man had invaded her personal space. As if Kabir would hurt her. The ebony head closed his eyes not wanting to think further. The look on her face had hurt him enough.

He opened it to find Nisha looking at him from the kitchen. He looked at her briefly and headed towards the bedroom to freshen up.

While Kabir was in the shower Nisha recollected Laxmi's words. The raven head had talked to her mother on phone while Kabir was away.

"He deserves to know Nishu", she had said.

"What if he leaves me because of it", Nisha asked.

"He loves you way too much to do that", her mother had told her, "You can tell him whenever you want but he needs to know"

Nisha knew that her mother was right. She had to tell him and she had to tell him tonight. She didn't want her past to come in the way of her relationship again.

When Kabir was back at the dining table after his shower he found that the table wasn't set for dinner. He looked around for Nisha and saw her come out of their room. He didn't know what mood she was in but by the look on her face she seemed nervous. He wanted to go to her and ask her but feared to see that dreaded look on her face again. Nisha handed him a book that looked like a scrapbook. He looked at her once before opening it. The articles and photos of a smiling young Nisha made his lip curve upward.

"You were cute even back then", he said.

The next second he realized he might have upset her and looked at his wife but she smiled at him. Her smile had a tinge of nervousness.

Kabir went on and found the torn and scratched pages. He looked a little shocked and worried. Nisha took the seat next to him.

"It was 2006 and Dolly d and I went to Pilani Sport Meet...", She started.

Kabir put the book down and gave his undivided attention to the beautiful woman in front of him. Nisha went on to tell him about the whole incident. The closer she got to the worse part the harder it was for her to stay calm. Kabir sat there and with every progress in the story his hart clenched more and when she broke down his heart broke to a million pieces.

Kabir wanted to hug Nisha but was scared to do so. He never thought that the strong woman he knew before can be this vulnerable. He hesitated to hug her in case she wasn't okay with it. Nisha on the other hand felt revealed. The memory had brought bag fear, anger and pain but somehow It had decreased when she realized that she had told Kabir. She knew Kabir won't near her now but she wasn't sure if it was because he didn't want to be with her anymore or he was scared. She wrapped her hands around him and cried into his chest.

"Kabir. Please don't leave me because of this", she said amidst her tears.

Kabir was surprised that she hugged him but he was even more surprised that she thought he'd leave her. He broke the hug and made her look at him. He cupped her face in his hands.

"Nisha", he said and paused, trying to contemplate how to tell her.

"It's in the past", he continued", and it's not your fault. Even now you are the most important thing to me. In fact I love you more. Not only that, my respect for you has increased beyond saturation level. I am still the luckiest guy in the world and nothing can make me stay away from you ever."

Kabir noticed that a smile dawned on the tear stained face.

"We'll get through this", he assured her, "We always do."

Nisha hugged him tight and he returned the hug. Kabir finally let go of the strong faade he had put up and let a tear escape his eyes.

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AN(Author's note): The episode is dedicated to the character of Nisha because I had seen the pilani track once more before writing this. After watching I remembered how much I love Nisha's character. A special thanks to remain for telling me about the blue badge. I hope you guys like it. Do like and comment😳
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EPISODE-274 (BY SHIBU)


Scene 1


*Next day*


Kabir was thinking about Nisha.

"Nisha ne itna sab kuch sehen kiya... aur mujhe koi idea tak nahi tha... Nishu has gone through too much... Usse iss dard se bahar laana hi sabse best hoga... Par kaise?"

He suddenly felt something hot touch his hand. He looked up and saw Nisha with 2 cups of coffee. Telling about the worst incident of her life had made her dull, still she was faking her sadness with a smile.

They had the coffee with a cold silence surrounding them. Kabir couldn't bring himself to say anything to her. Neither did Nisha expect anything. Because she knew, her Kabir was by her side, no matter what. Both finished their coffee and Nisha was about to leave the room when she felt a grip on her wrist. She turned and looked at Kabir who stood up from the bed.

Kabir- I promise you Nisha, tujhe aaj ke baad koi taqleef nahi dunga...

He tucked some strands of hair that were covering her face and walked away.

Nisha smiled.

Nisha- Main jaanti hoon Kabir, you will always be there for me..

.

Scene 2


Jwala was sitting with her Math note book and had lines of tension on her forehead. Suddenly she heard Laxmi scream on top of her voice and scold Bunty. Shaking her head in amusement, she went in the corridor and looked at the mother-son duo.

