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Rishbala OS:Deep In The Sea


i called"hey guys ,get ready.another cruise is cuming.i hope its a prince's ship.we cud get a handful of money.get ur lazy bumbs to work now".the other workers dropped their beer bottle n went towards rishabh for the next command.soon rishabh was looking through his telescope to see the ship coming near by.he immediately untied the boat n threw it in the sea n jumped on the boat.he called"sultan will come withe me n others after sometime i'll drive the ship near us n signal u.then we'll get all the goodies to our ship".i n sultan moved near the ship.i threw the hook inside the ship n through the rope i n sultan went up in the ship slowly so that noone cud catch us.i saw the captain who was rowing the boat.he looked like a British guy.

bristish or Brazilian guy,i didnt mind i just wanted their goodies.i only loved their money.money the one word makes my heart flutter.by seeing the grandeur of ship,i cud only estimate that the money involved here was huge.i cud smell gold here.i n sultan slowly moved near the drunk crew.when they tries to attack,we slew them with our swords.at short period of time,there was a blood pool.but we discovered a great amount of money n gold.i rowed the ship near our ship.then our crew transported every treasure to our ship.i heard splashing sounds.i reached for the sound.then i saw a girl struggling to come out of glass.when i went near her,i discovered she was not exactly a girl,she was a MERMAID.


the girl was very beautiful,she had a long sleek hands but instead of legs she had a tail like a gold fish.all the crew members were looking at her with awe.she was looking at us with fear.i shouted"what shall we do with it?".the mermaid shouted"plz leave me.i want to go to my ppl".the crew shouted"she is a fine lass.if u want u can have her or give her to anyone of us.we cud enjoy. then she'll be dead.n we can throw her".i shouted"shut up.i have decided.we r gonna leave her into the sea".i took her in my arms.she smiled at me .i went near ocean n threw her.as soon as she touched the water.she flipped happily.she came up n threw water n flapped her tail happily at me n went away.for the time in my life,i did sumthing good.it actually felt gud


the other day,i was looking towards the sea.the sea was my love n passion.i dont know who gave birth to me.but sea was like mother who nurtured me n cocooned me in her lap.I felt a deep connection towards sea.I felt water in my face.someone splashed water on me.I saw a tail was flapping water .I shouted"side" n wiped my face.I cud see the same girl coming up n spluttering water with her mouth.then I saw another girl come up.the girl which I knew shouted"my name is madhubala n she is my sister ria.she wanted to meet u".I was like what.I asked"I didn't knew when I became a V.I.P that everyone is excited to see me".,adhubala blished n said"its that ur important for me na".her blush made my gut tighten.my lions were excited for this girl.I cudnt take anymore.I said"u shud go".she became sad n said"why?".I said"I have important work to do".she swimmed her way away.I looked the way she swam away.


i cudnt desire anything except money.i cannt feel for her.the feeling was so foreign that i almost felt human.but i was a devil..a sea devil.noone can soften my heart.but this girl was dangerous. she melted my heart for her when i first set her eyes on her.she does sumthing unnatural to my stone heart.i shrugged the thought n saw sultan come to me.sultan said"that chick obliviously has some effect on u.i heard from crew members she came to see u today.i want to say u that girls ruin our lives.so never let that girl ruin u".i didnt say anything to sultan simply nodded.i wanted some time alone.so i threw the boat n went to boat to be alone.


i was rowing the boat.suddenly water splashed on me,i knew it was the same girl.she shouted"i m here".i looked at her n asked her"what do u want?".she said"i want to know ur name".i said"rishabh now u can leave".she stretched her hand to me.i gave her my hand.she pulled me towards her n then she jumped n touched her lips with mine.it was like an instant spark.i was like what the.before i cud say anything she swam away.the kiss left me dizzy.an unknown feeling rose in my heart which i cudnt name

the next day,i again attacked a ship n killed the ppl.but there was a small baby too.the cries of the baby.i didnt wanna kill it.but my crew threw the baby away.i felt my soul wreck.i cudnt be the devil.i was soo sad.i took the book to a stone n landed on the stone.i sat there sadly.then water splashed.i knew she was here.i didnt wanna talk to her or anyone.she asked"what happen rishu?".her calling me rishu suddenly felt gud.i said"u shud not talk to me.i m dangerous".she said"u dangerous..i dont think so.why u say so?".i said"i dont have a heart.".she said"i dont believe it".she immediately jumped on the stone near me.i gasped n said"u shud go or u cannt breathe na?".she said"see my tail is in water.so i can breathe.n u hve a heart of gold.i love ur heart".i was unable to speak.she named the unknown feeling.yes that was love.yes I loved her.she made mW human


