manan -the love has no boundaries

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Introduction:

Manik Malhotra basically a mama's boy ,love to play music. He is studying in space and want to become a big musician. And his mother Neyonika Malhotra cmpltly supports his son. But his father Raj Malhotra
wants Manik to join his business like his elder son n manik's elder brother, Raghav
(Raghav Malhotra: Raj n Nyonika's son).(please note that Raghav is straight) Raghav is a very simple man n is not married yet! He has joined Malhotra industries n is now the MD of Malhotra industries.Raj is very proud of his son Raghav and wants Manik to do the same. But Manik is not interested in his dad's business n so his father don't like him much and he also try to neglect his father as much as possible.
Druv alya Mukti are Manik's frnd. Ohh! How can I forget Cabir. He is manik's yaar. ... His buddy..his reflection n can easily understand Manik!


Nandini Murthy a bubbly girl studying engineering in Mumbai. She has a brother named Rishab.
(Note: in this ff Chachaji (Lalit) n chachiji(Sudha) are nandini's mom n dad ).
Nandini is a very sweet girl living an amazing life. She loves to play prank on ppl n do a lot of masti and she can b easily compared to Manik in doing mischief! Navya is nandini's bestest friend.


Raj wants his son to get married n so he decided to visit Mr. Murthy's house to see Nandini.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1:

Scene starts with Manik sleeping on his bed keeping the pillow beside his hands. He had a lavish room n had a Big photo of himself just above his bed. The room had 3 guitars, drums n rest of the music instruments.
Manik's mother enters.
Ny: utho beta.
M: mama bas 2 minutes plzzz
Ny: not at all. I am not giving u a single minute.
M: mama I luv u. Plzz do min do na
Manik started buttering her mother.
Ny:U knw na aaj hme tumhre Bhaiyya k liye ladki dekhne jaana.
As soon as Manik heard this he yelled!
M: ohhh shittt! Mai to Bhul hi gya tha. Bhai ki wife means meri bhabhi.
Ummm... Not bhabhi she ll b my friend!
Ny:chal ab baate banana band kar n jldi se ready hoke nichee aaja. We hav to go to their place n we don't have much tym
Nyonika leaves. Manik gets ready wearing a Tom and Jerry 's tshirt like a baby and black jeans.
Manik comes downstairs n see his brother wearing boring formal clothes.
M: ky Bhai aaj to kuch acha pehlete Varna bhabhi darr jaegi. Try to b cool bro just like me.
Manik laughs.
R: bache udale meri.
Raghav holds manik's ear(Raghav pampers Manik a lot)
R: but I ll make sure that u don't say a word in front of Nandini
M:ohhhooo! Abhi se bhabhi ki fikar!

At murthy's mansion:

Nandini is playing with birds coz she luv them. Nandini's mom came to her.
S:kab tak bacho k jaise khelti rahegi. Jaa n jake ready hoja. Ladke wale aate hi honge.
N: ma chill karo na. Aap ita q tension leti ho. Sab hojaega. Don't worry.
There was a big chaos at their place.
Everyon was doing their assigned job.
His father was looking to the light yet elegant decoration. Rishab was handling big boxes of sweets n her mom was managing the Pooja ghr!
Nandini gets ready wearing a beautiful Anarkali in blue n white contrast. She came down having chocolate in her hand when her mother interrupted
S: bas kar nandu kitte chocolate khaogi.
N: mamma pakka last.
Now everything is settled n nandini's family is waiting for Malhotra family

Scene shifts to Malhotra palace

Raj to Manik: ye ky pehna tune??? Tujhe kuch samaj h ya nhi. Zara apne bhai se kuch seekh. Kuch nhi to kapde phenne ka tarikha.
Manik was about to answer his dad but his mom stopped him n said
Ny: chale hame der ho rahi h
M: wait mom I m forgetting something
Everyone was anxious to knw that what was going on on manik's head
He came back with a camera
R: Manik ye q?
Raj: zarur kuch nai shararat hogi iski.
M sarcastically replied: easy dad. I want to record this moments coz when I ll b in London "learning music" these moments will b vry helpful
Raj stared n Manik n was about to scold him but Raghav stopped him n they all headed toward the car.