Jwala- Kya hua Chachi?

Laxmi- (angrily) School se phone aaya tha iske, Math test mein 20 mein se sirf 4 mark score kiya hai isne... (to Bunty) kya hai yeh Bunty, sirf 4 marks?

Jwala- Laxmi, relax me... main iski help kar doon?

Laxmi looked at her niece happily.

Laxmi- Thank you Jwalu, waise toh main hi iski padhai leti, par abhi mujhe Vimla Didi ke saath market jaana hai...

Jwala- Koi baat nahi, main isse aaj se math padhaungi...

Bunty looked at the two with least interest and then looked at the cricket bat that was in his hand.

Jwala- Bunty, chale, sirf ek ghante ke liye main tujhe padhaungi, thikh hai...

Bunty smiled happily.

Bunty- (in mind) Maa ke lectures se toh behtar hi hoga.

They walked in Bunty's room. Jwala started explaining to him, but he was more busy in fiddling with his other books, looking around etc.

Jwala-(who had no clue what her cousin was doing) Bunty, 2 multiplied by 6 kitna hua?

Bunty-(without thinking) 4.

Jwala looked up from the book.

Jwala- 2 multiplied by 6 is equal to 12 yaar.

Bunty apologized and then said.

Bunty- Jwala di, kya hum baaki ki padhai kal kar sakte hai?

Jwala- Par abhi toh 15 minute bhi nahi hue...

Bunty- Mujhe bahut bore ho raha hai... main apse baad mein baat karta hoon...

Before Jwala could speak further, Bunty was out of her sight. She closed the books in frustration and left for her own room.


Scene 3


Dolly sat on the chair all tired up. From morning she was busy with her work and finally she had found some moments of peace.

Dolly- kya yaar, kahan phass gayi main... Yeh office nahi, rakshason ka palace hai, aur inke king hai Mr. Adhiraj, aisa lag raha jaise Hitler ke jamaane se aaye ho...

She was startled to hear a voice, stood up from the chair and turned to face Adhiraj.

Adhiraj- Kya kaha tumne?

Dolly- (fumbling for words) Woh mera matlab, sir woh aap...

Adhiraj-(sternly) Main tumhe demon lagta hoon?

Dolly-(without thinking) haan.

Adhiraj-(shocked and angry) Kya?

Dolly- I mean na...

Adhiraj shot her an angry look.

Adhiraj- Whatever...

He left angrily from there.


Scene 4


Kabir- Nishu, aaj main tujhe ek acchi si movie dikhaunga...

Nisha- (happily) kaunsi?

Kabir- Raja ki aayega baarat...

Nisha-(shocked) Kya? Woh toh purani movie hai Kabir...

Kabir-(making baby faces) Par mujhe woh dekhni hai, please, please, please, please, please, pretty please...

Nisha- Thikh hai, cute act ki dukaan...

They watched the movie on Kabir's Laptop. Finally that scene started which Kabir wanted Nisha to see. Shaddab Khan raping Rani Mukherjee. He looked at Nisha's face to examine her expression. He wanted to see if she was scared or uncomfortable. But more than fear, he saw anger and disgust clear on her face.

Kabir- (in his mind) Iska matlab hai that she is moving on form the incident.


Scene 5


Umesh was writing his latest recipe in his diary. He smiled as he remebred Nisha and Kabir's halwa-kheer combo. Aman entered the room and saw that Umesh was upset.

Aman- Kya hua Laddu, tum pareshaan lag rahe ho?

Umesh- Nahi, kuch hai hai Aman... Woh main bas... (he couldn't speak further)

Aman saw the diary and understood what was going in his mind.

Aman- Laddoo, sab kuch thikh ho jaayega... Tum tension mat lo...

Umesh- (holding her hand) I just wished ki mera ek restaurant ho...Jaha par hum dono ek saath cooking kare... Sab humare baare mein proud feel kare, par...

Aman- Don't worry, waahe guru ji hai na...

Umesh smiled and nodded.

Aman- (trying to cheer him up)Chalo, aaj hum miya-beewi koi acchi si dish banate hai...

Umesh- Haan, hum aaj sab ke liye dinner banayenge...


Scene 6


*Night*

Kabir was happy that his plan was successful. He walked in their bedroom to find Nisha fast asleep. He kissed her forehead and went to sleep.

