A Manan SS- Love beyond Imagination Chap 2 page 2

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<font size="3">Character Sketch</font>

Nandini Ahmad- A muslim girl from Pakistan. A very sweet, cute and humble girl who day dreams alot and waiting to fall in love with a guy, whose sight would be her favourite view, whose arms would her safest place, whose laugh would be her favourite sound and whose love would be so pure so serene that she would doubt her sanity. She belongs to an Army family. Her family is not conservative but they do have strong belief in their religion and religious facts. She also is very pious.

Manik Malhotra- An Indian rockstar currently ruling the music world with his melodious voice. Girls are gaga over him. Though he is a rockstar but his life is completely different. He is a guy who talks very less, remains reserved in himself, loves his band FAB 5 and his best of friends who are the members of this band. He is not into this religion that much though he respects religion. Deep inside his heart he is waiting for someone special in his life whom he can possess, adore, love ,claim to be HIS and only HIS. Though he doesnt trust Love as he thinks , love can ONLY give pain,nothing else.




Will these two will ever hit upon each other to fall in love with each other crazily, madly, irrevocably ? Will their differences of religion, country would ever come between their love?
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YOU NEED TO POST THE FIRST CHAPTER RIGHT NOW
I just can't wait for this story to start.

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Originally posted by: Manan_pani

Awesome and different concept👏



Thankyou. Suddenly this character sketch came into mind and I just wrote it down 😊
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Originally posted by: shavashava

YOU NEED TO POST THE FIRST CHAPTER RIGHT NOW

I just can't wait for this story to start.



Thanks . This is the first time in my life I have taken initiative to write something. This character sketch popped up in my mind and I just wrote it down. I am sorry I cant post the first chap now but I promise I will post it soon. Your such enthusiasm really brought a huge smile on my face 😊 😊
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Thankyouu 😊
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Location- Islamabad Cantonment, Pakistan

A girl of 17 years old was dancing crazily out of happiness. She suddenly stopped dancing and recalled the past 15 minites of her life which has been by far her most favourite moments. Why wont it be ? After all unending prayers and submission to God, her dream finally got fulfilled . She said,"wait nandini, tu sapna to nehi dekhrahi hain?"

"Nehi pagal ladki,yeh sachme horaha hain" a woman of nearly 45 years old replied from her back. She turned around quickly to see her and without wasting anymore time she ran upto her and hugged her quickly.
"Ammu thankyou so much. Agar app nehi hote to ye sab kabhi mumkin nehi hote.App sabse best ho"said the super happy nandini.

"Oho formaish puri hoyi hain to abb mein best hu varna mein bhi , kiya kehto tum, insensitive, kharus, na ?" her mother pulled her legs . "Ab yeh sab choro or jaldi packing karna shuru kardo."

Finally after years of trying, persuading and literally begging, Nandini's father gave her the permission to go to Mumbai , the GREAT MUMBAI where nandini has always dreamt of visiting, feel the warmth, the chill of this city of thousands of dream, for the next one month.

At the same time,

Location- Goa beach, India

A guy of 20 years was looking blankly at the fierce waves and their rush sound sitting in the sand. He was looking at the sea as if trying to find himself in this endless sea, trying to feel the warmth, the oxygen, the vibes that he was craving for deep inside his heart. Life has never been fair with him. Everybody has ups and downs in their lives but no, his life has always seen the WORST. He doesnot even remember the last time he was happy, he was contented. He can not remember the last time he felt the warm which touched his heart, his SOUL. Soul ? He laughed a bit. "Does it even exist ? I am just a body ir just say, a basic human being. Nothing else"

All his thoughts were interrupted by a female voice from his behind, "Hey manik, what are you doing her all alone ?" Saying this the girl hugged him from behind.
Manik abruptly yet gently removed himself from the hug and replied, "Nothing Alya. I was not in a mood to party. Thats why just enjoying the waves." He lied. "Enjoying ? You must be kidding manik" manik told himself in a very low voice.

"Comeon manik, dnt behave so grownup. Its our last day in goa , lets go and party hard" saying this Alya , his one of the best friend , literally dragged him to the party floor.</font>



A/N
Hi, I am nusrat. This is my first ever written document in my entire life. Just ried to write down something with a different plot on my favourite MANAN. Hope I could do justice with this chapter.

Please do comment and give me your feedbacks whether I should continue or not. Criticism is welcomed.
THANKYOU
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This is going to be real fun *_*
I am excited for this for sure
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Hy nusrat m anum
Its really an amazing n different concept I don't think aisa Kisi ne phly likha ho GA
Its superb
If u can please PM me
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Chapter 2


Location- Islamabad Cantt, Pakistan

I get up before dawn Tuesday morning. Well I could not sleep all night. All those forbidden mumbai dreams were making me restless. Seemed like the time stopped. ''Arre why is it taking so much to be 7 am ?'' Nandini complained innocently. She mentally cross checked the list she made during her packings for the umpteenth time in the last 2 hours.

I do not when the mumbai dreams got hold of me and I dozzed of in my sitting position only to be waken up by my mother's hitler tone, ''Nandini tum abhi tak sorahi ho? Tumhe patabi hein 8 baj gaya aur tumhara flight 10 baje main hain..thik heen mein tumhara abbu ko bata deti hoon je tum mumbai jana nehi chahte hoon...''

Sleeping Nandu somehow managed to hear the word...'mumbai jane nehi' and this half hearted sentence was enough to choke her in her dreamy sleep...


Just at sharp 8:30,

Wearing a semi transparent long salwaar suit with red dupatta..she wore a pair of white studded jhumkas and a light pink glossy lipgloss and open hair kept in one side, a simple yet beautiful Nandini came out from her bedroom with her hand bag. Looking at her mini sized bedroom with sad eyes for the last , she went outside the house to find her parents waiting for her.

'Abbu main bilkul tai ar hoon...tip top' she winked her father which made her father laugh a lil bit with a hilarious melody. Nandini loved her Abbu's such hilarious tone. ''Aw..meri kuchi puchi booo, app kitne cute lagte hoon...'' Nandini surely did had a strict father but she knew that, deep inside his heart ,Abbu loved her alot. ''Agar app ki cute session khatam hota hain, kya hum chale.." said Abbu by pulling her cheeks and she giggled seeing her Abbu's adoration to her.


Location-Goa Villa, India

A door was being continuously banging on and it was on the verge of being broken when the door was finally oped by Manik who were on a pair of black silk pajama pants and messy hair. "What's your problem Cabiraaa ? Tell what u want mann.." he said that shooting deadly glares to Cabir, his buddy.

"Ghar jaane ka irada hain bhi nehi, dude" Cabir was totally ignored by Manik and made his way straight to the king sized bed of one of the most luxuries suit of the Goa hotel for this killer ROCKSTAR.

'Manik tu na sach mein meri haath ho see ek mukka payega jisme tara yeh 'girl go gaga wala' face hena bilkul bigar jahega. Badd mee complain maat karna bro..' Cabir said trying to keep his serious tone intact which was quite impossible for the Cabiraa...
'ha ha I like it especially I would loved the part when those 'girls go gaga' fans tera laash lekar Antim Sanskar karne jayega...' replied Manik with a devil grin in his flawless flank.

Now this is THE Manik-Cabiraa duo. Best friends wont be suffice to express the bond they share. Life has blessed both of them with some serious SHITS but this duo always managed to overpower those shits with their own made shits...


A/N

Sorry for not letting MaNan meet in this chapter also but I am just trying to balance this story.

Please do comment and give me your feedbacks whether I should continue or not. Thankyou
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really good
Update soon
Thank you for pm
N please meet manan soon

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