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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heya guys! its Sree here..actually Bori aka Sakshi was having some problem to post the Chapter...so I am posting it on her behalf! .. 😳


Finally as I promise I am updating it. Its pretty fast na. 🤣🤣

I hope you will enjoy it.

Happy reading guys.


LAST CHAPTER


After 5 year,...

SANYU'S POV

sanyu woke up its time to go hospital. You are being late.' As usual I heard my mother calling for me to wake-up.but I am a lazy girl. So I covered my head with duvet hoping that I will no longer listening my mother's threats for waking. 🤣 but as always my mother finally succeed in her most dangerous task of waking me up. 🤣🤣 .

I made my way to closet to ready for hospital. Ya finally I achieved what I want to. I am doing internship in a hospital. Thinking about these 5 years I made my way toward dining area. My father is really proud on me. He always says that I am his son not a daughter. He also says that he is happy to having me instead of a boy. Because a girl is equal to ten sons.

I didn't forget my life 5 years ago. I remember every second of my life. Finally wishing my father good morning and have my breakfast I am ready to go my destination.

5 years passed. New day new hope. I wish that today will be the day of what I am waiting for. Like so easily for everyone these day passed but for me every single day was killing me. I know it is foolish of still waiting him but I am and I will. I cannot loose my faith in him. I don't know but I believe he'll come.

Randhir will come.

He will surely come.

My chain of thoughts were broken by kriti's voice. Kriti is a nice girl who is also an intern in same hospital. She helps me when I didn't want to examine someone 🤣🤣. Like seriously always surrounded with patient you want some time for your peace of mind. Ok I know you all are thinking I am crazy which is actually sent percent true. Argh stop talking to yourself, otherwise you'll need an psychiatrist for your self.

"what happened kriti?why are you calling me continuously?" I asked her, looking at her expression I am sure some one no not some one it's a boy who catches her eyes. She is still single. And always play pranks on boys. I don't like it but she says "its an entertainment yaar" 🤣🤣

"actually i... " she starts telling me reason but I interrupt her,

s- "ya I know there is someone and you want to play your so called pranks with him"

K- sorry but this time you mistaken sumi, actually I want to play prnks on him but you will not appreciate."

Ya she calls me sumi for some particular reason and I don't know what it is. But I like this nickname.

[actually its one of my besties nickname]

s-and why you think so..."

k-"because he is a patient not with someone sadly and you have to go and check him. it's an accident case, but not so critical. You just have to clean him and give some medicines. Now go."

Sometime she acts like a child seriously how she become a doctor I always think about it.🤣🤣

RD'S POV

I am here at sanyu's city. I want to meet her. but first I have to do my work, for what I am here. I am a successful lawyer and here for hearing of a random case. My sis is also come with me for so-called her shoppings. I mean these girls and their shoppings. 🤣🤣

These 5 years of my life was the difficult phase of my life. I was waiting for the day when I will able to meet her. ya sanyu. I didn't forget her. and I cant. How can I when I already give her my heart, so basically I cannot forget where my heart is.

I was just crossing the road when I feel a wave of hurt in my left hand. Ohh I realise that someone hurt me while driving his bike. I look at my hand. Its not much hurt but it start bleeding. I know if I go in this condition, di will freaked out. So its better to go to a hospital.

I found a nearby hospital through my mobile app. [app always works 🤣]. After filling a form they told me to wait for 5 minute in common patient room. I heard some intern is going to check me, and intern is a girl. Do you think I care . no. she is not sanyu.

I was waiting for just one min and I heard some footsteps come toward me. I don't know what make me look at the person who is coming to me. When I made my eye to contact with owner of that footsteps my heart skip a little. She seems so innocent and cute and feel that I know her from somewhere. But actually I didn't.

I divert my mind by thinking something else. But I heard a little gasp from her. like she see a ghost or someone whom she didn't want to see right now. So what I don't want to think about it by the way.

She starts cleaning me and does her work. I must say she is pretty good in her work. She will become a good doctor one day. After doing her things she hurried from here. I don't know whats for that. Is it a way of treating people here or something scary on my face.🤣🤣. But I must say I found a connection with her.

SANYU'S POV

Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my god.

He is here. He is in hell here present. Omg what should I do now. Did he recognize me. But the way he looked at me I feel he didn't. ok sanyu take a deep breath in and out slowly. Repeat the process.' No in hell I can do this. 🤣🤣. Randhir is here. I don't know how to react. Should I feel worry or happy. I am seriously messed up.

don't let you hope that much high sanyu. Just remember one thing what have to happened in your life it will happen.' Keep walking and stop laughing like an idiot. 🤣🤣

I am feeling butterflies in my stomach. I seriously saw him. after 6 years we met. Oh my god. Its awesome. I collide with someone. ab yehi rah gaya tha mere daydreams ko barbad karne k liye 🤣'

I collide with none other then kriti.

k- oye hoye kiske khayalo me khoyi huyi ho madam?'

s-no one.' I replied her simply, actually lied. 🤣

k-haan haan tabhi aise bewkoofo ki tarah smile kiye ja rahi ho jaise oscar mil gayua ho.'

s-nothing yaar seriously'

I starts walking again but she stopped me saying my name.

s-ab ki kriti?' I ask her lazily seriously I am a damn lazy.

k-ohh that mr handsome asked about u and your name.'