*About 2 hours later*

Sweat started forming on her face as the visions of Pilani Sport Meet started flashing infront of her eyes. She clutched her duvet as she remembered the scene in the movie. The 2 visions were again and again flashing infront of her eyes. Finally a loud scream escaped for her mouth as she woke up and sat on the bed.

Kabir heard the loud scream and instantly woke up. Seeing Nisha sweating and crying made him worried and he kept his hand on her shoulder, but she pushed it off and started wailing. Kabir didn't know how to calm her down. She was breathing heavily and crying like anything.

Kabir-(cupping her face,worried) Nisha, kya hua?

Nisha finally came out of her trance and looked at her hubby who was dying of tension. She hugged him tight and started crying more. Kabir ran his hand on her back to calm her down. Finally she calmed down and broke the hug. Kabir gave her some water. After drinking water, she lied on the bed and closed her eyes. Till Kabir knew she was fast asleep, he caressed her hair. He cursed himself for his stupid idea.

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EPISODE-275(by lily)


Scene - 1 : Kabir Nisha Home

Kabir had just returned from dance rehearsals before Nisha returned from shop. Today he got the job of assistant choreographer with one of the best dance troops of Jaipur. Since he is planning to apply for London School of Dance next year again, this experience will be good for his career. Their house was still locked, so Kabir took out his key and opened the door.

Kabir (to himself) - Nisha abhi tak ghar kyu nahi aayi? Mujhe laga wo aa gayi hogi. Itni acchi news jo deni hai usey, saamne se batane ka maza hi kuch aur h! Koi baat nahi Kabire, aacha hi h... kum se kam, aaj to apne wifey ko surprise de dena !!.. Pehle h teri bewakoofi ki wajah se upset ho gyi thi ...(in a more serious tone) upar se wo Pilani wali baat ...

Kabir becomes serious and starts thinking how helpless he became when his Nisha pushed him as if he was some stranger. His mind had just turned crazy after knowing what Nisha went through in her tender age. How Nisha had a nightmare just because of his stupid idea, he should have been more sensitive towards her. But their trust each other brings magic in their relationship. Nisha needs him and he needs her too. Kabir thinks really hard and starts strolling in the drawing room.

Kabir (to himself) - Kya karun yaar Ms. J k liye!!? Kuch samajh mein nahi aa rha h, upar se bhookh bhi lag rhi h!!... (His face lits up at the thought) Arey haan! bhookh!... Wah Kabire, kya idea socha tune! Tujhe to Best Idea ka award milna chahiye...(and pats himself)... Mai na aaj uske liye kuch special banata hun... Waise bhi ladkiyo ko cook karne wale husband bahut acche lagte h... aur mai to kaafi charming bhi hu...

Scene - 2 : Umesh's room in Gangwal House

Umesh is alone inside his room writing something very intently in his diary sitting at the table. He seems very happy. Today he managed to return from the shop three hours earlier just to write this, as it is very important and he had to take a stand. The window of his room by the corridor is open for cross ventilation while the door is closed.

Umesh (to himself) : Acha hua, aaj finally Papa ki duty shop par nahi thi. Mohan Chachu se bahana bana k jaldi ghar aa gya. After all, ye sab kaam at the earliest pura to karna hi tha. Mjhe ye sab hisab ka kaam karna accha to nhi lagta, lekin agar apna sapna pura karna h to karna hi padega. Ek baar kharche ka raw structure taiyyar ho jaye, uske baad Aman aur saare cousin gang k saath discuss karunga.

Umesh continues making plan for his dream restaurant in his diary secretly in his room and continues talking to himself.

Umesh (to himself) : Chauraahe k Mr. Jatayu k shop ka rent 30,000/- per month, kitchen set-up (including bartan) ka kharcha 25,000/-, khane pine k saaman ka kharcha 7000/- per day... Arey baap re! ye to 2,10,000/- per month ho jayga... Shayad income se ye manage ho jayga, income baad me approximate karta hun...

Meanwhile...

Scene - 3 : Kitchen in Kabir Nisha Home

Kabir is in kitchen with recipe of poha open in his mobile. The entire kitchen is in mess with different skins of different vegetables spread at different angles. Few vegetables have been cut (in different sizes) and few are still left. Kabir looks at the recipe with utmost concentration.

