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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 2:

the whole hospital was looking like a haunted place to her..those white dressed people were looking like newly born spirits..
That area looked liked a cementry..
And this day...ahh...this day is dooms day for her..
Nandini Moorthy,the strong and sensitive girl that she is..is now completely shattered..
2 damn years of pure hatred towards him!! Manik!the one with whom you felt home..the one who was your firefly..the one...how could you nandu?? Weren't you able to see those emotins behind his eyes?? Those eyes.. You just accepted what he said that day..without even thinking at all..
You were thinking that he made your life hell..but you..you are equally responisble for this!
TRUST! Whats dat ha??..
And now! Now you are going to play with 3 lives..how could you nandu how could you..!
Nandini was crying since 1 hour locking herself in the washroom and was mentally scolding herself with no stopping at all..


But it hurted me aswell manik.. The thought that you played with me..was so scary...these 2 years..without you..they were like..



Taking a deep shattering breathe,she opened her eyes..
Now everything will be okay..iam going to make it okay..you just get healthy once again and i'll tell what it really means to be hurt..what is is to be in hell..and then..after some punishments..we'll be together again..you and i are always meant to be together..she thought after sometime.,wipping her tears..




'nandu open the door..! I know you are inside..dhruv is looking for you!'said a quivering voice of mukti from other side of the door.


Dhruv..Dhruv!?? And the reality dawned upon her..this is not a fairy tale where prince and princess gets seperated and reunite after few years..this is reality..the bloddy damn reality..where she is going to get engaged with dhruv next week and here..her prince..no he is NOT HER PRINCE now..was fighting with his own brain cells..
'y..yess..iam coming..' quickly gathering all the strenght she still possessed..she got up from the floor and went to open the door.


'are you allright?' mukti asked as soon as she saw nandu's devastated form infront of her. Watching your best friend going through such a difficult phase and on top of that your another best friend's fiance in such a state is not an easy thing..
'ya..its just that my head is aching a bit' nandu said,'h..how is he now?'she asked,unadulterated concern written all over her face..'doctor said that the operation would start in an hour..i think you should go home..dhruv will drop you.' mukti replied.
'what?'was nandini's response..'i..i..mean..m..manik is in such a bad condition..he needs..m..dhruv na..so i thing we should be here only..'nandini somehow managed to utter those words that were strange to her aswell..she didint knew what she was thinking and talking..
Mukti could only imagine what was nandini going through,nodding her head and patting nandini's back,muki gestured her to walk..and they started taking baby steps towards the OT area where aliya,dhruv,cabir and navya were waiting impatiently for the operation to start.
Edited by mananpani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello..anyone? Anyone remember this story? Sorry i forgot to update it. The thing is that i didnt knew how to proceed. And after so almost 2 months,i tried to continue this. I hope did not dissapointed anyone.
Thankyou for liking this story.and iam sorry for this much delay..hope you'll like this.
Genuine comment and reveiws are the only thing iam lookin for..thanku :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mi_cheeky_me...

Damn! I m sticked now.. so beautiful.. Manik nd his diary.. I knw Nandini is in d hospital wid dat Diary ri8 now.. She is reading his past his present or his life which is none other than she.. He must be hanging in between death nd life.. Am I ri8?Mimi


oh yes you are absolutely right..! Now lets see what happens after this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just read both the chaps
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just read both the chapters...amazing...👏
awsome story ...loved it...and it really hurts...😭
pls continue soon ...would love to read more...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

just read both the chapsloved itcontinue soon


thanks a lot..yes would try to continue it soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

just read both the chapters...amazing...
awsome story ...loved it...and it really hurts...
pls continue soon ...would love to read more...


thanku so much..:) and yeah..it hurts a lot :'(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mananpani

hello..anyone? Anyone remember this story? Sorry i forgot to update it. The thing is that i didnt knew how to proceed. And after so almost 2 months,i tried to continue this. I hope did not dissapointed anyone.
Thankyou for liking this story.and iam sorry for this much delay..hope you'll like this.
Genuine comment and reveiws are the only thing iam lookin for..thanku :)


please continue dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PLz continue... its long tym you dont write...

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