MG FF - Tum Mille #2 updt last pt on pg 35 june 16 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
geet is very happy as maan ask for double marriage

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Geet happy knowing tej accepted maan
She wants to hear ilu from maan
But he is not that easy
He told about their 2nd marriage
She is happy to be his
Both back to delhi
Geets graduation day
Maan excited more than her
Lollz...he got ready in office attire
N geet made him change to casuals
He is thinking to change his wardrobe..not bad maan babu

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi amazing update! well written! Geet is happy! all is well! she recalls wen she first met Maan! Maan has yet 2 confess! Its her graduation! Maan excited! he makes breakfast 4 her! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update..Maaneet's 2nd marriage, Geet's graduation, Maan is more excited..Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 87 - teji accepts their marriage and both were happy. maan is more excited for their 2nd marriage. geet still angry that he did not say her I love you. back in delhi maan excited for her graduation and their date. hope now geet's wish will be fulfilled.
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Posted: 10 years ago
part -86
beautiful update.
maaneet marrying again..
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Posted: 10 years ago
part-87
lovely update..
geet is very happy as maan ask for marriage..
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely superb update..te way my maaneet ki never nok jhoks was lovely cute..my maan teasing his geet making her shy shy was lovely..te way my maan taking his geet back to delhi after arranging for their wedding was lovely..te way geet ki pov abt her life and how my maan became her saviour and now her life was lovely..te way my maan ki excitement for his geet as she achieved her dreams and reached her goal after so much hustles was lovely..i love te update yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely ud
maaneet argument as usual
maan asked her fr re marriage
and she accepted
maan being naughty with geet as daadi
is not with them and ready to go fr geet gradation ceremony
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 88

At the college...

The girls are waiting to see MSK back, and they are lucky that they get to see him often at their campus, thanks to Geet...

Maan's royal entry hits the campus like a tornado and the girls are swept by it, they are awe struck and they stand still gazing Maan intensely with their eyes almost poping out, what a killer look, every girl would die for that smashing deadly looks...

Maan just steps out when Geet shouts...

Geet: Maan sir, rukh jao

Maan turns and looks at Geet, her face is worth seing, ohh the jealous factor, Geet is staring those innocent girls as if to burn them into ash...

Maan: kya hua Geet?

Geet: aap andar beitjao, jaldhi

Maan: par Geet, we have to get in, it's time for the function

Geet: I know I know, you just get in she comes to the other side, literally pushes him in and shuts the door...she then gets back to her seat...

Geet: driver, andar jao

Maan: but Geet, you can't go in the car

Geet: you don't worry, our Chancellor always comes in the car

Maan: but Geet, he's the chancellor

Geet: sir, you are MSK, the MSK

Maan: Geet, don't get yourself into trouble, this is not KC

Geet: sir, no problem, if they want to throw me out let them, anyway this is my last day,so why bother

Maan wonders how possessive this girl could be and what's in store for him in future, how about a space suit, that would probably conceal his good looks, but our MSK would look hot in any suit...

As they get down at the auditorium entrance Geet runs and catches hold of Maan's arms and walks along with him sticking to him tight so as to declare to the girls that this is my man, stay away from him...

Maan takes his seat in the guest space while Geet settles with her friends though she didn't want to leave Maan alone...

She is only worried about Maan as all the girls are interested in him only, she keeps checking him constantly...

But Maan is least bothered about the hype around him and he is only here for Geet...

When Geet climbs the dias to receive her degree from the chief guest, one of her proffessors, it's smiley, introduces Geet specially to the chief guest and praises Geet...Maan felt very proud at that moment and is happy that Teji rightly sent Geet to Delhi to pursue her studies...

Maan is lucky to have helped her a little bit but it's all her own efforts that she had reached this position today...if not for her zidd to study she would not have come to Delhi and Maan would have lost the most precious pearl that God gifted him...Maan couldn't imagne what his life would have been without Geet, by this time he might have achieved all his goals as a businessman and still his life would have remained empty...