Kabir (to himself)- Lagta hai do logon ke liye itna vegetable kaafi h (curiously looking at the veggies, not believing he cut them)...Hmm... Step 1 - Wash the poha in a colander. Poha should be moist but not mashed. Add salt and sugar and mix lightly...okay done...Step - 2 Heat oil in a pan. Add mustard seeds (he does) and when they splutter add asafetida, curry leaves and onion and saut...Oh no! ... ye asafetida kya h? Aur kitni der saut karna h bataya hi nahi, ab alarm kaise lagaunga?... Okay, mai baki sab daal deta hun aur kitchen mein dhundhta hun...yahin pe hona chahiye... Mil jayga to baad mein daal dunga, ek hi baat h...

He puts curry leaves and onions then starts looking for "asafetida", slightly panicking. By midway of his search, he gets a burning smell.

Kabir - Oh shit! yeh to jal gaya!!! Ab kya karu??... Umesh ko call karta hu... Nalayak, pehle hi call kar leta!

Scene - 4 : Umesh's room in Gangwal House

Umesh (still to himself) - Agar hum restaurant mein 2-3 helpers rakhe, nahi initially 2 hi thik hoga, nahin to kharcha badh jayga faltu mein...to 500/- per day k hisab se, 30,000/- per month... Micellaneous expenses - 14000/- per month. Toh pehle mahine k liye total investment banta h 3 lakh 9 hazar approx...

Umesh gets little tensed seeing the figure and almost goes into the trance when he gets Kabir's call and he picks without seeing the caller-id.

Kabir - Hello Umesh!

Umesh - Hello... Kabir? (recognizing voice, but still in tension)... Aur hisab kaisa h?

Kabir - (confused) Hisab?!! Umesh tu thik to h na?

Umesh - Haan haan ... Arey, matlab, Aur sahab! Kaisa h?

Kabir - Kya baat h? Itni izzat!...Pakka teri tabyat kharab nahi h..?!

Umesh - Arey yaar, tere paas meri behen h... izzat to deni padegi na...!

Kabir - Izzat to mujhe tjhe deni h... Wo kehte h na, saari duniya ek taraf aur joru ko bhai ek taraf...(Both laugh)... Accha, Umesh mjhe na teri ek choti si help chahiye. Tu mjhe pohe banane k tips de sakta h? Matlab recipe to h, par mjhe thoda detail mein puchna tha...Aur ye asafetida kya hota h?

Umesh - Kya baat h Kabir! Pohe?!...(teasing) Nishu se fir se larayi ho gayi kya?

Kabir - (blushing) Nahi...Wo... surprise plan kiya h...

Umesh - (controlling laughter) Thik h, thik h...asafetida hing ko bolte h...aur...

Umesh explains him every detail of the recipe, including time for sauting and keeps down his phone. He was about to start his accounting work when he hears his dad calling him from the window and he quickly closes his diary.

Viren - Arey Umesh, aaj tu ghar jaldi aa gaya kya? Aur room lock karke kya kar raha h?

Viren had partially seen Umesh closing the diary but Umesh smartly keeps it on the chair to hide it and opens the door. Viren comes inside.

Umesh - (to himself) Mar gaye... (to Viren) Arey papa, aap andar aaiye na...Wo papa... Aaj tab...(fumbling) ..tabyat thodi si kharab lag rahi thi isliye jaldi ghar aa gaya, socha thoda rest kar lunga to better lagega... Mai Mohan Chachu se poochkar aaya tha...

Viren - Oho!... Koi baat nahi beta tu aaram kar le, jab thik lagega to niche aa jana. Sab log niche hi h, isliye mai dekhne aa gaya. Mai bahu ya Vimla se bolke tere liye haldi wala doodh bhijwata hu...

Umesh nods his head in his usual obedient manner and Viren turns to leave when the diary on chair attracts his attention.

Viren - (suspiciously) Beta, ye... diary kaisi h??

Umesh - (to himself) phir se mar gaye! (to Viren) Papa ye Nishu ki diary h, wo isey galti se mere paas chodh k chali gayi. Wo jab milegi, usey de dunga.

Viren - Hmm... thik h beta, tum aaram karo. Mai chalta hu...

Viren leaves suspiciously eyeing the diary. Umesh heaves a sigh of relief.

