NEW TS: RAMAN AND HIS CHAKKARS...!__LAST PART on Page-10 [PMs Later] - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: hana_y

So here raman is romeo wow n juliet is ishita

Raman bhalla a lover teacher firvhis son so funny

Stela bhalla

Too good gaya please cont from.my side


Love teacher 🤣
Will continue soon dear 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: rufana10


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it was so funny😆
romeo raman😆
no need to ask us
just update it soon😃


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Sure...
Coming soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Hi Kutties 😊

I know you all would have forgotten about this TS 😆

Ishita's thoughts in GREEN

Here goes the first part.

Not proofread so please ignore typos.

Enjoy Reading 🤗




part 1

MERA PATI KA TEEZARA BACHCHA...!



Ishita's brain was boiling from the past three days with jealousy and insecurity thinking of Raman having affairs. On the other hand Raman was trying to make his son understand how to handle his youth. He was counseling his son to be open to his dad about everything the way he is to him. He wanted to give extra care to Adi.


It was an unusual night when Raman was working overnight. He never worked overnight after confessing his love for Ishita. There relationship changed drastically from the last month. That is the reason which fuelled Ishita's doubts. She is thinking that Raman lost interest in her thus going after random women. He on the other side was frustrated over his new project and presentation work. The late night working on his lappy while his beautiful wife sleeping beside him was killing him from within. He stole glances at her while working.


It was almost 2 O'clock when Ishita startled open her eyes hearing the ringtone of Raman's mobile. He didn't see her following him because he sneaked out of there to talk to the caller without disturbing his sleeping beauty.


"Hello stella...kya hua?"

[What happened?]


"Vinni has high fever. So she can't come for the project work. She is admitted in Royal Hospital. I'm so worried. Her dad is out of station."


"Do you want me to come over there...? Now?"


"No thank you Raman...it's ok. I'll manage"


"Well...I'll come tomorrow. Take care."



Raman's part of the conversation was heard by Ishita. She ran to the bedroom and sunk herself in the bed on her front. Tears flowed down thinking her fears coming true.


"Kahin unhe aisa toh nahin lag raha hai jaise ki main...ignore kar rahi hun...! Ayyo amma...jabse meri research commence hogaya...we didn't made...! Kahin isiliye toh nahin...? OK Ishu...stop thinking too much.Let him come after talking to HIS STELLA."

[Whether he feels that I'm ignoring him. We didn't made ... From when my research was commenced. Is that the reason?]


Raman came inside after five minutes and found Ishita missing. He heard the sound of water tickling down in the bathroom. Assuming her to be inside the bathroom he again immersed him in his presentation. After taking the much needed time in the bathroom she came out wearing a dark blue silky lingerie. He can see her intentions from the way she ascended towards him. She was all set to seduce her husband.


The colour a perfect contrast to her skin making her look fairer. Her hair open and her skin smoother. He closed his lappy unknown to himself drowning in her beauty. She stood a little away from him and stretched her arms. His jaws dropped to the floor watching her throwing the overcoat aside. The thin strap of the lingerie gave him a good view of her shoulders till her neckline. He felt her curves are carved only for that dress. Or is it the dress which gave him a good view of his favourite spots?

*HAYE MAIN MAR JAAVAN*

[II'm dead]


Leaving behind her inhibitions, she walked to him. He smiled naughtily and pulled her by her waist when she closed in.

*PRACTICAL AND PRESENTATION* 😛

*******************************************************************************************

After two hours;

"Hmm...kal mujhe ek important prentation hai. You made me work so hard instead of letting me sleep."

[I've an important presentation tomorrow]


"Then don't overwork from tomorrow onwards."


"Oh...don't expect me to. I really love this job...anytime"


"Chee...besharam !"


[Shameless]


Sleeping in his arms Ishita thought of the incidents.


