You're the password to my life ( Part 6) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
wowww this seems interesting.
Natasha hi nandu h.but wat happend 2 yrs ago.I want to knw plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

wowww this seems interesting.
Natasha hi nandu h.but wat happend 2 yrs ago.I want to knw plz update soon


Stay tunned u will get to knw
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
tz intrstng.
she s nandu ri8???um eagerly waiting.cntnue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
👏Superb!!
It's interesting
Nice start
Continue soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

You're the password to my life
PART 2 (if any of uh want me to tagu add me as ur frnd and message mei I will tag u in upcoming parts...
FLASHBACK WHEN NANDINI DIED
Manik (manikk was drunk) and nandini were in car... "Manik dheere chalao na mujhe darr lagra h manikk!" nandini said " mai hu na" manikk consoled her... "manikk muje accha ni lagra manic rokdo..." Manik didn't stopped he was drunk ...he was driving madly as he was not in senses he couldn't see what nandini was going through...suddenly a truck emerged overtaking there car and they both met an accident...truck's driver thought that he will fall in problem...he started his truck and drove away...by luck a car passed from that road ...watching such situation that two people are fainted and had blood over them...the wise man took them to hospital...MANIK WAS SAVED...everyday when nandini was going through operation manikk went temple " apse pehli baar kuch mangra hu ...aaj tak apse kuch nahi manga bss meri nandini ko bacha bss meri nandini ko bacha lo...aur kuch nhi chiye badle mei mujhe bulalo pr use ko bachalo" YES THAT DAY GOD LISTENED TO HIM ...Doctors took her to Newyork for operation ...Her mom dad( yes she have) went with her...SHE WAS SAVED THERE...wanted to go back to manikkk but her parents disagreed " beta abhi tum theek nhi ho mai tumhe nahi jane dde skti vapas india" her mother said...Her parents took phone from her they didn't wanted nandini be with manikk...there she joined a music university she made a best frnd daisy' she always consoled her saying " if there is true love despite of ur fate ur destiny will bring u both together' AND NOW THEY MET EACH OTHER BUT NANDINI HIDED HER BY TELLING THAT SHE IS NATASHA...she is again testing her love...
Location- A newyork's club
Cabir- chl yr aaj dekhtey h yeh videshiyo ki daru kaisi hoti h
Manikk- cabir tub hi na main hi peene vaala ...
Cabir- tu chor mai peeungaa...
THEY both entered the club ...the music was loud ...everybody was dancing in joy...in the crowd of mny people manikk found Natasha...she was wearing her casual wear...yet looking damn pretty...she was dancing with the melody of the music...her hair being loose was dancing with her...manikk was just adoring her beauty...natasha(nandini) watched manikkk, manikk sa her coming close to him...his heartbeat starting to beat faster and faster which only beated for his nandini ...she was coming close and close...now she was just in front of him...she held a hand forward and took a dring from the tray behind manikk which a waiter was holding...manikk's jaw remained open...she gulped a drink in a moment looking at him and walked away...towards the washroom to correct her kajal and clothes as she saw manikk...
Till that time cabir was drunk fully drunk...
Cabir- attention! Dear peeps attention! ( manikk looked at him in dismay and started walking away so that being cabir's frnd uski insult na hojaye) Here we have manikk malhotra...one of the best musicians of india...from space academy...will now sing a song for us...*manikk was like isko meri hee kyu lagani hoti* everyone cheered with clappings looking at manikk which was for now in highlight...afcourse he had to now step up the stage...

precap- Manik to have tears in his eyes while missing nandini
Edited by Chhabra_Saloni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
its awesome...
pls update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
You're the password to my life
Part 3 ( u will find it intresting only if u have read both into and part 1 and 2)

Manik looked around he saw many couples...he was missing his nandini soo much " kaash meri nandini mere paas hoti" (his eyes were half wet)...cabir "now manikk malhotra is going to present a song.."...Manik had to step up the stage...he started playing his guitar missing nandini soo much...

Scene 2 ( nandini aka so known as Natasha to manikk in washroom) (looking at mirror)
Natasha- mai ajeeb to ni lagri( corrects her kajal and eyeliner...puts up some gloss) ...my clothes aren't they extra modern type...manikk kya sochega mere bare me( straightens her clothes then walks out) at the moment she entered the hall were party was going on she heared a mesmerizing voice which she was craving to hear for 2 years when she was far away from this voice...
guitar was being played in a perfect melody...everybody was lost in the voice...
Natasha found that manikk was playing the guitarrr and singing...her eyes stopped there on him
Paas ayeee...dooriyan fir bhi kam na hui...ek adhrui si hamari kahani...
asmaan ko zamee yeh zaroori nhi janle...janleee
ishq sacha nhi jisko milti nhi manzilee...
rang the nor tha jab kareeb tu tha( Manik had tears in his eyes somehow he was controlling )
ek jannat sa tha yeh jahaan
wakt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa likhke chor gaya tu kaahaa!
hamari adhrui kahani...hamaaari adhuri kahani... (manikk put his hands on his face puts the guitar and walked from the stage to the back area as he didn't wanted everybody to see he in tears...)
Natasha started crying and left the bar watching manikk like this...he never cried..it showed that he was broken inside and really neede someone to love him...