Scene - 5 : Drawing room of Kabir Nisha home

It is 8:30 p.m. and Nisha is not yet home. Kabir, still in apron (he forgot to remove it in tension), is getting worried and thinking why is she not home yet. He had tried to call her but her phone is switched off. Suddenly someone rings the bell. He opens the door and it is Nisha who looking a bit lost. Kabir feels relieved to see her but wonders why she is lost. Instead of asking starts off by voicing his worries.

Kabir - Thank God, tu aa gayi! tera phone off kyu tha Nisha? Aur aaj tu itna late kaise ho gayi? Mujhe to laga tu mujhe bina bataye, mom-dad k yahan chali gayi!(pouting in fake anger)

Nisha - Sorry yaar, battery low thi pata nahi chla aur aaj shop pe kafi kaam tha. Upar se dadaji k ek important client ki beti ki shaadi h, isly uske jewellery ka making-designing sab kuch mujhe hi dekhna padh raha h! (noticing his apron and grinning) Waise Kabir...ek baat puchu?... tujhe chinta ho rahi thi na?

Kabir - Huh! mai kyu...(fumbling)..mai kyu chinta karunga?...Tu jaake fresh ho jaa, aaj dinner maine banaya h.

Nisha - (smiling at his cuteness then faking hurt) Haw! tu meri chinta nahi karta?? Jaa tu mujhse pyaar nahi karta...katti!

Kabir - Accha katti! ...(realizing)... Nahi yaar Nishu, katti nahi.!.. karta hu na mai pyaar... Maine to tere liye cook bhi kiya h...

By now Nisha is laughing her heart out. Spontaneously she hugs Kabir with all her emotions brimming in it, gives a light kiss on his cheek and goes inside to get fresh. So unpredictable, lost few moments ago and then this. Her spontaneous reaction leaves a lingering smile on his face.

Scene - 6 : Viraj's room in Vasundhara - Viraj house (not in Jaipur)

Vasundhara enters Viraj's room with a glass of milk in one hand, while Viraj is absent mindedly looking at the sky outside.

Vasudhara - Arey viraj aap yahan h? Hum apko kabse dhondh rahe h...

Viraj - Jab hum khud kisi chiz ko uthakar phek dete h, apni zindagi se alag kar dete h, tab usi ko dhoondh na hume shobha nahi deta, Mrs. Kumar.

Vasundhra - Hum tumhe kaise nahi dhundhte beta, hum maa h tumhari. Aur tumne to aaj thik se dinner bhi ni kiya. Hum doodh laye h tmhare liye, jaldi se khatam kar do.

Viraj - Aap bahut safai se jhooth bol leti h Mrs. Kumar ... Par hum koi doodh pite chote bacche nahi h, ki aap hume jo samjhana chahengi hum wo hi samjhenge. Aap hume manipulate nahi kar sakti.

Vasundhara - Beta, hum jaante h. Humne tmhare aur Kabir saath bahut galat kiya h. Plz, hume maaf kar do. Hum jaante h ki tum humse bohot naraz ho. Lekin tumhe humara point of view bhi to sunna chhiye na? Tum hume sajhne mein galati kar rhe ho. Hume safai ka mauka naa dekar, hume itni bari saza mat do, Viraj.

Viraj - Saza to hume mili thi Mrs. Kumar, aur ab mil rhi h. Khwahish to hume bhi thi ki apni maa se milein, lekin afsos, jo insaan aaj humare samne h wo humari maa h hi nahi, kyunki humari maa aisi nahi thi... Sach, jhooth or khwahishon mein bohot faasla h Mrs. Kumar... bohot faasla...

Viraj leaves the room leaving Vasundhara alone while Vasundhara keeps asking for his forgiveness and not misunderstand her intentions.

Scene - 7: KN room in Nisha Kabir Home

Nisha is in the balcony thinking about the dream about her ideal life partner that she saw...No, she was MADE to see by her Dadi and her cousins almost a year ago. Pyaar jeevan ka aisa ras h, jisey jitna chaakho utna kam; her Dadi has said to her, but she refused to believe. With cool breeze caressing her cheeks, she started imagining the dream all over again. She was in the middle of a wide road with lots of people around her, all unknown faces. She looks with anticipation at the T-point when black hi-fi car appears and stops. This time she thought, she saw glimpses of Viraj sir in the car. But she loved bikes, she had said. A bike also comes unexpectedly from the T-point following the car and stops in front of her. The young man got down from his bike, opened the chain of his red-white jacket and went on to remove his helmet. Last time when she saw this, it ended there and the young man remained unsuccessful in removing his helmet. She never saw his face. She saw it this time - it was Kabir, her Kabir. Yes, she was a little disturbed seeing the movie last night, but that didn't mean Kabir didn't love him. Perhaps he didn't know how to handle the situation and make her comfortable. Tears of happiness rolled down from her eyes. She kept her Dadi's word, she completed it - but not without Kabir.

