NEW TS: RAMAN AND HIS CHAKKARS...!__LAST PART on Page-10 [PMs Later] - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Hi Kutties...😊
A late and last update.
Ishita's thoughts in GREENand Raman's in BLUE
Not proofread so ignore typos and errors.
Enjoy reading 🤗


Part-2

MERI BIWI KI IKLAUTA WEAKNESS



"Raman really has a newborn baby! Toh sach mein unka chakkar chal raha hai! Oh no...voh teezri shaadi kardiya? If he wanted another child...why did he marry me? I'm just the caretaker of Adi and Ruhi? Sach mein Stella ko Bhalla bana diya Ravan ne...! Aj mein apko chodunga nahin Raman"

[He really has affairs! He married for the third time! He really made Stella a Bhalla! I won't leave you today Raman]

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Raman came home so late and saw Ishita still awake. It was not unusual. But what alarmed him was her reddened face.


*NOT BLUSH* 😡


It is anger for sure and the way she walked back and forth signed the imending danger ahead. Raman Kumar Bhalla is brave but easy to be intimidated by the one and only Jhansi Ki Rani alive, his wife.


He was confused of whether to walk into the pit or ran against it. Finally not finding a reason for her to be mad at him he walked towards her silently. She was standing near the bed. He nicely hugged her from behind only to be backed of getting a not so nice beat on his stomach.


"What's wrong yaar?" He asked while trying to pinch the pain.


In no time her eyes welled up. She was hell angry and sad on the realization that her husband is married third time and has have a baby for the third time from his third wife. She sat on the bed snatching his dear mobile from his hand. He could understand that the problem is way too serious. But he didn't expect her to thrash his mobile on the floor. He closed his mouth with his palm not knowing whether to lash out or calm her down.


"Yeh...tune kya kiya yaar?"He tried to sound normal but the tint of anger was still visible.

[What have you done?]


He sat beside her only to see her move away. He concluded that the problem will be about their make out sessions.


"Kal kuch galat kiya? Yeh toh chune tak nahin deti...kya hua hai ise...agar touch karun toh maar toh nahin daloge...! Phirphi...ise kya hua...?"

[Did I do anything wrong last night? She is not letting me touch...what happened to her...She won't kill me for touching! Though...what happened?]


"Ishita...yaar aise muh banakar mat baito. I love your smiling face." He tried to butter her.

[Don't make faces.]


"Aur kiske smiling faces pasand hai apko?" She glared at him.

[Who else's smiling faces you like?]


"Matlab kya hai..." He was a bit scared now.

[What you mean]


*THAT HE ALREADY IS* 😆


"Drama mat karo Raman...! Mujhe sab kuch pata hai apke chakkar ke bare mein." She screamed on top of her voice.

[Don't do drama. I know everything regarding your affairs]


He was like, "Yeh kis Raman Bhalla ke baat kar rahe hai????"

[She talks about which RKB?]


"Ap teezra shaadi kiya aur teezra bacha bhi hogaya...! Aur apne mujhse yeh baat chupaya!" She expressed in disbelief.

[You married for the third time and has have a third child! You hide it from me!]


"Arey...admi todi biwi ko apne chakkar ke bare mein batadunga!" He said as a matter of fact.

[Man seldom says about their affair to wife]


"Ayyo Murugan...Yeh kaisa pati mila mujhe. Kitne besharam hai yeh. Chakkar chala raha hai aur upar se safayi de rahe hai. Chee Raman chee...!" She said to herself and her Murugan.

[What a husband have I got. Shameless. He is reasoning even after having affairs]


"Yeh teri murugan ko bhi do patniyan hai...pata nahi kitne chakkar hai us admi ko. Usse koyi problem nahin...bechara meine kya kiya?" He wondered.

[Your Murugan has have two wives. Don't know how many more affairs. You don't have any problem with that. Poor me what did I do?]


"Murugan ko koyi chakkar nahin hai. Aur donon patniyon ko khush rakha hai voh. Ap jaise teezre ki peeche nahin gaya." She spat back.