Back area...
manikk- cabirI want my nandini back( was crying badly) I frst time went to god and asked for something that plz save my nandini but he took away her from me...i don't wanna live I could have died but nandini gave me promise that I would live on her behalf...i don't have the power...
cabir- chup kr ab manikk ham h na hamare liye jee...kyu ro rha h ( also had tears)yr kya hogya...nandini nhi aa skti vapas...she has gone far far away...everything happens for a good cause...
manikk- I don't know why but my heart says that she is live yet so away from me...cabir mujhe nhi rehna yaha yr chl ...mai tujhe ghar drop krke hotel chle jata hu

Natasha(nandini) was walking alone on the road...she wanted manikk so badly...but vo kis muh se btati ki voh hee manikk ki nandini h ...she was drenching in the rain ...craving for manikk's touch ...seen manikk crying she was feeling very bad...she couldn't stop herself from crying...

On the other side manikk was on the way to the hotel after dropping Cabir...he saw a girl walking on road fully drenched in water...he immediately recognized her she was Natasha...he got out from the car and walked towards her...as soon as Natasha(nandini) saw him she in a moment hugged him...manikk felt the touch and though she was nandini and he also hugged her very tight...unknowingly the soles were coming towards each other...
BG TUNE
aaannn...aa..hoo ooo...sun sathiya mahiyaan
barsa de ishqa ki sihayiya...
rang jau rang rang jau re..haan haari mai...
tujhpei he mai jhar jhar jhaarr jau re..haaji
piya bs teri meherbani...
chule to khari mai...aa
sun sathiya mahiya
barsa de ishqa ki sihayayi...

manikk- tum bighi hui ho kya krri ho yaha...(nandini(natasha was just looking at her...)chlo car mei baidho ...
precap- two soles will meet again manic will get his love back in his life
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Amazing update.. I read your story And i really love it
Please continue soon..
Take care😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
You're The password to my life
Part 4 ( sorry for making u guys wait so much kaan pakad ke sry)
manikk and Natasha(nandini) were hugging each other...manikk pov- why m feeling the same concern for her which I only felt for my princess my nandu...why m feeling like never letting u go from my arms...why m feeling hurt when u r crying...what is happening to my heart...why its beating again like befor it did...
manikk cupped his hand on her cheeks( still it was raining and they both were drenching)...
nandini- m feeling very bad..i don't know why?...m missing him a lot...
manikk- come!...( and hug her again) socho ki mai hee vo hu...the person u love...mai hu na...ajao( takes her to the car)
even he didn't know why he was so concered for Natasha...which was still a stanger to him...being with a stanger he felt that he has known her from years...
now both were in the car ...manikk was driving with right hand ...his left hand holding natasha's right hand...natasha's pov( nandini pov)- never leave my hand...ever ...ever in my life...our love is what which is forever...my heart says that we are destined together...

Yeh dooriyan
Yeh dooriyan
Yeh dooriyan
In raahon ki dooriyan
Nigahon ki dooriyan
Hum rahon ki dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan
Kyun koi paas hai
Door hai Kyun koi
Jaane Na koi yahan pe
Aa Raha paas ya door mein ja raha
Janu na mein hoon kahan pe
Yeh dooriyan
In raahon ki dooriyan
Nigahon ki dooriyan
Hum rahon ki dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan

LOCATION - woldrof Astoria newyork( one of the famous hotel of newyork where the people invited in the marriage were asked to live)
In the room both had changed there clothes...were sitting on the bed and sipping there coffee...
Natasha( nandini) picked up the photo of nandini with manikk which was lying on the shelf of the bed...
Natasha- u miss her?
manikk- ( glared at her) shez was my life ...I cared for her...I showered love on her...nothing was in the world she asked me and I didn't give her...I cherish the love we shared...still I was not able to save her...mere vajah she suffered ( natasha's pov- manikk mai zinda hu tumhare liye...abhi bhi tumhare pas...tumhari prayers ke vajah se mai yahan hu...i love u more than I love myself)
Natasha put her hand on one of his cheeks... " m here na...mai hu na...tum mujhe apni nandini mano...i will do anything if it can console u ...m ur nandini think like that" the moment she said m ur nandini manikk looked at her ...his heart said ki vahi tumhari nandini h never let her go...his heart bumped a little...he went and hugged her ... "if u feel better the I can be ur nandini"
Natasha buried in his arms and they both slept hugging each other...manikk felt like she was his nandini ...he slept peacefully 1st time in 2 years...today he didn't see nandini in his dreams...he had nandini in front of him yet far away...( natasha's pov- I will not take away this peace from u ...i cant see u hurt...I will tell u everything tomorrow...my monster...u will get ur monsteress tomorrow...)
precap- shaadi time and reunion of two soles
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Amazing updates!!
Continue soon :)

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