She opens her eyes and notices Kabir watching her intently from a distance. He had come to call her for their special candle-night dinner.

Kabir - Nisha...(Kabir slowly approaches her)

Nisha - Kabir, I'm sorry. Uss din maine tere saath jaisa behave kiya mjhe nahi karna chahiye tha. Mai tujhe hurt nahin karna chahti thi.

Kabir - Nisha, mai tjhse bohut pyaar karta hu. Aur mai acche se samajhta hu ki tune jo bi kiya wo sab kyu kiya, tujhe sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi h. Aur mujhe kal tujhe wo movie nai dikhani chahiye thi. Mai bus itna chahta tha kit u apne situation ko face kare aur use ladey... Jaise humesha karti h...Mai nahi chahta tha ki the phir se nightmare aaye. I am really Nisha.

Nisha - Mai jaanti hun Kabir, mai tjhse naraz nahi hu... Aur khud sorry kehne ko mana kar rha h aur khud hi sorry bol rha h?

Kabir - Sorry.. (Nisha widens her eye)... Oops, not again.. Sorry..(Both start laughing)... Nisha mujhe pata h ki tune uss din ko kaafi had tak piche choda h, par ussey humesha k liye nikalne k liye tjhe mujhe ek promise karna hoga. Karegi? (Nisha nods her head) Tujhe phir se archery start karna h... tu karegi na...?

Nisha - Kabir, mjhe thoda time chahiye...M zaroor start karungi, lekin pichle kuch dino se ye jo bhi kuch hua... Viraj sir aur tera bhai hona... Dolly di ki problems... aur jo bhi kuch hua... mjhe phir se peaceful hone k liye thdaa time chahiye.

Kabir - Thik h Nisha... tjhe jitna time lena h tu le le, mai the kisi bhi baat k liye push nahi karunga. Lekin promise zaroor pura karna...:)

Nisha - (becoming emotional and starting to cry) Kabir, I love you so much... Aur mjhe yakin hi nahi ho rha ki maine jo kuch bhi bataya uske bawajood bhi ...(Kabir cuts off Nisha in middle)

Kabir - Ek minute Nisha..haashaa!*sneeze*...haan, ab bol

Nisha - (still little emotional) Wo mai...

Kabir - Kya hua?... bhool gayi?

Nisha - Haan...(Kabir grins)... Oh! to tune jaan boojh k sneeze kiya?!

Kabir - Hmm... kyunki aane wale kal mein jeene k liye hume beete huye kal ko bhoolna padta h...(They smile and he takes her hand)...Chalein Mrs. Kabir? dinner thanda ho rha h...

They leave for the drawing room hand in hand...


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Episode 276(by maggie)

Scene 1:(KNH-Drawing room)

Kabir:Nisha... Bohut hogaya yeh emotional attayachhar...

Nisha:(Surprised)Emotional attayachar...Lyk really???(angrily)Oye Kabire abhi toh mithaas ki dukaan bana baitha tha ab achanak kya hua tujhe? Haato mein haat dale niche le aaya aur niche aate hi mood change?

Kabir:(angrily)Haan mood change ho gaya...N 4 ur kind information maine koyi khana wana nahi banaya... Nahi mera khaneka mood hain. Bedroom mein ja aur so ja... Aur gar itni hi bhook lagi hain toh khud ki liye kuch banale...

Nisha(In concern):Sab thik hain na,Kabir?Achanak kya hua?

Kabir(again angily):Kuch nahi..Tujhe kya laga ki sirf tujhe gussa aa sakta hain? Mujhe tujhse koyi baat nahi karni...

Nisha:Par hua kya hain?

Kabir(screaming):Bola na kuch nahi...

Nisha:(nw angirily)Ok,thik hain... Tujhe jo karna hain kar... Gud ni8.. No actually bad ni8.. Hav horrible ni8mares...

