Annie and Neel OS, A Special Date

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys..i thought on writing an os...please hit the like button and comment And the silent readers...please at least hit the like button...

A special date

Here were annie and neil...finally the day of their first date... After neil confessed annie his feelings...and annie as well accepted her feelings to him...

Neil... Was getting ready with his formal suit and a tie... And a white shirt... And annie with a beautiful knee lenght red dress with full sleeves... with high heels... And had her wavy hair... She was looking gorgeous...

Neil took a little box...and ket it in his pocket...he was nervous...but was happy ...so happy that he forgot every badthings pain or any negative feeling ... He was happy he found the love of his life...his anahita... And headed off to too pick up anahita... She was waiting in her flat ... He came... He rang the doorbell.. ... Anahita was trying to lock her necklace but was unable to... She came running to open the door... Neil saw her ... She was looking kile a rose ... A red rose... He just couldnt take his eyes from her...

A. Wow neil...my helicopter ... Youre looking very handsome today...? Come in.. ( neil came in and she locked the door..)

N. Thanks anahita... Your looking really gorgeous today... .. Ready ?

A. Actually no ... The hook of this this necklace... My hands dont reach...

And annie was trying ... Soon...a pair of strong hands touched her hands telling her to leave the hook...as he had taken it ...and ... With a small movent atached the hook... And doing that his hands had touched annies hands... She felt a current passing through her spine...

A. Thanks...

N. Your welcome... Lets go ?

A. Ya...

Neel had booked a beautiful candle ligjt dinner on the terrase of a beautiful beautique hotel ... It was decorated with a red floating candles centerpiece ...

They reached the venue... She saw it...got so mesmerised... A wide smile drew on her face... They sat...a waiter came and opened a champagne bottle and poured it in both glasses...

n.i... didnt think this day would ever come in my life...

a. the time is never the same neel... i never thought i found someone like you?

neil smiled...they spent a few minutes. staring each other ... ... and a song started playing... he got up and asked for annis hand ...he brought her to the centre with him... he put his hands on her waist that sent and current to her spine... she gentlyy kept her hands on his broad shoulders... and started dancing on the most melodios tune...

Pee loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam

Pee loon tere geelay geelay hoto ki sargam

Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam

Tere sang ishq taari hai

Tere sang ik khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko

Tere sang bekraari hai

Tere sang ishq taari hai

Tere sang ik khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko

Tere sang bekraari hai

Tere bin jee nahi lagda, tere bin jee nahi sakda

they were dancing closely...their fsces were inches apart...no...cm apart... ...now... few mm apart while they were dancing

Tujhpe hai haare maine vaare do jahan, kurbaan, meharbaan, ke main toh kurbaan

Sun le zara, tera kurbaan

Hosh mein rahun kyun aaj main

Tu meri baahon mein simti hai, mujh mein samayi hai yun

Jis tarah ki koi hum nadi, tu mere seenay mein chupti hai sagar tumhara main hoon

annie felt the closeness between them... and shetried to leave...but neil grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him...her back clashed with his chest... her back was touching his chest... she was feeling hisvbreaths... on hr ears...

Pee loon teri dheemi dheemi lehron ki cham cham

Pee loon teri saundi saundi saanson ko har dum

Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam

Tere sang ishq taari hai

Tere sang ik khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko

Tere sang bekraari hai

Tere sang ishq taari hai

Tere sang ik khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko

Tere sang bekraari hai

n. want to go so soon... ... dont wanna kbow why i brought you here?

a. no. ..i was ...inwas ...

neil went down on his knees... taking out a little box and then taking out from there a silver diamond ring

n. will you marry me ms. anahita fernandez...?

a. yes... .( with teary eyes .out of happiness )

neil placed the ring in annie s finger and got up... they shared a short yet intence eyelock and neil hugged annie tight... she hugged back with the same pation... it's the start of something very beautiful... something passionate in their lives...

Gyus, I have written this os ... I hope you like it... please like it ( silent readers , at least hit like ) and guys please comment !!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
beautiful as always
loved it
make more os's
love to read those
by the way i am planning to make one os myself
tell me if you have some ideas
anyways loved your os viny
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww 😳 dt was sho cute and beautiful...plz do make more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved it ...it was sooo nice...pls do write more...'
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Wow that was very nice. But first date pe hi marriage proposal? 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haan ji... yeh os tha na... iss liye !!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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^ Arre you could have made it something like the third date naa. They could still be nervous. 😆

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