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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi kutties... 😃

Here is another Rom-com

It's a thought popped up after watching a simple expression of RKB and JKR in 18 June 2015 episode.

Raman thinking proudly about his plan to send the ladies to the spa and let Adi do his project with Vinni.

Apart from that what clicked me is our Jagga Jasoos's expression seeing her Ravan Kumar lost in thoughts 🤣

This TS [TWO/THREE SHOTS I'm not sure 😆 ] is entirely different from the scenario 😉

I'm giving you a Kutty/tiny Intro 😳

Tell me if I should continue 😊

DO NOT COUNT THE PROLOGUE AS A SHOT

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PART-1 MERA PATI KA TEEZRA BACHCHA

PART-2 MERI BIWI KI IKLAUTA WEAKNESS

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Kutties... 😊

Ishita's thought is in GREEN

Not proofread
So please ignore typos and other errors

Enjoy reading 🤗

PROLOGUE

"Papa...it isn't what you think...Vinni is just...a friend."

"Beta...papa bhi pehale tere jaise chote dhe." Laying on the bed keeping his head in his hand elbowing the pillow, Aur haan, tere JUST FRIEND jaise bahut saare JUST FRIENDS dhe mujhe."

[Son papa also was a kid like you. And I had a lot of JUST FRIENDS like your JUST FRIEND]

Curiously, "Really papa! Apko abhi bhi GIRLFRIENDS hai?"

[You still have GFs]

Creasing his eyebrows, "Tum jasoosi toh nahin kar rahe hai?"

[You're not spying right?]

"No way papa...MAN TO MAN bolona..."

Grinning, "MAN TO MAN huh..! Tu toh sirf anda ho, murga banne keliye abhi bhi vakt hai"

[You're just an egg, there is time for becoming cock]

Pouting his face, "OK leave it. Ab bolo ap baat karoge nah Vinni ki mom se...?"

[Tell me will you talk to Vinni's mom?]

"Haan...I'll do it perfectly, lekin pehale tere Ishima ko ghar se bhagana hoga"

[But we should throw your Ishima out of this house]

*SHOCK*

Clearing the confusion, "Matlab...for the time being"

Nodding his head seriously, "Haan...you're right"

Ishita came there with Adi's snacks and stopped smelling something fishy cooking up between the father-son duo. Both of them continued talking without knowing the Jagga Jasoos's presence.

"Voh dikhne mein kaisi hai?"

[How she looks like?]

"Ishima jaise tall nahin..."

[Not tall like Ishima]

"Matlab mere liye perfect height!"

[Means perfect height for me]

"Haan ap keliye..."

[Yeah for you]

"Naam kya kaha...?"

[What's her name?]

"Stella."

"Oh cool...! Ek meri biwi...kaisa naam rakha hai...! Jaise ki Tongue Twister! I.S.H.I.T.A!! Agar yeh Stella hothi toh kitni achi hothi right...?"

[My wife's...what kind of name is that! ISHITA! It would have been good if it was Stella]

"Haan papa...STELLA BHALLA nice combo...hahaha"😆

[Yes papa]

"Not so funny yaar"

"Oops...sorry papa"

"Aur bolo...voice...achi hai...? Matlab...phone pe baat toh karna padega nah...mere GIRLFRIENDS ke list toda extend karna chahta hun"

[Say more. How is her voice? I mean I may need to talk to her...I wish to extend the list of my GFs]

"You're awesome papa! You're a ROMEO"

"Oye...Don't insult me like that...Romeo has only one Juliet...but Raman Kumar Bhalla has a lot of JULIETS...!"

*IMPOSSIBLE* 😲

"Yeh kya ho raha hai? Raman ka itne saare GIRLFRIENDS hai...aur Adi ko sab kuch pata hai...! And he is going to try on some STELLA to make her BHALLA...!!!!"

[what's happening? Raman has this much GFs and Adi knows everything!]

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...anika...
Without much ado,please continue.

Thank you...🤗

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Thank you...🤗

Welcome ji..

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

Can I borrow your word from one of Raman story you write . "What I have to ask permission to sleep"So you please continue don't have to wait for permission from all of us to continue.😉 ( I am not rude to you ok don't be serious with me.)

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly
Can I borrow your word from one of Raman story you write . "What I have to ask permission to sleep"So you please continue don't have to wait for permission from all of us to continue.😉( I am not rude to you ok don't be serious with me.)

But I felt it like a joke Jum 😉
Continue to give such quoted-rude-jokes 🤣