Thank God Geet is so studious for that matter, his Mishty is both intelligent and beautiful...

After Geet has done with her job she immediately takes Maan away from that place...

Geet takes Maan out...

She sighs after they come far from the crazy girls...

Geet: thank god aap bach gaye

Maan: Geet, what happened? Tum itna pareshaan kyun ho?

Geet: it's all my fault, mujhe na aapko ussi kapde pe KC bhejdena chahiye thi, look at them, ohh even hawks would not match their hungry eyes

Yes, Geet is protecting Maan from the girls just like a chicken protects its chicks from the hawk...

Maan: relax Geet, poor girls, it's not their fault, and don't you forget that you are also one among them, MSK drooler

Geet: kya? ye galatfami abhi bhool jao, mein toh sirf dadi ki kushi ke liye aapko shadhi kar rahi hoon, smajhe aap?

Maan: oh God Geet, tum kab se joot bolne lagi?

Geet: aap ko kya lagtha mein ye shadhi mere liye kar rahi hoon?

Maan: nahi Geet, mein jaantha hoon ki ye shadhi tum mere liye kar rahi ho, haina?

That's also true...Geet wanted to help Maan get out of his past and in that process she became his present...she did this b'coz she wanted to see him happy...and now his happiness lies in her happiness...babaji ne kya jodi banaya hai?

Geet stops at the chaat club...and she looks at Maan...

Maan: what?

Geet: woh mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maan: no way Geet, humme jaana hai

Geet: kya?

Maan also wanted to leave as they have other plans...

Maan: Geet, jaldhi karo

Geet spots a couple of girls following them to speak to Maan...

Geet: haan haan, humme pehle yahan se jaana chahiye

Maan: haan Geet, we are getting late

Geet: for what? so you have your meeting today also?

Maan: correction Geet, we have a meeting

Geet: with whom? Mr.sinha? woh toh gale hafte hai

Maan: no my sweetheart, with each other

Geet: what?

Maan: Geeet we are flying to Goa

Geet is so happy...: what? are you serious?

Maan: yeah Geet, and our flight is waiting

On their way Maan thinks about his life before and after Geet...

For once Maan wants to be humane, let his emotions take over him, he is tired of running away and hiding from reality, how long would he shy away from his life, his happiness, his bundle of joy, his Mishty, fearing the pain of losing them...

Yes, Vicky left him at the wrong time, just when he felt like he had the perfect life with Vicky getting married as Dadi wished...Maan only wanted to see Vicky sit back and enjoy the fruits of his hardwork...that was the time for Vicky to savour the sweet taste of success in business and also step into family life...but God called Vicky back, as they say God recalls His favourite children to His Kingdom sooner...

Though Vicky is an inevitable part of his life even after he left Maan has now realized that Geet has slowly made her way into his heart without his knowledge and before he himself could realize what was happening she became an integral part of his life, she didn't fight for Vicky's place but she made a place of her own in Maan's not so big heart...kanjoos Khurana, always skeptical about sharing his love with anyone but his family...specially his big Bro...

Maan thinks about Geet's entry into his life and the changes she brought within him, Geet on the other hand is desperately waiting to hear those three word "ILU" from Maan, Maan has passed that stage long back and he never bothered about words as words are not good enough to express their love for each other and their love is not the ordinay kind, love at first sight, and the honeymoon period filled with all kinds of pleasures ignoring the bitter reality about each others weak points and later lamenting about them, Maneet's love story has been thru all the difficulties, they met at a point when both of them were at the worst part of their life, almost close to losing their battles with fate and losing all the hopes of a life ahead...

Yes, they had some starting problem but once they overcame their early hick-ups then there is no looking back, their lovestory has been on a roller coaster ride from there...

Here they are waiting to leap higher and higher with all the hurdles cleared and ready to take on the challenges in store for them in the future...