After reaching Murthy's mansion Manik came out stretching his hands n removed his camera n Began to shoot
M: so yaha rehti h Ms. Murthy. Bhai ready ho aap...?? N starts laughing
Raghav hit Manik playfully n they all went to the main door of the mansion.
Manik was continuously teasing his brother!
Manik ran fast n rang d door bell on which his father gave him a look!
Nandini opened the door.
N: hello. Kaise h aaplog??
She said this in a joyful manner
Manik was not knowing that she was Nandini coz he never thought that the girl to whom they want to see will open the door.
M: ji hi. Aap se milkar itti khushi nhi hui jitti mujhe mere bhabhi se milkar hogi. So if u don't mind can we come in?
N: yes of course! Go n meet ur bhabhi
Nandini replied sarcastically!
Manik parents n Raghav came to the door
Then Nandini's parents came n welcomed the Malhotras n made them come in.
Navya was also standing in the hall n was wearing a more beautiful dress than Nandini. So Manik thought that she is Nandini.
M: hi. I m so pleased to meet u.
Everyone was shocked.
M: actually it is possible that you will b my would b bhabhi so I m trying to do friendship in advance so that later on u will b on my side!
Navya n everyone started to laugh.
Manik was confused that why everyone was laughing!
Nav: oo... I m not Nandini. I m Navya, her best friend. Nandini is standing there.
She pointed towards Nandini.
Manik was feeling embarrassed!
Raj: sorry actually he has not seen nandini's photo so he was a little confused
L: it's ok beta n hit Manik playfully on his back. Manik was rubbing his head.
Everyone settled down on the sofa n Nandini came n sat on the handle of the sofa beside his dad
N: now u r happy to meet me?
M: sorry yaar
N:it's ok
Sudha went in n brought some snacks while nyonika was busy talking with Nandini n Manik was teasing Raghav.
R: so Nandini u r studying engineering??
N: yes. I m doing my last year n I m very much concerned about my career
R: it's gud.
Raghav continued talking to Nandini n Manik was feeling bored coz no one was giving him attention.
Manik coughed loudly on which everyone turned to him.
Ny: ky hua beta?
M: Manik nothing bas gaining attention!
Nandini laughed n gave a high five to Manik
Then some important discussion was done on which raj said
Raj: hme ye rishta Manzoor h. Aaj se Nandini hmri bhau
Raghav smiled n Manik hugged Nandini n said
M: so happy!
Nandini also hugged him back coz now she considered Manik as her friend
No on objected this hug coz they were broad minded n they knew how Manik was.
Manik broke the hug n said
M: bhabhi hm bht masti karinge
On which everyone started laughing.
N: plzz don't call me bhabhi. U can call me Nandu
M: okay Nandu so give a high five!
Ol did their lunch n Raghav n Nandini went in the garden to talk
They came back n then Malhotras went to the door n was leaving.
M: bye Nandu n b in touch
N: yeah Manik. N bye Raghav.
R: bye!
Malhotras left!

In car:
M: Bhai Nandu kitti sweet h na?
R: ha
M: vaise aap itte boring n vo itti bubbly!! Jodi nhi jami. She is same like me! Hmri shaadi karva do mom
N Manik started to laugh
Raj: Zara sambhalo apne bte ko. Kuch b bolta rehta.
Ny: Manik ky bol rahe ho beta.
R: Mazak Karra Manik mom
Manik gave Raghav a side hug n said
M:c mom bhai understands me better!
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OMG!! Nandini mainik's bhabhi that is something I couldn't hv dreamt abt ever!! But diff & interesting plot. Just want to knw how Dey wil unite.
Update soon!
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Chapter 2:

After coming back to home at 5:30 everyone was very tired. Manik rested his head on nyonika's shoulder when nyonika said
N: beta Manik go n rest in ur room
M: yeah mom.
Manik went in the room where he was remembering all the moments about Nandini. He thought how he talked to Nandini for the first time n ol n was smiling when suddenly his phone rang. It was none other than cool Cabir
C: abe saale kaha h tu? Sharam nhi aati tujhe? Kal se mila nhi n phone b nhi.
M: are sorry buddy mai thoda busy tha
C: ha tu akele busy rehta. Hm to rikame h.
M: drama q karra, bol na ky baat h?
C: chal tu jaldi alya k ghr aa. Fab4 is waiting. N sun late hua na to dekhliyo.
M: ha aara hu.
But Manik was still smiling.
M to himself: abhi late hua na to ye Cabir mujhe Supreme Court le jaega.
Have to leave.
Manik immediately changed his clothes n came down n took his car keys n shouted maaa mai jaa raha hu. But suddenly he came back from the gate n thought of taking his bullet bike rather than his car.
He was looking damn hot in blue jeans white tshirt n blazer over it n was having a helmet on his head.