Nisha enters the bedroom n Kabir 2.Bt he jst goes,takes the pillow n returns back 2 the drawing room.

Nisha 2 herself:Kya hua isse?Whatever... U don't need 2 care..Kuch der mein yeh khud aake baat karega...

N she went 2 sleep..

Scene 2:(GH in Dolly's room)

Dolly busy in her office works.

Kirti(Satanding at the door):Dolly di !! May I come in?

Dolly:Arey,Kirti.. Aa jana. Tujhe mujhse permission ki zarrorat hain?

Kirti(Entering n sitting beside her):Mujhe toh laga ki Miss Hardworker bohut busy hain... aapni new job mein doobi hain..

Dolly:Achcha toh Miss Blah hume Miss Hardworker bula rahi hain?

Kirti:Kya Dolly di..Aap bhi ... Chalo chhoro, kyasa chal raha hain aapka nw job?

Dolly:Nayi Job?Arey Kirti tu biliv nahi karegi woh meri boss hain na,woh AR...

She tells her abt all that happend in the ofice n the clashes wid AR. Kirti is laughing hearing them

Dolly:Dekh tu haas maat... Par kyan karoon mujhe bhi hasee aa rahi hain...

Both were laughing... Then...

Kirti(being serious):Achcha Dolly di aapne Kal Saurav phone kyon nahi uthaya.Actually,woh mujhe bata raha tha ki...

Dolly:Woh Sarav... (Her phone rang) Aa... Kirti main baad mein baat karti hoon. Office ka call aa rha hain.

Kirti smiles awkwardly n Dolly goes frm there.

Scene 3:(GH in Umesh's room)

Umesh:Aman,woh maine kuch hisaab lagaya hain hamari resturent ki liye. Yeh dekh lo.

Aman:Laddoo,Mujhe tuj par pura bharosa hain ki tune sahi hisaab lagaya hoga. Mujhe dekh ni ki koyi zarrorat nahi.

Umesh:Phir bhi,Aman...

Aman:Achcha,ek kaam kar tu aapni cousins se baat kar iss bare mein..

Umesh:Par unhe abhi batana sahi hoga.

Aman:Laddoo,tu yeh bol raha hain? Arey, tu unhe nahi batayega toh kise batayega? Arey,woh log toh teri...

Suddenly,they hear Laxmi's scream coming frm Bunty'r room n both goes there.They see there Laxmi scolding Bunty n Jawala standing there.

Aman:Arey,Laxmi chachi kyan hua.Ap daant kyon rahi hain isse?

Laxmi:
Arey,dekho na kal maine isse kaha tha ki yeh Jwlau ki saath padhayi kare.Par aaj Jwalu ne hi mujhe bataya ki isne kuch bhi thik se nahi padha. Main kyan karron iski saath?

Bunty:
Maine bola na main Babli se milne gaya tha.

Umesh:
Yeh Babli kaun hain?

Bunty:
Mera best frnd...

Laxmi:
Kaisi best friend hain?Ajkal hamesha iski bare mein baat karta rehta hain. Yeh sab dosti se kuch kaam nahi chalne wala. Agar tune thik se padhayi nahi ki na. Kal se roz 3 ghante Jwalu ki paas padhegi.Yeh tera aakhri mauka hain. Warna mujhe bhi nai pata main kya karungi.

She goes frm there angrily.Umesh n Aman also goes after her 2 console.Only Jwala n Bunty left in the room.

Bunty:Jawalu di aapne ma ko kyon bataya?

Jwala:Arey tu thik se padhayi nahi karega toh bataungi na.

Bunty:(angrily)Jwala di,aapko pata hain,aap kitni bari nerd ho? Padhayi ki saath saath kuch mauj masti kiya karo. Aap Babli ko hi dekho. Woh padhayi bhi karti hain aur masti bhi. Make-up bhi karti hain.. Par aap... Agar sab aapke tarah ho jaye na toh sabko itne bare chasme pahenke ghumne parenge. Toh aap na mujhse pehle aapni aap par dhyaan dijiye.

Bunty goes frm there.

Jwala(screaming):Bunty,tu kitna badtameez hain. (2 herself) Yeh kya bol raha tha.Yeh make-up hi sab hota hain kya? Padhayi bhi toh zaroori hain. Par yeh chashme...