Geet has found someone whom she can trust, someone who is there for her at the time she needed a support, someone she can rely on, not like her useless father or helpless foster family, here is someone who can take care of her troubles and free her from worries about her future...that's what she has been yearning for, someone to lean on, someone who is ready to take up her problems as his and always be there for her whenever she needed a hand or a word of assurance, someone just to say "I'm here for you, don't worry about anything and enjoy this moment without any fear about the future" it's not the money she needed, it's the heart, the willingness to own her as his,she is overwhelmed when he says Maan ki Geet, after all she is just a little girl with all the colorful dreams of a beautiful life, she always had a doubt that she doen't belong to anyone, she is all alone, on her own, being a part of another family and not knowing her limits, she always had this question poping out every now and then..."kya mujhe haq hai?" to ask for anything, to expect anything, to express her anger, to say no to anything that she doesn't like...

That's why sometimes she is so adamant to get things done as she wishes just to ensure herself that she is not alone and she keeps testing her rights that way...how many times she tells herself that "I'm not alone and this is my family"...but still the question lingers in her mind if this is real or she is trying to fool herself...

But with Maan she never had the feeling that she is an outsider, whether it's dadi or for that matter MSK himself Geet felt that she is one of them, she easily gets angry with him never thinking about her position, that she is surviving under his support, for not even once did Dadi or Maan made her feel that way...

Maan was mad about her only when she deliberately tried to come inbetween him and Vicky, Geet knew what she was doing and she also knew how hard it would be for Maan to accept that Geet is afterall right in this case and he has kept his eyes blind folded when it comes to Vicky and actually he is afraid to move on for he lost hold of his Bro's hands and Geet came to his rescue by lending her hand and though initially Maan's ego stopped him from accepting Geet's hands and coming out of the darkness Geet persisted and succeeded atlast, Maan finally got hold of his life, you actually need someone to hold on to in your life and that's when you want to live, live for that someone, if you lose that someone your life becomes meaningless and you lose interest to live, but luckily for Maan Geet came at the right time as a replacement for Vicky in his life...

They reach Goa in the evening...

And Maan takes Geet straight to the beach...

His eyes turn watery and he keeps staring the waves for a while...

Geet waits for Maan to overcome his emotions...

Maan returns to his present quickly...

It's a beautiful evening with the sunset giving the beach a golden glow...

Maan: Geet, tum jaanthi ho ki hum yahan kyun aaye hai?

Geet: hmm, Vicky bhaiya ke aashirwaad lene

Maan opens his arms and welcomes Geet...

Geet runs and hugs him...

Maan: I Love You Geet

Maan shouts so that he can beat the roar of the ocean...

Maan: I love Geet, haan, I Love Geet handa

Geet is overwhelmed...

Geet: I love you Maan

Maneet passionate hug...

Maan: Geet, this is where my life ended that day, and here I'm back at the same place to start my life afresh all over again, I never knew that I have another chance, a second life until I met you Geet, you are the one who made me believe in life once again, and from you I learnt a lot, I learnt that when the road before you closes or reaches a dead end ,there is always another road which we can only see when we have the determination to proceed and reach our destination,I learnt it from the way you tried to turn all your weaknesses into your strength, always ready to fight in any situation, and never ever give up...it's that spirit of yours that has got you so far else your life would have ended in that small village itself...

Geet: par aap ke saath ke bina mein kuch nahi kar pathi, aap hai toh mein hoon

Maan: ab mujhe patha chal gaya ki mujhe kya karna, I want to live, I want to be happy, That's what Bro wished, he wishe to see me happy like a prince and so he wanted to built an empire, KC forme, how foolish I was to think that KC is his dream, no, my happiness is his dream and he will be happy to see his Prince Maan starting a new life with his princess Geet, thank you Geet, thanks for everything, and I promise you Geet, infront of the same waves that took Bro away from me, that I'll be with you in all your joys and sorrows for the rest of our lives and beyond, will you marry me Geet, Maan takes out a diamond ring and proposes Geet in style...

Geet immediately accepts and Maan slides the ring into her finger and kisses her...

Maneet are married happily and start their life with maaahi magic...

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