Here Nandini came back to her room n immediately changed to pajama n tshirt as she was not comfortable in Anarkali.
Nandini's POV:
Manik is such a sweet boy. I liked him. Hope hamari achi frndshp rahe. N Raghav he is good but quite serious type. Manik is a sweet heart. Thinking ol this she slept as she was tired.

After reaching alya' home:

Mu: agya tu?
M: haa
C: saale kal se tu h ka?
M: are batara hu na. Raghav k liye ladki dekhne Gaye the.
Everyone was shocked n was looking to each other.
M: ky hua?
C: uss khadoos k liye ladki??
(Actually Raghav didn't like any of manik's friends coz he thought that they were spoiling him.)
M:Cabirrr. Bas Bhai
C:acha batana kon badnaseeb ladki mili use?
Suddenly Manik started to smile remembering Nandini
Dr:ky hua Manik ? Tu itta smile q Karra h?
Mu: use rose ki yaad aagyi hungi
N started to laugh
(Rose was a girl who always roam around Manik n flattered him)
Al: shut up guys. Use batane to do
M: actually bhabhi mil gyi. Her name is Nandini murthy
C: mai janta (took a pause)...(n continued)..nhi hu ise
Everyone started to laugh
M: bht sweet ladki h yaar. N simple b
Dr: congrats bro
Mu:ise q congrats Karra h Dhruv tu?
Raghav ko jake kar agar Himmat h to.
N started to laugh
( everyone was little afraid of Raghav)
M:shut up yaar.
C:vaise Manik tune bhabhi to dhundli but mere Liya kab dhundega?
Kabir winked.
M: kon karega tujse shaadi!
Vaise Mujhe yaha q bullaya tha?
Al:are kuch nhi Manik ye Cabir kuch b Karta h. Bola bor hora so Manik ko bulake uski maza lete
Manik playfully hit Cabir n said
M: ab mai chalta hu nhi to hitler Malhotra ghr se nikaal dega!
Everyone was laughing n Manik left.

It was 9 at night n Manik was still thinking abt Nandini when he decided to msg her as they had already exchanged their no.
Hi Nandini bhabhi- Manik
As Nandini saw manik's name flashing on her cell she wake up with a jerk n smiled n replied
Hey my dewar-Nandini
Sorry tumhe disturb kiya-Manik
Are not at ol-Nandini
So did u like my bro?-Manik
Yeah he is gud but quite serious types-Nandini
Are he is like a coconut,hard from outside n sweet from inside-Manik
Achaaa. Hope so. Acha listen maa is calling me, I ll text later. Bye-Nandini
M- bye n gn
Manik lied on bed n was smiling when Raghav came to him n said
R: Manik I was thinking k...
M:that u want to meet Nandini, ryt?
Raghav was blushing
R: yeah
M: don't worry Bhai mai apki meeting fix krwata hu but nly on one condition..
R:what?
M: mai b chalunga n Nandu ko hi bolke Chala jaunga
R:haa ok.
M: so kal 5 bje Shaam me?
R:perfect.
Raghav leaves
Manik immediately texted to Nandini about tomorrow's meeting n said to come at roof top cafe which was a very beautiful place.

Nandini was so happy n couldn't wait till tomorrow.

Finally the day arrived.
Manik as usual took his bike n Raghav went in car n they reached the place. They were waiting for Nandini when she came wearing yellow top with white jeans n a small scarf was folded near her neck.

