*teaser* fanfic - *teaser 2* pg2 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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@Samhita - Brilliant. You are my hero 😛
Waiting for more of these. 👏 👏 👏
Edited by anjudiva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Samhita very good 👏 hope you will put some more like this 🤣 🤣 🤣 you added girish also 😉
yeah robbie and girish both bach gaye bechar raunak boori tharahase phasa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Samhita 🤗 ,

That was a good one buddy 👏 👏 👏

Robbie, Raunak and Girish 🤣 🤣 🤣 all three victims at a place 😆

Do write more it was fun 👍🏼

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭ok...since i got lots of comments...i'll write another teaser... 😆 😆

it starts off from the promo, when kasturi bumps into JP - who's a peon...but robbie, raunak and girish are still in jail 😆

K: 😭 Bauji!!!! 😭 Bauji..yeh kya hogaya!!!
tears keep dripping from her eyes

JP starts crying too 😭 😭 😭 : bas beta!!! ab bas kar!!!tum ro kyu rahi ho?!?!?

K: aapki yeh halat!!!

JP: tu mujhe aur mat rula!!! (don't make me cry more!!)

K: what are you saying??? - still crying 😭 😭 😭

JP: the more you cry, i cry!!! 😭 😭 😭

K: aap mujhse itna pyaar karte hai!!! 😭 😭

JP: nahi...mai apne kamar se intna pyaar karta hoon!!!

K: what?? 😕 😕

JP: beta...bachpaan se tu tear factory thi!!! aur ab bhi ho!!! pls stop crying beta!!! th emore you cry, the more i have to bend an dclean up the floods you're causing!!!!

K: what???

"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" screams are heard from far away. the jail comes floating with raunak inside... 😆

Ra: kasturi!!!! stop it i say!!!!stop crying!!!! 😕 look what you've done!! You've caused floods in Mumbai again!!!! 😕 😕 😕

K; i didn't do anything!!!

Robbie and girish are in the same cell

R: kasturi!!!! you again started torturing us!!! 😭 😭 😭

G: yeh humme chodegi nahi!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Kasturi burst out crying again 😭

SAkshaat Bhagwaan comes down to earth...

Lord Ganesh...: yeh kya kasturi!!! you're tears have created flood in heaven too!!!😕😕😕

😆

K: bhagwaan...aap bhi!!! sab mere khilaaf hogaye!!!😭😭😭
😭😭sh eburst's out crying again

Lord: hey bhagwaan!!!😭 sab mere hi galti hai!!! tumhe baanate hue, maine koi galti ki hai!!! instaed of eyes, i put taps in
😭😭😭

😆

this one was a short one...but i hope you've enjoyed it! 😃 😉

Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB BBBBBbb
d way d presnt storyline;(not many raunak scenes ) [ is goin UR humourous scenes r a big relief & stressbuster 😆 Tear factory 😆 lord Ganesha comin 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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After long time I find some humours post through out. well deserave claps. 👏
Edited by ansh786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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bhagvan bhi ro rahe hai kasturi ko dekh ke..mene ise kyu banaya...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg 😆
cpntinue soon 😆

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