"Mera Raman hai. He loves only me. And...I can't tolerate the thought of him being touched by another women. Ayyo...aisa kuch hoga kya? Use kisi aur chua hai...? No...! Aise nahin hoga"

[He's my Raman___If it happens? Anyone else touched him? Never]


She raised her head from his chest and looked at his sleeping form. His left hand involuntarily began to caress her bare back murmuring her name softly to pat her to sleep though he was in deep sleep. She kissed his heart and went to a peaceful sleep after three days of madness. She was happy that her husband only remembers her name even if he is not conscious.


Next morning was so usual in the Bhalla house. Ishita was still a bit suspicious because of Raman's weird behaviour. She saw him eying Adi and muttering an "it's OK" to him. She heard him saying, "You handle your Ishima while I'll handle her."


*THESE MEN* 😡


Raman bid bye to everyone and went to meet Vinni before going to office. Ishita who was growing suspicious of Raman's chakkars followed him after asking Romi to handle Adi.


Raman walked to the reception of Royal Hospital Ishita followed him from behind. The receptionist told him the room and he casually strode towards it. Ishita stood several feets away from him and watched him entering the room. After not seeing him returning she decided to take a sneak peak.


When she was about to move forward a person bumped into her making her purse falling down along with the strangers files and papers. While Ishita was busy taking her stuffs saying sorry to the stranger Raman walked past them. He didn't see her as her hair covered the right side of her face while she leaned down to collect her stuffs.


When she walked towards the room Vinni went to the bathroom and Stella sat on the bed while the nurse gave her some medicines. Ishita thought it is the woman with whom Raman has have an affair. She fisted her hands in anger. Mustering all her courage she decided to confront the homebreaker. That was when she clearly heard their coversation.


Nurse: "How is your baby?"


Stella: "She is doing fine..."


Ishita got the shock of her life is an understatement. She was devastated to know that Raman has another baby.


*A THIRD ONE*😆


At the sametime, when Raman was passing by he saw Sarika through the door which was ajar. He entered her room to see her. She has given birth to a baby boy. He being the bade papa spent some happy moments with the kiddo. He asked her to call him anytime for anything. He tried to indirectly inform her that Romi has changed for good. She smiled a genuine one hearing his name.


Meanwhile, Ishita changed her decision to not to meet the lady and turned to go. She saw Raman standing near the reception. She walked to his side determined to confront him but again got blocked by another stranger. She wanted to talk to him but the stranger made it difficult and she could only hear his voice and the receptionist's. That too the final lines.


"Please call me if there is any urgency. She is family."


"You mean Mrs Bhalla and her baby?"


"Yeah...she and her baby..."


"Raman really has a newborn baby! Toh sach mein unka chakkar chal raha hai! Oh no...voh teezri shaadi kardiya? If he wanted another child...why did he marry me? I'm just the caretaker of Adi and Ruhi? Sach mein Stella ko Bhalla bana diya Ravan ne...! Aj mein apko chodunga nahin Raman"


[He really has affairs! He married for the third time! He really made Stella a Bhalla! I won't leave you today Raman]




So that's it Kutties...

It's a Two short..so one more part will end it 😊

Do LIKE and COMMENT

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Haha. Loved Raman and Adi's talk. Lol on Ishu's POV. 🤣 pls continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
OMG the whole confusion of Hosiptal scene was hillarious. 🤣 Puttar is going to get beating from Biwi. 🤣
Edited by ..Mehak.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Good one Ishu sometime is too much suspect had question and answer for her own self. Raman action whole night till morning raise doubt in Ishu head and mind. And she follow him and miss all the scence she got only partial and again she think he had an affair and new baby. 🤣🤣 How many time you will put him to marry and have baby🤣🤣 thank you for new story and it is hilarious one. Will wait how she will confront him for next update.👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Sounds amazing
Looking forward to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Part one was so funny
Very well written
Hospital scene was hilarious😆
Simply loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49



Lol lol
😆😆 Papam putter aj to thu gaya beta 😉 aj hong I their. Dhulai with a branded and exclusive washing prouder named ishita Raman Kumar bhalla 😉 both advices dene ka shock hai na Abb sahogay apne biwi ka rudra roop 😆

And my dear madrasan ur also in for a long teasing session and a good punishment from rkb 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Haha gays omg haha lolzzz
my tummy..
omg haha
update soon

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