Manik gave her a side hug while Raghav was feeling shy so he just did a shake hand. The sat down when suddenly Raghav's phone rang n he said he is sorry but have to leave coz of some urgent work.
So MaNan was left alone.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hope u guys like it! 😊
Plzz give ur feedback as I m writing it for the first tym 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intrstng start dr.
nandu as manik's babhi.
i knew de final will b manan.
cntnue soon.
eagerly waiting.
pm me nxt tym.
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Story looks like intresting one.
Continue soon.
And also pm me next time.
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Chapter 3:

After Raghav left, Nandini was sad. N Manik saw his sadness. So he tried to cheer Nandini n said.
M:Nandu u like chocolate?
Manik immediately put his hand in his pocket n removed a silk on which Nandini replied:
N: wow Manik I luv chocolates.
She jumped with excitement. N Manik was very happy to see her
Nandini started to eat chocolate like a baby n Manik was just staring at her when Manik said
M:tum sad hoti ho na to bilkul achi nhi lagti. Tum jab aise hasti ho na to bht achi lagti ho. (Manik pointed towards her lips)
N:thank u Manik. U r too sweet.
M:vaise mai tumhe ghr drop Karunya ham Baith k kuch baar kar sakte h.
Nandini hit Manik playfully on his head n said
N:y u being so formal. We ll spend some time.
After hearing this Manik was very happy and he started to talk.
M: u know Nandini my dad don't luv me so much. He always appreciated Raghav but not me.
Manik made a sad face while saying this.
N: but aisa q Manik?
M:Raghav is an idol son. He does everything according to dad. But I don't wanna join his company.
N: then what are ur dreams?
M: I want to go to London n wanna learn music n want to b a big musician.
N: wow Manik. Ye to bht acha h.
M:but my dad.!
N: Manik u shared ur dreams na so I ll also show u something.
Manik in excitement
M: batao na
Nandini removed a book from her bag which was beautifully decorated.
M: ye ky h Nandu?
N:my dreams
Manik in confusion
M:Dreams????
Nandini opened the book n said
N:this ol are my dreams.
Nandini turned a page n it was written
"Want to go to New York " n it was ticked n some New York pictures were stuck.
Manik in excitement
M: wow Nandu tum kitti chotu lag rahi ho.
Similarly there were many dreams which were completed.
Then finally she came to a page were it was written
"My dream job in London"
At which Manik said
M: ye ky h Nandu? Which dream job?
N:actually London me ek MNC h n Mujhe vaha job karna h
M:ohh acha! Very nice Nandini. Btw tumhra college kaisa jara?
N:yaar my last semester is going on n ab thode tym me exams rahenge
M:tumhri field I guess computers h?
N:ryt.
M:nyc yaar. U can atleast run behind ur dreams, but me!
Nah
N:don't worry Manik everything will b fun..
She patted her back gently
N:don't u think we should leave?
M:yeah come I ll drop u.
M:Manik I want to ride ur bike plzz na Manik plzz na
Manik in confusion
M:really?
N:yes plzz na
M:okay sure but don't let me fall plzz yaar
N:don't worry I ll fly ur bike.
N started to laugh!
Manik gave her the helmet n she sat on the seat n Manik sat behind.
Nandini started the bike n was riding very fast n was shouting like
Ye. ...ye... With both her legs not on foot stand but just little above it!
Manik was just admiring her.
They reached Nandini's home n then she removed her helmet n said him good bye by doing a side hug!
Manik also said bye!
to be continued...
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i just love it
i like the way its going
just amazing

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Chapter 4:

It was 9 at night when Nandini came back to her room n was completing her practicals coz her submissions were on the calendar when Manik called her
M:hey meri bhabhi..hw u doing?
N:hi Manik n stop calling me bhabhi plzz yaar!
M:acha ok sorry
N:it's ok n ye batao k call q kiya tha?
M:are haa! Actually na mere ek friend circle h n usme se ek meri friend ne party throw ki h. So I wanted you to join us..
N: but Manik...
M:but vut kuch nhi hota Nandini plzz na aajao na n vaise b sab tumse milna b chahte h!
N:Manik I don't know anyone xcept u so it will b an awkward situation for me na
M: ha to tum ek kam karo apni friend Navya ko b le aao..then everything will b fyn
N: ummm...not a bad idea! But will ur friend will be okay with it?
M:ha yes of course!
N:okay fir chalo kal milte h,gud n8! I m quite sleepy
M:okay Nandu tc gn!