"I thought ab yeh kon hai?' so I asked her S- WHO kriti"

k-are abhi jise tum check kar rahi thi.

Now I realise who she talking about.oh my god he asked about me. Seriously.

s- and what you told him?' curiosity filled me.

k-I told him that you name is sumi and...,.'

s- wait why you didn't told him my real name. I mean why nickname...'

k-hold on girl. Pahle to khud bolti ho strangers ko real identity nahi batana chahiye and now this. What should I follow.'

s-ya you are right. I have tro go now bye.'

I walked from there. Ok so practically its not her fault because its my fate and I have to wait.

As usual my shift was over and now I have to go to home then mall. My cousins are here and I have to go with them for shopping so I have to save some energy. Save me god. Shopping are sucks.🤣🤣 its not like that I didn't like shopping, actually I love but with my cousins it becomes seriously DANGEROUS 🤣🤣

I reached my home. Great everyone and went to change for go to THE shopping.

RD'S POV

So I am in mall with my sister. She do shopping a lot. Seriously. My thoughts go back to that intern girl what her name was' ya Sumi, nice name. but I am sure its not her real name. don't ask why, but I have a feeling so. Hey what about these feelings now. I am going to insane.🤣🤣 I have to find sanyu too.

I heard my sis say something but I didn't pay attention to it so I ask. "what di"

Rd's sis- I want to find something but I am not able so I am thinking about to take someone's help...

I interrupt her and say- and what you want from me to do.'

Rd's sis-don't worry I didn't want you to do something for me right now but only stay here and don't move.i'll be back soon' she told me like a 5 year kid.

Rd'-but where r u goin'

Rd's sis- look there are a group of girls .' she said pointing toward a group of girls. there'.

Rd- ohk .

Ritika's pov [rd's sis]

Ohk so I am here on my mission SanDhir milaap'. I don't see sanyukta personally or meet her but I can assume her by randhir's talks about her. she is surely a good girl. I am sure of this. And I want them together. So that's why I am here.

First I was confused where should I find her, but then karan and his gf [who is sanyu's friend priya remember 1st chapter 🤣🤣] helps me a lot. Priya told me that she will be here today so that's why I dragged my brother too for shopping. I know how much he loves her. and I didn't want him to loose his true love. I can understand his feelings.

Ok now back to your work. And that girl looks similar to sanyu's pic I move to a group of chatting girl. I

Rd's sis-umm hey can you help me?' I ask to them.

One of them whom I assume sanyu replies- ya sure. For what"

I must say she is very polite girl. Oh back to plan. Rd's sis- I just want to ask where I can find better bedding collection. I am not from here so...'

Sanyu-ohh I will help...

And she starts telling me where to go and where to find and etc. etc. but through this conversation I am sure she is who, whome I am finding. We exchange our number and I ask her where does she live.

I said good bye and thanks to her and moved back to my bro who is just lost in his mobile phone. Ohk no now its time for show.

Rd's sis- bro I want to tell you something.

Rd-and what it is' still looking at his damn phone, one day I will break it. 🤣🤣

Rd's sis-about...' I wait for him to look at me this time.

Rd- di are you going to tell me or not'

Rd's sis-I found sanyukta' I simply said.

Now his expressions were priceless. You should saw him. 🤣🤣

Rd's pov

I found sanyukta' these three words are still ringing in my head. Oh my god I forget how to react seriously. I mean my question is HOW.

Rd-" how?" I just able to say one word and that was how

Rd's sis- actually that's a long story but I'll tell you' and she explain me everything. I mean about her plan and karan and priya's help too. I am grateful of them, without them I don't think so I can find her so soon. So now its my turn of doing everything.

I hurried to our hotel where we are staying. I prepared my self to go to sanyu's home. I am nervous seriously nervous. But I have to do this. Its like do or die. My thoughts suddenly diverted to that intern girl. I don't know no why I am thinking about her, but there is surely something about her. but this time is not of thinking her so I drop it.

Looking at map in my mobile I made my way to sanyukta's address. There is a mediam two story house. I think it will be hers. Finally by making to much efforts I knocked on door.🤣🤣. After a minut or two a middle aged woman open the door. I guess she must be sanyu's mother.

She said to me "jii kisse milna hai aapko."

"Umm.. Mr agarwal?" I replied her politely.

"haan voh andar hi hai, beta tum andar aa jao" she said giving me space to come inside the house.

I made my way inside. She told me to sit on sofa so thatg she can call sanyu's father. I don't know how but I have to do this. are daily daily thode na girl k papa se rishtey ki baat krne jata hoon me' so I am worried. What if he reject me then?' no I have to think positive.

Sanyu's dad comes and sit infront of me. He looks exactly like a hitler dad.'🤣🤣.