She bcomes vry sad.

Scene 4:(KNH in bedroom)

Nisha lying on her bed.The door of the room closed.

Nisha:Pata nahi iss Kabire ko achanak kyan ho gaya. Abhi toh thik tha.. Woh aisa toh nahi hain. Pata nahi hall mein kaise so raha hoga. Kahin uss din ki liye toh naraj nahi ho gaya jis din maine isse bahar nikala tha..Par woh toh...

Suddenly,the light of her room,actually the whole house is switched off. She become safraid.Opens the door of the room.

Nisha(screaming):Kabir,kaha hain tu?Mujhe daar laag rahi hain.

Then a limelight falls on a person wrapped in a Saree.

Nisha(being more afraid):Kau..Kau..Kaun hain aap?

Thn a music plays...

Ahhaa...

Oho o...
Oho o...

<The person starts dancing kamad hilake>

Sss...

Chutki joh
Tune kati hai
Jori se kati hai
Yahan wahan..

<The person turnes n Nisha is shocked 2 see the face.It is none other than her Kabira wrapped in the saree over his shirt.Dancing lyk women.She can't stop laughing>

Ruthi hoon
Main tujhse ruthi hoon
Mujhe mana le na
O jane jaan

<Kabira comes 2 her ,holds her hands n starts dancing wid her,obviously lyk a woman>

Chedenge..
Hum tujhko
Ladki tu hai
Badi bombaard
Aha aha aha aha

<Kabira unwrappes his saree n wrappes it around Nisha's waist>

Ooh la la...
Ooh la la...
Ooh la la...
Ooh la la...
Tu hai meri fantasy..

<Both startes dancing... she is dancing lyk woman n Kabir lyk man>

Choo na na
Choo na na
Choo na na
Choo na na
Ab main jawan ho gayi..

<Nw Kabira again starts dancing lyk woman n NIsha lyk man>

NiBir was laughing lyk anything. Kabir goes,switches off the music n switches on the lights.

Kabir:Toh kaisa laga mera surprise?

Nisha(laughing lyk a mad):Really Kabir? Kaisa laga.. Abb mujhe samajh mein aaya ki tune aisa rude behave kyon kiya tha. Mujhe aise hasane ki liye...

Kabir:Haan nahi toh..Kuch achcha hone ki liye kuch bura hona zarrori hain...

Nisha:Achcha? (Being seious)Tune yeh sab mujhe stress se nikaal ne ki liye kiya na?

Kabir:Toh meri saari mehnaat pe already baarish ho gayi par meri dard-de-dil ki sifarish kisine nnahi suna?Stress se nikalna tha,phir se woh baat yaad nahi dilani thi.

Nisha:Ok,I promise tere lye main aapna best kosish karungi woh saab bholne ki liye,ok sry,main woh sab bhool ke dikhaungi aur tere saath aapni nai zindagiki shurwaat karungi...

Kabir:(being happy)That's lyk my Nisha...

Both hug each other tightly closing eyes 2 feel each other...

Kabir(being in the same position):Waise Nisha,Mera poha already ek baar thanda ho chuka hain aur oven mein bhi jaa chuka haim.Agar tu chahti hain ki phirse oven mein jaaye toh it's ok. Waise bhi pata nahi woh Poha bana hain yah...

Nisha(breaking the hug):Kabir tune jo bhi banaya hain na...

Kabir:(naughtily):Haan pata hain..Hubbyji aapne bohut pyaar se banaya hain toh is Poha par toh hamari itne saare pyaar barsenge...

Nisha(laughing):Tu bhi na... Aur sun... Sry n Thankxxx itna saraa ek saath. Aur aab main teri har dil-e-dil ki sifarish sunne ki liye razi hoon...

Kabir:(Naughtily n intensely)Arey wah!!!Waise meri dil li sifarish toh kuch aur hi hain...

He brings her close 2 him through her waist.The hotness of their breaths r meetting. Kabir's eyes r closed n they r getting closer. Suddenly Nishu punchd him in his belly.

Kabir:Ouch.

Nisha(Fleeing frm there):Saraa hua khana nahi khana nahi khana mujhe...

Kabir smiling seeing the smile wifey, his world....

Note:Plz 4give me 4 typos n mistakes n 4 hindi mistakes don't punch me 😆 N also sry 4 eating ur dimaags 😛


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