Raghav enters Manik room n saw him talking on phone on which he asked
R:itti raat ko kisse baat kar raha h Manik?
M:Bhai actually na kal alya ne party rakhi h to Maine socha q na Nandini ko b invite karlu. Apko bura to nhi laga na Bhai?
R:Mujhe q bura lagega now u r his friend so she can join any party of her friend
Manik hugs Raghav n says thank you

It was late night when Manik's cell vibrated several times. On which he got worried n saw his cell n there were 6 missed calls from Nandini n lastly a message saying
"Please immediately call me as soon as u see this message " - Nandini
Manik was worried n he called Nandini
It was ringing when Nandini picked up the call n said in tension
N:Manik!!!
M:Nandini what happened u sound so tensed kuch hua h ky plzz tell me
He was continuously speaking when Nandini interrupted
N:Manik I need ur help plzz come to my place ryt now plzz
M:but ye to batao k hua ky
N:phone pe nhi Bata sakti plzz
I will b w8ing for u in my garden!
M:okay I m on my way!

Manik in his night track left for Nandini's place n was thinking of the possibilities that could happen. Manik reach Nandini's home n saw Nandini standing on the gate.

Manik hugged Nandini n said
M:ky hua are u all right??
Manik saw her from bottom to top n she was completely fine.
N:ye sab tumhre vajah se hua
Manik was confused when Nandini said
N:aaj din Bhar mai tumhre saath thi n uski vajah se mere practicals complete nhi hue n kal mera submission h n now u r going to help me.
Manik was quite relieved after hearing this!
M:like seriously Nandini tum Mujhe ye phone par b Bata sakti thi
N:phone par batati to tum jaldi nhi aate na
Nandini smiled
M:but mai ky help karu?
N:see I have 6 practicals to write so u will write 3 n I will write 3 simple.
M:what??? No ways. Mai nhi likhra
Mai kbhi khud ka complete nhi Karta n tumhra...in ur dreams Nandu bhabhi
Nandini made a sad pouty face on which Manik said
M:okay fine lets do it!

MaNan were doing masti while completing the practicals n they were sitting in their garden under a light with pillows n packets of chips around them. Then Nandini went inside n brought coffee for both of them.
They were talking so much
M:vaise Nandini ki bacchi tum itta Sara abhi q complete karri? I mean start se kiya hota to problem nhi hoti.
N:Manik come on.actually na ye meri punishment h!
Manik laughed n said
M:punishment?? Q??
N: actually Maine is subject k zaada lectures nhi kiye na that's y!


N talking talking they slept
Nandini was sleeping on manik's shoulder while Manik was taking the support of swing which was just behind them!

Nandini woke up n saw ol the mess around them n patted Manik
M:Utho Manik
Manik woke up n rubbed his eyes n saw it was 7 in his mobile
M:ohh tumhra completion hogya na so now I ll leave
N:do breakfast with us
M:no yaar ty! Actually mom ne dekha hunga that I m not in the room then vo bht pareshaan ho gyi hungi.
N:okay Manik n ty so much
Nandini hugged Manik n Manik also hugged him back
M:chalo bye n do come in the party okay
N:yeah ok. Bye Manik
M:bye Nandini
Manik left


Nandini cleared all the mess n was smiling n her mother saw her n asked
S:itti Subha Subha kaha se ari h Nandu n ye itta Sara khane ka saman
N: maa actually raat me mai aur Manik completion krre the garden me Baith kar so that's y
S: Nandu tu Manik k saath kuch zaada tym spent krri h beta. Raghav ky Soch raha hoga
N: are maa kuch nhi honga. Raghav bht understanding h n vo bht bsy hota h ma isliye Maine Manik ko bula liya
S:chal koi baat nhi n jaa fresh ho jaa n breakfast Karle
N:ha maa!


Manik reached home n saw everyone was doing breakfast
Raj: aa gae Sahab zaade! Kaha se aarahe ho aaap Mr Manik Malhotra?
Zarur us nalayak Cabir k ghr se ara hunga
Manik became angry n replied harshly
M: enough dad. Stop insulting my friends.
Nyonika made Manik calm down
M: maa mai room me jara hu make sure Mujhe koi disturb na Kare
Manik sarcastically said this looking to raj
Manik left
Raj:dekha apne bte ko. Manners dekho uske.
R: dad don't worry mai baat karta hu usse! But abhi we are getting late for the office
Raj: yeah. Let's go

Raghav n raj went to the office.

To b continued...

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