"sorry to say but meine tumhe pahchana nahi." He said.

"sir actually aap mujhe nahi jantey h, so first I have to introduce myself. I am randhir, randhir singh shekhawat. And I am a lawyer by profession." I finish my short intro and take a deep breath.

"one minut are you that famous advocate Mr shekhawat who won an impossible case against a builder? Are not you?" ohh great so he knew me. It can help. 🤣

"umm ya." I replied.

"ohh nice to meet you finally." He said with offering his hand to sake. I did the same.

"so what are you doing here. I mean at retired army officers house." Ohk so now I am in danger he is an army officer, ok correct myself WAS but so what?'

I took a deeep breath 🤣🤣 and finally said it quickly.

"Actually i like your daughter and want to marry her iseriously like her and want tobe with her for forever." ohkey so it was I guess way to quick.

Sanyu's dad-"slow down and say again."

Rd- "Actually I like your daughter and want to marry her.i seriously like her and want to be with her for forever".

Her dad rise his eyebrow and said "how can I believe that you will be perfect for her. I even not know you personally so how I can give you my daughter's hand."

"I know you are worried for your daughter. Every father have to be when an unknown guy just appears from somewhere and asked for your daughter's hand. Its seriously not that easy. But I want to reassure you that I will never ever hurt your daughter or break her heart. I seriously love her and I do it by my whole heart. I know I am sounding like an idiot but I actually don't know how to convince you because without yours permission and blessing I'll not marry her. I know that she loves you a lot and she always wants to marry with your blessings so if you denied my request then I don't say anything more. But I promise that I'll nave be able to love someone else in my life." I said

Sanyu's dad- "its all ok but how you know her? because you are from different city and she never goes there or anything so..." before I can reply his question sanyu's mother interupt me.

Sanyu's mom-"umm.. actually mujhe pata hai." Wait how she know????

Sanyu's dad-"but tumhe kaise pata?"

Sanyu's mom-"voh aap to jante hai sanyu mujhe apni life k bare me sab batati hai or jab voh eleventh standard me thi ,jab usne fb id banayi thi tab..." and then she told him everything what sanyu told her. but I was surpride to know that she is still waiting for me. I am happy no I am on cloud nine.

Looking at sanyu's dad's expression I feel like he is damn angry. Oh save me god.

Sanyu's dad-"yaha sirf mujhe hi nahi pata ki meri beti ki life me kya ho raha hai. Ek ladka use aaj se 6 saal pahle se pasand karta hai and now he is here and asking me to marry her. seriously" he is so angry.

Rd-"but sir...'

Sanyu's dad-"I didn't finished it yet." He said while glaring at me.

Rd-sorry sir.[his expression must be awesome 🤣🤣]

Sanyu's dad- "so I was saying that I am disappointed with this incident and I want to tell you that tum meri beti se shaadi ..."

Ohh my god why he stop here like an reality judge when he is going to announced who won. Please god please god please go.

Sanyu's dad- ..."kar sakte ho"

Ohh shit bahi hua jiska dar tha unhone mana kar diya.' With that I stand up from sofa with sad expression and says-"ohk sir aaj ke bad aapko mein kahi nahi dikhunga. Sorry to disturb you, I appreciate your dicision to not aloowing us..."

Sanyu's dad-"wait wait what are you saying?"

Rd-hmm???

Sanyu's dad-I said yes.

Rd-"WHAT? Thank you so much sir. I cannot tell you how am I happy right now but seriously promise you I'll never ever hurt your daughter or make her cry. I swear sir."

Sanyu's dad-you better obey your words."

EPILOGUE- guys it will be full of sandhir not as sanyukta or randhir separately.


Phewww did it.😃

Party time🥳

One of my fanfic finally completed

Now its time for all of your reviwes guys.

Comments and like soon guys it will decide when you will get epilogue

love

sakshi😳😳

Edited by BornAries - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank youuu so much malai for posting🤗
i was thinking mujhe hi invalid kar diya h forum se 🤣🤣
but seriously thank you sooo much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

thank youuu so much malai for posting🤗

i was thinking mujhe hi invalid kar diya h forum se 🤣🤣
but seriously thank you sooo much dear


aww! U r welcome meri jaan 🤗
IF se toh main tujhe nikalungi agar dobara thanks bola toh 😡 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy ncee update saku baby
aah last chappy😭
moi wil miss itt
update soon
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unres kab karunga uska koi bharosa nahi😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update

finally dey met nd sanyus dad accepted for their marriage dat was really gud

eagarly waiting for epilogue
continue asap
thanx for pm
miss u so much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Saku baby 🤗
Jaldi ka promise krke gayi thi late aai --_--
Very bad --_--
Haye finally they are together 🤗
Ram milaye jodi srry bori milaye jodi ...xD
Jaldi se epilogue update kro
I can't wait :D
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Edited by ..khUshbOo.. - 10 years ago
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waoo last part..
d updt wz supH awhesom n suprbbb

beautifully penned
loved itt...
Edited by ..khUshbOo.. - 10 years ago

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