[Murugan doesn't have affair. And he kept both his wives happy. Didn't went behind third one like you]


"Oh hello...mujhe kahan do-do patniyan hai? Ek tum ho bas" He tried to clear.

[Where I've two wives? I've nobly one, you]


"Matlab ap dobara shaadi karke Human Murugan banneka soch rahe ho?" She opened her mouth in an 'O'.

[Means you wanted to become Human Murugan by marrying second time?]


She has tested his patience. Now lecture time is over. she really needs some practicals from Raman Kumar Bhalla.
He pushed her down in the bed accidently unknotting the robe of her nightgown. She was too shocked to react. Before she could say something, he smashed her lips with his demanding one. Getting bitted by his hungry teeth she began to respond the feverish lip lock.


She crawled on her back towards the pillows all the while caressing his head and neck not being able to withstand his torturous lips. Both of them where out of breath and ready to explode in the passion. Ishita on the otherhand was restless thinking what to do.


"Tujhe control karne ka ek hi tareeka hai madrasan. Ab joh mein bolunga voh tum karega. Mujhse panka liya hai nah. Mujhpar shak hai nah tujhe. Ab samjhata hun!"

[This is the only way by which I can control you. Now you'll do as I say. You messed up with me. Doubted me. I'll show you]


"Kya...problem...hai?" He asked while taking off her robe.

[What's your problem?]


She dug her nails in his shoulder while he rained kisses on her neckline.


"Take off my shirt." He commanded biting her earlobe. She did it like his slave while he began to strip off her dress.


"Kiske chakkarke bare mein baat kar rahe dhe?" [Who's affair you were talking about] He mummbled while caressing her bare back. She moaned and described everything while panting. He smiled near her belly and muttered the actuality while trailing kisses and lovebites there.


"Toh...Hmm...yeh...Sarika...dhe...Aur...Vinni...I'm sorry..."She groaned while he continued his ministrations.

[So...hmm...it was Sarika...and Vinni...]


He came upwards and looked at her for some time and questioned, "Don't you trust me?" For which she murmured, "I'm afraid if I'm enough for you or..."


"You're perfect." With that he rammed her lips again in a searing kiss.


THE END

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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Hi Gaya,
Just read the TS together. It was awesome I liked the way of Raman clearing Ishita doubt but hopefully he locked the door when he came inside the room😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Gayu...
Not expected ending baba...I thought more drama , though I love Raman taking everything in hands...that was romantic ji...yeh sab darr jo hota h fake hota h..., gussa ataa h to biwi ko kha gya...

I am blushing ...blush blush ...end was simply superb...
But chotu nhi tha...

Chal 3 update in a day with new concept is enough. Nhiii...
I know I am greedy...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Gaya,

Just read the TS together. It was awesome I liked the way of Raman clearing Ishita doubt but hopefully he locked the door when he came inside the room😉

thanks for reading yaar 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: --abha--

Gayu...
Not expected ending baba...I thought more drama , though I love Raman taking everything in hands...that was romantic ji...yeh sab darr jo hota h fake hota h..., gussa ataa h to biwi ko kha gya...

I am blushing ...blush blush ...end was simply superb...
But chotu nhi tha...

Chal 3 update in a day with new concept is enough. Nhiii...
I know I am greedy...😉

i like giving shocks...😉
so expect such shocking endings anytime 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


i like giving shocks...😉
so expect such shocking endings anytime😆


I don't mind...ask other 2 devils...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Story finish😭 so fast. Only Raman can tame JKR a with his passion. I love his order take his shirt out.now I will wait for the latest story to update that one look very intersting an full with mysterious.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Late chalega... But last why...
I thought some more nautanki and fun moments we will have
Ny way
It was awesome
Hilarious
N
Entertaining
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Just read it
All in one go
Superb job yr.
Nice way of controlling his jkr
But like da way u cleared da my
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Omg amazing prologue
Stella and all

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