i immediately reciprocated my feeling by kissing her.she too kissed me with equal vigor. soon i was headlessly with pleasure.i roamed my hand over her torso.then i started kissing her down.after our passionate makeout madhu was the first to get ip n she immediately jumped into water n dipped her in water n came up slowly tieing her top.i kept looking at her with heavy lidded eyes.she blushed n turned n said"if u dont like sumthing then dont do it.if u like sumthing then do it despite of others saying who want to stop it."i smirked at her n said"i like to have u back for another round".she blushed n ran away.

i decided i m not going to be pirate anymore.i m going to lead a life without sin.the sin which kills me.i wud live in sea like sea guard. seeing madhu n sharing time with her.i know we can never be united.but yet till my death i can stay with her this way.i have to explain my crew.first i have to say to sultan.he was my frnd from the day i became a pirate.i said"sultan i m not going to be pirate anymore.nomore killing.".sultan smirked n said"i knew u wud ruin ur life behind that lass".i said"its not abt the girl..u.."suddenly my voice struck seeing him carrying a sword.he said"i made u the captain coz u had wit n talent.but now behind the chit u lost everyting.ur of nouse.sultan doesn't keep alive who is not of any use".then he slew the sword in my belly.I fell unconscious.

i woke up n saw myself on a stone.blood was ozzing out of my body.i knew i was going to die.but i had to see my madhu.i again fell unconscious. i felt water splash.i looked n saw my madhu.now i cud die peacefully. she cried n asked"who did this?".i said"it doesnt matter .now i m free.i m gonna die.".she cried"u cannt".she held her head.i struggled to give my hand to her but i gave then she wrapped her hand on my head n kissed me passionately n then pulled me inside the water.

i opened my eyes n saw i was inside water on the moss n madhu beside me.i thought i will not able to breathe after some time.but it was not like.i was able to breathe here in deep water.i tried to get up but then i noticed i didnt have legs,i had a tail.i became a MERMAID. but how?.then madhu calmly said"dont panic.i made u like me.i know i m selfish but i wanted u so much.the moment i saw u first.i wanted to live with u forever n share my love n children with u.i cudnt become like u.so i made u like me.i m sorry.."before she cud say anything .i kissed her passionately n pulled her in my arms n pulled off from the kiss n said"thats exactly what i want.i wantto be in ur arms forever n now can we start what we left that day".she blushed.her blush was the only answer i wanted.i led her to our happily ever after in each others arms.


First when I was writing. Actually my rk became passionate but I didn't want him to be passionate so I made him less passionate n changed the story line.I first had the plot where rk wud abduct mermaid madhu n kill her family n still all treasures of ocean but later changed the plot.

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My_VivJaan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres!!
I was eagerly waiting for this OS as hardly anyone writes on such themes!!!
it was very beautiful Madhu as mermaid I loved it and RK a pirate it remind me of Jack sparrow he is my fav character!!! awesome!!! and m happy in end RK too became mermaid... šŸ‘
keep writing!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my my... What an amazing imagination...
I loved it...
It was so dreamy... So beautiful... So Blue!!
Madhu did the right thing by being selfish... Awe... Rk became merman...merman - mermaid marriage...then their kids... Hehe... This is so cute... He did one good thing by saving madhu's life & in return she saved his life & they got united... Lovely!!
U know whats ur plus?? Ur stories r short but still u manage to say the story crisp, clear & cutely...
Thanks dear...
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb OS
very well written
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, wow, wow,,,,,,,just awesome.
Glad he became a merman in the end.
Great OS.
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os 😃
something different 😃
mermaids 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, what a fantastic and different os. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
I love love love it. ā¤ļø
thanks for pm me. 😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! it was beautiful dear...loved it...
Write something on witches...
catharsis thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os.
D ending was beautiful wid Rishabh becoming a merman. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was totally different story!!! Out of imagination!! I felt like i was avatar movie or that mermaid movie which they show in dome!!! Superb superb os!!! Thanks for pm

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