You're the password to my life ( Part 6)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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You're the password to my life
INTRODUCTION ( Manik's P.o.v)
LOCATION- New York's Street
I walking on the pavement of the street answering cabir's messages on the phone. He is jerk who is going to be married with a girl navya. I have come here I mean to New York for his only marriage and he is continuosly irritating but if I not answer m in a trouble. I was typing a reply then suddenly I bumped into a girl and her purse fell down. I looked up for I don't know why but I was excited to take a glance of her. I glared up and to my amazement I was shocked to see her, she had wore crop top with hot pants, I bend down to pick up her purse and handed it over to her "thnku and agey se dekhke chlna"she said and started walking again in my opposite direction...what I was watching at the first moment I couldn't believe on my eyes!!...was she my nandini...her face , her skin tone her eyes and even her voice was like my nandu who HAD DIED TWO YEARS AGO I usually dream about her but it was unusual in the daylight...I was only thinking about her and suddenly again I clashed ,this time not with a girl but a big pole...I heared somebody laughing at me I turned back and I found my nandu laughing ... , I realized that I was not dreaming she was my nandini but ...(unanswered question were roaming in my mind) "I told u na dekhkr chlna ...haahhaahhaahaahha"she said ... "nandini" I mummered ... "what...vaise my name is Natasha nice to meet uh ur name?"she said "manikk"I said and I saw a cinching smile on her face ...I felt a familier feeling when I was talking to her, my heart said ki she is ur nandini but my mind knew she has died 2 years ago...and she never gonna come back...

Natasha's P.o.v
Manik!!stupid utna hee stupid jitna phle tha...(blushed) mere bare mei sochtey sochtey poll se takra gaya...mujhe dekhkr I know tumhare mind mei kya aya hoga...(looks up in the sky) are we really destined together

kehtey hai khuda ne iss jahan mei sabhi ke liye
kisi na kisi ko h banaya hr kisi ke liye
tera milna h uss rab ka ishara mano
mujhko bnaya tere jaise hee kisikeliye

manikk(y I feel that I have known u from years.)

what is the secret behind Natasha? What happened with nandini at that night? Did she really die? Will the manikk get answers to his unanswered questions? Will love again come in manic's life? To know more stay tunned
Edited by Chhabra_Saloni - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo sweety its done jst wait n watch u will get huge response
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I became famous day by day.in most of ff there r my name.lolwa.just kidding.NYC start waiting 4 update
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nyc concept... cntinue soon 😊
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Nice concept.. Waiting to read further!! Continue soon
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Oye hoye so finally my darling has found a perfect platform for her ff I wish u luck meri jaan dont worry u will be getting huge response love ya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You're the password to my life ( PART 1) INTRODUCTION HAVE ALREADY BEEN POST U MUST READ IT FRST TO UNDERSTAND THIS PART
Location: NEWYORK
manikk pov( Natasha...? Y do I feel that ki mai tumhe pehle se janta hu kyu lagta h ki I have known u from years...y do I get familier feeling being around u ...kyu meraa dil kehta h kit um meri nandini ko jo 2 saal pehle mar chuki h (sadness)...i really felt her around when I met uh ...pr manikk voh uski hamshakl bhi toh ho skti h ...pr I have met hamshakl of cabir I never felt the same feeling with him which I felt with cabir...then why why?cabir and his twin brother had some differences but there seem not even a bit difference in Natasha and nandini)he was struggling in his fight of mind and heart ...his heart said that Natasha hee nandini h uski nandini pr his mind protested that nandini had died 2 years ago...then suddenly his phone rang...
cabir- yr yaha concert shuru hone vala h me and navya are waiting here jaldi aja...
manikk- hm..pohochra hu..

Location- Concert area
O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye mera
then a girl from the behind enters the stage handling a guitar in her hand with a I-don't-care attitude wearing dark kajal in her eyes having hair suspended in air ...very short shorts and half top...on her entry crowd was shouting in excitement ...the girl started playing her guitar and crowd excitement increased in a moment...

Ishq fikar da chatte balla
Mauj karda ho ke jhalla jeeve...
Ishq mein dil na
Hoyea fakeeri
Maange sab ki
Khair sukayya, jeeve...
Gira deewareee...
Laga lalkareee...(waved her hand in air ...crowd was cheering loudly increasing her confidence)
Ishq di masti de
Vich sone de jaage
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage... Ho dhunki laage ve( she took the mike stand and waved in front of audience to hear sound of audience)
the crowd(Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..) the girl. (Ho dhunki laage ve)

at that time manikk entered the crowd...he was listening the guitar's tune...was so mesmerized by her voice and way of exciting the audience...then he saw the girl...manikk" Natasha" oh my god...

lad na dil ko har basher
ishq da chnga h asar
karle khud se hee pyaar bande aaa
hai jahah ki tujhko khabar
khdse h pr tu bekhabar( string guitar more loudly)
lel apni hee didar bande aa
khira diwari
laga lalkare
ishq di masti ve vich sove ve jaagee
now she left to the audience ...crowd in enjoyment was cheering loudly and sisnging with her...
with a different tune she ended up the song and jumped in the audience...the way audience was reacting it clearly showed that crowd was mad for her...

Backstage:-
Cabir- Manikk!! Tune uss ladki ko dekha...!!
manikk- hmmm ( they both looked at each other coz they knew nandini had died 2 years ago)
Navya- ati hee hogi bss( she knew the secret behind Natasha)

then Natasha(the girl) came in the backstage...looking behind at smirking at a fan ...
the fan- see Natasha dekho tumhare liye maine tumhare naam ka tattoo takk krvaya h have a look( showed a tattoo on his back)
Natasha didn't pay any heed ...looked forward with agrin and walked towards navya...
Navya- seriously Natasha do dhari talvar haan...tumhare fans tumhare liye pagal...
cabir took a look of her from head to toe ...watching her clothes to her boots...her earing and all( cabir's pov - she cant be nandini ...her clothes maan she look sexy...)

manikk had no words to say he was mum ...he had seen two faces of Natasha still he felt that she is a mystery...her attitude " it wasn't ordinary" she was awesome...he was just looking at her
the media came in the backstage...
journalists- apko guitar ka kabse shokk chada...
Natasha- I wasn't interested in guitar...i had a boyfrnd who loved loved playing with music...his life was his frndz and music...he was the best musician from my eyes...no I don't have him so I continue with his dream ( natsha found her eyes a little wet ...) she started walking away...

manikk- nandini( he shouted he didn't know why)
Natasha looked behind at him in a question way like are-u-calling-me...
manikk- no no !!
Natasha- y do u call me nandini( walking near him)

precap- Manik to cry infront of everybody...
i would continue only if i get nice response
Edited by Chhabra_Saloni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kyyfanatic

Nice concept.. Waiting to read further!! Continue soon

next part posted
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow awesome
Cont soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan58

Wow awesome
Cont soon 😉

Thnku 😳

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